RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 7 is on it's way!!
Hey Max,I know that site.I searched google for it
,I'll tell you in MSN.
Hey Max,I know that site.I searched google for it
,I'll tell you in MSN.
Writing Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! Fin.
- Thread starter Max Shade IV
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RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 7 is on it's way!!
Chapter Seven: Mount Battle: XD001 Versus Ho-oh!
“So,” Yurei said to Mewtwo, “You are a clone?”
“Of Mew, yes, I am,” replied Mewtwo.
Mewtwo was sitting on the rooftop of the hotel in Lilycove, staring at the bright stars. Lilycove was one of the few cities that stars were visible at night.
“It must be strange, knowing that you were created for war…” said Yurei.
“Something Max’s father once said to him has stuck with me,” said Mewtwo, “And that is, “Sometimes, you have to choose your own destiny, Max. The world can throw destiny at you, but only you can decide if you are going to listen to it,”…It made me realize that yes, my destiny was to help Giovanni rule the world, but it my choice in the end what I do. Max helped me to show that before Grant told him that…that is why I help Max. Because I know I can do good…even the most evil people on the planet have good in them, it’s up to them, however, to use it…”
“Pretty insightful for a Pokémon.”
“I’m not the average Pokémon.”
Mewtwo looked at the door to the roof. Ten seconds later, Max came through the door.
“It’s midnight,” said Max, “Even a psycho-powerhouse like you needs rest.”
“Even though I’m not his,” Mewtwo said in Yurei’s mind only, “He treats me with a kindness I only ever saw from his cousin and his friends…you are turning out to be much like them…thank you.”
“You’re welcome,” Yurei said with a smile.
“Alright,” said Max, “Enough mind-babble. We’re making a move tomorrow, and I need you both well rested.”
“What about you? You’re still up…”
“I’ve learned to work without sleep. Been doing it for fifteen years.”
The next day, the trio of trainers headed towards Orre. Cody was trying to take it over, that much they knew.
Max had his mask on, and told his teammates and Mewtwo to call him by Nightshade during battle, so that his cover wouldn’t be blown.
Max was riding his Charizard. As his cape flapped hard in the wind, he said to James and Yurei, who were riding Flygon, “Apparently,” said Max, “Cody is heading to Mount Battle today. From some info I’ve gathered, he’s bringing Lugia…Shadow Lugia.”
Mewtwo, floating alongside them, said, “He captured a legendary?”
“Unfortunately…I’ll have to Snag him, but I’m going to need you to take him down Mewtwo. And don’t be gentle just because he’s a friend of ours…even if it means killing him.”
Mewtwo looked at Max with a strange face. Max had fought for so long to protect the legendaries to make sure nothing ever happened to them, and now, he wouldn’t hesitate in killing them. The years had certainly changed the Max Mewtwo once knew.
As they flew to the top of Mount Battle, they could see the massive coliseum on top. They saw the Battle Master trying to fight off Lugia with his Machamp, but it was a futile effort.
“Charizard, use Dragon Rage!” ordered Max.
The attack was enough to catch Lugia and Cody’s attention.
“Well, well,” said Cody, “Now the fun begins.”
The gang landed on the arena.
“James, get the Battle Master to safety,” Max told him.
“You got it!” said James. James got the Battle Master and rode off.
“Go Misdreavus!” yelled Yurei, “Use Shadow Ball!”
The attack was a hard hit, but not enough to knock Lugia off his feet!
“Alright,” said Max, “Use Thunderpunch!”
Charizard charged the larger and more powerful Pokémon fast, and Lugia used Shadow Blast, which hit Charizard very hard.
“Lugia, Aeroblast!” ordered Cody.
But, this attack wasn’t directed at Charizard or Misdreavus, but Max!
Max got hit hard and went soaring off the mountain, plummeting to sure death!
Charizard tried to get up but was too injured to move.
“Now,” said Cody, “Time to take care of this psycho!”
“Psy…” said Yurei, furious, “PSYCHO!?!?!? I’LL SHOW YOU PSYCHO!!!!”
She charged Cody and jumped onto him, choking his neck. But, Cody whipped her off fairly easily.
“Now, Lugia, use-” Cody was cut off by a loud cry.
Ho-oh and Max came soaring over the mountain and Ho-oh used Thunderbolt on Lugia.
