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RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 1 is on it's way!!
Are you still accepting applications for later introduced/side characters at all?
Are you still accepting applications for later introduced/side characters at all?
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 1 is on it's way!!!!
No, sorry. i've got five new characters, more than i anticipated. Maybe next time? (Oh yeah, you guys didn't think this FanFic was the end did you?)
oh, and BTW:
Chapter One: The Truth Begins To Unravel!
Maddie was running late for dinner. She was supposed to be in Pallet Town at her Aunt Delia’s house for dinner an hour ago, where she was meeting her sisters, mother, and grandfather.
It was raining heavily, and it was so dark she couldn’t see the path
She was running through Viridian Forest, her father’s Furret running alongside her. She tripped and fell into the mud. She felt a hand grab her arm, and realized it was a man!
“Thank you,” she said to him as he helped her up.
“You’re welcome,” said the man as he held his umbrella over their heads, “You look familiar, have we met?”
“No, but I get that a lot. I’m Maddie Shade, daughter of Max, you know?”
“You look a lot like him.”
“Did you know him?”
“Know him? He was my mentor!”
“And you are?”
“Pardon me, my name is Jason Reyes…Furret!”
Max’s Furret jumped into his arms, excited after all these years to see him.
“Maddie, I was there when you were born.”
“Really? Wow, that means you know my mom! I am on my way to Pallet Town to meet her…I’m sure she’d love to see you!”
“Perhaps that isn’t the best idea. Look, I will escort you safely to Pallet, but then I really gotta get a move on.”
“Thank you Mr. Reyes!”
“Please, call me Jason…Mr. Reyes is my father.”
She chuckled at his sense of humor, and they walked through the forest.
Once they hit the route right before Pallet Town, they were ambushed by two men in uniforms and they sent out a Houndoom and Mightyena!
“Sick ‘em!” yelled one of the men. The two Pokémon lunged at Jason.
Jason dropped his umbrella and yelled, “Aggron, Dragonite, let’s go!”
Aggron grabbed both Pokémon and tossed them. But, Houndoom used a Flamethrower, which even in the heavy rain, dealt massive damage.
“Maddie!” yelled Jason, “Get out of here!”
“But I can’t just leave you!” she cried.
“NOW!”
Maddie ran. From the stories she heard about Jason, he never lost his temper.
Jason watched her run to Pallet, and thought to himself, “Just like her father…”
Maddie opened the door to Delia’s house. She and Furret were completely drenched, and everyone was sitting in the living room.
“Maddie!” cried Lindsey, who immediately ran over to hug her daughter.
“Hi mom,” said Maddie.
“Where were you?”
“It was raining bad, duh. I was just running late and the rain didn’t help.”
“Don’t be angry at your mother,” said a man who walked out from the kitchen.
“Hey Cody.”
“Maddie, you mother just worries about you.”
“Yeah sis!” said Hope, “I mean, you are the one always getting into trou-”
She was cut off by the door busting off the hinges and a Hitmonchan charging Cody.
The Pokémon uppercut Cody, sending him to the ground, then, Maddie, Hope, and Emma’s “Uncle” Rich came barging in, picked Cody up, and slammed a fist into his face, causing his lip to split and bleed.
The blood dripped onto Rich’s shirt as he pressed Cody into the wall, and got right in his face.
“Where is Jason?!?” Rich demanded.
“I haven’t the slightest clue what you’re talking ab-” Cody was cut off by a right hook.
“I SAID WHERE IS HE?!?”
“Rich!” Lindsey screamed.
“Lindsey, stay out of this!”
Grant came running down from upstairs with his nephew, Ash, and the two of them pulled Rich off of Cody.
“Richard!” Grant yelled in a voice that no one dared to defy.
Rich loosened his muscles and relaxed, and broke free from Grant.
“Hitmonchan, return,” he called out calmly.
“I suggest you leave before the cops get here,” said Cody as sirens sounded, “Oops, too late.”
Red and blue lights flashed through the windows, and the cops came to arrest Rich.
As they took him to a car, Lindsey and Cody stood in the doorway, and watched.
“What got into him?” said Lindsey.
“I don’t know,” said Cody.
Then, a yellow colored blur whizzed by and snatched Rich from the cops!
