Writing Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Author Address - August 14)

RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Round 1, Match 1)

TwistedTurtwig said:
Well, I'd be interested in seeing Edward's Kecleon and Jeremy's Sableye battle it out as well, but they're on opposite sides of the bracket, so they probably won't be fighting. (Although if they did, and both made it to the finals, I certainly wouldn't mind.)

On a side note, I probably check this thread for an update about every four hours. I have way too much free time.

lol, I just noticed that. It would be an interesting match, plus... Both Gen 3! :p

Grovyle's also an interesting matchup, especially since Grovyle is actually supposed to be a Special Attacker instead of an Attacker as his base Special stat is 20 more than his Attack stat, ironically. Though, since they are both rather good at foliage combat and stealth, I would assume that, if the stage complies, that it would be an interesting match. Of course, if it were something like Desert, Ice or something of equivalent barren-ness, then Kecleon would have the stealth advantage, save the stripe. Huh! Can't wait.
 
RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Round 1, Match 1)

NOOOOOOOOO!! Mewliet!!!!!!!

Oh well, great job on the section Artemis. This is what I was so exited about in this story. I love how you took my character and really put yourself into her eyes. Needless to say, it was immensly enjoyable to read. I also loved how I added in Joules, my real life nickname (as for my name, it will remain unknown for this time) into the character so I really felt like I was her. BTW, I HATE POISON! And the whole scarf part made me so thrilled. Again, great job!

Okay, round two, y'all will now face the wrath of Claire and Clyde!
 
RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Round 1, Match 1)

DrEspeon said:
Okay, round two, y'all will now face the wrath of Claire and Clyde!

Should have named them Bonnie and Clyde though. :p

Loving the chapters Artemis! Cant wait to see how my character loses my character's match. :D
 
RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Round 1, Match 1)

DrEspeon said:
NOOOOOOOOO!! Mewliet!!!!!!!

Oh well, great job on the section Artemis. This is what I was so exited about in this story. I love how you took my character and really put yourself into her eyes. Needless to say, it was immensly enjoyable to read. I also loved how I added in Joules, my real life nickname (as for my name, it will remain unknown for this time) into the character so I really felt like I was her. BTW, I HATE POISON! And the whole scarf part made me so thrilled. Again, great job!

Don't worry, she'll be back! :D

But, yeah, writing for all of your different characters has definitely been the most fun part about writing this, and why it's always done with characters submitted by others. The tiny spark of collaboration that's introduced by writing characters created by someone else adds another dimension to a story that might otherwise be rather lackluster. I hope you continue to enjoy it as the story unfolds.
 
RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Round 1, Match 1)

Intermission time!

Intermission 1: Dinner at the Isle of Tajna

Watching the match with a certain amount of dread, Jeremy twiddled his fingers and bit the inside of his lip, trying as hard as possible to keep his emotions from showing to the other contestants. He didn’t want to show anything that might be a sign of weakness, especially not to the scraggly guy in green that would soon be his opponent.

At the same time, he couldn’t help but feel partly responsible for the scene that was unfolding behind him. Juliet’s Meowstic, Mews, was getting slaughtered on the ice field, and it was at least partially his fault. He had no idea what kind of Pokémon the pretty girl in the lab coat used, but he thought he had been giving her an advantage by choosing the icy terrain since he knew the older woman’s Bellsprout would be weakened by it. However, the Bellsprout had managed to keep its feet and was dominating the field, whereas poor Mews had yet to get in more than a single hit. Soon, it would be over.

Well, so much for impressing her, he thought to himself, mentally facepalming once again as the Bellsprout, Alec, launched a Sludge Bomb, covering the Meowstic’s face in sticky, poisonous goo. Thanks to the cameras and microphones hidden all over the stadium, Jeremy could hear every single word the two trainers said, but he would have recognized the attacks anyway. He’d spent his time on the boat well, studying all the Pokémon of Kalos and their attacks, just so he wouldn’t be caught off guard. He’d spent the most time reading about the newly-discovered Fairy-type Pokémon and couldn’t help but hope that one of the other trainers would bring one, though he hadn’t seen one so far.

“Alec, finish it off with Venoshock!”

Jeremy closed his eyes and let out a sigh, slumping against the seat. If that move wasn’t the end of the match, the next one would be. Poor Juliet, knocked out of the competition in the very first round. It wasn’t fair, but, well, at least he wouldn’t have to be the one who beat her in a Pokémon battle. As he opened his eyes again, he saw Safiri comforting Juliet down on the ground, outside the boundaries of the field. Mews was in Juliet’s arms, and she and the women exited the field on the other side through a different door.

“Well, wasn’t that exciting?” Suddenly, Diamant was standing among the trainers, his smile glinting in the dying sunlight. “Quite an interesting battle to start off our little tournament for the day. I, for one, am simply famished. If you would care to follow me, I’ll take you all to the dining room for supper, and then you can be shown to your rooms to rest and relax before the next match.”

At the mention of food, Jeremy’s stomach rumbled. He’d been so excited that morning that he hadn’t had a bite of breakfast, and on the boat to the island he was too nervous to take part in the snacks and refreshments offered. With each passing second, dinner was sounding more and more wonderful. Eagerly, he followed the other trainers back into the tournament building and back down the corridor to the main room. The tournament bracket was still on the wall screen, but it had already been updated. Juliet’s name was crossed out and Idalia’s copied to the next stage of the bracket.

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Jeremy’s stomach continued to rumble as Diamant led everyone down yet another hallway, through a sliding door, down another hallway, around a corner, up a ramp… Originally Jeremy was trying to keep track of where they were going – several years spent with Roark in the mines gave him a good innate sense of cardinal directions, and also taught him to keep track of paths and passages without the sun or other natural landmarks – but soon even he was lost in the mazes of corridors, each one white and clean.