Cody got onto Lugia and the battle took to the air.
“Ah!” exclaimed James as he returned to the battle scene, “Ho-oh has come!”
“You don’t sound too surprised,” said Yurei.
“Ho-oh is Max’s guardian. No one is entirely sure why, not even Grant had a legendary look out for him like Ho-oh does for Max. All in all, Max and Ho-oh are a great team, and Max has had the chance to capture him, but prefers not to.”
“Sacred Fire!” Max ordered the legendary.
Ho-oh let loose an intense blue flame that scorched his opponent.
“Hydro Pump!” ordered Cody.
As the powerful Water-Type Attack blasted Ho-oh into submission, Yurei whispered something to Mewtwo.
Mewtwo flew into the air and went straight for Cody, nailing him with an Aura Sphere, and sending him to the ground.
Then, he used psychic energy in the shape of a rope to choke out Lugia, who crashed into the ground.
Cody wasn’t done yet. He sent out his Magmortar, but Yurei sent out her Vaporeon and ordered, “Water Pulse!”
Magmortar literally walked through the attack! It was clear that he was a well-trained Pokémon.
“Go, Forty!” yelled James.
“Forty?” asked Max as he and Ho-oh landed.
“My Forretress!” exclaimed James, “Use Double-Edge!”
Forty charged Magmortar. Cody laughed as he yelled, “Fire Blast!”
The attack almost knocked out Forty, and everyone one could see he was in a lot of pain.
“Flail!” ordered James.
Forty Flailed about, and it hit Magmortar hard.
“Fire Punch!” yelled Cody.
It knocked out Forty.
“Go, Electabuzz!” yelled Max.
“Psychic!” yelled Cody.
The attack lifted Electabuzz into the air and slammed him constantly into the ground.
“Discharge!” yelled Max.
Electabuzz released a ton of electrical energy, knocking Magmortar down.
Electabuzz was released from the Psychic, and was badly hurt.
“That’s it!” yelled Cody, “Magmortar, return! Go, Ampharos! Grab onto Electabuzz and release a full-powered Discharge!”
Ampharos grabbed Electabuzz and began releasing all his stored electrical energy into Electabuzz, trying to overpower his body with electricity, causing him to be KOed.
Electabuzz began to cry out at first what was pain. Then, his cries got louder and angrier. Before long, Electabuzz was shouting very loud and began glowing!
“No!” Cody yelled angrily.
The white light faded and revealed Electivire!
“Alright Electivire!” yelled Max, “Show ‘em who’s the boss with Thunder!”
Now, with Electivire being supercharged from Ampharos’ Discharge, he did what Ampharos tried to do and knocked out the opponent!
“Now!” yelled Max, “Mewtwo! Use Psychic to get Lugia out of here!”
Mewtwo levitated his legendary friend off of the mountain, and now Cody was defenseless.
A helicopter came rushing in and he hopped in, and said, “This is not over Nightshade!” as they flew off.
“How are we going to help Lugia?” asked James.
“You two meet Mewtwo in the forest in Agate Village. Once there you’ll find a shine to Celebi…take this,” Max handed Yurei his Time Flute, “Play this at the shine to summon Celebi, and it’ll heal Lugia and reopen his heart.”
“Where are you going?” asked Yurei.
“To find my daughters.”
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Chapter Seven: Mount Battle: XD001 Versus Ho-oh!
“So,” Yurei said to Mewtwo, “You are a clone?”
“Of Mew, yes, I am,” replied Mewtwo.
Mewtwo was sitting on the rooftop of the hotel in Lilycove, staring at the bright stars. Lilycove was one of the few cities that stars were visible at night.
“It must be strange, knowing that you were created for war…” said Yurei.
“Something Max’s father once said to him has stuck with me,” said Mewtwo, “And that is, “Sometimes, you have to choose your own destiny, Max. The world can throw destiny at you, but only you can decide if you are going to listen to it,”…It made me realize that yes, my destiny was to help Giovanni rule the world, but it my choice in the end what I do. Max helped me to show that before Grant told him that…that is why I help Max. Because I know I can do good…even the most evil people on the planet have good in them, it’s up to them, however, to use it…”
“Pretty insightful for a Pokémon.”
“I’m not the average Pokémon.”
Mewtwo looked at the door to the roof. Ten seconds later, Max came through the door.