“What was that?” exclaimed Cody.
“Raikou,” said Grant.
“The legendary Pokémon? Here? Why?”
The next day on the news…
Gabby was sitting with Cody, and she was asking him about the previous night’s events.
“So,” said Gabby, “Exactly what happened?”
“Well,” said Cody, “This lunatic comes into my friend’s house and just punches me asking me insane questions. Then, when the cops came, Raikou comes rushing through and snatches him up!”
“Wait, you are telling me that a legendary Pokémon is the “getaway car” for a crime?”
“Exactly! These legendary Pokémon were brainwashed by the PMC over fifteen years ago! Think about how long they kept them? Who knows what they did to them! That is why I’m offering one million dollars to anyone who knows the whereabouts of ANY legendary Pokémon. We need to keep track of them and contain them, no matter what the costs!”
J.C. knocked his television set to the ground, breaking it.
“Stupid brother of mine,” he said. He was at his house, next door to the crime scene of last night.
He looked outside. There were reporters still out there trying to get a word with the “lunatic’s” brother.
“They want a word with me, huh?” he said to himself.
He opened the door to his house, and said, “Please! Everyone quiet!”
The reporters settled down.
“Thank you!” he continued, “I will answer your questions shortly, but first I have something to say!”
The reporters leaned in. They were hanging on his every word!
“Frenzy Plant,” he said.
“What?” asked the reporters. Then, a Venusaur used Frenzy Plant and whipped them all into Pewter City.
“Ha,” said J.C., “They had that coming.”
Then, Maddie, Hope, and Emma came in through the door.
“Hey Uncle John,” said Emma.
“Hey kids, what’s up?” he said.
“What was the deal with Uncle Rich last night?” asked Hope.
“I don’t think it’s in your best interests if I tell you.”
“Does have to do with Mr. Reyes?” asked Maddie.
“How do you know about Jason?”
“He helped me last night on the way to Pallet Town…he was attacked.”
“Girls, come with me.”
J.C. led them to a small study upstairs, and opened a scrapbook.
“Ever since your father left to fulfill his duties, things went downhill,” he explained as he flipped through pages of the scrapbook, revealing newspaper clippings of articles about the take over.
“Wait,” said Hope, “Cody always said that he was fixing everything Max ruined.”
J.C. stood up quickly and in almost a yell said, “You call your father “dad” or “father”…show him some respect!”
“Whoa, take it easy.”
“Max was a great man, and as much of a brother to me as Rich.”
“What about me?” said Rich as he walked in with Raikou.
“About time.”
“Rich!” exclaimed Emma.
“Hey girls…any word from Paul?”
“You mean Abad? Yeah, but it’s going to be impossible to get to Orre, especially now that you are a fugitive!”
“He’s just lucky Grant and Ash were there, I would’ve killed him.”
“Hold on!” yelled Hope, “Would you guys explain what’s going on?”
“We can’t,” said Rich, closing the scrapbook, “You aren’t ready.”
“Well,” said Maddie, “You guys obviously have business in Orre, and we can go wherever we please.”
“So,” said Emma, “What do you say we help you guys out?”
“On one condition,” said Rich, “You have to be willing to leave behind everything you know and love…you mother and grandfather included. We are going to fix things, and set your father’s name free, understand?”
They nodded.
“Good,” said Rich as he scribbled something down on a piece of paper, “Go here in the Orre region. Go see the fortune teller, she’ll know what to do.”
“And whatever you do,” said J.C., “Don’t tell anyone where you are going.”
“Girls, you are now involved in the resistance. You say anything and you will be arrested, understand?”
It was all so sudden, but they seemed to understand the seriousness and all said together, “We do.”
“You girls would make him proud,” said Rich.
“Grandpa!” the girls yelled as they ran into Grant’s house.
“What can I do for my favorite granddaughters?” he said.
“Can we borrow your Pokémon?” asked Maddie.
“What for?”
“Because,” said Emma, “The Silver conference is coming up, and we want to show the world that your Pokémon are still in fighting condition!”
After tricking Grant into giving them Mew and Lizardon, they flew off to the Orre, to start a journey of their own.
gimme some comments!
No, sorry. i've got five new characters, more than i anticipated. Maybe next time? (Oh yeah, you guys didn't think this FanFic was the end did you?)
oh, and BTW:
Chapter One: The Truth Begins To Unravel!
