Pokemon Ice Version

[charidude]

RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*

Just an idea, I know how the team was all about Nature... why don't they use the darker sides of nature? Floods, Tornado, Fire, etc... They can be using pokemon that way to terrorize using nature.

This one. Also is this a good opening. After this it could be the scene with the Prof.



The game starts with the screen black then fades into a very dark rainy forest. The forest is trenched in water. Pokemon are hiding and running to trees. The rain is such a magnitude where the flood is sweeping down trees. As the night progresses only one tree remains standing. It is large, grand, and the beacon of hope for all the pokemon who were swept away. The floods reside unnaturally. Pairs of beady red eyes appear in the forest. The small pokemon that reside in the tree’s interior are cringing in fear.

The screen goes white.

You wake up in your bed. It’s dark out.
(Player)- “What was that? Another nightmare?”

A light appears in the player’s window. Outside is a man with curly hair wearing a hat. He is holding up a flashlight into the air.

(Player)-“What’s he doing? I better investigate…”

You walk downstairs and out the door and walk over to talk to the man.
He turns around startled by you.

(Man)-“Eeek! What are you doing here?!”
(Player)-“I live here what are you doing here?”
(Man)-“Never mind that, I’ll teach you not to meddle.”

The man releases a Wartortle.
(Man)-“Wartortle! Attack!”
You step away in fear of being attacked by his wartortle.

(???)-“Stop!”
A growlithe comes from the bottom of the screen and rams the wartortle and the man.
Officer Jenny comes running up towards the fallen man.
(Jenny)-“Stop right there you criminal!”

(Man)-“Uh-oh… This isn’t good….”
(Player)-“What’s going on?”
(Jenny)-“This man is suspected of being part of a group of troublemakers and we believe he was signaling for rescue. Don’t worry, we’ll take it from here.”
(Man)-“Don’t worry, they’ll get me! They’ll free me! I’m not done yet!”
Officer Jenny and growlithe escort the Man out of the screen.

Your Mom comes running out towards you.
(Mom)-“Are you okay?”
(Player)-“I’m fine.”
(Mom)-“Let’s get you back to bed…”
The screen fades out.

 

[Ice Arceus]

RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*

This one. Also is this a good opening. After this it could be the scene with the Prof.



The game starts with the screen black then fades into a very dark rainy forest. The forest is trenched in water. Pokemon are hiding and running to trees. The rain is such a magnitude where the flood is sweeping down trees. As the night progresses only one tree remains standing. It is large, grand, and the beacon of hope for all the pokemon who were swept away. The floods reside unnaturally. Pairs of beady red eyes appear in the forest. The small pokemon that reside in the tree’s interior are cringing in fear.

The screen goes white.

You wake up in your bed. It’s dark out.
(Player)- “What was that? Another nightmare?”

A light appears in the player’s window. Outside is a man with curly hair wearing a hat. He is holding up a flashlight into the air.

(Player)-“What’s he doing? I better investigate…”

You walk downstairs and out the door and walk over to talk to the man.
He turns around startled by you.

(Man)-“Eeek! What are you doing here?!”
(Player)-“I live here what are you doing here?”
(Man)-“Never mind that, I’ll teach you not to meddle.”

The man releases a Wartortle.
(Man)-“Wartortle! Attack!”
You step away in fear of being attacked by his wartortle.

(???)-“Stop!”
A growlithe comes from the bottom of the screen and rams the wartortle and the man.
Officer Jenny comes running up towards the fallen man.
(Jenny)-“Stop right there you criminal!”

(Man)-“Uh-oh… This isn’t good….”
(Player)-“What’s going on?”
(Jenny)-“This man is suspected of being part of a group of troublemakers and we believe he was signaling for rescue. Don’t worry, we’ll take it from here.”
(Man)-“Don’t worry, they’ll get me! They’ll free me! I’m not done yet!”
Officer Jenny and growlithe escort the Man out of the screen.

Your Mom comes running out towards you.
(Mom)-“Are you okay?”
(Player)-“I’m fine.”
(Mom)-“Let’s get you back to bed…”
The screen fades out.

