ok, so i got 3 messages saying to go on......Actually 4 over PM kinda....But i need at least one more to know that i need to keep going....Cuz, if you say you like it thats not enough. I need you guys to post comments after chapters or advice or something i did wrong with your characters or something.....CUz if you say all this it wont help unless you actually show that you like it by posting comments and stuff.