Maddie was running late for dinner. She was supposed to be in Pallet Town at her Aunt Delia’s house for dinner an hour ago, where she was meeting her sisters, mother, and grandfather.
It was raining heavily, and it was so dark she couldn’t see the path
She was running through Viridian Forest, her father’s Furret running alongside her. She tripped and fell into the mud. She felt a hand grab her arm, and realized it was a man!
“Thank you,” she said to him as he helped her up.
“You’re welcome,” said the man as he held his umbrella over their heads, “You look familiar, have we met?”
“No, but I get that a lot. I’m Maddie Shade, daughter of Max, you know?”
“You look a lot like him.”
“Did you know him?”
“Know him? He was my mentor!”
“And you are?”
“Pardon me, my name is Jason Reyes…Furret!”
Max’s Furret jumped into his arms, excited after all these years to see him.
“Maddie, I was there when you were born.”
“Really? Wow, that means you know my mom! I am on my way to Pallet Town to meet her…I’m sure she’d love to see you!”
“Perhaps that isn’t the best idea. Look, I will escort you safely to Pallet, but then I really gotta get a move on.”
“Thank you Mr. Reyes!”
“Please, call me Jason…Mr. Reyes is my father.”
She chuckled at his sense of humor, and they walked through the forest.
Once they hit the route right before Pallet Town, they were ambushed by two men in uniforms and they sent out a Houndoom and Mightyena!
“Sick ‘em!” yelled one of the men. The two Pokémon lunged at Jason.
Jason dropped his umbrella and yelled, “Aggron, Dragonite, let’s go!”
Aggron grabbed both Pokémon and tossed them. But, Houndoom used a Flamethrower, which even in the heavy rain, dealt massive damage.
“Maddie!” yelled Jason, “Get out of here!”
“But I can’t just leave you!” she cried.
“NOW!”
Maddie ran. From the stories she heard about Jason, he never lost his temper.
Jason watched her run to Pallet, and thought to himself, “Just like her father…”
Maddie opened the door to Delia’s house. She and Furret were completely drenched, and everyone was sitting in the living room.
“Maddie!” cried Lindsey, who immediately ran over to hug her daughter.
“Hi mom,” said Maddie.
“Where were you?”
“It was raining bad, duh. I was just running late and the rain didn’t help.”
“Don’t be angry at your mother,” said a man who walked out from the kitchen.
“Hey Cody.”
“Maddie, you mother just worries about you.”
“Yeah sis!” said Hope, “I mean, you are the one always getting into trou-”
She was cut off by the door busting off the hinges and a Hitmonchan charging Cody.
The Pokémon uppercut Cody, sending him to the ground, then, Maddie, Hope, and Emma’s “Uncle” Rich came barging in, picked Cody up, and slammed a fist into his face, causing his lip to split and bleed.
The blood dripped onto Rich’s shirt as he pressed Cody into the wall, and got right in his face.
“Where is Jason?!?” Rich demanded.
“I haven’t the slightest clue what you’re talking ab-” Cody was cut off by a right hook.
“I SAID WHERE IS HE?!?”
“Rich!” Lindsey screamed.
“Lindsey, stay out of this!”
Grant came running down from upstairs with his nephew, Ash, and the two of them pulled Rich off of Cody.
“Richard!” Grant yelled in a voice that no one dared to defy.
Rich loosened his muscles and relaxed, and broke free from Grant.
“Hitmonchan, return,” he called out calmly.
“I suggest you leave before the cops get here,” said Cody as sirens sounded, “Oops, too late.”
Red and blue lights flashed through the windows, and the cops came to arrest Rich.
As they took him to a car, Lindsey and Cody stood in the doorway, and watched.
“What got into him?” said Lindsey.
“I don’t know,” said Cody.
Then, a yellow colored blur whizzed by and snatched Rich from the cops!
“What was that?” exclaimed Cody.
“Raikou,” said Grant.
“The legendary Pokémon? Here? Why?”
The next day on the news…
Gabby was sitting with Cody, and she was asking him about the previous night’s events.
“So,” said Gabby, “Exactly what happened?”
