RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 6 is on it's way!!
lol nice, does max still have lizardon or is he with maxs father?
lol nice, does max still have lizardon or is he with maxs father?
Writing Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! Fin.
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As for Lizardon, He's with Maddie, Hope and Emma.
As for Lizardon, He's with Maddie, Hope and Emma.
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 6 is on it's way!!
ok cool thanks!! Cant wait till the next chapter is up!
ok cool thanks!! Cant wait till the next chapter is up!
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 6 is on it's way!!
I can see why this is so popular... very nice. A tad confusing at times, but that's probably because I was trying to read through it quicker than I maybe should have - I have a lab report that I should be doing. However, I'm making time to read some of the stories created here, and they're really good ^_^
I'll need to keep tabs on all the stories I've started reading now, so that I know to look and check for updates
Keep at it!
I can see why this is so popular... very nice. A tad confusing at times, but that's probably because I was trying to read through it quicker than I maybe should have - I have a lab report that I should be doing. However, I'm making time to read some of the stories created here, and they're really good ^_^
I'll need to keep tabs on all the stories I've started reading now, so that I know to look and check for updates
Keep at it!
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 6 is on it's way!!
Another fan! I'm glad to see you enjoy it! be sure to read my first fic, the link is in the first post. It'll tie up some loose ends in this story you may not understand.
gamercal said:I can see why this is so popular... very nice. A tad confusing at times, but that's probably because I was trying to read through it quicker than I maybe should have - I have a lab report that I should be doing. However, I'm making time to read some of the stories created here, and they're really good ^_^
I'll need to keep tabs on all the stories I've started reading now, so that I know to look and check for updates
Keep at it!
Another fan! I'm glad to see you enjoy it!
be sure to read my first fic, the link is in the first post. It'll tie up some loose ends in this story you may not understand.RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 6 is on it's way!!
Nice chapter,I like it,I didn't know that Charizard can DO Blazing Kamikazee,I thought only Lizardon did....
Nice chapter,I like it,I didn't know that Charizard can DO Blazing Kamikazee,I thought only Lizardon did....
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 6 is on it's way!!
Charizard has used it. and for those of you who read my last fic VERY closely, you'll know a little surprise coming in the story.
Boracay_Jason said:
Charizard has used it. and for those of you who read my last fic VERY closely, you'll know a little surprise coming in the story.
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 6 is on it's way!!
SWEET!! I love little suprises!! I dont know if i read your last fan fic super closely though? well we will find out soon i guess. When is the next chapter expected?
SWEET!! I love little suprises!! I dont know if i read your last fan fic super closely though? well we will find out soon i guess. When is the next chapter expected?
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 6 is on it's way!!
Woah! This is probably the best chapter so far. Blazing kamikazee! Woot! And Marowak's strong too!
Woah! This is probably the best chapter so far. Blazing kamikazee! Woot! And Marowak's strong too!
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 6 is on it's way!!
YAY....hey great going with the chapter & sry i cant be on more ofen, I'm grounded, ive only been able to sneak the laptop in the morning... anyways nice going MAX
YAY....hey great going with the chapter & sry i cant be on more ofen, I'm grounded, ive only been able to sneak the laptop in the morning... anyways nice going MAX
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 6 is on it's way!!
Thanks...Chapter Six is underway...and soon you may see me doing two FanFics at once; this one and a non-pokemon related one.
Thanks...Chapter Six is underway...and soon you may see me doing two FanFics at once; this one and a non-pokemon related one.
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 6 is on it's way!!
Good job Max, I liked it ALOT
I wonder if I read the last one close enogh to figure it out...
Also if you need help with the trainer cards you can PM me with what you want on them and I can make them for you
Good job Max, I liked it ALOT
I wonder if I read the last one close enogh to figure it out...
Also if you need help with the trainer cards you can PM me with what you want on them and I can make them for you
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 6 is on it's way!!
When you say you are going to make trainer cards, do you mean you are going to make the trainerbars like you did for Max and Jason? Or actual trainer cards? WOOT! GO ME! (I'm not going to tell anyone who I am--you'll have to figure it out for yourself--if you guess right, ill reveal that fact--here's a hint--I'm new--WOOT! GO ME!)
Yay.
-poke
When you say you are going to make trainer cards, do you mean you are going to make the trainerbars like you did for Max and Jason? Or actual trainer cards? WOOT! GO ME! (I'm not going to tell anyone who I am--you'll have to figure it out for yourself--if you guess right, ill reveal that fact--here's a hint--I'm new--WOOT! GO ME!)
Yay.
-poke
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 6 is on it's way!!
