RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*
Kay, so I just read throght this Whole thing, now I'm just gonna sum things up, if you plan on making new pokemon. Don't do stuff like evolutions of old ones. Because in ROMs, which is what this is, you simply replace pokemon from the pokedex so just start anew. Garitter your amazing and I'm loving the art, full moon your arts genuine but try working along with garitter on things, toilie, I'm not trying to be mean but, your sprites are how people know when a game is a fake. Now you need a story line. And Ice, your not gonna get a map until you get things straight. I'll work on most things. Right now I'm on my iPod and I'll think of stuff for the game. Look a my stuff on boddy903's ROM Pokémon granite and cumulus. Now if anything I said was offensive. I'm sorry it's just constructive criticism. Good luck, I'll get at this in the morning.
And, WINSLOW for either flying or normal. It fits
Ash is champion, the only good idea around storyline (the only trainer in all of the ______ region to own a pikachu) and have him give you a pikachu egg after you defeat him*after credits when you wake up at your place* (Mom: " oh hi _____ Ash stopped by early this morning and dropped off this egg with a note, go ahead read it." *you read the note* "Dear _____, take this pokemon egg, it contains a pikachu, do take care of it, and congradulations...new champion.") ... I'll back with more..