“Well,” said Cody, “This lunatic comes into my friend’s house and just punches me asking me insane questions. Then, when the cops came, Raikou comes rushing through and snatches him up!”
“Wait, you are telling me that a legendary Pokémon is the “getaway car” for a crime?”
“Exactly! These legendary Pokémon were brainwashed by the PMC over fifteen years ago! Think about how long they kept them? Who knows what they did to them! That is why I’m offering one million dollars to anyone who knows the whereabouts of ANY legendary Pokémon. We need to keep track of them and contain them, no matter what the costs!”
J.C. knocked his television set to the ground, breaking it.
“Stupid brother of mine,” he said. He was at his house, next door to the crime scene of last night.
He looked outside. There were reporters still out there trying to get a word with the “lunatic’s” brother.
“They want a word with me, huh?” he said to himself.
He opened the door to his house, and said, “Please! Everyone quiet!”
The reporters settled down.
“Thank you!” he continued, “I will answer your questions shortly, but first I have something to say!”
The reporters leaned in. They were hanging on his every word!
“Frenzy Plant,” he said.
“What?” asked the reporters. Then, a Venusaur used Frenzy Plant and whipped them all into Pewter City.
“Ha,” said J.C., “They had that coming.”
Then, Maddie, Hope, and Emma came in through the door.
“Hey Uncle John,” said Emma.
“Hey kids, what’s up?” he said.
“What was the deal with Uncle Rich last night?” asked Hope.
“I don’t think it’s in your best interests if I tell you.”
“Does have to do with Mr. Reyes?” asked Maddie.
“How do you know about Jason?”
“He helped me last night on the way to Pallet Town…he was attacked.”
“Girls, come with me.”
J.C. led them to a small study upstairs, and opened a scrapbook.
“Ever since your father left to fulfill his duties, things went downhill,” he explained as he flipped through pages of the scrapbook, revealing newspaper clippings of articles about the take over.
“Wait,” said Hope, “Cody always said that he was fixing everything Max ruined.”
J.C. stood up quickly and in almost a yell said, “You call your father “dad” or “father”…show him some respect!”
“Whoa, take it easy.”
“Max was a great man, and as much of a brother to me as Rich.”
“What about me?” said Rich as he walked in with Raikou.
“About time.”
“Rich!” exclaimed Emma.
“Hey girls…any word from Paul?”
“You mean Abad? Yeah, but it’s going to be impossible to get to Orre, especially now that you are a fugitive!”
“He’s just lucky Grant and Ash were there, I would’ve killed him.”
“Hold on!” yelled Hope, “Would you guys explain what’s going on?”
“We can’t,” said Rich, closing the scrapbook, “You aren’t ready.”
“Well,” said Maddie, “You guys obviously have business in Orre, and we can go wherever we please.”
“So,” said Emma, “What do you say we help you guys out?”
“On one condition,” said Rich, “You have to be willing to leave behind everything you know and love…you mother and grandfather included. We are going to fix things, and set your father’s name free, understand?”
They nodded.
“Good,” said Rich as he scribbled something down on a piece of paper, “Go here in the Orre region. Go see the fortune teller, she’ll know what to do.”
“And whatever you do,” said J.C., “Don’t tell anyone where you are going.”
“Girls, you are now involved in the resistance. You say anything and you will be arrested, understand?”
It was all so sudden, but they seemed to understand the seriousness and all said together, “We do.”
“You girls would make him proud,” said Rich.
“Grandpa!” the girls yelled as they ran into Grant’s house.
“What can I do for my favorite granddaughters?” he said.
“Can we borrow your Pokémon?” asked Maddie.
“What for?”
“Because,” said Emma, “The Silver conference is coming up, and we want to show the world that your Pokémon are still in fighting condition!”
After tricking Grant into giving them Mew and Lizardon, they flew off to the Orre, to start a journey of their own.
gimme some comments!
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 2 is on it's way!!
Great job, i thought i would see lizardon again!! This is really good!!
Great job, i thought i would see lizardon again!! This is really good!!
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 2 is on it's way!!
