Writing Legend of Zelda: A Shadow Rises

Chapter Fifteen
The Exiled Released

" This is really bad. " said Zelda looking grim. " Why? " asked Chris. " Why?! The most dangerous people in Hyrule were exiled to the Forsaken Fortress! All those people are now in the control of Ganon! That's why it's bad! " said Zelda. " Listen Chris. " said Link calmly. " You've probuly heard og this man. Do you know about Saloina? " " Of course! " said Chris. " She tried to overthrow the King of Elves ten years ago! " " Well she and abot 200 like her were supposed to be intombed forever in the Forsaken Forstress. " said Link. " It's a giant prison made out of stone in the cold northern part of the Great Sea. Imagine all those evil, cruel, revolting people in the palm of Ganon's hand. That's why it's bad. It also means that Ganon has a fortress in Hyrule which is a serious threat. " " Well let's go! " said Chris. " Go where? " asked Link. " Wha... To the Forsaken Fortress! We need to recapture it! " exclaimed Chris. " Chris, Chris, Chris. It's not that simple. " said Link. " Ganon himeself is there. We can't just but through the front gate! We have to have a plan. " . So the four of them stayed up all night disscussing who in the world they would break into the Forsaken Fortress. But at midnight while the four of them were still talking at the palace a small purple boat slide silently up onto the shores of Hyrule. And out of it stepped the most feared woman in Hyrule with a sword in her hand and murder in her heart.
 
Chapter Sixteen
Valoo's Request

" No that would never work. " said Zelda. They had been disscussing how to break into the Forsaken Fortress. Over the past couple of days strange rumors kept circulating about. Many of them were almost the same. They usually came from towns on the coast. The people would say that a hooded person was killing people in the dead of night. They were just about to launch back into disscusion when a wounded Rito bust through the door and fell to the ground. " Dragon Roost.... under attack. " he said gasping for breath and had an arrow sticking out of his chest. " Valoo.... needs David.... you've got.... to help them..... so many, so many.... " and with that his eyes closed and he moved no more. " We've got to go! " said David jumping to his feet. " We have to go help them! " " Alright get to the stables. " said Link getting up too. " Davis send messages to the Goran, and Elves. We need five large warships as well. Get them all to the Great Sea in three days. " " Yes sir. " " Well what are you waiting for?! " said Link " Let's go! " . And they all ran to the stables, mounted their horses and rode off to the Great Sea.

Sorry. I had it on here yesterday but the the site got hacked and I lost the whole chapter.
 
Chapter Seventeen
David's Transformation

So the armies of 300 elves, 250 humans, 175 goron, and 200 zora sailed out tworads Dragon Roost Island. It took them only one day to reach Dragon Roost and when they did a horrible site meet their eyes. Many Bokoo goblin and Gerudo lay dead or dying in the water. But at least fifty Rito lay dead in the water too. " Destroy them!! " bellowed. As the the two boats that were landing hit the shore a humongus roar me their ears. Valoo was streakeing down twoards the water gushing fire on Ganons army. " KILL THEM ALL!!! " sceamed David. The zora began attacking the four enemy ships as the goron, human, and elven archers took their places and began firing. Zelda took an attack party to shore while Link took an attack party to fight the ships. " Attack! " yelled Link as the 50 elves, 30 goron, and 100, humans attacked the boat. Link immediatly ran up to the boats driver and cut off his head. As Link looked around he saw that some humans were fighting his army too. Hating the scum he started killing all of them he could. He had just killed a goblin when a tremendous noise met their ears. " RRRRRRRROOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRR!!!!! " bellowed Valoo. He was attacking a large jet black bird. " NO!!! VALOO!!! " shouted David from a cliff on the island. He saw a goblin comming onto the cliff on a large hawk- like bird. He killed the goblin and jumped onto the bird. It soar off toawrds the giant bird. David drew his sword and started hacking away at the bird's wings. " NOT... VALOO... YOU... EVIL.... BIRD!!! " shouted David punctuating each word with a sword slash. The bird wiped around to face David and knocked him off his bird with a swipe off it's claw. " RRRRRRROOOOOOOOOAAAAAAARRRRRR!!!!!!! " roared Valoo. And he shot gold flames at David. They hit him and formed a ball around him incasing him in golden flames.
 
Chapter Eighteen
The Hylin Alliance

The ball of golden flame hovered three feet above the water. The giant bird shrieked and dove towards it. Just then the ball burst open showing David. David had changed while inside the ball. He now had red wings coming from his back and clawed hands and feet. David looked up at the bird and a fire ball appeared in his hand. He threw thw fire ball at the bird and struck it in the wing. It flew off shrieking in pain and David turned around to face the enemy. He set all the enemy ships ablaze and in one hour all enemy presence on Dragon Roost was gone. There was a tremendous party at Dragon Roost that night and the next day the remaining 100 goron, 93 humans, 150 zora, and 200 elves saidle back to the shore. When Link, Zelda, David, Chris, and Daron all arrived back at the palace Link told them about a new methid of defense for Hyrule. “ The elves, goron, and zora have all signed a treaty. “ said Link. “ This treaty states that they have agreaded to become a part of the Hylin Alliance. “ “ The what? “ said David now in his human form. “ The Hylin Alliance. “ said Link “ Will work to defend anyone in Hyrule. If any member of the Hylin Alliance here’s of an attack on one of their fellows they will go to help them immediately. “. “ Like a giant defense team. “ “ Exactly! “ said Link. “ Now let me go into detail. “ . And as Link was telling them about this new plan to fend off Gannon a woman in a dark cloak was slipping silently towards the palace.
 