Eventually Diamant threw open a double set of doors that led into a large dining room. With a flourishing bow, he held the door open for all the contestants and then entered himself. Once inside, Jeremy stared at the room in awe. It was more opulent than anything he had ever seen; not even the League Challenge halls were this beautiful. The walls were at least two stories tall, and a large picture window on one side opened down on the tournament field below. The walls were covered with dramatic oil paintings, over half of them featuring a man who looked very similar to Diamant, and even one with a Safari lookalike.

The main draw, however, was a large oak dining in the middle of the room. With eight chairs on each side and one at each end, it was the largest table Jeremy had ever seen. Best of all, it was piled with heaps and heaps of food: savoury casseroles, platters of fruit and vegetables of every type, large cuts of meat, an entire roasted pig, kettles of soup, pastas, sauces, a mountain of mashed potatoes, a large decorated cake that looked like it belonged in a wedding… Jeremy couldn’t even comprehend the amount of food on the table, nor how Diamant expected them to eat it all.

Diamant himself walked purposefully towards the head of the table in front of the large window, leading Idalia by the hand. “As our first winner, Idalia shall be the guest of honour at my right-hand side. The rest of you, sit where you will. Let the meal begin!”

He had hardly finished talking when most of the trainers starting taking their seats, some already beginning to fill up their plates. Jeremy reasoned they must all be as hungry as he felt, taking a seat near the door and filling up his own plate with berries, salad, and slices of roast pig. Everything tasted delicious and he was going for seconds when his eyes happened to fall at the empty seat across the table from his own. The chair at the foot of the table was similarly unoccupied.

Seven seats on two sides, plus the head chairs, and sixteen of us plus Diamant… there has to be someone missing. Juliet![/i] As soon as the name popped into his mind, he scanned the table, searching for the pretty girl in the lab coat. But she was nowhere to be found. Neither she nor Safiri had rejoined the group after they left the stadium field.

At the head of the table, Idalia was explaining the battle from her own point of view, but she was too far away for Jeremy to understand much. Yet, with Idalia’s expressive facial expressions, and the way she moved her hands to simulate thoughts and movements, he could almost feel like he was over there talking with her. Her Bellsprout, not having a Pokéball of its own, was eating a bunch of grapes from a small plate set on the floor. Even though it had beaten Juliet’s Mews, Jeremy couldn’t help but feel some grudging respect for the Pokémon. It had worked hard, and it deserved that win.

As Jeremy sat watching Bellsprout, his own dinner temporarily forgotten, Safiri finally chose to make an appearance, entering through a side door. She walked over to stand next to Diamant rather than taking one of the two available chairs, standing so close to him it was almost like they were magnetized. They exchanged a few words, but once again, Jeremy was unable to make out the conversation. Thinking it might be about Juliet, he wiped his mouth with a napkin and stood up from the table, heading in their direction. As he approached, both stopped talking and turned to stare at him with the same dead, cold eyes.

“Uh, sorry to interrupt,” Jeremy started, suddenly self-conscious beneath their combined gazes, “I was just wondering where Juliet was. We haven’t seen her since she left the tournament, and I was thinking she would meet us back here for dinner, so…”

“Juliet has been eliminated from the tournament,” Safiri replied, “and so she will no longer be spending time with the rest of the contestants.”

Jeremy’s face fell. Even though she had lost, he was hoping he could have had a chance to talk with her for a bit. “You mean, she’s been sent home already?”

“No, she is simply staying elsewhere in the complex. She will not be interacting with any of the remaining competitors for the rest of the tournament.”

“Oh. Well, uh, thanks.” Both Diamant and Safiri were still staring at him as he turned around and headed back to his seat. He picked up his fork and knife, and managed a few more bites of some of pasta, but his appetite was long gone. With a sigh, he set down the silverware and stared at the door, almost as if, by staring long enough, he could somehow will Juliet to walk through it.

He wondered where she was and what she was doing. Safiri probably brought her to a place where Mews could get healed up, and then maybe served her food right in her room. This seemed like a pretty large place to him; he imagined they probably just put her in a room on the other side to make sure she didn’t influence the coming matches. Maybe I can find a way to go find her. I’m pretty good at navigating places like this. If I go at my own pace and follow all the hallways, I should get a good mental map down, and then I can start looking.

So confident was he in his plan that by the time other trainers started passing the cake around for dessert his hunger was returning and he grabbed a piece for himself. The cake was light and creamy, almost melting on his tongue with every bite. He took another piece and ate it hungrily, licking off the fork after it was done.

By the time he was finished, most of the other trainers were as well, sitting back in their chairs and chatting with one and other. Jeremy turned towards the girl next to him, but she was having an animated discussion with someone on the other side, so he just decided to sit in silence and plan his mapping of the hallways while the others finished their foods.

As the late forkful was eaten and the final plate pushed aside, the main double doors opened again. Waiting in the corridor was a large group of women and a few men, all of them dressed as maids or servers. Jeremy imagined it must take a lot of people to keep this place clean; the poor cleaning staff probably wanted to clean this room up as soon as possible.

Diamant stood up at the head of the table and tapped a knife against his glass for attention. “Now that the meal has concluded, please follow your assigned servant to your quarters. Your bags are already in your rooms. You will have an hour to refresh yourselves, and then our second match will begin.”

While Diamant was talking, the servants dispersed around the room, one of the woman coming to stand next to Jeremy. “If you will follow me, please,” she said, her voice soft and soothing.

Jeremy stood up and followed the woman out of the room, other trainers and their guides following behind them. He tried walking slowly to see if he could keep better memory of the hallways, but the woman refused to slow her pace for him, and so he ended up jogging a bit to catch up with her. Several hallways, corners, and stairways later, she opened a door for him into a suite that was just as luxurious as the dining table, with velvet-line chairs, a marble coffee table, and a huge bed with a canopy. Just as Diamant had said, Jeremy’s duffel bag was left in the room.