You said I could send in one more character? Here goes:
Name: Joseph 'Crash' Fallen
Nickname: crash
Pokemon 1: Luxray
Pokemon 2: Staraptor
Pokemon 3: Floatzel
Bio: Staraptor has always been his best friend and first Pokemon. They trained together,battled together and ate together.They were like brothers. He was not aiming to become a Pokemon Trainer but an apprentice in some 'saving the world' thing. He was like looking for a master to prove his skill. He travelled far and wide.
Physical Appearance: handsome,charming but short. Has red spiky hair and was seen wth a cape sometimes. He wears a cool adidas jacket and trousers.
You said I could send in one more character? Here goes:
Name: Joseph 'Crash' Fallen
Nickname: crash
Pokemon 1: Luxray
Pokemon 2: Staraptor
Pokemon 3: Floatzel
Bio: Staraptor has always been his best friend and first Pokemon. They trained together,battled together and ate together.They were like brothers. He was not aiming to become a Pokemon Trainer but an apprentice in some 'saving the world' thing. He was like looking for a master to prove his skill. He travelled far and wide.
Physical Appearance: handsome,charming but short. Has red spiky hair and was seen wth a cape sometimes. He wears a cool adidas jacket and trousers.
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 2 is on it's way!!
Yay Max u r really stepping it up ou already started on Nightshade, sweet
Yay Max u r really stepping it up ou already started on Nightshade, sweet
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 2 is on it's way!!
I'm looking forward to his next chapter. Max,please accept my character!
I'm looking forward to his next chapter. Max,please accept my character!
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 2 is on it's way!!
Wow,Jason Reyes...
BTW:Mr.Reyes is not my father,I hate him...(kinda ><)
Anyways,I liked the story,especially that the chapter is kinda related about Jason and centered on him...I like the story,Keep it up
Wow,Jason Reyes...
BTW:Mr.Reyes is not my father,I hate him...(kinda ><)
Anyways,I liked the story,especially that the chapter is kinda related about Jason and centered on him...I like the story
,Keep it up
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 2 is on it's way!!
That is right, Fallen, I am accepting your character, and you sent him in just in time, because if you hadn't sent him in, when you didn't, I wouldn't be able to. Working on Chapter two, going to be busy the rest of the day though.
BTW: to all new characters: I may have edited your teams slightly, for instance, Fallen, I am giving you a Manectric instead of Luxray, because i already have two trainers with them.
That is right, Fallen, I am accepting your character, and you sent him in just in time, because if you hadn't sent him in, when you didn't, I wouldn't be able to. Working on Chapter two, going to be busy the rest of the day though.
BTW: to all new characters: I may have edited your teams slightly, for instance, Fallen, I am giving you a Manectric instead of Luxray, because i already have two trainers with them.
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 2 is on it's way!!
Thank you very much!!! Max Shade IV!!
Thank you very much!!! Max Shade IV!!
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 2 is on it's way!!
Chapter Two is half finished. i'll finish the rest later today.
Chapter Two is half finished. i'll finish the rest later today.
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 2 is on it's way!!
Cant wait untill its up!!
Cant wait untill its up!!
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 2 is on it's way!!
Chapter Two: Five Orphans And an Inside Man!
The Under was literally an underground city, where many tournaments took place and evil syndicates were once located.
After the departures of Teams Snagem and Cipher, it was abandoned…until fifteen years ago.
Now, Paul Abad, commonly known as Abad, was running the resistance force in the Under.
“Alright,” he said to the people who had gathered for a meeting, “Jason has been captured. Chris, that makes you my second in command.”
Chris “Crash” Fallen has been working with Abad since James was captured. That made Jason second in command and Crash third in command. But, now Crash would have to take Jason’s place.
“So,” said Crash, “Are we going to get him back?”
“You bet we are,” said Abad.
They were in the old coliseum they had there, and any members of the former PMC who hadn’t been incarcerated were there. Then, a group of boys, about twenty years old or so, came in.
“Are you guys the PMC?” asked one of them.
“No,” said Abad, “We’re just the Pokémon Masters now. Who are you?”
“My name is Chris, this is Matt, Sam, Dave, and Oren Satole.”
“How can I help you guys?”
“Cody’s men killed our families,” said Matt.
“So we aren’t here to ask for help,” said Dave.
“We’re here to give it,” said Oren.
Abad smiled, and said, “Welcome to the resistance.”
Abad could tell that these guys were amazing trainers. So, he wanted to bring them on a mission. A mission to recover Jason.