“It’s midnight,” said Max, “Even a psycho-powerhouse like you needs rest.”
“Even though I’m not his,” Mewtwo said in Yurei’s mind only, “He treats me with a kindness I only ever saw from his cousin and his friends…you are turning out to be much like them…thank you.”
“You’re welcome,” Yurei said with a smile.
“Alright,” said Max, “Enough mind-babble. We’re making a move tomorrow, and I need you both well rested.”
“What about you? You’re still up…”
“I’ve learned to work without sleep. Been doing it for fifteen years.”
The next day, the trio of trainers headed towards Orre. Cody was trying to take it over, that much they knew.
Max had his mask on, and told his teammates and Mewtwo to call him by Nightshade during battle, so that his cover wouldn’t be blown.
Max was riding his Charizard. As his cape flapped hard in the wind, he said to James and Yurei, who were riding Flygon, “Apparently,” said Max, “Cody is heading to Mount Battle today. From some info I’ve gathered, he’s bringing Lugia…Shadow Lugia.”
Mewtwo, floating alongside them, said, “He captured a legendary?”
“Unfortunately…I’ll have to Snag him, but I’m going to need you to take him down Mewtwo. And don’t be gentle just because he’s a friend of ours…even if it means killing him.”
Mewtwo looked at Max with a strange face. Max had fought for so long to protect the legendaries to make sure nothing ever happened to them, and now, he wouldn’t hesitate in killing them. The years had certainly changed the Max Mewtwo once knew.
As they flew to the top of Mount Battle, they could see the massive coliseum on top. They saw the Battle Master trying to fight off Lugia with his Machamp, but it was a futile effort.
“Charizard, use Dragon Rage!” ordered Max.
The attack was enough to catch Lugia and Cody’s attention.
“Well, well,” said Cody, “Now the fun begins.”
The gang landed on the arena.
“James, get the Battle Master to safety,” Max told him.
“You got it!” said James. James got the Battle Master and rode off.
“Go Misdreavus!” yelled Yurei, “Use Shadow Ball!”
The attack was a hard hit, but not enough to knock Lugia off his feet!
“Alright,” said Max, “Use Thunderpunch!”
Charizard charged the larger and more powerful Pokémon fast, and Lugia used Shadow Blast, which hit Charizard very hard.
“Lugia, Aeroblast!” ordered Cody.
But, this attack wasn’t directed at Charizard or Misdreavus, but Max!
Max got hit hard and went soaring off the mountain, plummeting to sure death!
Charizard tried to get up but was too injured to move.
“Now,” said Cody, “Time to take care of this psycho!”
“Psy…” said Yurei, furious, “PSYCHO!?!?!? I’LL SHOW YOU PSYCHO!!!!”
She charged Cody and jumped onto him, choking his neck. But, Cody whipped her off fairly easily.
“Now, Lugia, use-” Cody was cut off by a loud cry.
Ho-oh and Max came soaring over the mountain and Ho-oh used Thunderbolt on Lugia.
Cody got onto Lugia and the battle took to the air.
“Ah!” exclaimed James as he returned to the battle scene, “Ho-oh has come!”
“You don’t sound too surprised,” said Yurei.
“Ho-oh is Max’s guardian. No one is entirely sure why, not even Grant had a legendary look out for him like Ho-oh does for Max. All in all, Max and Ho-oh are a great team, and Max has had the chance to capture him, but prefers not to.”
“Sacred Fire!” Max ordered the legendary.
Ho-oh let loose an intense blue flame that scorched his opponent.
“Hydro Pump!” ordered Cody.
As the powerful Water-Type Attack blasted Ho-oh into submission, Yurei whispered something to Mewtwo.
Mewtwo flew into the air and went straight for Cody, nailing him with an Aura Sphere, and sending him to the ground.
Then, he used psychic energy in the shape of a rope to choke out Lugia, who crashed into the ground.
Cody wasn’t done yet. He sent out his Magmortar, but Yurei sent out her Vaporeon and ordered, “Water Pulse!”
Magmortar literally walked through the attack! It was clear that he was a well-trained Pokémon.
“Go, Forty!” yelled James.
“Forty?” asked Max as he and Ho-oh landed.
“My Forretress!” exclaimed James, “Use Double-Edge!”
Forty charged Magmortar. Cody laughed as he yelled, “Fire Blast!”
