Midnight Designers:: Redux [GFX]

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It wasn't a clipping mask, it was apart of the original render. Either way I should have erased that looking back at it.

1stTag
Your render doesn't blend in on the BG. To me it seems like you took a stock, took a c4d, then took a render and put it all together. Add some haze in the top left corner, and some green orbs. 5 Layers tops. I've seen really good things from you, but I feel as if you don't want to step outside your comfort zone and make something spectacular. Put a little more thought into it.'
2ndTag
This is an example of something more innovative from you. A little more depth/lighting and better render position and it'd be perfect. Overall KIU.
 
well since I'm a bit of a perfectionist and have to do everything needed like filters/gradient maps it equals up to about 20 layers :). And it took me ages to get the right c4d and took longer to position it right X). haha yeah the second one.. first time trying that style and I blurred the background a few times and it looks like the same every time haha. IDK I liked the render placement tbh but hey opinions differ X).

Thanks for the cnc mate.
 
Got a logo finished! Not sure how I feel about it, though. Let me know what you guys think.

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@Gliscor
So brush black on another laver above the white and Soft Light it? Okay...

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@Josh
Yes.. He IS a beast... xD
 
I really like those Fractals ;D

@Fatal Aero: Brush black around the edges of the sig, but don't brush black where the light source is coming from. Brush white where the light source is coming from.
 
@FatalAeroX: Lower the opacity of the black layer. I'd say somewhere around 60-80 is good.
 
V3 (Latest)
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Even lower opacity of the black layer

V2
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Original
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Made another..

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Also there is more to lighting than just a white soft brush and black soft brushes for shadow.

You can use the lighting effects filter which does it pretty much for you but I kind of join the two in my work.
 
Eh.. I know I haven't been on here a while... You can take me off the list. I am sorry, it's just I am way to busy moderating my forums. I might come back sometime lilsparks.

Sincerely,

EPM
 
AadmM: It looks wonderful, I'll add it to the first post. May I ask the concept to it?
PokeFanJosh: I can see a little more going on there, but otherwise perfect.
FatalAeroX: Looks like a step in the right direction.

SLOGAN CONTEST
What is a slogan?

Examples of Slogans are Mc Donald's "I'm Loving it" and Lays "Betcha' Can't Eat Just One".
Basically slogans are little witty phrases meant to help someone remember a product or service.

What do I have to do?

Make your own slogan, preferably funny, based on an image that I post. You will be graded:
Originality x/10
Professionalism x/10 (is it organized and properly organized)
Funny x/10

Round 1 (Ends December 16th)
Open Entry, Your Sign up is your entry.

GO!

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Uh, sorry bout the slogan thing. I'm not that good at making stuff like that.

What I wanted to show you guys is 2 abstracts I have finished recently.
Please tell me what you think about them.

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Versella Spin

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Gate open / Gate opening.

One of my few strong points in graphic designing is abstracts. So tell me what you think about them.

P.S. : Do you see a Lion's head or something similar in the Gate Open one's circular twirl in the middle?
 
The first one looks alright but I don't like that there is so much black. I would of used a different vibrant colour that compliments the purple or make there not so much black. The background behind the swirl needs work. The background's look is to dull with what I assume to be a radial blur or something like that in a colour that isn't really exciting. So yeah colours need work mostly.

The second one is definitely better with better colours and background. In the background the red (flowers?) look pretty cool but the greeny ones aren't so appealing. I'd make the majority of them red. The sparkles are meh don't really like them being there. Maybe not so heaped up in spots will look a lot better. So yeah only a few quick changes are needed for this one.

I reckon just fix up what I suggested and you'd have two pretty sick abstracts. I see potential in these so yeah KIU ^^
 
'Climb the Ladder of Practice and be the Best'

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See the long 'I'...Yeah...The ladder...xP
 
@Pokefanjosh
Thanks mate. Yeah the first one could use a bit of work. The colors you say needs the most caution. Thanks. I will try to get it to be more ... "professional"
Thanks for the feedback in the second one. I disagree with the majority of the flowers being red however. (Yes, they are flowers :p) Because the redness didn't go that well in the eye pleasingness along with the center of the abstract which is it's main point. Chrome yellow seemed a bit better. Also, remove the sparkles from the bunch right? Right-o. That's a good idea.
Thanks for everything again.
 
haha well I thought red looks better but yeah as I say everyone has their own tastes!
And yeah with the sparkles the groups are spread but within the groups they are like stacked right next to each other.

And yeah mate no problem I always love to help out where I can and I understand sometimes when I give advice it makes the tags seem a lot worse than what they actually are but guess that's what happens when you gotta point out the mistakes here and there. So yeah if you need any more feedback/advice just hit me up ^.^

Also yeah I'd like some feedback on this one
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think it's my best so far or at least one of them
 
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