He turned around to thank the servant girl for showing him to his room, only to see her disappear out of the door as quiet as a mouse. She closed it behind with a click, followed by the louder thunk of a deadbolt closing. Wait, a deadbolt?

Jeremy walked back to the door and tried the knob, but the door refused to open. He was locked in. He knocked on the door and called for the girl, but there was no answer. With a sigh, he turned back around to face his room. Suddenly, an hour in this room seemed a lot more confining than it had earlier…


Stay tuned for Round 1, Match 2: Leon vs. Claire and Clyde. I'll likely have it up Friday evening.
 
RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Intermission 1)

No update today; ended up spending more time than planned at the mother-in-law's house and now I am tipsy and tired. While I usually write pretty well when tipsy, it doesn't seem particularly appropriate for this type of story. Also, there's the tiredness to consider.

Since this also means I'm behind on my quota, I'll likely try and catch up over the weekend, but update may not be coming until Monday, since available writing time is dependent on many factors, one of them the fact that I may be getting a KITTY tomorrow.

So, Monday at the latest, unless I'm hit by a tree.
 
RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Intermission 1)

Do us all a favor then and don't get hit by a tree.
Better be careful though. Chances are good that they have it out for you, being a writer and all.
 
RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Intermission 1)

I'm pretty sure the tree-hitting time was a couple weeks ago when we got that huge storm blown in from Britain. Hoping I should be safe, now. :)
 
RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Intermission 1)

The second match is here! Quite a long chapter, too, so I hope you guys are in the mood for reading! :D

Round 1, Match 2: Leon vs. Claire and Clyde

Claire sat calmly on the bed in the suite she shared with her twin, the only sign of her nervousness the slight swinging of her feet and the consistent twirling of the end of her ponytail. Her brother Clyde, on the other hand, was another matter entirely. He paced from one side of the room to the others, his footsteps in sync with Claire’s swings. Even at time like this, they were more alike than either would ever admit to.

Claire sighed and diverted her eyes from her brother’s pacing, looking instead out their window towards the sea. Despite growing up near the sea in Snowpoint City in Sinnoh, this sea was quite a bit different in ways she could never have imagined. The sea near her home in Sinnoh was cold and fickle; with an icy breeze and constant waves washing up on the rocky shores, it wasn’t a sea for you to lie on the beach, or go snorkelling, or collect seashells.

In Kalos, though… She smiled, recalling the first time her family came to visit her aunt in Kalos. Aunt Susie lived in Couriway Town, close to the mountains, but Claire’s parents had decided to make a whole vacation out of the visit and they took the train around to a few different places in Kalos, including the very beaches along Route 8 where she had her twin had picked up the ship to head to this place. The beach had been so beautiful; the sand so soft and warm between her toes, the water so crisp and clean you could see the water Pokémon swimming in the depths.

Not that Clyde had appreciated it, she remembered with a snort. The moment they arrived on the beach, he whipped out his surfboard and dived into the waters, swimming as far out as he could to ride the waves. He had spent so much time crashing and falling that he hadn’t hardly the opportunity to appreciate the fine surroundings, but that was just his manner, and Claire had long since forgiven him for that.

Indeed, they’d both come a long way from the constant spats and tussles they used to get into as kids, working hard to turn their differences into advantages. Clyde’s impulsiveness and determination partnered well with her own thoughtfulness and instinct. Even their Pokémon worked well together, using their special abilities in tandem to bring down their foes easily, no matter the type.

She was really glad that the Safiri woman had let her and Clyde come and compete together. Alone, neither of them would have been worthy of the match, but together they just might stand a chance. Safiri had been sceptical at first, but eventually allowed them in after a short phone conversation with someone, presumably Diamant.

Claire was still somewhat confused on how the particulars would go, though. All of the other trainers had only been allowed to bring one Pokémon, so she and Clyde fighting together against one opponent would be strongly in their favour. She had expected that the tournament bracket might have been changed for them to fight a double battle with two opponents, but that didn’t seem to be the case.

A knock on the door jolted her out of her reverie and Clyde answered it swiftly, similarly surprised. Only a half hour had passed of their hour reprieve, so it was too early to head down to the stadium. Instead of their servant, a silent blond gentleman, Safiri was standing in the doorway, one hand on her hip and the other hand holding two small, blue paper bags, the kind in which you might receive a small gift. Without waiting to be invited, Safiri strolled into the room and took a seat on the sofa, holding both bags gingerly on her lap.

“Is that something for us?” Claire asked, sliding down off the bed and walking over towards the little reception area of their suite. Clyde had already taken the single chair, so she was forced to sit down next to Safiri.

The woman nodded and handed a bag over to each of them. Claire neatly removed the tissue paper while Clyde tore into his package, demolishing the bag. Within moments, each of them was holding was appeared to be a slim metal necklace with a complicated clasping mechanism in the back. The only decoration was a simple blue stone in the front.

“Are these for us?” Clyde asked, a note of disgust in his voice. He clearly wasn’t thrilled at the idea of wearing something so girly.

“They’re for your Pokémon,” Safiri responded coolly, her hands resting almost daintily across her knees as she leaned forward in the chair. “Diamant was enthusiastic about the both of you participating as one unit, but we still needed to determine a way for that to work practically and not give you a strong advantage over the other trainers.

“This,” she nodded towards the necklace in Clyde’s hands, “is our solution. Please, release your Pokémon and put them on so I can explain how it works.”

Claire set the necklace down on the small coffee table and reached for her belt to pull out her Pokémon. Clyde did the same and soon both Curie and Duke were released into the suite. Curie was a bit on the small side for a Gourgeist, standing at not quite three-quarters of a meter. She was completely overshadowed by the larger Trevenant as they stood by the side of the couch, waiting for their trainers.