The attack almost knocked out Forty, and everyone one could see he was in a lot of pain.
“Flail!” ordered James.
Forty Flailed about, and it hit Magmortar hard.
“Fire Punch!” yelled Cody.
It knocked out Forty.
“Go, Electabuzz!” yelled Max.
“Psychic!” yelled Cody.
The attack lifted Electabuzz into the air and slammed him constantly into the ground.
“Discharge!” yelled Max.
Electabuzz released a ton of electrical energy, knocking Magmortar down.
Electabuzz was released from the Psychic, and was badly hurt.
“That’s it!” yelled Cody, “Magmortar, return! Go, Ampharos! Grab onto Electabuzz and release a full-powered Discharge!”
Ampharos grabbed Electabuzz and began releasing all his stored electrical energy into Electabuzz, trying to overpower his body with electricity, causing him to be KOed.
Electabuzz began to cry out at first what was pain. Then, his cries got louder and angrier. Before long, Electabuzz was shouting very loud and began glowing!
“No!” Cody yelled angrily.
The white light faded and revealed Electivire!
“Alright Electivire!” yelled Max, “Show ‘em who’s the boss with Thunder!”
Now, with Electivire being supercharged from Ampharos’ Discharge, he did what Ampharos tried to do and knocked out the opponent!
“Now!” yelled Max, “Mewtwo! Use Psychic to get Lugia out of here!”
Mewtwo levitated his legendary friend off of the mountain, and now Cody was defenseless.
A helicopter came rushing in and he hopped in, and said, “This is not over Nightshade!” as they flew off.
“How are we going to help Lugia?” asked James.
“You two meet Mewtwo in the forest in Agate Village. Once there you’ll find a shine to Celebi…take this,” Max handed Yurei his Time Flute, “Play this at the shine to summon Celebi, and it’ll heal Lugia and reopen his heart.”
“Where are you going?” asked Yurei.
“To find my daughters.”
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RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 8 is on it's way!!
AWESOME!! really good max!! Didnt cody use to be good? what changed him?
AWESOME!! really good max!! Didnt cody use to be good? what changed him?
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Cody was never a good guy, just a big fat JACK*****************....sorry...he's based on someone i know...
Moneyking63 said:
Cody was never a good guy, just a big fat JACK*****************....sorry...he's based on someone i know...
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lol thats ok we all have people in our life like that, i read the old one a while ago so i cant remember a whole lot! Anyway cant wait until the next chapter!!
lol thats ok we all have people in our life like that, i read the old one a while ago so i cant remember a whole lot! Anyway cant wait until the next chapter!!
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 8 is on it's way!!
Chapter Eight: Attack On The Under!
Maddie, Hope, and Emma had left to meet with their mother. Jason thought that it may be best if they were with Cody to uncover any information on what he was doing.
Jason was preparing for a mission to the Pokémon Research Lab near Gateon Port, when he heard a knock on his door.
Jason walked over the door and opened it, and behind the door was Abad!
“Abad!” exclaimed Jason.
“Hey,” said Abad. He was a mess, and reeked of Arceus-knows-what.
“Where were you?” asked Jason.
“Well,” said Abad, “I managed to escape to the jungle. I would’ve been back sooner, but I encountered the four-hundred-ninety-fourth Pokémon!”
“What was it?” Jason asked him eagerly.
“The Kraken! One of a kind too!”
“Did you catch it?” asked Jason.
“Killed it.”
“GW-AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH?”
“He was too powerful, not even Arceus stood a chance…killed it while it was sleeping, then I came back.”
“Sounds amazing, you can tell me all about it when I get back-”
Jason was cut off as the building stared shaking. Without hesitation, Jason and Abad ran out into the Under to see what was going on.
“Shane!” yelled Abad.
Shane was one of Cody’s follower’s, and was attacking the under. Soon, they saw Jon and his Steelix causing earthquakes as Shane’s Toxicroak crashed through windows.
“They’re trying to find us,” said Abad.
“I’ll get Ricky and the others, we have to get out of here!” said Jason.
“Alright.”
Within ten minutes, Abad and his team had left the Under.
“We can’t just let them take it!” Said Matt, “C’mon Click!”
Click (Chris) and Matt ran back into the Under with their Empoleon and Honchkrow, respectively.