I doubt anyone will guess. I'm not giving you any hints other than it was a tiny, insegnifigant portion of my last fic. Sorry about the wait on Chapter 6. I've been cleaning my house for thanksgiving and I rented Halo 3, not much time for computer
I doubt anyone will guess. I'm not giving you any hints other than it was a tiny, insegnifigant portion of my last fic. Sorry about the wait on Chapter 6. I've been cleaning my house for thanksgiving and I rented Halo 3, not much time for computer
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 6 is on it's way!!
Chapter Six: Battle Of Phenac!
“Dave, Oren,” said Jason as they walked into his office.
“Hey Jason,” said Oren.
“Why’d you need to see us?” asked Dave.
“Cody is continuing his expansion project,” said Jason, “And we believe he is going to attack Phenac.”
“Wait,” said Oren, “Why the Orre region? There is a lack of natural resources, and the climate is hotter than a Moltres.”
“Exactly. He knows where we are and he’s coming for us. You two are going to Phenac to protect it at all costs, as well as what is hidden there.”
“What is hidden there?” asked Dave.
“Few people know about this…about twenty years ago, there was an evil syndicate named Team Rocket. Their leader, Giovanni, hired the world’s greatest scientists to clone a more powerful version of Mew. His name was Mewtwo. Mewtwo was a friend of the PMC’s, and protected us to the best of his abilities. When the PMC was attacked, he agreed to be captured and hidden, so that Cody couldn’t harness his powers. The thing is…the only one who knows his EXACT location in the city is Abad.”
Oren and Dave set off to Phenac City, the oasis of the Orre region. The two knew they had to be successful in defending the city and finding the legendary Mewtwo in order to tilt the tables in their favor for the war-to-come.
“Alright,” said Oren, “Phenac City should be right over this sand dune.
The duo drove their hover-cycles over the dune, and Phenac City was set ablaze!
“No!” yelled Dave.
“Let’s hurry!” exclaimed Oren.
As they got into the city, they ran to try to find who was causing this destruction. They didn’t get far before they heard a little kid crying for help from inside a burning building.
“Go, Wartortle!” yelled Oren.
Wartortle knew right away what to do. First, he used Rapid Spin on the door, trying to knock it down, but the door was too heavy.
“Go Lucario!” yelled Dave, “Use Aura Sphere!”
Lucario’s attack busted the door open, and Wartortle ran inside to find the kid.
Minutes passed and Dave and Oren wait anxiously for Wartortle’s return. Oren was about to run in after his beloved Pokémon, when a Water-Gun Attack shot out the second floor window, and Wartortle jumped out with a young little girl.
Oren sat the girl down away from the house, and the duo continued onwards.
In the center of the city was a round building. It suddenly blew up, and Cody came out followed by a Magmortar holding a Master Ball.
“Stop right there!” yelled Dave.
“Give us Mewtwo!” ordered Oren.
“You kids look familiar…” said Cody.
“You killed our parents!” screamed Dave.
“Oh, that’s right,” Cody took the Master Ball from Magmortar and yelled, “Psychic!”
Magmortar began levitating their Pokémon, but with Lucario in midair, Dave and Oren yelled, “Water Pulse!”
They blasted Magmortar, breaking his concentration.
“Magmortar, use Hyper Beam!” yelled Cody.
Magmortar charged up a white energy ball that blasted outwards at his opponents in a bright beam.
Wartortle went flying and Lucario took enough damage to knock him out.
“And now,” said Cody, “I’ll be on my way.”
Then, the Master Ball began floating away from him!
“What?” Cody asked in shock.
They looked up on the roof of the building, and saw Nightshade and an Espeon with him!
“So!” exclaimed Nightshade, “This is your choice?”
“You bet it is punk!” yelled Cody, “Magmortar, use Fire Blast!”
“Go Rhydon!” yelled Nightshade.
Rhydon blocked the massive heat.
“Now, go in with a Stone Edge!” yelled Nightshade.
Rhydon went for the kill, but Magmortar was quicker. Without orders, Magmortar dodged the attack and nail Rhydon hard with a Focus Punch.
“Fire Blast until you melt through his hide!” ordered Cody.
Rhydon began taking massive heat damage.
“Rhydon!” Nightshade yelled in fear.
Rhydon began to roar, and suddenly the intense flames became a bright white light, but the light was emanating from Rhydon!
“Yes!” yelled Nightshade.
Rhydon was evolving! Within seconds, Rhydon was no more, as he had evolved into the mighty Rhyperior!
Now, the Fire Blast, though still damaging, didn’t hurt so bad, and Rhyperior planned on putting his new wreaking ball of a tail to work.
He charged Magmortar, and used Iron Tail; despite the fact that it wasn’t very effective, it sent Cody’s Pokémon flying over the city walls. Cody exclaimed, “This is NOT over!” and ran off to fetch his Pokémon.