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heres a charecter

name:steven
ocupation:dragon rider
good\evil:good
spetelties:swords taming dragons
hobbies:training dragons
race:elf
 
Chapter Nineteen
The Shadow Draws Near

The cloaked woman slipped silently up to the palace gates. She pulled a small dager from inside her cloak and slit the throaghts of the two guards protecting the gate. She slipped past all the guards she saw like a shadow. She had come to the wall of the palcace. She looked up and saw the window to the Royal Chamber was ajar. " Fools. " she said under her breath. She then pulled two clawed gloves from inside her cloak and began to climb. " I think we should approach the centaurs next. " she herd Link saying was saying. " They are powerful and.... " but Link broke off. His eyes contradcted with rage as he saw Saloina perched on the windowsill. She had become pale during her time in the Forsaken Fortress. Her pale blue eyes were slightly sunken as well. " You! " said Link jumping up and drawing his sword. " Does the little baby want to play? " said Saloina mockingly. " DIE!! " roared Chris firing an arrow at her. " Hahahahahahahahah!! " Saloina laughed cruelly. " Good an elf is here. Be sure to tell you're friends who did this to you. " . And with that she launched herself off the windowsill and plunged her dagger into Chris's chest. " NO!! " screamed Zelda drawing her sword. Saloina drew her sword to and the two began fighting. The sounds of their clanging swords echoed in the Royal Chamber. " Is that all you've got little girl? " said Saloina. Zelda responded by using a well placed swipe of her sword to cut Saloina's shoulder. " Little girl am I? " said Zelda. " This isn't over. " said Saloina cluthing her bleeding shoulder " My master will kill all of you. He will overthrow you. " she said looking at Link. And then she jumped out the window. They saw her hit the ground softly and run through the main gate and out of site. " Link! " crien Zelda. He turned around and saw her knelling over Chris who was bleeding heavily. " GUARDS! " bellowed Link. " Yes, sir. " said four gaurds comming through the door. " Get this man to the infermary now! If we hurry I think we can still save him.
 
Sorry for the wait but here it is. Sorry it's a little short but the next chapter will be out very soon.

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Chapter Twenty
Daniel and Roger

" Come on hurry! " said Zelda. She was helping a guard lift Chris onto a strecher. " He's losing too much blood! " said Zelda " David! Put pressure on the wound! " " Right! " answered. And he pressed his hands on it. " Get him on a bed NOW! " said Zelda. They had arrived at the infermary. " We need to bandge him! Get me some bandages! " . It took Zelda ten minutes to patch him up. He had passed out from lack of blood and it took him an hour to wake back up. " Zelda.... " said Chris faintly. " Yes. What is it? " said Zelda. " Thank you for saving me. " said Chris. " Your welcome. Now... " but she broke off. A deku scrub and centaur had just entered the room. " King Link. " said the centaur in a slow deep voice. " Who are you? " said Link. " I am Daniel and this is my friend Roger. " he said gestuering twords the deku scrub who smiled at Link. " We have come on behalf of our people. " said Roger in a slightly higher than average voice. " To tell you that the Deku and Ceantaurs would like to join you in the Hylin Alliance. "
 
Chapter Twenty-One
The Raids

" Wonderful. " said Link dropping into a chair. " That's wonderful. " . Over the next few days they all stayed with Chris while he recovered. After he had healed though they all went up to the Royal Chamber. " My Lord. " said a soldier comming into the room. " Yes. " answered Link. " My Lord. We have just goten a report that a minor raid has occered. Several Hyllin Alliance troops were killed. " " Thank you soldier. " said Link. " So Ganon has switched tactics. Now he's raiding the towns an villages of our allies. " . For the next few days reports kept comming in about minor raids on Hylin Alliance villages and towns. They all were minor until a soldier came in to tell Link of another raid. " My Lord. " said the soldier. " Yes. " answred Link. He had been deep in conversation about Daniel. " My Lord. " said the soldier " A large scale raide has just occured on a elven city. " " What?! " said Chris jumping up. " How do you know it just happened? " said Link standing up too. " This man told me. " said the soldier pulling an elf into view. " Steven! " said Chris. " You know him? " said the soldier. " Yeah. He were best friends. How ya been Steven? " asked Chris. " Not to good. " said Steven. " The village that was attacked had heavy losses. " " How do you know that? " asked Link. " Because it was my village that was attacked.
 
Sorry I haven't been psoting here. I've been reading though. I like it a lot! Excellent work!
 
Chapter Tewnty-Two
Ganon's Request

" My lord. Please, no. " said one of Ganons soldiers trembling at his feet. " You let an elf escape! " said Ganon coldly " You deserve this pain. " and then he shot green light at the soldier and he rose into the air shrieking in pain. " I do not tolerate incompetence. " said Ganon letting the man fall to the floor of the Forsaken Fortress with a small thud. And then Ganon drew his jet black sword and ran the man through. " Saloina! " called Ganon. " Yes my master. " said Saloina comming into the room and dropping on her knee's. " You are my most loyal. My most faithful. " said Ganon his back to her. " I want you to go capture the elf that escaped. He will be traveling home tommorow with several guards. Kill the guards, and bring the elf back here. " " Yes master. " said Saloina standing up. Then she turned around and walked back to her room. She couldn't wait to capture the elf. " Maybe. " she thought sitting on the foot of her bed. " Maybe Ganon will let me play with the elf a little. "
 
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