“Alright,” said Abad, “Here’s the problem,” he pulled out a map of the former NPZ, “Here,” he pointed to the center, “Is their prison. This is were Jason is. Our problem is the NPZ is surrounded by the Hoenn and Johto regions, and the parts that surround it are taken over already.”
“So,” said Crash, “We have to get through there without getting caught. And that’s why we can actually use you guys. Jon is in charge of security in those areas, and has never seen you guys before. His men won’t take a second look at you.
“But they know us…very well.”
“Okay,” said Sam, “I understand how we’re going to get there, but how do we get in?”
“We have an inside man at the jail,” said Crash, “But that is why we need to go there. He can’t do it on his own, so we’ll need to help him out.”
Flying on Rekkuza, the black-colored Rayquaza that Abad had befriended over two decades ago, they approached the border of the NPZ and landed. Abad returned Rekkuza.
“You captured a legendary?” Dave asked.
“His choice,” said Abad, “The world wasn’t safe. Many legendaries are captured by Cody. Only a few are still in the wild. Others stay with other members of the resistance. Now, time for a distraction.”
Abad and Crash went over a plan with the new guys, then the duo ran into the open.
Abad sent out his Dusknoir and Crash sent out his Staraptor. Some of the cops noticed right away it was them.
“Hey goons!” yelled Abad, “Come and get us!”
Immediately, the guards of the border surrounded them and left their posts. The five new trainers entered the NPZ, while Abad and Crash were taken into cars to be brought to the prison.
“Perfect,” Abad muttered with a grin on his face.
“Okay,” said Matt, “This is the prison.”
They stared at it, it was huge.
“Great,” said Sam, “How are we supposed to find anything?”
“Freeze!” yelled a man from behind them. Five robots resembling the three Regis grabbed them and the man continued, “You kids are under arrest!”
As they walked into the jail, he came up to Oren and said, “Listen and listen carefully. My name is Richard Raptor, call me Ricky. Abad, Crash, and Jason are inside. You will need to regroup with them. Once you’ve done that, they’ll explain the rest.”
Oren nodded.
They were all put into a jail cell. After a few days, they got some recreation time. They went into the courtyard, and found the trio of leaders they were looking for.
“Alright,” said Abad, walking up to them, “Nice work…you met Ricky, right?”
“Yeah,” said Chris, “Who is he?”
“Former PMC’s technology expert. He managed to escape before we were run out, and then began the whole undercover thing.”
“Cool,” said Dave.
“Yeah,” said Jason, “And now that everyone is here, I have some news.”
“Well?” asked Abad.
“I saw Maddie the night they caught me.”
“You mean his daughter Maddie?” Abad said with shock and disbelief.
“Yes! She has her father’s spirit in her, as I’m sure her sisters do as well.”
Then, Ricky came walking up to them.
“And how can we help you SIR?” Abad said with sarcasm.
“Shut up!” said Ricky, “Reyes, you have visitors.”
Jason looked to Abad and Crash, and they both nodded.
As Jason and Ricky walked away, they began talking.
“It’s all three of them,” said Ricky.
“What are they doing here?” asked Jason.
“Well, last week, Rich got into some trouble, and I think he may have sent them instead of coming here himself. I couldn’t blow my cover to them, the other guards were right there…here,” he slipped Jason an envelope, “This has all the info they’ll need about what’s going on, including about me.”
“Got it.”
Jason was on one side of glass, and on the other were the Shade triplets.
“Jason!” said Maddie.
“Girls,” said Jason, “Why did you come here?”
“Rich sent us to help,” said Emma.
“I see. Take this.”
He gave them the envelope.
“Follow the instructions and read over the papers. They contain important information to bring you up to speed.”
“Okay,” said Hope, “It was a pleasure meeting you.”
“And it was great to see you all again…and I promise, soon, your father will be back.”
“Thank you Mr. Reyes,” said Emma.
“Please, my name is Jason.”
That night…
Abad, Crash, Jason, and the orphans began a riot. Ricky and other guards subdued them, and then Ricky was asked by the warden for advice on what to do.
“Raptor,” said the warden, “You’ve been here since day one, and I trust no one here more than you…what should we do?”