“Nightshade!” exclaimed Oren.
Nightshade looked at the kids, and Oren continued, “We’ll take Mewtwo now, we’re with the Pokémon Masters, and-”
Before he could finish, he realized Nightshade was paying little attention to him. He had returned Espeon and his new Rhyperior, and was now walking out of the city!
“Hydro Pump!” Oren ordered his Wartortle.
Without warning, Nightshade spun around and whipped out his Sceptile, who without order launched a massive Solarbeam at the two kids.
Nightshade continued out of the city leaving Dave and Oren unconscious.
Oren had begun to regain consciousness. As his eyes adjusted to the light, he knew right away he was no longer in Phenac.
“Morning,” said Ricky, who was running over some papers next to Oren.
“Where’s Dave?” Oren questioned, worrying of the safety of his friend.
“He’s fine, woke up three days ago.”
“It’s been that long?!?”
“Yep. And as soon as you feel like you can walk, take a walk to Jason’s office.”
Oren made his way to see Jason, and Jason had Dave in his office as well.
“We won half the Battle of Phenac,” said Jason, “But not the half we needed to. Obviously, Nightshade is not on our side or Cody’s.”
“Look, Jason…” said Oren.
“We’re really sorry about this mess up,” said Dave.
“Don’t be sorry,” said Jason, “You made a mistake, and I could be mad, I could give you a hard time, but what will that solve? You guys can show me you’re sorry by helping fix this, understand? Now, in the meantime, we need to figure out more on this Nightshade guy…”
Nightshade finally reached the old Snagem hideout, and opened the Master Ball.
Mewtwo came out, and through telepathy, said to him, “Hello…Max.”
Hm...what supposed to be a twosided war may have just become a three way war!
Comments please. I have no idea what will happen in the next chapter yet.
Chapter Six: Battle Of Phenac!
“Dave, Oren,” said Jason as they walked into his office.
“Hey Jason,” said Oren.
“Why’d you need to see us?” asked Dave.
“Cody is continuing his expansion project,” said Jason, “And we believe he is going to attack Phenac.”
“Wait,” said Oren, “Why the Orre region? There is a lack of natural resources, and the climate is hotter than a Moltres.”
“Exactly. He knows where we are and he’s coming for us. You two are going to Phenac to protect it at all costs, as well as what is hidden there.”
“What is hidden there?” asked Dave.
“Few people know about this…about twenty years ago, there was an evil syndicate named Team Rocket. Their leader, Giovanni, hired the world’s greatest scientists to clone a more powerful version of Mew. His name was Mewtwo. Mewtwo was a friend of the PMC’s, and protected us to the best of his abilities. When the PMC was attacked, he agreed to be captured and hidden, so that Cody couldn’t harness his powers. The thing is…the only one who knows his EXACT location in the city is Abad.”
Oren and Dave set off to Phenac City, the oasis of the Orre region. The two knew they had to be successful in defending the city and finding the legendary Mewtwo in order to tilt the tables in their favor for the war-to-come.
“Alright,” said Oren, “Phenac City should be right over this sand dune.
The duo drove their hover-cycles over the dune, and Phenac City was set ablaze!
“No!” yelled Dave.
“Let’s hurry!” exclaimed Oren.
As they got into the city, they ran to try to find who was causing this destruction. They didn’t get far before they heard a little kid crying for help from inside a burning building.
“Go, Wartortle!” yelled Oren.
Wartortle knew right away what to do. First, he used Rapid Spin on the door, trying to knock it down, but the door was too heavy.
“Go Lucario!” yelled Dave, “Use Aura Sphere!”
Lucario’s attack busted the door open, and Wartortle ran inside to find the kid.
Minutes passed and Dave and Oren wait anxiously for Wartortle’s return. Oren was about to run in after his beloved Pokémon, when a Water-Gun Attack shot out the second floor window, and Wartortle jumped out with a young little girl.
Oren sat the girl down away from the house, and the duo continued onwards.
In the center of the city was a round building. It suddenly blew up, and Cody came out followed by a Magmortar holding a Master Ball.
“Stop right there!” yelled Dave.
“Give us Mewtwo!” ordered Oren.
“You kids look familiar…” said Cody.
“You killed our parents!” screamed Dave.
“Oh, that’s right,” Cody took the Master Ball from Magmortar and yelled, “Psychic!”
Magmortar began levitating their Pokémon, but with Lucario in midair, Dave and Oren yelled, “Water Pulse!”
They blasted Magmortar, breaking his concentration.
“Magmortar, use Hyper Beam!” yelled Cody.
Magmortar charged up a white energy ball that blasted outwards at his opponents in a bright beam.
Wartortle went flying and Lucario took enough damage to knock him out.