In the Under, Jon and Shane had taken the community hostage, with Jon’s Steelix blocking the path out.
Suddenly, Steelix was blasted by a Hydro Pump from Matt’s Empoleon!
“Little punks!” yelled Shane, “Toxicroak, use Sucker Punch!”
Toxicroak went for a cheap shot on Empoleon, but then Click’s Honchkrow hit Toxicroak hard with a Steel Wing.
“No one calls us punks!” yelled Click.
“You children just don’t see what we’re trying to achieve, do you?” asked Jon.
“Shut your mouth!” yelled Matt, “Empoleon, Flash Cannon!”
Empoleon hit Toxicroak hard, but then Jon yelled out, “Thunder Fang!”
Steelix’s mouth began to overflow with sparks as he lunged at Empoleon.
“Empoleon!” cried Matt as Empoleon hit the ground.
“Honchkrow!” yelled Click, “Night Shade!”
Honchkrow hit Steelix pretty hard, but Toxicroak came in and nailed Honchkrow with Poison Jab, poisoning him.
“What are we going to do?” said Matt.
“Jon,” said Click, “I’d duck if I were you…”
“Why on Earth would I listen to you?” asked Jon.
Not half a second later does he get clobbered in the head with a large bone.
Shane helped him and turned around to see Nightshade!
Max sent out Electivire and yelled, “Cross Chop!”
Electivire knocked both trainers to the ground. Max picked up Jon and threw him onto Electivire’s shoulder, and they left.
“Um…” said Matt, “That was…random…”
“Quick!” yelled Click, “Get Shane!”
Hours later, peace was restored to the Under, and Abad was questioning Shane.
“So what’s the deal, Shane?” asked Abad.
“I won’t tell you anything!” said Shane. Abad gave him the best right hook he’d ever thrown.
“Where is Cody?” Abad demanded.
“Go to-” Shane was cut off by another hook.
“Go ahead, say it,” said Abad, “And I’ll kill you. Until you talk your stuck hear with no communication with anyone but me. Welcome to solitary.”
Abad left the damp cell they had thrown Shane into.
“Nice work, guys,” said Abad to Matt and Click.
“Thanks Abad,” said Matt.
“But it was that Nightshade guy who did most of the work…” said Click.
“Look,” said Abad, “I may not like that guy, but I could care less what happens to Jon. We got one of them, that’s what matters.
Somewhere south of Lavender Town…
Max had his mask off. He had brought Jon to a cabin on the lake. Jon began to regain consciousness, so Max slipped his mask on.
“Go-” said Jon as he reached for his PokéBall, which wasn’t on his belt anymore.
“Where are they, Jon?” asked Max.
“Who?”
“The daughters of Shade!”
“Like I’ll tell you!”
“Charizard, go!”
Charizard flew out of his PokéBall and tackled Jon, then dug his claws into his left shoulder, causing him to bleed badly.
“AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!” Jon cried in pain.
Max walked over him and crouched down, putting his face as close to his as possible.
“Listen and listen good,” said Max, “You DO NOT mess with me punk! You don’t tell me what I want to hear, I WILL KILL YOU!” Max hesitated, looked at his Charizard, and said, “Let him go.”
Charizard pulled his blood-soaked claws out, and Max threw Jon a roll of medical bandages.
“There is no way out of this cabin,” said Max, “I’ll come back in a week. If you are alive, then I’m sure you’ll change your mind by then about telling me where they are.”
Chapter Eight: Attack On The Under!
Maddie, Hope, and Emma had left to meet with their mother. Jason thought that it may be best if they were with Cody to uncover any information on what he was doing.
Jason was preparing for a mission to the Pokémon Research Lab near Gateon Port, when he heard a knock on his door.
Jason walked over the door and opened it, and behind the door was Abad!
“Abad!” exclaimed Jason.
“Hey,” said Abad. He was a mess, and reeked of Arceus-knows-what.
“Where were you?” asked Jason.
“Well,” said Abad, “I managed to escape to the jungle. I would’ve been back sooner, but I encountered the four-hundred-ninety-fourth Pokémon!”
“What was it?” Jason asked him eagerly.
“The Kraken! One of a kind too!”
“Did you catch it?” asked Jason.
“Killed it.”
“GW-AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH?”
“He was too powerful, not even Arceus stood a chance…killed it while it was sleeping, then I came back.”
