Moiote Region - Its over with :(

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RE: Moiote Region

GoobieDoob said:
Attacks? Um...

Blot
Base damage - ?
Water
Restores HP by 2/3 normal HP.

Tusk Bash
Base damage - 120
Water
This attack is basically a Hydro Pump, but Psysical.

Freezing Cyclone
Base damage - 140
Ice
Has 60% accuracy (close to a low accuracy ice type draco meteor).

Hypothermia
Base damage - ?
Ice
Leaves opponent Frigid. (New Status Condition, longer lasting freeze condition).

Here's a trio of water types!
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You might want to add some recoil damage to Tusk Bash so its like Flare Blitz and Volt Tackle. Overall, very good attacks (not sure about frigid status though) they are not too overpowered making them believable. Nice work! :p

-BEnB
 
RE: Moiote Region

Thanks for the feedback. I have been on this computor for like 9 hours.

And for those who can't download, Secrit is a Ghost/Grass type. Sorry Palkia D;!

Secrit does sound like something out of a nightmare kinda.

Here are Secrit's Attacks (KNOWN):

LV1 Night Shade
LV1 Grass Knot
LV5 Poison Jab
LV10 Thorn Prick (Grass)
LV15 Wood Hammer
LV20 Hammer Arm
LV25 SolarBeam
LV30 Shadow Claw
LV35 Telekinises
LV40 Leaf Tornado
LV45 Toxic
LV50 Leaf Storm
LV55 Teeter Dance
LV60 Cerebral Lure (Ghost)
LV65 Death Chamber (Dark)
LV70 Forcefield (Psychic)
LV75 Disappear (Ghost)
LV80 Phantom Drop (Ghost)
LV85 Frenzy Plant
LV90 Hyper Voice
LV95 Seed Bomb
LV100 Spirit Loop (Ghost)

For the Pokemon Amethyst Anime/Manga, for the Openning Song, it will be the Japenese Version of Pokemon Caremelldancen.
 
RE: Moiote Region

Great job on secret, the attacks seem to be really realistic, and I think that the art could use a little work, the art seems to really scribbly, they look like you made the basic outline, then you used ms paint to fill them in. When your making Pokemon art you want nice looking drawing, not to say these aren't good, there better than what I can do, and you could add some shading on the Pokemon. Other than those small edits I think these are great.
 
RE: Moiote Region

Thanks for criticising. I'll try to add shading and make it look a little Ken Sugimori/Xous - ish.

I added shading. I think it looks really awesome now.
 

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Great job GoobieDoob, Secrit looks much more like a Pokemon now, and just a couple other things on your Secrit upload, try to add eyes, unless Secrit is supposed to look like a shaman without a soul, you should try to use some more brown shading on him, the shading you added looks like red, but other than those 2 simple things, Secrit looks like a true blue Pokemon. Good job
 
RE: Moiote Region

Fisputmp and Flowphant have been in "My Pictures" for about a Week, so here they are (only their known attacks from now on).


Fisputmp

LV1 Ember
LV1 Yawn
LV6 Fire Spin
LV11 Quick Attack
LV17 Metal Claw
LV21 GigaPunch (Normal)
LV25 Power Blow (Normal)
LV29 Fire Punch
LV33 Protect
LV38 Flaming Claw (Fire)
LV44 Bash In (Normal)
LV47 Inferno


Flowphant

LV1 Trunk Spray (Water)
LV1 Vine Whip
LV7 Plow (Ground)
LV13 Razor Leaf
LV18 Vine Mixer (Grass)
LV23 Leaf Tornado
LV28 Take Down
LV32 Double Edge
LV36 Super Spray (Water)
LV40 Solar Power (Grass)
LV47 Leaf Storm

Sharbitek will be comming soon.

Thanks, MrGatr. Its eyes actually are there if you look. The white part is the reflection and the shading is red (I think it goes with the brown and looks like a darker version).
 

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Fistputmp:
I really don't see many problems with this one, you have improved a lot, but the attacks how ever could use a tiny bit of work, Fire Spin at lvl 6! This just seems a little bit too much for a Pokemon,+ he seems to be the kind of guy that will evolve into a much more powerful type, I would recommend that you make an evolution to him, if you have not, and I also would recommend that he becomes one of my favorite combo, Fire+Fighting. That would be a first that I have seen, and I look at most of the fakemon on this forum.


Flowphant:
I think this guy is a prime example of what you can do, he is realistic, and he his even original, this guy has what it takes to be a real pokemon. I would recommend on this guy that you make 2 evolutions, so he becomes a little bit more like a pokemon. The name, rocks, you did a great job with creativity, and as far as I know, it is a first kind of the name, (correct me if I'm wrong.) but I have seen other elephant Pokemon looking very similar to this one, so watch out, and try to look at other hot fakemon threads to make sure none of your Pokemon look similar to theirs. Other than some of these small edits, I think this fakemon collection is well on its way to becoming a good fakedex.
 
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Actually, if you didn't notice, Fisputmp is the Evolution of Fierkub (starter) and evolves into a Fire/Steel type, Gisteel. And Flowphant is the evolution of Elefewlor and evolves into a Grass/Ground type, Elplow. There are new Pokemon today.


