PokéBeach Create-A-Card June 2013! Congratulations Nekoban Ryo and Hegafire0!

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GoobieDoob said:
I'm in for image based! Wish me luck as this is my first year doing the Create a Card :)
[EDIT:] Wow, I'm done and nobody has even commented yet. Hmm, whatever. Anyway, here's my entry ... SOLROCK:

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Yes, I know the Energies are off. Neo cards are f***ing hard, people
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Where is set symbol?
 
RE: PokéBeach Create-A-Card June 2013!

okay here it is

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nidoking is awesome. need I say more?
 
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Reggie McGigas said:
Just saying that dex entry is kinda graphic.
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>implying that wasn't my intention from the very beginning
>implying anything related to nidoking isn't extremely kinda graphic
 
RE: PokéBeach Create-A-Card June 2013!

Nidoking <3
PMJ pulls through as always.
 
RE: PokéBeach Create-A-Card June 2013!

PMJ said:
okay here it is

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nidoking is awesome. need I say more?
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Shouldn't it say "remove 60 damage" or "remove 6 damage counters"
Or am I just horribly outdated and do I need to go out and buy me some B/W cards?
 
RE: PokéBeach Create-A-Card June 2013!

Nod3 said:
PMJ said:
okay here it is

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nidoking is awesome. need I say more?
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Shouldn't it say "remove 60 damage" or "remove 6 damage counters"
Or am I just horribly outdated and do I need to go out and buy me some B/W cards?
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You're outdated. Heal X (in 10's, not 1's) damage has been the correct term since Black & White.
 
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Machamp the Champion said:
Nod3 said:
Shouldn't it say "remove 60 damage" or "remove 6 damage counters"
Or am I just horribly outdated and do I need to go out and buy me some B/W cards?
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You're outdated. Heal X (in 10's, not 1's) damage has been the correct term since Black & White.
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Well, in that case, ain't no way I'm making any BW cards.
 
RE: PokéBeach Create-A-Card June 2013!

Here's my submission! Think of it as a Japanese-exclusive spoof card.

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Translation #1:
Alexpoke LV.23 HP50

Procrastination Pokémon. Length: 5' 6", Weight: 120 lbs.

Pokémon Power: Postpone As long as Alexpoke is your Active Pokémon, you cannot draw a card. This power stops working if Alexpoke is Asleep, Confused, or Paralyzed.

[C] Laze Around Remove 2 damage counters from Alexpoke. Alexpoke is now Asleep.

Weakness: [P], Resistance: None, Retreat Cost: 1

Claimed to be the rarest of all Slowpoke. It doesn't seem as slow as its kin, but seems to purposely put things off.

This card cannot be used.

(Note pointing to Pokémon number: A lie)
Translation #2:
Aledon LV.23 HP50

Procrastination Pokémon. Length: 1.7 meters, Weight: 54.4 kilograms

Pokémon Power: Put-off As long as this Pokémon remains active, you may not draw a card from your deck. This Special Ability stops working while this Pokémon is afflicted with Sleep, Confusion, or Paralysis.

[C] Lie Down Heal 2 damage from this Pokémon. This Pokémon is now afflicted with Sleep.

Weakness: [P], Resistance: None, Retreat Cost: 1

Said to be the rarest of all Yadon. Not as slow as its kin, but tends to put things off.

Cannot be used in official tournaments

(Note pointing to Pokémon number: A lie)
I would have submitted an English version, but it only looked right on a Water-type blank. I don't know why making it Japanese makes it look better on a Psychic-type blank, but it does!

EDIT: Reworded it a bit and fixed the misspelled "Sleep" Hiragana.
 
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On the card it says that it is lv. 23, but in your translation it says lv. 24 lololol
 
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SheNinja said:
On the card it says that it is lv. 23, but in your translation it says lv. 24 lololol
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I don't know what you're talking about.

Just kidding. I fixed it. Thanks for pointing that out.
 
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Oh yeah I updated my entry with the space that was missing between the any and way in Psychic Shift.
 
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There's something wrong with your Japanese card scan. It wouldn't say "Remove 2 damage counters from Aledon"; it'd say "Remove 2 damage counters from this Pokemon". They've only been doing that in English recently, but the Japanese cards have been doing so since time immemorial, iirc.

...I can't believe I just gave a hint
 
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Hey! I have an idea! Why not do a month for I.S.S. and fairy types. That would solve our little only 10 tcg types problem.
 
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DNA said:
There's something wrong with your Japanese card scan. It wouldn't say "Remove 2 damage counters from Aledon"; it'd say "Remove 2 damage counters from this Pokemon". They've only been doing that in English recently, but the Japanese cards have been doing so since time immemorial, iirc.

...I can't believe I just gave a hint
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Naughty, naughty DNA!

I attempted to fix this. Also, I have supplied two translations of the card, one as though it was an English card and the other a direct translation from the Japanese text.
 
RE: PokéBeach Create-A-Card June 2013!

Lugia123 said:
Hey! I have an idea! Why not do a month for I.S.S. and fairy types. That would solve our little only 10 tcg types problem.
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Fairy-type is an idea for next year, if Fairy-type gets its own representation in the TCG. As for the remaining two months...I have plans for both of them, but I keep forgetting to bug the staff (read: xous) about it (read: making a banner) >_<
 
RE: PokéBeach Create-A-Card June 2013!

I accidentally used the wrong Hiragana for "Sleep," so I edited my entry again. Also, I changed "This card cannot be used" to "Cannot be used in official tournaments." I won't be making anymore changes.
 
RE: PokéBeach Create-A-Card June 2013!

Time for my entry

Meloetta EX [P]
Basic Pokemon
170 HP

Ability: Serene Grace
Prevent all effects of attacks (excluding damage) done to your Pokemon.

[C] Embargo
During your opponents next turn, your opponent can't play any Item cards from his or her hand.

[P] [P] [C] Psybeam 100
Flip a coin. If heads, the defending Pokemon is now confused.

Weakness: [P] x2
Resistance: None
Retreat: [C]
 
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