Moiote Region - Its over with :(

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Ok, constructive criticism time.

^Glaefeon. He is 10, that is the way that they all take that kind of advice, and It could just be edited a little to look like a pokemon.

@GoobieDoob:
The Pokemon looks too much like a human, I would help you edit it, but I can't because there is no IMG code, I would redo this one, and your Pokemon don't suck, remember your age when you look at other Fakemon thread. These are getting better. Please keep working on this region, I love seeing your creativity.
 
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I knew he was 10. : P

But really, what does matter is the creativity, the art doesn´t matter a lot. However, like MrGatr said, I would redo the Fakemon. Or you could change it to be a Gym Leader, like I said.
 
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Okay. I redid Myaden.

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Ok, now that just looks freaky o_0 haha

It looks good. Very good use of shading. Your artwork is steadily improving.
 
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GoobieDoob, just make your drawing that you have, just a bit shorter, and she is getting very creepy, I like it, and great improbement on the drawings.
 
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Rarfel said:
Good Job!
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While we love members to give their opinions, we like them to do so in a manner that furthers discussion. One line posts like that don't really do so -- what exactly do you like about Goob's stuff?


I really like how you're starting to incorporate shading into your Fakemon, Goob -- especially on Hisnadile.

One thing I'd like to suggest are name changes for the Gym Leaders and Elite Four. Usually they have something to do with the user's type, which isn't really the case here. Lily, your E4 Electric-type user, sounds more like a Grass-type user. If you'd like some help with potential names, let me know. =)
 
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i'LL CHANGE THEM RIGHT NOW :p
Kirehashi is a sort of weapon just so you know for Kirehashi, the 1st gym leader
 
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^Your finally changing something, *Sniff, sniff* why was it CMP you listened to, why
 
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^Wait, what did we help you with, I think that we helped you with the fake cards.
 
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Well, BlueEmboar'n'Bisharp is Helping me with some technical stuff. And yu are jjust amazing at criticizing and helping me with ideas. You both are also helping me witht he cards though. So, yay.
 
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Here is the 1st Person of the elite four. The Electric Pokemon Master Ella. She is a Jewish female that uses Electric Types. In the Winter season of the game, when you see her in her house and it is the real days of honnikuh, she will invite you to celebrate with them. After Celebrating for eight days (go to the house each day of honniikuh), she will give you 1 rare candy each of those days. At the very end, she will give you the Cerebral Candle Item. It raises the power of fire-type moves.

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Ella
Female
Electric Specialty
Jewish Religion
Very Timid
 
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