Writing Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! Fin.

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Change the title of this fanfic.
 
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 3 is on it's way!!

It should be Chapter 4 on it's way..
 
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 4 is on it's way!!

Yeah, I realized that right after my last post:p I was all, "I'm not changing the name, It took me forever to think of it!" but, thank you for notciing
Chapter Four: Nightshade!

Chris was in his hotel room in Lilycove. He was living what had become his day-to-day life.
It was about nine at night, and he was preparing for bed.
Suddenly, he heard someone walking in his room! His wife had left yesterday for a shopping spree in Rustboro, and now he was spooked. He walked onto his balcony to see if anyone was there, and there wasn’t.
He turned around to go inside and walked into someone!
“AAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!” screamed Chris in fear.
The man was a few inches shy of six feet, wore a black trench coat and one shoulder seemed to be pointed.
“Hey step-daddy,” replied the figure.
“MAX!” Chris said in shock.
Max grabbed him by the collar and slammed him into the wall.
“What in the name of Arceus is going on?!?” he demanded of his stepfather.
“What do you mean what’s going on?”
“Don’t play coy with me! I almost got shot down flying over Pallet Town!”
“Of all people, you should know better.”
“I’ve been in the year four hundred B.C. for fifteen years, so tell me what happened and why the NPZ doesn’t exist anymore!”
Chris realized Max must’ve taken the reign of Master from his father. Chris sat Max down and told him everything that he knew.
“So I left and the world is destroyed,” said Max, disappointed in himself.
“Look, Max,” said Chris, “You weren’t here, you couldn’t have done anything. And if you feel that guilty about it, do something now.”
“How? PMC is gone, Rich is a fugitive…where is Lindsey?”
Chris got up and walked away.
“Chris,” Max said impatiently, “Where is she?”
“Most believe she’s involved with Cody…I personally don’t, but he’s been supposedly “protecting” her…”

Cody had gone home. He was preparing for the day ahead, when he would launch an all-out attack on the resistance.
Suddenly, a bone the size of a femur came crashing though his window and cracked him in the face, busting his forehead open.
Then, a masked man came lunging into the room and pinned Cody onto his desk, then whipped a knife at his head, literally going into the desk micrometers away from his skull.
“Who are you?” Cody asked, barely conscious.
“You listen and listen good,” said the man, who had a very deep voice that was clearly being altered by some sort of device, “I am Nightshade. You’ve had your fun for far too long. You have four days to surrender or I promise, I WILL kill you, understand?”
Sirens blared outside as red and blue lights flashed everywhere. Nightshade jumped out the window, and disappeared.

“So Shane,” said Gabby to her guest on her show, “What can you tell us about this attack on Cody?”
“Well,” said Shane, “We know this: Cody’s home was broken into. He was clubbed in the head, and suffered a concussion. A knife was found in his desk only a hair away from his head. Whoever this “Nightshade” man is intended to threaten him into doing something, but Cody lost consciousness before he could tell us what. So people, reinforce your windows and lock your doors, these IS a maniac loose!”
Jason clicked off the television.
He was a little nervous. He had never led a battle before, at least not one of this caliber. What if he made a wrong choice? Attacked at the wrong time? So many questions ran through his head.
And now this Nightshade guy. Whose side is he on? Is the attack a fake? Or is he on their side? Or possibly, he’s fighting for personal gain?
“Jason?” said Ricky as he knocked on his door.
“Hey,” said Jason.
“This doesn’t look good.”
“I know…but remember fifteen years ago? We thought we’d never end that war, and we all pulled through…I know this looks bad, but I know we can get through it.”
“Well, we have faith in you, Jason…all of us. And remember, even if you screw up, you can fix it, and we’ll be there to help!”
“I know, and I appreciate that.”

Max had just gotten back to Chris’ hotel room, and Chris yelled, “Are you crazy?”
“What?” asked Max.
“You are all over the news about this “Nightshade” guy!”
“So? I’ve been eluding people for fifteen years to make sure my name stays out of the history books. They’ll never get me. Did you get the information?”
“Yes, and I still don’t see why we have to do this.”
“You are going to stay here. I am going to do this. He bailed me out several times, and now it’s time to return the favor.”


Not long, but it was intended to bring back an old favorite of mine
 
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 4 is on it's way!!

Kinda short,but nonetheless,still good :p, Nightshade...This NIghtshade guy is obviously someone...and I know who he is :p,Hope the next chapter comes out soon,and still good..
 
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 4 is on it's way!!

COol Chapter! Its already very interesting and I cant wait for the next chapter!
 
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 4 is on it's way!!

Can't wait for the next chapter and with the arrival of Nightshade, this is getting very interesting!

