Writing Legend of Zelda: A Shadow Rises

Chapter Seven
Recovery

Link lay their with his eyes closed waiting for something to happen. " Link, Link! " . It was Zelda sceaming his name. He opened his eyes feebly. " It's O.K Link we're going to get you into the Forest Haven. " siad Zelda her voice shaking a little. She made him levitate a few inches of the ground and took him inside the Forest Haven. The last thing he saw before passing out was the little Korok walking along side him looking worried. " Link. Link. " whose voice was that? It souded so familier. " Link. Wake up Link. " . Link opened his eyes. He was laying on a very soft bed comprised only of leaves. He looked around to see who was talking to him and winced as pain shot through his chest. He looked down to see someone, probubly Zelda, had removed his shirt and his chest was heavly bandeged. He rolled over on his bed and saw who was talking to him. It was the Great Deku Tree. " Link. " he said " I would like to thank you for helping me and my children. " " Where am I? How long have I been out? What happened? " asked Link. " You are inside the Forest Haven. The battle has been over for nine hours. " Nine hours?! " said Link " But waht happened? Why am I all bandeged? " " Ganon. " said the Deku Tree " He attacked you. You are very lucky. Zelda was able to prevent your death with some complicated spell work. But the mark where Ganons spell hit you will probubly never come off. " " Link! " Zelda had seen he was awake. She ran p to him and threw her arms around his neck. " Link, I... I... " she said " I'm alright. " Link said " Thanks to you. " Links awake?! " said about twenty voices. He looked around and saw that all the soldiers from the battle were there. Zora, Korok, Goron and Human were gathered around his sickbed. " So Deku Tree. " asked Link " I guess you've sided with us. " "Of course " said the Deku Tree. " I'm sorry but we need to go. " said Link. " What? " said the Deku Tree " You must stay here and rest. " " No. " said Link " I must go. We must rally more troops to our side. Zelda. " Yes. " said Zelda. " Would you please take me to the ship. " asked Link. " Of course. " answered Zelda. So she, Link, and the remaining 100 Goron, 75 calvary, 250 humans, and 200 Zora went to the ship and set sail. " Where to now Link? asked Zelda. " Back to Hyrule. " said Link. " Captin Davis. " " Yes sir. " " Send a letter to the Rito asking for their help. Where's Cory I need to speak with him. " " Link. " said Zelda a tear rolling down her face. " Link, Cory was killed during the battle. " . And the entire crew mourning the dead sailed back to Hyrule.
 
Thanks. I think you'll like how you're charecter drops in. And yes I'm sorry Cory dies. But he died in battle and was happy. Don't worry he'll get a funeral.
 
Chapter Eight
Valoo's Aprentice

It to two days to get back to Hyrule. When they got to shore they held a funeral for all the dead and buired every body they could find. Cory was given a hero's farwell and buried deep below the sand. All the survivors the walked back to the palace and waited to see what Link would do. " Zelda. " said Link. It was just past midnight and Link had been struck by and idea. " Yes what is it? " asked Zelda rolling over in bed to look at him. " I think we should go recruite the elves next. " said Link. " Let's talk about it in the morning. " said Zelda and they both went back to sleep. The next day Link, Zelda, and Daron were plannig the fastest route to The Deep Forest where the elves resided when.... CRASH! " Get off me! Get off me! " yelled an unfamilier voice. Captin Davis bust into the room wresling with a blonde boy who looked about seventeen. " I caught this boy trying to sneak into the Royal Chamber! " said Davis still trying to pin the boy to the ground. " I wasn't sneaking anywhere! I was sent by the Rito of Dragon Roost Island to give you their answer! " said the boy now attempting to bite Davis. " Get off him! " yelled Link to Davis. Davis lept off of the boy glaring at him. " I'm.... David. " said the boy panting. " I was... sent to tell you.... the Rito say they.... will join you. " said David. " But you're not a Rito. " said Zelda " I didn't think any humans live at Dragon Roost. " " I'm Valoo's aprentice. He chose me to learn from him. " said David " I am also here to represent the citizens of Dragon Roost. " " Well your just in time then. " said Link tommorow me, Zelda, Daron, and you are going to the Deep Forest to speak with the elves.
 