“I say we transfer them to a max-security prison. I advise I make the transfer myself.”
“Always knew I could count on you Raptor.”
Even later that night.
“Hahaha!” yelled Ricky.
“Tonight,” said Abad, “Will be the beginning of the end for Cody.”
“Payback has never tasted so sweet,” said Jason.
They went to the under, and then decided to get a good night’s rest, for tomorrow, the beginning of another war would begin.
Comments please!
Chapter Two: Five Orphans And an Inside Man!
The Under was literally an underground city, where many tournaments took place and evil syndicates were once located.
After the departures of Teams Snagem and Cipher, it was abandoned…until fifteen years ago.
Now, Paul Abad, commonly known as Abad, was running the resistance force in the Under.
“Alright,” he said to the people who had gathered for a meeting, “Jason has been captured. Chris, that makes you my second in command.”
Chris “Crash” Fallen has been working with Abad since James was captured. That made Jason second in command and Crash third in command. But, now Crash would have to take Jason’s place.
“So,” said Crash, “Are we going to get him back?”
“You bet we are,” said Abad.
They were in the old coliseum they had there, and any members of the former PMC who hadn’t been incarcerated were there. Then, a group of boys, about twenty years old or so, came in.
“Are you guys the PMC?” asked one of them.
“No,” said Abad, “We’re just the Pokémon Masters now. Who are you?”
“My name is Chris, this is Matt, Sam, Dave, and Oren Satole.”
“How can I help you guys?”
“Cody’s men killed our families,” said Matt.
“So we aren’t here to ask for help,” said Dave.
“We’re here to give it,” said Oren.
Abad smiled, and said, “Welcome to the resistance.”
Abad could tell that these guys were amazing trainers. So, he wanted to bring them on a mission. A mission to recover Jason.
“Alright,” said Abad, “Here’s the problem,” he pulled out a map of the former NPZ, “Here,” he pointed to the center, “Is their prison. This is were Jason is. Our problem is the NPZ is surrounded by the Hoenn and Johto regions, and the parts that surround it are taken over already.”
“So,” said Crash, “We have to get through there without getting caught. And that’s why we can actually use you guys. Jon is in charge of security in those areas, and has never seen you guys before. His men won’t take a second look at you.
“But they know us…very well.”
“Okay,” said Sam, “I understand how we’re going to get there, but how do we get in?”
“We have an inside man at the jail,” said Crash, “But that is why we need to go there. He can’t do it on his own, so we’ll need to help him out.”
Flying on Rekkuza, the black-colored Rayquaza that Abad had befriended over two decades ago, they approached the border of the NPZ and landed. Abad returned Rekkuza.
“You captured a legendary?” Dave asked.
“His choice,” said Abad, “The world wasn’t safe. Many legendaries are captured by Cody. Only a few are still in the wild. Others stay with other members of the resistance. Now, time for a distraction.”
Abad and Crash went over a plan with the new guys, then the duo ran into the open.
Abad sent out his Dusknoir and Crash sent out his Staraptor. Some of the cops noticed right away it was them.
“Hey goons!” yelled Abad, “Come and get us!”
Immediately, the guards of the border surrounded them and left their posts. The five new trainers entered the NPZ, while Abad and Crash were taken into cars to be brought to the prison.
“Perfect,” Abad muttered with a grin on his face.
“Okay,” said Matt, “This is the prison.”
They stared at it, it was huge.
“Great,” said Sam, “How are we supposed to find anything?”
“Freeze!” yelled a man from behind them. Five robots resembling the three Regis grabbed them and the man continued, “You kids are under arrest!”
As they walked into the jail, he came up to Oren and said, “Listen and listen carefully. My name is Richard Raptor, call me Ricky. Abad, Crash, and Jason are inside. You will need to regroup with them. Once you’ve done that, they’ll explain the rest.”
Oren nodded.
They were all put into a jail cell. After a few days, they got some recreation time. They went into the courtyard, and found the trio of leaders they were looking for.
“Alright,” said Abad, walking up to them, “Nice work…you met Ricky, right?”
“Yeah,” said Chris, “Who is he?”
“Former PMC’s technology expert. He managed to escape before we were run out, and then began the whole undercover thing.”
“Cool,” said Dave.
“Yeah,” said Jason, “And now that everyone is here, I have some news.”