Love the storyline so far. Though instead of a flood, lets put it as a snow storm if it does work out. I will add the storyline to the front post later on. I will wait if anyone else has ideas. Though besides that you did an excellent job with the story.

EDIT: We should have some screenshots of the game in a couple of days or so.

 

[charidude]

RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*

Awesome! Screenies! And sure. Snowstorm it is. Should I get to work on the Prof scene? And do we have a name for him yet?

 

[Ice Arceus]

RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*

Awesome! Screenies! And sure. Snowstorm it is. Should I get to work on the Prof scene? And do we have a name for him yet?

Sorry no names yet. We will be working on the names tomorrow. You should see it on the titles probably stating: Pokemon Ice Version *Working on Names* which means that the whole day will probably be dedicated to the names.

Also yes work on the prof scene we need that for the game.

Thanks for your ideas.

 

[superfoof]

RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*

Could you get a back version for that the trainer I need it for the game.

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Okay, also do we have any set legendaries I should be informed about?

Well I don't think so. I think we still need the legendaries.

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I'll do that right now btw whats his role in the game?

 

[Ice Arceus]

RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*

Well I don't think so. I think we still need the legendaries.

I'll do that right now btw whats his role in the game?

I was thinking about the trainer being a rival. If you don't feel like he should be the rival then you can pick of what he should be.

 

[Full Moon]

RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*

Sorry no names yet. We will be working on the names tomorrow. You should see it on the titles probably stating: Pokemon Ice Version *Working on Names* which means that the whole day will probably be dedicated to the names.

Also yes work on the prof scene we need that for the game.

Thanks for your ideas.

I can make the professor for the game too.

 

[charidude]

RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*

Hmm for him, Idk yet. When I look at him, I see, partner, not rival, partner. Almost like an assistant.
*Starting Prof. Scene.*

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I can make the professor for the game too.

Oh, you're doing Prof? Well how about we each do one and have Ice vote, that way we know which ever one we do choose is good.

 

[Ice Arceus]

RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*

I can make the professor for the game too.

Ok. Yeah make the professor for the game and then we can sprite it. Our main objective right now is getting the storyline done. Though you can still work on the art.

 

[charidude]

RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*

Oh, he meant draw it.... ok charidude gets it now.=3

 

[Ice Arceus]

RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*

Oh, he meant draw it.... ok charidude gets it now.=3

Full Moon will draw
charidude will write.

EDIT: I will be drawing a map for the game.

 

[charidude]

RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*

Here's a part with the Prof. Oh, and the next part will be the rival.



The screen goes black, waits a couple seconds…. Then goes white again.

You have free mobility in your room.

You walk downstairs to find Prof. (We’ll just call him that.) talking with your Mom. They notice you and walk over to you.

(Prof.)-“Hi there (Player)!”
(Player)-“Hello there Prof.”
Your mom runs over to you.
(Mom)-“ (Player), Prof. has extended you a very special offer!”
(Prof.)-“Very special indeed! I would like you to investigate for me.”
(Player)-“Investigate?”
(Prof.)-“Yes, you see, the incident that happened last night. It’s been happening quite a lot… Not always jail-breaks, but strange people, doing these crimes. I know they are linked because of how they do it. With Pokemon. They use their pokemon’s attacks to cause mischief. And recently, their acts of mischief are getting worse then mischief… That man was arrested for freezing a public beach while people were in it. They were almost killed from the freezing of their bodies. And I want you to find a connection or the source of it all. Can you do that for me (Player)?”
(Player)-“Umm…. Sure I guess I could… But how will I protect myself if I get in a bad situation?”
(Mom)-“That’s the best part!-“
Your mom is cut off by Prof.
(Prof.)-“You can use one of these… ASSISTANT!!!!”
(Assistant) comes running in.
(Assistant)-“Yes Professor?”
(Prof.)-“Put out the three pokeballs I gave you.”
(Assistant)-“Ah, right, the pokeballs.”
(Assistant) puts out the three pokeballs.
(Prof.)-“Choose one (Player).”

You choose your starter pokemon.

(Prof.)-“Once again, thank you so much for helping me. But you won’t be doing it alone!”

Prof. hands you the PokeNav.