BTW, now it should be chapter 5 on it's way. Just to let you know.
 
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 4 is on it's way!!

I'm really enjoying this story. Chapter 4 was great even if it was a bit short. Keep up the good work Max.
 
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 4 is on it's way!!

Well, even playing bass guitar like a madman learning how to play, I still see it was a very interesting chapter and I cant wait for C5 =]
 
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 4 is on it's way!!

Max. are you making the trainer cards for the characters?
 
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 4 is on it's way!!

Yes, TCs will be made. not sure how fast though.
 
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 4 is on it's way!!

hi. I asked before, but you didnt seem to notice T_T Am I aloud to be in the story or is your character roster full?
 
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 3 is on it's way!!

Max Shade IV said:
YEs, Shard, it is. sorry:(

Anyways, i'm currently working on Chapter four. may not be up til tomorrow.
 
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 4 is on it's way!!

Nice chapter MAX!! Its unfolding!! It was a little short but thats ok!! Cant wait for the next chapter, hopefully ill be in it!!
 
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 4 is on it's way!!

shard79,don't kill yourself just because you aren't in the Fan Fic,remember,HW first,before playing,and I know that technique (IF YOU WERE DOING IT),your busting yourself for Max to be sentimental to you,then he's gonna let you join,IF that was your point AND cause for your post,

BTW:IM excited for the next chapter because Jason will be leading the WAR!(or is he?)
 
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Jason, I know what your talking about. I was just a little ticked that I decided to work on it THEn instead of before so I could havegotten spot. Im not doing that because Im trying to be sneaky, im deleteing that post anyway.

*delete*

Also, not to be rude, but Im just saying your being hippocritical. Your saying all that just because your in the fan fic. If you werent, you may have just as well done the same thing.
 
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 4 is on it's way!!

just out of curiosity, how and where do you make those cool banners that change pictures
 
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 4 is on it's way!!

Chapter Five: Greetz!

Max was riding his oldest friend, Charizard, to a large building. It was white and surrounded with high walls.
“So this is where you’ve been?” said Max, “Charizard, you ready?”
“Char-roar!” Charizard exclaimed.
“Good…land over there.”
Charizard steadily flew towards the ground. He landed softly, barely disturbing the grass beneath him.
“Return,” said Max. Max was dressed in all black, and slipped his mask over his face.
“Go, Espeon,” whispered Max.
Max had brought Espeon with him before he left years ago. As an Eevee, Max gave him to his aunt, Delia Ketchum, for a birthday gift. Upon taking a liking to Delia, he evolved into Espeon, and then insisted on becoming a part of Max’s team.
“Alright,” said Max, “Can you locate him?”
Espeon closed his eyes, and the gem on his forehead began glowing. Espeon began walking cautiously across the grass.
Upon reaching the wall, Max said, “Is this the most straight forward path?”
Espeon nodded.
“Return,” said Max, “Time for some noise. Electabuzz, Rhydon, GO!”
Electabuzz and Rhydon were added to Max’s team while on a mission. The two of them were Max’s powerhouses, and Max ordered, “Thunderpunch and Horn Drill!”
Electabuzz began chipping away at the wall while Rhydon bored his way into it. Needless to say, sirens sounded and security began surrounding Max.
“It’s him!” yelled a guard, “Nightshade!”
“Go, Marowak and Sceptile!” yelled Max, “Electabuzz, Rhydon, continue your work! Sceptile, use Bullet Seed! Marowak, use Flamethrower!”
Sceptile’s attack was lit on fire by Marowak’s Flamethrower, and then it surrounded them in fire, so that the guards couldn’t get to them. Electabuzz and Rhydon had broken through almost, and Max said, “Move! Marowak, Sunny Day!”
The sky became illuminated around them, even though it was night.
“Now use Solarbeam!” Max ordered Sceptile.
Sceptile busted through, and they ran in.
“Go, Espeon!” called Max.
Espeon began leading Max and his fellow Pokémon, and they approached a barred window.
A man looked out to see who it was. He didn’t recognize Max at first because of the mask, but when he saw Sceptile, he exclaimed, “Max!?!?”
“Hey James,” said Max, “Let get you out of here!”
“Alright, but they have my Pokémon in here, I can’t leave without them!”
“We’ll get them, don’t worry! Electabuzz, use Ice Punch!”
Electabuzz froze the bars solid.
“Now, Marowak, use Bone Club!” Max ordered.
Marowak took the bone in his hand, and clubbed the bars, shattering them. Max and his team jumped inside the cell, and Rhydon needed no orders to bust the door of the cell down. James led the way to where the vault of prisoners’ personal belongings were kept.