Claire picked up the necklace and walked over to Curie. The Pokémon trilled happily at its trainer’s appearance, nuzzling her hand. She returned the gesture with a quick nuzzle as she slid the necklace around its “neck.” Despite the complicated appearance of the clasp, it closed firmly and easily, sliding down slightly before resting right above the line where her black markings began. Next to them, Clyde reluctantly placed his jewellery on Duke, the necklace barely fitting around its trunk above its arms.

Claire looked expectedly at their Pokémon, then back at Safiri. “What does it do?”

In response, Safiri pointed a finger towards an expensive-looking vase on top of a chest of drawers on the other side of the room. “Would you please both have your Pokémon use an attack on that vase? Preferably a low-power attack; I’d rather not having to do too much cleaning up in the room.”

Claire looked over at Clyde and they both nodded.

“Curie, use Bullet Seed on that vase!”

“Duke, give ‘em a blast of Astonish!”

Within a second, Curie began spitting out seeds at the vase, knocking it over and sending it crashing into the floor. Duke, however, was never able to even begin his attack as a short burst of blue electricity crackled from the necklace around its trunk, impairing his abilities and keeping him from attacking.

“Duke, what’s wrong?” Clyde rushed to his Pokémon’s side just as the blue lightning was subsiding. The trainer glared at Safiri. “What the hell did you do?”

“The necklace your Pokémon are both now wearing acts as an inhibitor,” Safiri replied smoothly. “Its function is somewhat similar to the paralysation that is caused by some Pokémon attacks, seizing up their muscles and making them unable to respond. The devices are linked in such a way that only one of your Pokémon will be able to act at any given time and the other will be paralyzed. Which Pokémon is affected is chosen at random to make it a more compelling drawback. Diamant and I believe this will be sufficient in making sure that the two of you fighting together will not have a significant advantage over the other contestants.”

Claire pursed her lips and eyes the necklace sceptically. “It doesn’t hurt them, does it?”

“A small jolt, but nothing more. Our intention is to create an equal battle, not to unduly injure your Pokémon.”

“I guess we don’t have much of a choice, do we?” Clyde spat.

“Not particularly, no. I would not advise you to drop out of the tournament at this time. The devices will be removed when the tournament is complete.” Safiri gave a short bow. “Your servant will be by to collect you when the match is about to begin. In the meantime, you may practice with your Pokémon and the devices if you choose. Any damage will be cleaned by the time you return from the match in the evening, if you do return.”

Neither sibling noticed the hint of threat in Safiri’s last statement as the strange woman turned around and walked out of the room, closing and locking the door behind her.

Clyde immediately snarled and walked back over to Duke, fiddling with the necklace around the Trevenant’s neck. “Damn, I can’t even get this thing off!”

“I guess that’s on purpose,” Clair responded, dropped a hand lightly on Curie’s head for comfort. “They wouldn’t want us interfering with them before or during the match. There might be some kind of key necessary to take them off or something.”

“I guess so.” Clyde sighed and slumped to the floor. “I don’t have to like it, though. Couldn’t they have just made us fight in a double battle or something instead?”

“Even then, we’d be more skilled at that sort of battle than any of the other contestants, so it still wouldn’t be fair,” Claire replied, working through the logic in her own head as she talked. “I don’t really like it either, but I guess we do need to play by their rules.”

Neither sibling really wanted to put their Pokémon through the necklace-induced paralysis more than necessary, so they both agreed not to practice with it on. While it might put them at a bit of a disadvantage in the battle, they also didn’t want to wear their Pokémon out before their first match anyway. Before long, both Pokémon were back in their balls and Clyde had resumed his pacing.

When another knock on the door came a half hour later, both Claire and Clyde almost jumped out of their skins, but this time it was just their assigned servant, there to escort them to the battle. Claire’s hands trembled as she left the room with her twin, and she forced her fingers to play through some imaginary scales at her side to help relax her as they made their way through the innumerable hallways and staircases. She couldn’t be sure, but she felt like they were taking a very different way to the stadium field than they had on their way to their room for dinner. She was beginning to wonder if they were leading them in different ways on purpose when the last door opened out onto the stadium field.

The first thing she noticed was the stars, large, bright, and glorious this far from the mainland. She’d never seen so many before and had a hard time picking out even the most familiar constellations simply because there were so many stars to pick them out of. She wanted to stare up at them long enough to see if she could at least pick out the Great Ursaring, but then Clyde was tugging on her arm towards the side of the field and she was forced to turn her attention to the field as she followed him.

The ice field from before was gone, replaced with the same, plain field they first saw. Their opponent, the younger trainer who preferred going by the name of Leon as opposed to the “Justin” that showed on their phone, was already in place on the other side of the field. Off to the side, the other trainers were all sitting in the stands, Safiri standing among them. Claire didn’t see Mr. Diamant anywhere around the others, remembering belatedly that he had gone off to a separate area during the first match as well.

Casting her eyes around, slowly getting used to the darkness, she eventually spotted him in a small, enclosed room on the opposite side of the stadium from the contestants. He was standing next to a red-haired woman that Claire recognized from earlier in the tournament building.

Almost as soon as Claire spotted Diamant, his voice rang out across the stadium. “As the previous winner, Idalia will get to pick the theme for today’s stadium grounds.”

Claires eyes flickered back towards the contestants and saw Safiri holding a microphone up to the older woman. “Well, why don’t we have a grass-based stage?” she said haltingly over the microphone, her voice reverberating across the stadium.

Perfect! Claire thought, mentally cheering as the ground opened up and the new playing field began to rise from above along with the trainers’ boxes. She didn’t know what kind of Pokémon Leon used, but the grass field could only help her and Clyde, so at worse it would be a draw; at best, they’d have complete run of the field.

