Blazing Pokémon Master said:
I thought that to and there is not alot of explanation it sort of like a shell, i'm not flamming i'm just saying you should add more detail...
Writing Pokemon: Ash & Dawn (PG-13)
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I thought that to and there is not alot of explanation it sort of like a shell, i'm not flamming i'm just saying you should add more detail...
i thought it was very good, and funny lol
I'll post Chapter 9 later tonight
keep the funny coming lol lol. It is alsome!!!
Sorry guys, getting late. Chapter 9 will be posted tommorow
Uncharted island....a mysterious secret waiting to set itself free....What's the big secret ? Find out tommorow !
Uncharted island....a mysterious secret waiting to set itself free....What's the big secret ? Find out tommorow !
i understand see ya tomarrow.
Chapter 9 posted sometime in the afternoon
good i can't wait!!!
Chapter 9
As Dawn and Ash paddled to the island they spotted, their clothes were soaking wet
"Oh man ! We didn't bring out suitcases! They were still on the ship!" Dawn complained
"Well, at least we have each other" Ash replied. Dawn furiously rummaged for her cell phone in her purse. It got all wet and it shorted out the battery
"Great ! My phone's dead!" Dawn said, throwing in on the white sand
"Now what do we do?" Ash wondered
"We search the island. We try and survive until we can call for help" Dawn stated
"Don't we have a Flying Pokemon?" Ash questioned
"I left my Dragonite back at the Lab. I wonder how the kids are doing..." Dawn replied
As Uncle Joe and Aunt Georgia put the kids to bed, there was a knock at the door
"Yes, can I help you?" Aunt Georgia questioned
"Ma'am, it pains me to say this but here it goes. Ahem, Mr. and Mrs. Ketchum have perished as their cruise ship, the S.S Waverider capsized in a storm" a coast guard official stated
"My god, I can't believe it!" Aunt Georgia said, flabbergasted. The coast guards' radio went buzzing off. He listened to them radio. And then continued speaking
"There are alive. I just got radio transmission saying they're located on an island with no name" the coast guard official replied
"Well, that's good to hear!" Aunt Georgia replied
"But, there is a secret, hidden from explorers for thousands of years. I just hope they're going to be all right" the coast guard official replied, closing the door
Meanwhile, back on the island...
"I found some food!" Dawn stated
"And I got a fire going!" Ash replied
"Ash, there's something you have to see" Dawn replied. Dawn led Ash to an opening of a cave
"Did you check inside?" Ash questioned
"No, I can't put my finger on it, but something in strange with that cave" Dawn said. Then red eyes appeared. Dawn, frightened, grabbed Ash's shirt
"Dawn, what's wrong?" Ash questioned
"L-l-look i-i-in t-t-the c-c-cave!" Dawn said, stammering. Ash stares at the red, glaring eyes
"We'd better get out of here!" Ash shouted. But it was too late, a Pokemon, that appeared to be the evo of Kabutops, rushed out of the cave and grabbed a hold of Ash and Dawn! It then turned around and stomped back into the cave
END Chapter 9!
As Dawn and Ash paddled to the island they spotted, their clothes were soaking wet
"Oh man ! We didn't bring out suitcases! They were still on the ship!" Dawn complained
"Well, at least we have each other" Ash replied. Dawn furiously rummaged for her cell phone in her purse. It got all wet and it shorted out the battery
"Great ! My phone's dead!" Dawn said, throwing in on the white sand
"Now what do we do?" Ash wondered
"We search the island. We try and survive until we can call for help" Dawn stated
"Don't we have a Flying Pokemon?" Ash questioned
"I left my Dragonite back at the Lab. I wonder how the kids are doing..." Dawn replied
As Uncle Joe and Aunt Georgia put the kids to bed, there was a knock at the door
"Yes, can I help you?" Aunt Georgia questioned
"Ma'am, it pains me to say this but here it goes. Ahem, Mr. and Mrs. Ketchum have perished as their cruise ship, the S.S Waverider capsized in a storm" a coast guard official stated
"My god, I can't believe it!" Aunt Georgia said, flabbergasted. The coast guards' radio went buzzing off. He listened to them radio. And then continued speaking
"There are alive. I just got radio transmission saying they're located on an island with no name" the coast guard official replied
"Well, that's good to hear!" Aunt Georgia replied
"But, there is a secret, hidden from explorers for thousands of years. I just hope they're going to be all right" the coast guard official replied, closing the door
Meanwhile, back on the island...
"I found some food!" Dawn stated
"And I got a fire going!" Ash replied
"Ash, there's something you have to see" Dawn replied. Dawn led Ash to an opening of a cave
"Did you check inside?" Ash questioned
"No, I can't put my finger on it, but something in strange with that cave" Dawn said. Then red eyes appeared. Dawn, frightened, grabbed Ash's shirt
"Dawn, what's wrong?" Ash questioned
"L-l-look i-i-in t-t-the c-c-cave!" Dawn said, stammering. Ash stares at the red, glaring eyes
"We'd better get out of here!" Ash shouted. But it was too late, a Pokemon, that appeared to be the evo of Kabutops, rushed out of the cave and grabbed a hold of Ash and Dawn! It then turned around and stomped back into the cave
END Chapter 9!
that is crazy she has a draginite anyway when is the next chapter come out
Soon. And Ash has a Salamence. Dawn has cute and powerful Pokemon. Ash has cool and strong Pokemon. Maybe by Friday Chapter 10 will be posted
That was a good chapter. You ought to give the Kabutops evo a name. Maybe Kaboslash.
Kabutops' evolution name will be disclosed in Chapter 10. Plus Omastar, Armaldo, Cradily, Aerodactyl and Relicanth have evolutions. All names will be disclosed in Chapter 10, but Kaboslash sounds like a good name
Thanks!
Cool....Fossil Stage 3s. They sound deadly.
The next chapter's going to be good, I just know it!
Cool....Fossil Stage 3s. They sound deadly.
The next chapter's going to be good, I just know it!
Except the Relicanth's and Aerodactyl's evo will be a stage 2's. Since Relicanth and Aerodactyl don't have evolutions yet. But Dawn ends up catching some for research (she is a professor, if you forgot)
I'll be posting Chapter 10 maybe Saturday. But if I have off tomorrow, it'll be posted tomorrow
Okay. Chapter 10 posted tommorow
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