“Sounds amazing, you can tell me all about it when I get back-”
Jason was cut off as the building stared shaking. Without hesitation, Jason and Abad ran out into the Under to see what was going on.
“Shane!” yelled Abad.
Shane was one of Cody’s follower’s, and was attacking the under. Soon, they saw Jon and his Steelix causing earthquakes as Shane’s Toxicroak crashed through windows.
“They’re trying to find us,” said Abad.
“I’ll get Ricky and the others, we have to get out of here!” said Jason.
“Alright.”
Within ten minutes, Abad and his team had left the Under.
“We can’t just let them take it!” Said Matt, “C’mon Click!”
Click (Chris) and Matt ran back into the Under with their Empoleon and Honchkrow, respectively.
In the Under, Jon and Shane had taken the community hostage, with Jon’s Steelix blocking the path out.
Suddenly, Steelix was blasted by a Hydro Pump from Matt’s Empoleon!
“Little punks!” yelled Shane, “Toxicroak, use Sucker Punch!”
Toxicroak went for a cheap shot on Empoleon, but then Click’s Honchkrow hit Toxicroak hard with a Steel Wing.
“No one calls us punks!” yelled Click.
“You children just don’t see what we’re trying to achieve, do you?” asked Jon.
“Shut your mouth!” yelled Matt, “Empoleon, Flash Cannon!”
Empoleon hit Toxicroak hard, but then Jon yelled out, “Thunder Fang!”
Steelix’s mouth began to overflow with sparks as he lunged at Empoleon.
“Empoleon!” cried Matt as Empoleon hit the ground.
“Honchkrow!” yelled Click, “Night Shade!”
Honchkrow hit Steelix pretty hard, but Toxicroak came in and nailed Honchkrow with Poison Jab, poisoning him.
“What are we going to do?” said Matt.
“Jon,” said Click, “I’d duck if I were you…”
“Why on Earth would I listen to you?” asked Jon.
Not half a second later does he get clobbered in the head with a large bone.
Shane helped him and turned around to see Nightshade!
Max sent out Electivire and yelled, “Cross Chop!”
Electivire knocked both trainers to the ground. Max picked up Jon and threw him onto Electivire’s shoulder, and they left.
“Um…” said Matt, “That was…random…”
“Quick!” yelled Click, “Get Shane!”
Hours later, peace was restored to the Under, and Abad was questioning Shane.
“So what’s the deal, Shane?” asked Abad.
“I won’t tell you anything!” said Shane. Abad gave him the best right hook he’d ever thrown.
“Where is Cody?” Abad demanded.
“Go to-” Shane was cut off by another hook.
“Go ahead, say it,” said Abad, “And I’ll kill you. Until you talk your stuck hear with no communication with anyone but me. Welcome to solitary.”
Abad left the damp cell they had thrown Shane into.
“Nice work, guys,” said Abad to Matt and Click.
“Thanks Abad,” said Matt.
“But it was that Nightshade guy who did most of the work…” said Click.
“Look,” said Abad, “I may not like that guy, but I could care less what happens to Jon. We got one of them, that’s what matters.
Somewhere south of Lavender Town…
Max had his mask off. He had brought Jon to a cabin on the lake. Jon began to regain consciousness, so Max slipped his mask on.
“Go-” said Jon as he reached for his PokéBall, which wasn’t on his belt anymore.
“Where are they, Jon?” asked Max.
“Who?”
“The daughters of Shade!”
“Like I’ll tell you!”
“Charizard, go!”
Charizard flew out of his PokéBall and tackled Jon, then dug his claws into his left shoulder, causing him to bleed badly.
“AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!” Jon cried in pain.
Max walked over him and crouched down, putting his face as close to his as possible.
“Listen and listen good,” said Max, “You DO NOT mess with me punk! You don’t tell me what I want to hear, I WILL KILL YOU!” Max hesitated, looked at his Charizard, and said, “Let him go.”
Charizard pulled his blood-soaked claws out, and Max threw Jon a roll of medical bandages.
“There is no way out of this cabin,” said Max, “I’ll come back in a week. If you are alive, then I’m sure you’ll change your mind by then about telling me where they are.”