In a few moments, she had Clyde were on a platform even taller than Juliet and Idalia’s had been, probably 5 meters or more. Across the way, they could make out the form of Leon, clutching desperately to the railings as his platform ground to a halt.

Between them was one of the most dizzying Pokémon battle fields Claire had ever seen: a seemingly endless field of vines and thorns, so tall the tips of the thorns came almost to the platforms, and so thick, she couldn’t make out the ground below. Interspersed between the vines were occasional platforms attached to thicker vines and trunks and covered in moss.

Across the field, Leon released a Pokémon into the field of vines. Although Claire couldn’t see the Pokémon through the vegetation, she could hear his voice from across the stadium. “Theodore, go!”

“I wish we could see what we’re fighting,” Clyde grumbled to his sister under his breath.

Although she agreed with him, she answered, “We can use nicknames too, and at least he’ll be as much in the dark as we are.”

“Even more, I guess,” Clyde chuckled. “Since we’ve got two.”

The twins nodded and released their Pokémon into the field.

“Curie, go!”

“Duke, kick his ass!”

In unspoken agreement, Claire and Clyde had both sent their Pokémon out to the same spot, a relatively large platform that was visible from their side of the arena but should be invisible to Leon.

In Diamant’s box, the red-haired woman spoke into the microphone. “The match will begin… now.”

“Let’s split up and take him from the sides,” Claire whispered to her brother. He nodded back and both of them motioned to their Pokémon, directing them to the sides of the field with non-verbal communication to keep their opponent guessing as long as possible.

Leon didn’t give them much time to set up their subterfuge, however. “Theodore, find one of ‘em quick and use a Body Slam attack!”

Within moments, a tan and green blur smashed its way through the vines and leaves, not even noticing the thorns that were brushing against its body. For a moment, it stopped and turned its head, looking around, and Claire was able to identify its species.

So could her brother. “That’s a Chesnaught,” he whispered fervently. “Ha! We’ve got this one in the bag!”

With a smug smile, Claire agreed. A dual-type grass and fighting Pokémon, most of its moves would have little effect against either of their Pokémon. Curie and Duke were completely immune to Normal- and Fighting-type moves, and Grass-type moves would be weak against either of them.

Despite the heavy cover, it wasn’t long before Theodore was able to find Curie. Neither twin could see the attack, but both of them heard the heavy crash as the Chesnaught attempted to Body Slam the Gourgeist. Claire knew the attack wouldn’t hurt her Pokémon at all, but her heart still skipped a beat when Curie flipped into the air, likely knocked around as the Chesnaught’s attack also caught the branches and vines.

Regardless of the reason, their cover was blown, and it wouldn’t be long before Leon would switch up his strategy. Even if he hadn’t yet seen Duke, he would know better than to use any more Normal- or Fighting-type moves. Time to go on the offensive.

“Curie, use Trick-or-Treat!”

At the same time, Clyde also called out, “Duke, head over and hit him with a Confuse Ray!”

Simultaneously, two separate spots of light appeared in the mass of vines and thorns. Blue lightning appeared off to the west, giving away Duke’s location as the Pokémon was trapped by the effects of the necklace, while a burst of purple fog appeared in the air where Curie’s status-changing effect hit Theodore.

“Why did you do that?” Clyde hissed angrily. “You know he’s already weak to Poison, you should have hit him with Sludge Bomb!”

“At least I am following our standard attack strategy. We need to work together!” Claire whispered back, trying to keep her voice down. “If Curie’s attack had been the one that failed, you wouldn’t have had any super-effective moves to hit it. Now, you can take it out just as easily as I can.”

While the twins argued, Leon quickly called his Chesnaught back into action, zeroing in on Curie’s position. “Theodore, hit that Gourgeist with your Shadow Claw attack!”

“What?!” Claire instantly whipped her head around, searching through the foliage to locate her Pokémon. How could the Chesnaght know a powerful Ghost-type move like Shadow Claw? “Curie, dodge it, please!”

Smoldering with anger, Clyde also called out, “Duke, murder that Chesnaught with your own Shadow Claw!”

No longer paralyzed by the blue lightning, Duke leapt into action, just as the blue lightning surrounded Curie, brightening up the immediate surroundings. Claire gave out a muffled groan as she witnessed the Chesnaught’s attack through the branches, its arm surrounded by a black aura tinted with a purple glow around the edges. Powerless to even roll with the hit thanks to the paralyzation, the Shadow Claw raked through Curie with no resistance and the Gourgeist was tossed to the ground, down and out.

Claire slumped to the bottom of the platform, holding onto the metal bars of the protective fence as tears flooded her eyes. Curie was definitely out of the fight, and possibly seriously injured with an attack of that magnitude. She wanted nothing more than to run down the ladder and collect her injured Pokémon, but she felt like she needed to stay with her brother, to be strong together. They could still win this, even with Curie out of the match.

Leon gave a loud “Whoop!” but didn’t have much time to celebrate with Duke still tearing down on Theodore. The Trevenant’s own Shadow Claw ripped into the Chesnaught’s back, and the bulky Pokémon roared with pain, somehow withstanding the hit.

“Theodore, hit that other guy with a Shadow Claw, too!”

“Duke, give him another Shadow Claw right back!”

Both Pokémon ran at each other, ready to swipe, but at the last moment, paralyzing bursts of blue lightning enveloped Duke, sending the Pokémon crashing deeper into the vines. Theodore, already full swing into his attack, missed and kept going, barreling deeper into the foliage.

“What the hell? Curie’s done, Duke shouldn’t be shocked anymore!”