“And now,” said Cody, “I’ll be on my way.”
Then, the Master Ball began floating away from him!
“What?” Cody asked in shock.
They looked up on the roof of the building, and saw Nightshade and an Espeon with him!
“So!” exclaimed Nightshade, “This is your choice?”
“You bet it is punk!” yelled Cody, “Magmortar, use Fire Blast!”
“Go Rhydon!” yelled Nightshade.
Rhydon blocked the massive heat.
“Now, go in with a Stone Edge!” yelled Nightshade.
Rhydon went for the kill, but Magmortar was quicker. Without orders, Magmortar dodged the attack and nail Rhydon hard with a Focus Punch.
“Fire Blast until you melt through his hide!” ordered Cody.
Rhydon began taking massive heat damage.
“Rhydon!” Nightshade yelled in fear.
Rhydon began to roar, and suddenly the intense flames became a bright white light, but the light was emanating from Rhydon!
“Yes!” yelled Nightshade.
Rhydon was evolving! Within seconds, Rhydon was no more, as he had evolved into the mighty Rhyperior!
Now, the Fire Blast, though still damaging, didn’t hurt so bad, and Rhyperior planned on putting his new wreaking ball of a tail to work.
He charged Magmortar, and used Iron Tail; despite the fact that it wasn’t very effective, it sent Cody’s Pokémon flying over the city walls. Cody exclaimed, “This is NOT over!” and ran off to fetch his Pokémon.
“Nightshade!” exclaimed Oren.
Nightshade looked at the kids, and Oren continued, “We’ll take Mewtwo now, we’re with the Pokémon Masters, and-”
Before he could finish, he realized Nightshade was paying little attention to him. He had returned Espeon and his new Rhyperior, and was now walking out of the city!
“Hydro Pump!” Oren ordered his Wartortle.
Without warning, Nightshade spun around and whipped out his Sceptile, who without order launched a massive Solarbeam at the two kids.
Nightshade continued out of the city leaving Dave and Oren unconscious.
Oren had begun to regain consciousness. As his eyes adjusted to the light, he knew right away he was no longer in Phenac.
“Morning,” said Ricky, who was running over some papers next to Oren.
“Where’s Dave?” Oren questioned, worrying of the safety of his friend.
“He’s fine, woke up three days ago.”
“It’s been that long?!?”
“Yep. And as soon as you feel like you can walk, take a walk to Jason’s office.”
Oren made his way to see Jason, and Jason had Dave in his office as well.
“We won half the Battle of Phenac,” said Jason, “But not the half we needed to. Obviously, Nightshade is not on our side or Cody’s.”
“Look, Jason…” said Oren.
“We’re really sorry about this mess up,” said Dave.
“Don’t be sorry,” said Jason, “You made a mistake, and I could be mad, I could give you a hard time, but what will that solve? You guys can show me you’re sorry by helping fix this, understand? Now, in the meantime, we need to figure out more on this Nightshade guy…”
Nightshade finally reached the old Snagem hideout, and opened the Master Ball.
Mewtwo came out, and through telepathy, said to him, “Hello…Max.”
Hm...what supposed to be a twosided war may have just become a three way war!
Comments please. I have no idea what will happen in the next chapter yet.
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 7 is on it's way!!
MAX SHADE!! THAT WAS AWSOME!! I think that was your best chapter yet!! I really cant wait until the next chapter!!! Wow that was good!!
MAX SHADE!! THAT WAS AWSOME!! I think that was your best chapter yet!! I really cant wait until the next chapter!!! Wow that was good!!
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 7 is on it's way!!
Awesome! And nice! Nightshade's Rhydon evolved!
Awesome! And nice! Nightshade's Rhydon evolved!
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 7 is on it's way!!
Woah,So Max is neither in the side of the Masters and Cody.I am so excited for the next one.I am eager to see the next part of the story.
Woah,So Max is neither in the side of the Masters and Cody.I am so excited for the next one.I am eager to see the next part of the story.
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 7 is on it's way!!
Thank you, Thank you.
Anyways, HAPPY TURKEY DAY!!!(For those who are American...at least, I believe it's an American holiday, but if any other contries celebrate it, Happy Turkey Day to you too!)
As for the userbars in my sig, I forget where i made them, it was some sit ei found. just google "userbar" to find all kinds of stuff.
And now, i work on Chapter 7
Thank you, Thank you.
Anyways, HAPPY TURKEY DAY!!!(For those who are American...at least, I believe it's an American holiday, but if any other contries celebrate it, Happy Turkey Day to you too!
)As for the userbars in my sig, I forget where i made them, it was some sit ei found. just google "userbar" to find all kinds of stuff.
And now, i work on Chapter 7