(Prof.)-“That’s the PokeNav version 3.2. It’s supposed to be a map and a small database, but I tinkered with it and can now act like a phone. And it has the database called the Pokedex. Which you can use to record pokemon data.”
(Assistant.)-“I have one too.”
(Prof.)-“Yes, and that way you can contact each other. (Assistant’s Name) will be here to help you on your way. If you ever need to ask a question just consult him.”
(Player)-“Thank you so much Prof.!”
(Prof.)-“No, thank you (Player.)”
(Prof.)-“Now I must be off to (8th town)… Come along (Assistant’s Name).
The Prof. leaves.
(Assistant)-“Bye (Player).”
Assistant leaves.

(Mom)-“Isn’t this wonderful? And, I have some things to help you!”
Your Mom gives you your backpack, the running shoes, and a note pad.
(Player)-“Thanks!”
(Mom)-“Oh! And you also have your new database account. You can store items and any pokemon you catch along the way!”

 

[superfoof]

RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*

I'll do that right now btw whats his role in the game?

I was thinking about the trainer being a rival. If you don't feel like he should be the rival then you can pick of what he should be.

OMG YOU READ MY MIND, I WAS THINKING RIVAL!

 

[charidude]

RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*

Can I use this userbar in my sig????

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^I know I'm not a staff but.... it looks really cool Haha get it, COOL, as in cold.... yeah yeah I know it's really bad.... (like your sense of humor...) ZING!

 

[Ice Arceus]

RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*

@charidude: Of course you can use the userbar in your sig. Also the story was great. I will add the storyline to the front post after the rival part of the story.

@superfoof: We have to wait and see if Full Moon agrees if the character should be a rival or not. If he says yeah then it shall be the rival.

 

[superfoof]

RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*

He better say yes because I did all this lol

 

[charidude]

RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*

It looks great. Except I can't really see the eyes on the side views...

 

[Brett]

RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*

Probably going to drop this. Not far enough along. I started just generic ideas last night for my own game and I am already further then this. Maybe not in art but oh well on that. Sorry guys. I just prefer to be in a game which is going to get done in decent time, much like DarkGrey Verison. This is just going to slow for my liking.

 

[charidude]

RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*

Here's the rival piece.



After your mom gives you the items you gain free mobility. You leave the house.
Facing you outside the house is your good friend (Rival).
(Rival) runs over to you.
(Rival)-“Hey there (Player)! You look shocked! Do you even remember my name?”
(Type their name)
Two large men come up to you.
(Man1)-“Hey you two get out of the way!”
(Rival)-“No!”
(Man2)-“He look, he has one of those fancy maps!”
(Man1)-“Let’s get it!”
(A double battle occurs.)
(Man1)-“Eeek! My pokemon!”
(Man2)-“Come on, let’s get out of here!”
The two men run away.

(Rival)-“So you’re helping Prof?”
(Rival)-“That’s pretty cool but your (starter) is nothing compared to my (starter). And while you’re off investigating, I’ll be training to become the world’s best pokemon trainer! Maybe, you should become one too. You and you’re (starter) are pretty strong! Check out the gym in (next town). The gym leaders are crazy tough. Anyway, see ya (Player)!”
Rival starts to run away then comes running back.
(Rival)-“Oh, and here’s my PokeGear Number!”
Rival enters himself into your PokeNav then runs off.

You start to head out of town but are stopped when the Man from last night comes running from behind you with two police officers behind him. Beside him is the third starter.

(???)-“Out of my way!”
His (starter) rams into you knocking you to the side as he runs away. The two police officers come over to talk to you.
(Police1)-“Hey kid, are you okay?”
(Police2)-“Come on, we better hurry! It looks like he’s heading towards (next town).”
The two run off.




There is the rival and possibly a second. This way I think it shows that:
1.We are different from most games.
2.We use advantage of all three starters.
3.It's kind of like HG/SS where you're working with someone that's not you're friend. Also, I think it's cool that with some Evil Team members that you verse aren't just grunts or Admins...

I can always edit if need be.

 

[superfoof]

RE: Pokemon Ice Version *Updated front post with a lot of artwork*

omg that actully sounds like me