Claire sniffled and wiped her eyes, standing back up to support her brother. “No way, that would definitely be unfair to the other player. It’s probably still a fifty percent chance, just that if it’s on Curie it doesn’t matter. You can still pull off this win for us, though, so don’t screw it up!”

Clyde looked back at her with an arched eyebrow before turning his attention back to the match. “Duke, come back towards the top, find that Chesnaught, and hit him with everything you’ve got!”

“Theodore, kill that tree with a Shadow Claw! You can do it!”

Through the vines and leaves, Claire could see the Trevenant making its way back up to stand on a platform near the twins. It was still a bit shaken, but thankfully uninjured. It looked around warily, turning its head this way and that as it attempted to locate the other Pokémon.

From her higher vantage point, Claire could also see the Chesnaught. It, too, was making its way to a high point to locate Duke and had surfaced on a platform to the side of the stadium, near the box where Diamant and the red head were watching. For a moment, Claire just watched Diamant as he watched the match, his eyes following both Pokémon, a hand placed thoughtfully on his chin. Wow, the guy is really paying attention to this match…

Suddenly, Duke perked up. It seemed to have located Theodore, either by scent or sound or some sort of Ghost-type Pokémon sense. It roared and its arm instantly began sprouting the black-and-purple aura of the Shadow Claw move. Hearing its opponent, the Chesnaught also readied his move, and both Pokémon leapt at each other above the vines, claws extended for each other’s hearts.

Claire averted her eyes, clenching tightly to the fence with one hand and her brother’s arm with the other. She couldn’t bear to look, didn’t want to see Duke ripped open the same way Curie was, falling to the ground with a blank stare in its eyes.

A huge crash as both Pokémon re-entered the vines covering the stage, then silence.

After a few moments, Claire dared to open an eye and looked up at Clyde, his face a study in determination as he stared out at the stadium. She followed his gaze out towards the arena but could see nothing but endless vines and thorns. Where was Duke? Where was Theodore? Had they really won?

A rustle of thorns near their location caught Claire’s attention and she happened to look down right as Duke crunched through a tangle of vines to a mossy platform, its arms raised in triumph despite the seeping purple wound in its chest. There was no sign of the Chesnaught.

“Theodore? Theodore!” Leon called from the other side. He must have seen Duke emerge and was concerned about his own Pokémon. “Theodore, where are you?!”

As Clyde called praise down toward his Trevenant, Claire looked back up to Diamant’s platform. He must not have seen the full outcome either, since he was talking animatedly with the red-haired woman and no end to the match had been called. After a short but heated discussion with frequent hand waving, the woman walked over to a console and pressed a button. Within a few moments, the vines and thorns began to pull back and disappear into the ground. Knocked out cold on the bare ground were both Curie and Theodore, with Duke standing nearby, pumping its arms in triumph.

“The battle is concluded.” The red-haired woman announced over the intercom. “Claire and Clyde are the winners.”

Clyde gave a whoop and flipped over the fence, launching himself down to the ground to run over to his Trevenant. Claire took the normal route down, and by the time she had reached the bottle of the latter, Safiri and Leon were preparing to the leave the stadium, Leon with a dejected look on his face and a Pokéball in his hand.

Fighting the urge to rush over to her own Pokémon, Claire veered over to the defeated trainer. “Hey, Leon, good battle,” she said, arm outstretched.

“Thanks,” he mumbled back, not meeting her eyes but shaking her hand anyway. “I guess I never thought I would win anyway. You two take it all the way, okay? If I’m getting kicked out, I at least want the guys who beat me to win.”

“We will.” Claire smiled and watched the two head back to the doors, then rushed over to her Pokémon. Curie was down on the ground, the purple lines of the attack faded but still visible. Claire was able to easily pick the small Pokémon up in her arms, cradling it like a baby.

She turned around and was able to walk back over by her brother when she was startled by the appearance of the red-haired woman from the announcer’s booth. “Oh!”

The woman laughed. “Sorry, I didn’t mean to startle you. I’m here to take you and your brother to get your Pokémon healed. My name is Ruby.”

“Hi, I’m Claire.” Why did you give her your name? Of course she knows your name! Claire mentally chided herself, but Ruby had startled her so much, and she was so tired from the long day and the gruelling match, that she was just glad she didn’t say anything even dumber.

Ignoring the useless comment, Ruby smiled. “Why don’t you guys get your Pokémon back in their Pokéballs? Then you can follow me to our healing center.”

Reluctantly, Claire set Curie back on the ground and recalled it to its Pokéball. Clyde had already returned Duke, so they were all ready to go. With a nod, Ruby turned around and started walking to the edge of the field. Off by the bleachers, the other contestants were being herded back to their entrance by Safiri. Huh, she must have already brought Leon to the healers to take care of Chesnaught. That was fast.

Claire and Clyde followed Ruby into yet another entrance and followed yet another complicated set of passageways through the building. “This place is so confusing,” Claire mentioned, hoping to strike up a conversation with the woman. It hadn’t worked with the servant, but Ruby seemed friendlier anyway. “Don’t you guys get lost all the time?”

Ruby barked out a single laugh. “That’s Diamant’s fault, I’m afraid. The guy has a love affair with labyrinths. I would hate to see him design a school or a hospital. But, it’s not that bad once you learn it. And everyone who works here has the layout memorized before they even begin.”

“Wow, that sounds difficult.”

“It’s not so bad, really. Ah, here we go.” She gestured to a swinging metal door in front of them, identical to a row of others. “Come right on in.”

Clyde went through first, pushing the door open with a bit more force than was really needed. Claire followed behind him and Ruby brought up the rear.

A woman that looked slightly like Ruby, but with long silver hair pulled back into two large loops, stood behind a counter in the centre of a small white room. To the side of the counter were a few chairs and a table with some magazines. The room even smelled like a doctor’s waiting room.