Birbairnd

LV1 Gust
LV1 Growl
LV5 Sing
LV11 Peck
LV16 Take Down
LV20 Freefall (Flying)
LV25 Sky Drop
LV29 Wing Attack
LV32 Rest
LV36 Featherdance
LV41 Dive Bomb (Flying)
LV48 Hurricane
LV53 Drill Peck
* Evolves into Chiadeek at LV30


Flantremn

LV1 Flame Charge
LV3 Work Up
LV5 Torch (Fire)
LV7 Bug Bite
LV9 Dig
*Evolves into Aner at LV10


Sharbitek

LV1 Water Flow (Water)
LV1 Splash
LV7 Bite
LV12 Shark Attack (Dragon)
LV16 Howl
LV20 Stream Pump (Water)
LV24 Dive
LV28 Crunch
LV32 Dragon Rage
LV36 Draco Fang (Dragon)
LV40 Stockpile
LV40 Swallow
LV44 Dragonbreath
LV48 Hydro Pump
LV52 Aqua Flask (Water)
*Evolves into Bitigerark (Water/Dragon), at LV36.
 

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RE: Moiote Region

Birdbainrd:
Attacks are great, they look realistic to the game, and they all sound realistic to the game,. But with learning attacks after evolution, I would try not to do that with a ton of Pokemon, because it really doesn't look that good. TPC (The Pokemon Company) only did that with Pikachu, as far as I know. Other than that those are pretty good.

Flantermn:
This is a great Pokemon, realistic, original, and everything looks good with him, but for some reason my computer won't let me view your Pokemon anymore, but I'm sure that they are creative like they normally are. Keep up the good work with this guy.

Sharibitek:
Looks good other than a couple of things, bite at lvl 7 is a little bit too much I would recommend that he learns it at like a lvl 11, crunch could be moved to the mid 30's because it is kinda hard when to understand when a guy gets really good really fast. And again with the learning moves after evolution lvl, it kinda doesn't look that good. Other than that these are really good, just fix the stuff that I recommended, I think you'll be good of to go.
 
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Okay MrGatr. I think now I should have the attacks part just be from the level that it evolved from to the level that it evolves into. And, I think I might know why your computer can't open them up any more (this is for all of you):

1. Don't save these into your pictures. If you haven't, I'll get to that later.
2. If you have saved them, delete them all once you have seen them.
3. Next, go back to the link.
4. you should be able to open it up and delete it after throught the whole process again.
*5. If you haven't saved them to your computer, listen carefully.
*6. Go to your recycle bin, download list, ect. and delete everything.
*7. Go back to the link.
*8. It should work. If it doesn't ask a computer person to see what's wrong, or PM me.

*If you haven't saved to pictures.

Hope this helps.

Am I right with everythng?
 
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Yes, that was what I was hinting to, and my computer fixed itself, I can now see your Pokemon, they're getting better every time I look at them.
 
RE: Moiote Region

That really worked? I was just trying to make you feel better that you couldn't view them. I was trying to sound smart. COOL!
 
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Ya, I just had to look at my downloaded stuff, and found out that my computer memory was full, and you sounded a little smart, like a 10 year old though
 
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That's 'cause I am 10. Now, onto the new Pokemon.


Elgatoectic
Electric/Normal

LV1 Quick Attack
LV1 Growl
LV6 Thundershock
LV11 Shock Wave
LV16 Take Down
LV21 Slash
LV26 Static Shock (Electric)
LV31 Magnet Rise
LV36 Bounce
LV41 Electro Ball
LV46 Flame Charge
LV51 Bash In (Normal)
LV56 Zap Cannon
Evolves into Nirnamel with Thunderstone


Nirnamel
Electric/Normal

LV1 Crush Claw
LV1 Static Shock
LV1 Charge
LV1 Discharge
LV1 Thunder Wave
LV1 Thunder
Evolves from Elgatoectic
 

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RE: Moiote Region

Ya, I know, that was the whole point of that
Time to analyze
Elgatoectic:
The moves look great, they seem to be improving much after some edits, the Pokemon itself looks like a pachirisu on four legs, I would try to stay away from your fakemon looking like real Pokemon. That could cause all sorts of problems. The name seems original. Great job on this fakemon, I really like the way your starting to work.

Nirnamel:
Moves are OK, but the lvl he learns them at seems something close to shedninja, but you might want to make Elgateoctic evolve from Nirnamel, because he kinda looks a little basic kinda guy, or a baby evolution, not a 1st stage guy. These fakemon are actually getting much better, but you may want to add some more shading, I could give you some tips if you need some.
 
RE: Moiote Region

Thanks. But, I can't and wouldn't even change the evolution, because that's just the way my Pokedex works. But, I know where you might get that Idea because of the eyes and body. It looks much better in my notebook, thanks anyway though.
 
RE: Moiote Region

Your welcome, are you using a mouse or a drawing pad. If your using a mouse I would recommend that you look intoa drawing pad, they are much easier to use.
 
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Go to Amazon.com, and look for a drawing pad, I think there is one called bamboo, or somethin like that, but they make drawing on the computer just like drawing in a notebook.
 
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