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wow that was eventful!!! AND TOTALLY AWSOME!! So this is starting to be a 3 way war now huh!!! This is really getting good!! Not that it wasnt already good but man this is picking up pace!!! and the best part was I WAS IN IT!!! glad to see Empoleon and I taking a stand!! GREAT JOB!! AGAIN!!!
wow that was eventful!!! AND TOTALLY AWSOME!! So this is starting to be a 3 way war now huh!!! This is really getting good!! Not that it wasnt already good but man this is picking up pace!!! and the best part was I WAS IN IT!!! glad to see Empoleon and I taking a stand!! GREAT JOB!! AGAIN!!!
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Wow,Nice 2 chapters,but I only wanted to know how did your Rhydon and Electivire evolve without a Electrizer or Protector?
Wow,Nice 2 chapters,but I only wanted to know how did your Rhydon and Electivire evolve without a Electrizer or Protector?
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Using something like that in a fan fic is a little un practical and i think that is meant for the games. If pokemon were real I doubt we would have to use those items on certain pokemon to make them evolve its just put in the games to make them more fun!! Thats my opinion i dont know about max though!
Using something like that in a fan fic is a little un practical and i think that is meant for the games. If pokemon were real I doubt we would have to use those items on certain pokemon to make them evolve its just put in the games to make them more fun!! Thats my opinion i dont know about max though!
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YEah, i can't be like, "JASON! I NEED TO CROSS TRADE MY ELECTABUZZ HOLDING AN ELECTIRIZER SO IT WILL EVOLVE!!!!"
Just no.
Evolution stones i'd use ina fic, or the friendship evos. but trading and trade w/ items are a no-no. they just don't work well.
YEah, i can't be like, "JASON! I NEED TO CROSS TRADE MY ELECTABUZZ HOLDING AN ELECTIRIZER SO IT WILL EVOLVE!!!!"
Just no.
Evolution stones i'd use ina fic, or the friendship evos. but trading and trade w/ items are a no-no. they just don't work well.
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Lol,Max,that was funny. *OK! WHO ARE YOU! WHY IS NIGHTSHADE TALKING TO ME :-O)
Oh yeah,hope next chapter comes out soon
Lol,Max,that was funny. *OK! WHO ARE YOU! WHY IS NIGHTSHADE TALKING TO ME :-O)
Oh yeah,hope next chapter comes out soon
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Gosh... you really know how to maintain drama don't you? You and PMJ are definitely the best writers on the site, both stories are just wickedly awesome to read...
Please, keep up this standard! I look forward to the next chapter
Gosh... you really know how to maintain drama don't you? You and PMJ are definitely the best writers on the site, both stories are just wickedly awesome to read...
Please, keep up this standard! I look forward to the next chapter
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 9 is on it's way!!
This story is turning out great. It has a more mature tone than Ultimate Battle or PMC vs LPC. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
This story is turning out great. It has a more mature tone than Ultimate Battle or PMC vs LPC. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 9 is on it's way!!
That's the feel I'm trying to get going. Guess I'm doing a good job, huh?
Nercinator said:
That's the feel I'm trying to get going. Guess I'm doing a good job, huh?
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Ya you definetly are!! So when can we be expecting the next chapter!! I cant wait!!
Ya you definetly are!! So when can we be expecting the next chapter!! I cant wait!!
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 9 is on it's way!!
Is that a question or a demand?
Anyways you can expect the next chapter......when it's finished! *DUNDUNDUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNN!!!*
Moneyking63 said:
Is that a question or a demand?
Anyways you can expect the next chapter......when it's finished! *DUNDUNDUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNN!!!*
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NO sorry thats a question!! Lol ur just really good and im just really impaciant!! jk
NO sorry thats a question!! Lol ur just really good and im just really impaciant!! jk
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Gret! I'm looking forward to your next chapter(s)!
Gret! I'm looking forward to your next chapter(s)!
RE: Pokémon Nightshade: Birth Of A Master! PG-13 WARNING! Chapter 9 is on it's way!!
yes! very nice! just went away for 10 days, so haven't read the last 3 chapters until just now. Good job--now, please excuse me so i can go wash my mouth out with soap.
P.S. there is another hint for you... see if you can find out now.
yes! very nice! just went away for 10 days, so haven't read the last 3 chapters until just now. Good job--now, please excuse me so i can go wash my mouth out with soap.
P.S. there is another hint for you... see if you can find out now.