Ruby walked up to the counter and talked to the woman for a moment, then waved Claire and Clyde over. “This is Argenta, our resident nurse. Please give her your Pokéballs and she’ll make sure your Pokémon are all healed up. Once she’s done, she’ll call your servant for you to take you back to your rooms. Have a pleasant night!”

With one last cheerful grin and a wave, Argenta disappeared back out the door. Claire and Clyde both handed their Pokéballs over to the woman. Argenta’s smile wasn’t quite as bright and kind as Ruby’s was, but at she wasn’t as cold as Safiri. “It will just be a few minutes to get your Pokémon back to fighting strength. You’re welcome to sit down for the time, if you wish.”

Clyde immediately flopped down in a seat and picked up a car magazine, but Claire stayed standing at the counter as Argenta turned around and placed the Pokéballs into a machine of some sort. It looked similar to the machines Claire had seen at various Pokémon Centers, though it was entirely transparent.

“You guys must be pretty fast,” Claire commented, trying to make small talk with the woman, “since you’ve already taken care of Leon and all. Very impressive.”

“Leon?” Argenta glanced over at Claire, her eyebrows quirked in confusion. Claire almost did a double-take when she got a close-up look at the woman’s eyes, which were definitely strange. Her irises were pure black and she only had small, white dots for pupils.

“Uh, I mean, Justin I guess his real name is,” Claire replied, averting her eyes to the side wall to keep herself from staring at the woman. What would cause her eyes to be like that? She’d never seen anything like it before.

“Oh, you mean the one who lost.” Argenta shook her head, her silver hair gleaming in the strong light of the room. “No, he didn’t come here. I only care for the winner’s Pokémon.”

“Well, I guess it makes sense to have multiple healing centers, this being such a big stadium and all.” Without anything else to say, and Argenta apparently not caring about keeping on the conversation, Claire stayed at the counter, waiting in uncomfortable silence until the machine played a short tune to announce it’s completion.

Clyde tossed the magazine down and joined Claire at the counter as Argenta turned around with the Pokéballs. She handed one to each of them, then smiled. “Your Pokémon are fully healed. We hope to see you again.”

Clyde broke into a grin. “Me too. If I see you again, that means we’ve won again!”

Claire clipped Curie back to her belt without a word and the two twins walked to the door. Outside, their eerily silent servant was waiting to take them back to their room.

As they walked away, Claire snuck one last glance through the door as it swung shut. Argenta was standing in the exact same position and pose as she had when they left for the door, still as a statue.

The next intermission is very short (well, short for me anyway) and so will probably be posted up tomorrow. The next match will likely be posted Wednesday or Thursday.
 
RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Round 1, Match 2)

In the first two matches, both players in the bottom half of the bracket advanced. Let's continue this trend for round three :>

I would say no jinx but p sure all the matches have been decided already
 
RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Round 1, Match 2)

In fact, the entire tournament has been decided. I KNOW WHO WINS. *insert evil shoujo laughter here*
 
RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Round 1, Match 2)

Artemis said:
In fact, the entire tournament has been decided. I KNOW WHO WINS. *insert evil shoujo laughter here*

Hmm, assuming that you're doing the dice thing before you start writing the story, and by observing how the story written up until now, i already have one good guess on who'll win this. Let's see if my theory will match the result or not later :p
 
RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Round 1, Match 2)

Firstly, Gourgeist and Trevenant: Y U NO USE TRICK ROOM

Seriously. It is how you Pokemon.

;)

Anyway, loving the chapter, Artemis! I have both apprehensions about my characters matches as well as a certain air of confidence and interesting excitement. Also, I am still finding it interesting the names of the characters that are based off the games, and I'm interested to see how that turns out...
 
RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Round 1, Match 2)

Me half way through the chapter:


Me at the end:

Whooooooo...

So, yeah. I predicted Leon would be out, and look what happens :p


Also, I know who wins:

“Thanks,” he mumbled back, not meeting her eyes but shaking her hand anyway. “I guess I never thought I would win anyway. You two take it all the way, okay? If I’m getting kicked out, I at least want the guys who beat me to win.”

“We will.” Claire smiled and watched the two head back to the doors, then rushed over to her Pokémon. Curie was down on the ground, the purple lines of the attack faded but still visible. Claire was able to easily pick the small Pokémon up in her arms, cradling it like a baby.

CLAIRE AND CLYDE WIN /spoiler

I still love this
 
RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Round 1, Match 2)

Ririka said:
Hmm, assuming that you're doing the dice thing before you start writing the story, and by observing how the story written up until now, i already have one good guess on who'll win this. Let's see if my theory will match the result or not later :p

It's true, I did do all the randomization before I even started the intro. Random.org list creation for bracket assignments, dice rolling for winners.

Funnily enough, for the very last match, I rolled 4 ties in a row before the dice finally cooperated enough to give me a winner. I guess even my lucky teal dice didn't want the match to end.

Kecleon-X said:
Firstly, Gourgeist and Trevenant: Y U NO USE TRICK ROOM

Seriously. It is how you Pokemon.

;)

Anyway, loving the chapter, Artemis! I have both apprehensions about my characters matches as well as a certain air of confidence and interesting excitement. Also, I am still finding it interesting the names of the characters that are based off the games, and I'm interested to see how that turns out...

Heh, I really don't know anything about competitive battling personally (my strategy is always 1) use awesome Pokémon as I catch them, 2) give them a bunch of attack moves, 3) kill the shit out of everything), which is partially why I asked people for general statements on strategy and favourite moves for their Pokémon and trainers. It helps narrow down the options for me (I'm not actually sure if this has been apparent in the story yet, or not, but Pokémon in "my" world are not limited to knowing 4 moves, so there's a lot of potential moves to choose from!) in forming a battle. In the case of Curie and Duke, Clyde and Claire have a very specific battle strategy, so it made sense for them to stick to it, especially since this is only the first round and they're still very much inside their comfort shell.

