Writing Pokemon and the Mysterious Humans: Fans (If i have any) Comment or i will end this fanfic

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RE: Pokemon and the Mysterious Humans: Have You All Forgoten About This?

Are you still at your cousin's? Cause I want to here the next chapter. Update soon please.
 
RE: Pokemon and the Mysterious Humans: Have You All Forgoten About This?

ok, i thought everyone forgot about this so i stopped. Ok i will make the next chapter and now im at Israel!!! YAYAYAYAYA! And they have internet obviously so i will make the next chapter sometime later today cuz i have to go to my Grandma's and she doesnt have internet or computer so ya...there ya have it. I thought nobody liked this anymore. I will make the next chapter soon. Thansk for your cooparation.
 
RE: Pokemon and the Mysterious Humans: Have You All Forgoten About This?

Alright! The next chapter is out. This is for Master of Six Kings for reviving this for me. I appreciate it! Ok...Here is what you asked for! The next chapter.
 
RE: Pokemon and the Mysterious Humans: AT least 1 Person is Tunning Into this!

Not bad, can't wait for the action to come in the next chapter. Amazing how Trevor became that after what I wrote but okay 0_o.
 
RE: Pokemon and the Mysterious Humans: AT least 1 Person is Tunning Into this!

Ya i kinda changed the discription but thats the only way possible that i thought of for him to fit in my sotry to be someone totally different. SO ya....I will update sometime later today the next chapter ok? IS that good enough. But it might take a while cuz the battle will be quite long.
 
RE: Pokemon and the Mysterious Humans: AT least 1 Person is Tunning Into this!

OK! The next chapter is finished. Hope you liked My fanfic. Season 2 coming out tomorrow with new characters and all so tune in! Bye bye till tomorrow!
 
RE: Pokemon and the Mysterious Humans: AT least 1 Person is Tunning Into this!

Name: Prince ( I dont like my real name)
Fav type: Fire
Pokemon: Infernape

Also w00t!!!     00      ______
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RE: Pokemon and the Mysterious Humans: AT least 1 Person is Tunning Into this!

I thought Trevor was "the big bad guy". You sure made it sound like it.
 
RE: Pokemon and the Mysterious Humans: AT least 1 Person is Tunning Into this!

ya well, every season has its bad guy. Trevor was the sub-bad guy. It was all an illusion to keep you from thinking what was gonna happen next. I had all your minds set and boom...a suprise.

Prince of the Sea: You are in but do you wanna be a hero or villian?
 
RE: Pokemon and the Mysterious Humans: AT least 4 People are Tunning Into this!

okay, but you stated he was "the master of evil". I think you should cut that sentence out.
 
RE: Pokemon and the Mysterious Humans: AT least 4 People are Tunning Into this!

nope.....i told you it was something to keep you away from the real thing so it would be a surprise. DOnt argue!!!! My story!!!!!! Just kidding.....glad you are giving comments. Makes me feel wanted!
 
RE: Pokemon and the Mysterious Humans: AT least 4 People are Tunning Into this!

Ch. 1 of season 2 is out. It is the beggining episode so dont go saying its so short!
 
RE: Pokemon and the Mysterious Humans: AT least 4 People are Tunning Into this! Need Comments!

these kids go from being so incconent to killing without thinking it out of the ordinary.
 
RE: Pokemon and the Mysterious Humans: AT least 4 People are Tunning Into this! Need Comments!

yes, you have to use your imagination a little. What do you think they did between battles. They thought of maybe idk they had to kill to get what they deserve maybe. Or to stop evil. The battles arent right after each other most of the time. They have to kill. And they learned to control their powers well, they were innocent. Now they are good fighters but not ruthless killers. They always have guilt in them when they kill. The next chapter will be called the guilt monster. I just gave you a sneak preview!
 
RE: Pokemon and the Mysterious Humans: AT least 4 People are Tunning Into this! Need Comments!

Good guy

But have it like the person thats a good guy but he hates the others like:

(If you've heard of it)

Shaman King: Tao Ren (Len) of the gang.
 
RE: Pokemon and the Mysterious Humans: AT least 4 People are Tunning Into this! Need Comments!

Name:Helena
Favorite Type:Dark
Fav. Pokemon:Umbreon
Descripition (Looks and Stuff):A 16 year old teen who has always been obsseded with death and magic. She is physically weak , but mental strong. She plots the down fall of her foes with her wits. When she fights she never uses her body but hits them with the power of darkness.

villain!!!!! Feel free to change her description to work with your story!
 
RE: Pokemon and the Mysterious Humans: AT least 4 People are Tunning Into this! Need Comments!

i cant do the chapter now with Helena. She can be one of the 7 tower leaders. ANd thanks for the advice about your character Prince of the Sea
 
RE: Pokemon and the Mysterious Humans: AT least 4 People are Tunning Into this! Need Comments!

ok Ch. 2 season 2 is done. Its pretty long but its got a lot info you should read! It is so wierd but interesting at the same time i think. I really make the story along as i write. I dont have background knowledge about this. I just write what i think on the spot!
 
RE: Pokemon and the Mysterious Humans: AT least 4 People are Tunning Into this! Need Comments!

Good job! Yet you know how I feel when you use my characters like that!
 
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