Yurei Hinataka was on her way to her cell for bed when she heard a massive explosion from James’ cell.
She ran down the hall to find him, five Pokémon, and a masked man running at her.
James grabbed her wrist to bring her with him.
“Max, this is Yurei,” said James, “Yurei, Max Shade, Pokémon Master…Literally.”
“Nice to meet you!” said Yurei as they ran down the hall.
“Guards!”
Some guards came rushing around the corner. They went after Yurei first, and she maneuvered behind them and twisted their necks in such a way to make them all pass out.
“Nice,” said Max.
As they ran down the halls, Max explained everything to Yurei and James, since they had no contact with the outside for over a decade.
“So how do we bust down this door?” asked Yurei. The room with the personal belongings was actually a vault.
“Go, Charizard!” yelled Max, “Blast Burn!”
Charizard heated the door to an amazingly hot temperature.
“Rhydon, use Blizzard!” he said next.
Rhydon released a freezing cold snow that quickly and effectively cooled the door.
“Iron Tail, Leaf Blade and Bone Club!”
Electabuzz and Espeon used Iron Tail, while Sceptile used Leaf Blade and Marowak used Bone Club.
The door literally fell off of its hinges, and the group rushed inside. There were walls lined with shelves. On the shelves were boxes in alphabetical order.
“Espeon, Psychic!” yelled Max.
Espeon used Psychic to sift through the boxes quicker than any human could. Then, Charizard roared at Max from the doorway. Max looked to see more guards coming, this time with Pokémon!
“Let’s get this door up, guys!” Max told his Pokémon. Other than Espeon, still searching, all of Max’s Pokémon began lifting the massive door up. However, it wouldn’t stay.
“Flamethrower and Fire Punch!” Max ordered. Rhydon and Charizard used Flamethrower to weld the door in place, while Marowak and Electabuzz used Fire Punch to spot weld the hinges together.
“Nice use of fire!” James complemented.
“Thanks, but they’re using Fire-Attacks to melt their way through!” Max said, worried.
Espeon found the boxes that belonged to James and Yurei, and then the door busted down!
“We’ve got you now!” yelled a guard.
“Hyper Beam!” James ordered his Tyranitar and Garchomp.
The guards were blown into the room across the hall.
“Let’s get outta here!” yelled Yurei.
Rhydon and Tyranitar busted a hole in the wall, and were faced by search lights and tons of guards and Pokémon!
“Go, Arcanine!” yelled Yurei, “Use Fire Blast!”
Arcanine blasted the guards with fire, lighting them into red-hot flames!
“Tyranitar, use Dark Pulse!” ordered James.
AS Tyranitar sent out a bone-chilling pulse of energy, Max returned all his Pokémon except Charizard, and then exclaimed, “Blazing Kamikaze!”
Charizard flew high into the air and then nosedived, lighting himself on fire and knocking himself out as he blew the entire courtyard to smithereens!
“Return!” yelled Max.
“Go, Flygon!” said James.
Max rode James’ Flygon while James and Yurei rode into the forest on Arcanine.
“Greetz!” exclaimed James on his way out.

The next day, a semi came into Lilycove. There were several large crates in it for Chris. He signed for them and had some people help him bring the boxes to his hotel room.
Once the people left, he took a crowbar to them, and inside were Max, James and Yurei!
“About time,” said Chris.
“Sorry we took the long way back,” said Max.
“Guards and police were everywhere!” said Yurei.
“That’s the least of your worries,” said Chris. He clicked on the television, and the news was playing. It was Cody.
“So Cody,” said Gabby, “How are you?”
“I’ve had better days,” said Cody.
“So, what is your plan of attack?”
“Well, I’m afraid this nutcase is going to go after my friends. Lindsey and her daughters will be staying in an undisclosed location with me.”
Max suddenly had a tear in his eye.
“Max?” asked Yurei.
“Daughters?” Max said, barely making the words come out.
“Max,” said James, “Shortly after you left, Lindsey gave birth to triplet daughters…YOUR daughters.”
“I swore I’d never do this is I had kids…”
“Max,” said Chris, “You didn’t know about them when you left.”
“I’ve got to make things right. James, will you and Yurei help me?”
James looked at Yurei, and she nodded, and then James said, “Say no more. The PMC may not exist, but I’m still following you into battle wherever you go!”
“Max,” said Chris, “There is someone else who just may be able to help you.”


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RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 6 is on it's way!!

COOL!!! You have to love that blazing kamikazee!! Who is the someone else??!!! cant wiat to find out!!
 
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 6 is on it's way!!

POST 100 WOOT WOOT WOOT WOOT!!

Thanks. Blazing Kamikaze is the best move of all time, second and equal to no other move ever!...or is it?
 
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