Battles will likely be getting more in-depth and complicated as the tournament moves on, partially because I'm getting more familiar on a personal level with various characters and their Pokémon (and also for writing Pokémon battles in general, something I've never done before working on this and my other story), partially because it seems more fitting that later rounds are more intense. Hopefully, anyway. :D

Also, James, no worries; Leon may be down, but he's certainly not out. :p
 
RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (Round 1, Match 2)

Short intermission update is now here, woo!

(Author's Note: Due to forum censorship, the amount of question marks in the title has been altered. The original title was 3 question marks, a colon, and then 5 question marks, but the forum software edits both 5 and 4 question marks in a row down to a single mark, so I have instead edited it to be the ???: ??? you see now.)

???: ???

With a groan, Juliet forced open her eyes, struggling against the mental fog to work up the strength to lift first a single eyelid, than two. She could never remember being so tired in her life, but the reason for her tiredness escaped her. Had she stayed up all night again working in her brother’s lab? She’d done that before on a few occasions, later waking up slumped over a desk, or back in a chair. Most of the time when that happened, she would awake with one of her brother’s jackets slung over her body to keep her warm, but now she felt cold, nothing but cold.

Once she managed to get her eyes to focus, she looked around the room in a daze. Everything looked foggy, blurry, like a dream. She shook her head and blinked her eyes, trying to focus, but the fuzzy image of her surroundings stayed the same.

Suddenly it hit her; her contacts must have been removed! Leaving them in for months at a time, she often forgot she even wore them until her eyes started to get the dry, itchy sensation that meant it was almost time to switch. Without the contacts, her vision was hopeless, especially at a distance. No wonder she couldn’t make heads or tails of her surroundings; anything beyond a couple feet past her face might as well be in another world.

And yet, even with only her natural impaired vision, the room was strange to her. She recognized the blue glow of computer screens, the flashing green and red lights of various scientific machines, but nothing was in the right place, the right order. The air was lighter and had a crisper scent than she was used to, with a slight tinge of ozone.

It was only when Juliet absentmindedly went to scratch her nose that she realized her arms were tied down to something. Seized with panic, she began to struggle, but movement proved futile. She could wiggle her fingers, turn her head, and twist her feet slightly, but her arms, legs, and torso were all firmly restrained.

Taking a few deep breaths, she fought against the panic, trying to calm her muscles before she hurt herself. To give herself something to focus on, she tried to think back and remember how she could have ended up in such a state.

The tournament! She was at the Pokémon tournament, the one her brother had given her an invitation to. She remembered losing the Pokémon match, her mad scramble down the ladder to collect her injured Mews. Safiri had come to collect her and they had walked together into the stadium’s main building, through the corridors, and into a small room that reminded her of a waiting room at a hospital. There was a nurse there with shimmering gold hair that took care of Mews, and then she sat down on the chair to wait…

That was it. That was all she could remember. She must have dosed off in the chair while waiting for Mews to be healed, and then woken up here, wherever here was.

She felt panic welling up inside her chest again and she quelled it downwards, trying to hold onto what little calm she still possessed. Normally she was a rather still person, but for some reason the act of being tied down made her entire body itchy and fiddly. She once again forced herself to focus, this time on her surroundings.

Without her contacts she could hardly see, but her other senses were working perfectly fine. The ozone smell intrigued her the most; likely, it meant there was some heavy disinfecting going on somewhere nearby, or a powerful electrical generator. Unfortunately, it also covered up any other odors that might have helped her identify her surroundings.

There were quite a lot of competing sounds in the vicinity, most of them uninteresting, but Juliet forced herself to try and sift through them. Most prominent was the whirring of coolant fans, probably coming from what looked like a bank of computers ahead and to the left. An assortment of beeps assaulted her occasionally from behind and to the left, but if there was any pattern to the noise, it was too chaotic for her to place. Near the source of the beeping was a slimy sort of dripping sound, but she couldn’t even begin to place that.

Before she could try and figure out anything else about the room, her tuned hearing began to pick out the sound of multiple approaching footsteps coming from the right. She turned her head just in time to see a fuzzy shape swing open as three figures entered the room. One of them was carrying something rather large, but she couldn’t quite make out what it was. A dummy of some sort?

She squinted her eyes to see if she could get a clearer look, but one of the other figures stepped up to her, blocking her view. Juliet raised her head and found herself staring into the unsmiling face of a woman with a pair of black glasses and hair so bright green that it almost glowed in the light of the room.

“It’s a bit too soon for you to be up, deary,” the woman said wearily. Before Juliet could open her mouth in protest, she felt the jab of a needle going into her arm, and her world slowly faded to grey.

Tomorrow or Thursday for the regular update probably.
 
RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (???: ???)

Oh snap. Yeah, there's definitely something super-shady going on here. This just keep getting better and better!
 
RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (???: ???)

Reminds me of that TV show that was recently remade... The one where a hospital unknowingly feeds patients some sort of oxygen-like gas to make them go into comatose state, and then the coma treatment place begins to do human testing and organ harvesting on the patients... I forget the name. Creepy show, creepy show.

Okay, so the dummy, from what I'm figuring, is going to be a sort of clone of Juliet herself. Juliet will either have a malicious, brainwashed doppelganger or an outright shell of her body, where she will have her memories transplanted into this highly cooperative and susceptible to suggestion state, maybe even renaming her into something like, I dunno, Pearl? Platainium? Emralda? It would make sense because of the... Ah... Gregariousness of Ruby.
 
RE: Mysteries of the Forgotten Island (???: ???)

The dummy is probably Leon, drugged and knocked out just after having lost his match.
 
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