“Well?” asked Abad.
“I saw Maddie the night they caught me.”
“You mean his daughter Maddie?” Abad said with shock and disbelief.
“Yes! She has her father’s spirit in her, as I’m sure her sisters do as well.”
Then, Ricky came walking up to them.
“And how can we help you SIR?” Abad said with sarcasm.
“Shut up!” said Ricky, “Reyes, you have visitors.”
Jason looked to Abad and Crash, and they both nodded.
As Jason and Ricky walked away, they began talking.
“It’s all three of them,” said Ricky.
“What are they doing here?” asked Jason.
“Well, last week, Rich got into some trouble, and I think he may have sent them instead of coming here himself. I couldn’t blow my cover to them, the other guards were right there…here,” he slipped Jason an envelope, “This has all the info they’ll need about what’s going on, including about me.”
“Got it.”
Jason was on one side of glass, and on the other were the Shade triplets.
“Jason!” said Maddie.
“Girls,” said Jason, “Why did you come here?”
“Rich sent us to help,” said Emma.
“I see. Take this.”
He gave them the envelope.
“Follow the instructions and read over the papers. They contain important information to bring you up to speed.”
“Okay,” said Hope, “It was a pleasure meeting you.”
“And it was great to see you all again…and I promise, soon, your father will be back.”
“Thank you Mr. Reyes,” said Emma.
“Please, my name is Jason.”
That night…
Abad, Crash, Jason, and the orphans began a riot. Ricky and other guards subdued them, and then Ricky was asked by the warden for advice on what to do.
“Raptor,” said the warden, “You’ve been here since day one, and I trust no one here more than you…what should we do?”
“I say we transfer them to a max-security prison. I advise I make the transfer myself.”
“Always knew I could count on you Raptor.”
Even later that night.
“Hahaha!” yelled Ricky.
“Tonight,” said Abad, “Will be the beginning of the end for Cody.”
“Payback has never tasted so sweet,” said Jason.
They went to the under, and then decided to get a good night’s rest, for tomorrow, the beginning of another war would begin.
Comments please!
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 2 is on it's way!!
Cool I was in it!!! I cant wait to see more of me!! But it was really good!! Cant wait untill the next chapter!!
Cool I was in it!!! I cant wait to see more of me!! But it was really good!! Cant wait untill the next chapter!!
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 2 is on it's way!!
Yahoo! Crash is so cool! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Yahoo! Crash is so cool! Can't wait for the next chapter!
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 2 is on it's way!!
Wow,Crash automatically gets a 3rd in command Cool!
I like how all 3 leaders of the Pokemon Masters are in the cell (I thought they were just gonna bust out)
Jason Reyes,2nd Command.
Hope the next chapter will come out early
Wow,Crash automatically gets a 3rd in command
Cool!I like how all 3 leaders of the Pokemon Masters are in the cell (I thought they were just gonna bust out)
Jason Reyes,2nd Command
.Hope the next chapter will come out early
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 2 is on it's way!!
Crash's my character and he automatically 3rd in command. Amazing.
Crash's my character and he automatically 3rd in command. Amazing.
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 2 is on it's way!!
YEAH..Very amazing,I think Max felt you have the *POWER*
I know this is OFFTOPIC,But I already posted here,might as well put this:
Max,I am near finishing your Timid Abra,I already have a Def IV'ed Abra,Sp.Atk IV'ed Abra.I'll continue it later tonight
YEAH..Very amazing
,I think Max felt you have the *POWER* I know this is OFFTOPIC,But I already posted here,might as well put this:
Max,I am near finishing your Timid Abra,I already have a Def IV'ed Abra,Sp.Atk IV'ed Abra.I'll continue it later tonight
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 2 is on it's way!!
Is that an insult?
Is that an insult?
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 2 is on it's way!!
NO! Of course not,It's a compliment (or complement?)
I hope this would not cause us to flame...
BTW:Max,I saw in your 1st chapter, a type/story mistake,I'll inform you about it on YM/MSN for you to edit it
NO! Of course not,It's a compliment (or complement?)
I hope this would not cause us to flame...
BTW:Max,I saw in your 1st chapter, a type/story mistake,I'll inform you about it on YM/MSN for you to edit it