paint flicker gemini quasi dehydrate asparagus SPELUNK (PG-dontreadcozitzbad4u)

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Well, c-m told me to post here in chat so he doesn't double post so....I still stand by my decision that this is worse than PMJ's :)
 
Chapter 1 13

So Brock and Dawn were sitting in the Kentucky Fried Chicken. They have been in love now for a relatively long time, and Brock has a huge surprise!
"Would you kind sirs care for a cup of tea?", demanded the garçon
"I don't know", demanded Dawn
"Do you want to give us tea?" demanded Brock
"I have not even the slightest clue.", demanded the garçon, and he walked away, and a tear rolled down his face, into his nose. You tasted rather sour, but he quite pleasured the flavour.
And Dawn demanded: "Brock, will you wed me!"
"I cannot do such thing" informed Brock.
"Why is this?", demanded Dawn.
"For the simple reason that ..."
"No?", demanded Dawn.
"I am..."
"No?", demanded Dawn.
"I am..."
"o_O", demanded Dawn.
"PREGNANT!", informed Brock.
"Oh, ok, yes, we can't wed then", informed Dawn.
"Correct", informed Brock, "the baby should never wed its brother"
"You're correct", informed Dawn, and she rubber his nose.
"Oh, screw the commandments, I'm wedding you, Dawn!", informed Brock, and he rubbed his nose.
And everyone was so happy, even the garçon, and they all rubbed his nose and it was good.

Yes, I am very original.
 
Lol, a repeat of the 1st Chapter. "It was good" is the line that was in both previous Chapters, and I love Hello Kitty. It looks like Nose Rubbing just replaced Stomach Rubbing. 0_o

dmaster out.
 
but what became of the phantom baby sitter? I thought he would make another fiendish sort of plot? This story is epic and random.










And it is good.
 
Nice story so far, Best story I ever read, more BESTER than Harry Potter and MOST EPICER than Artemis Fowl! Keep on reading, cause
Heavenly Spoon :F said:
it was good.
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KEEP RUBBING! CAUSE IT IS GOOD!!!
 
THIS STORY NEEDS MORE NOSE RUBBING.

Grea job. This could be a good movie. George Clooney could play Ash =P
 
I like it.
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This fan-fic is just like Poptarts; it's Crazy Good. Except more of the crazy and less of the good. And when I say good I mean proper. This story needs Yogos and/or Poptarts.
 
I hope not.
 
I could write some chapters for oyu if your short of authors/people who can be bothered to write anymore.
 
Nah, the chapters need to be written by Mods to be the absolute best. It was good.

dmaster out.
 
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