Roket Member 777 can you change David's Tallents a little bit.

Name:David
Gender:Male
Race:Human/Dragon
Speacialties:Spears,Arrows,Swords,Tonfas,Rapiers
Tallents:Stratigets and Fighting
Good/Evil:Good

thanx if you do

but love the chapter
 
rock on this is realy cool i have another person idea

name:martin
race:elf
specelty:lances spears and swords and full body armor
hobbies:???
gender:male
 
KeybladePokemon said:
Roket Member 777 can you change David's Tallents a little bit.

Name:David
Gender:Male
Race:Human/Dragon
Speacialties:Spears,Arrows,Swords,Tonfas,Rapiers
Tallents:Stratigets and Fighting
Good/Evil:Good

thanx if you do

but love the chapter
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No I didn't. Did you see him fighting Davis? He was fighting pretty hard. He is a boy ( I never change genders ) the only thing that had to be tweaked was his race. I'm sorry but a part human part dragon wouldn't fit in.
 
Keyblade: I might. Believe me I have big plans for David. Big plans.

linkex: Don't freak out it will come soon. Sheesh I didn't know people would like this thing so much.
 
Chapter Nine
Into The Forest

As Link said the four of them left the next day and headed twoard the Deep Forest. They met no foes along the way for the elves defend their land to the death. It took them three days to reach the Deep Forest by horse. On day three they reached the edge of the forest. " Wow. " said David staring at the twenty foot tall trees. They rode cautiously into the forest. They had ride until they were only about a mile from the heart of the forest before anything happened. " Halt! " said a voice. Out of the shadows rode an elf with long blonde hair down to his back. He was riding a chesnut colored horse and flanked on either side by two black wolves. " What is your buisness here? " asked the elf. " I am King Link of Hyrule traveling with my wife Zelda, the Goron Daron, and the Human David. " said Link to the elf. " Oh! I'm terribly sorry. I thought you were some of Ganons soldiers. I'm Chris. I patrol around the Heart of the Forest with my friends Nina, and Rool. " said Chris. " You mean you can talk to animals? " said Zelda petting one of the wolves, Nina. " Yes I can. But what bring the Royals here? " asked Chris. " We need to speak to the King of Elves. " said Link. " Alright then. This way. " said Chris as he lead them into the depths of The Heart of the Forest.

Also guys please rate this fan-fic on a scale of 1-10. And Keyblade just call me Rm 777 all my friends do. Oh and the next chapter might be a while. My brother is getting on the computer and then we're going to a movie so the next chapter will come sometime tonight.
 
Chapter Ten
Termina's Fall

Chris wa leading them through a large gate into a big city. " Chris! " another elf called to Chris. " What do you think you're doing? Bring outsiders into the Heart! " " Chill out Martin. This is Link King of Hyrule, his wife Zelda and their friends Daron, and David. " " Oh sorry. " said Martin extending his hand " I'm Martin. " " Nice to meet you Martin. " said Link. " Now Link. " said Chris " You must not have heard but the King of Elves has left to visit Termina. Instead you will speak to his wife Angelina. " " Alright. " said Link. Chris had dimounted and was leading them down a long hallway. Everything was made of marble. The floor, walls, and cellings were all marble. " What is it Chris? " asked a guard standing in front of a large brass door. " The King of Hyrule is here to see the Queen. " answered Chris. " Alrighty then. " said the guard. He opened the door by running his middle and fore finger down the middle of the door. It opened and beyond it was a large room. At the back of the room sitting in a throne made of what appeared to be gold was the Queen. " May I help you? " she said. " Yes you can. " answered Link " I am Link, King of Hyrule. I have traveled here with my wife and friends to ask if the elves will join the armies of Hyrule to fight the evil man Ganon and his army. " " Of course we will help you. " replied the Queen. " We have actualy already entered into this war. " You have? " said Zelda. " Yes we have. My husband and a small task force are in Termina helping them in their fight against Ganon. He is... " but the Queen stoped as an elf burst into the room and said " I've just returned from Termina. " he said " The armies of Termina have fallen. The King is dead. Ganon's army is preparing to attack Hyrule. "
 
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