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READ THIS BEFORE YOU READ THE NEXT CHAPTER

Here's where all your characters come in although I made a couple changes in the pokemon so that we don't have 3 people with Drifloons and two people with charmeleons. As I did with Tom, not all of their pokemon will be shown in this chapter. And from now on, I'd like to get the characters in pm so they don't shown to any other readers. After a new character is revealed, I will tell who made the character.
Anyways, Here's the post, It's a long one:

Chapter 8: Friends and Rivals
They gang got up in the morning, had a short breakfast and headed outside.
“Well. I’m gonna go train. After all, the tournament is in a few days.”
“All right. See ya. Come on Luke we should train for the badge.”
“No. You go. I’m going to go check out those forests Kevin was talking about.”
“Ok. But after that, I want some training done.” With that, they each went their separate ways.
***deep inside the forest***
“Ok. Bronzor, finish it. Use Earthquake… YES! Go pokeball!”
Wiggle, wiggle. Wiggle, wiggle. Wiggle, wiggle, ping
The pokemon was caught.
“Good job Bronzor. Now let’s hope we can get out of this forest. Uhh?”
“Bron?”
“Did you hear? It sounds like a girl crying. C’mon.”
The followed the sound of the noise and saw a girl crying.
“Hey. What’s wrong?”
“I can’t… sniff… do anything. My brother abandoned me and now I’m lost in this forest.”
“Well, we’re headed out of the forest. Why not tag along?”
“OK…sniff…thanks.”
“By the way, my name’s Luke.”
“Hi. My name’s Sophia. Nice to meet you.”
*** Route 235***
“So. Am I good enough?”
“Yah, why not. I assume you already got your 2nd badge?”
“Of course. I won with my sister.”
“Your sister?”
“Yah, but don’t waste your time with her, she’s an amateur trainer. That’s why I left her to go by herself. She was holding me back.”
“I like that. We better get going… Cen.”
*** Route 234***
“Let’s try it again Kecleon. Use Brick Break!” Kecleon attempted to use a brick break
“Excuses me. I couldn’t help but to come check out what was happening. It looks like your training. Maybe a battle would help you train.”
“Alright. Get ready. My name’s Tom.”
“My name is Watery. I’m a free battler. I don’t battle for badges, but I battle in tournaments and free battles with now prize.”
“Well then we’re alike. I’m a tourney battler. But enough small talk, let’s battle. It’ll be a one on one.”
“Good enough. Go swablu!”
“Go spearow! Use Peck.”
“Counter it with Fury attack.”
The both hit each other in the air.
“Quick, use pursuit.” Swablu was hit in the wing.
“Swablu use sing.”
“Swab-blu, blu-swab, blu-blu-blu-swab- bluuuuuuu.” Spearow was quickly put to sleep.
“Ahhh. Spearow get up.”
“Now attack with aerial ace.”
Bam! Spearow was sent flying.
“Spearow!” it shouted in astonishment.
“Use it again!”
“It’s coming again. Watch out.”
Bam! Spearow hit the ground and it was knocked out.
“Spearow! Are you ok?”
“Good match Tom.”
“Thanks.”
“Let’s get to the pokemon center.”
“Right.”
*** Flaref Town***
“That ice cream was good wasn’t it Clef airy?
“Fairy!!”
“Hey you!”
“Me?” asked April in astonishment.
“Yah. Are you a battler?”
“You bet. Let’s battle!”
“OK. A one on one.”
“Fine. Go Drifloon!”
“Go Misdreavus.”
“Whoa. A Misdreavus. By the way the name’s April.”
“I’m Brendan. Let’s do this Misdreavus, use Psywave.”
“Use gust!”
Psywave over powered gust and hit Drifloon.
“Quick use focus energy.”
“While its charging, use Confuse Ray.”
Drifloon began to drift all over the field.
“Drifloon! Snap out of it!”
“Now! Astonish!”
Drifloon was hit and snapped out of Confusion.
“Now use payback!”
“Flooooooon!” it said as it released a Payback.
Misdreavus was hit hard into the ground. It was knocked out.
“Return Drifloon.” “Return Misdreavus.”
“That was a great battle April.”
“Thanks. We better get to the pokemon center.”
“Your right. C’mon.”
***Pokemon Center***
“Here you go. Your pokemon are fully healed.”
“Thanks Nurse Joy,” said Luke and Sophia.
“Nurse Joy, our pokemon need help,” said Tom.
“Hey Tom. What’s up?”
“Nothing much, here they are Nurse Joy.”
“So, who’s she?” Tom asked as he sat down.
“Her name’s Sophia. Her brother ditched her so now she’s all by herself. I helped her out of the forest.”
“And this is Watery. He’s a good battler.”
“Hi. I like to train my pokemon, so nobody really likes to hang around with me, so I’m traveling on my own”
“Oh. Well do you two want to come with us? They can can’t they?”
“I don’t see why not as long as it’s ok with Ap-”
“Here. Let’s go. Nurse Joy, our pokemon need to be healed.”
“They’re pretty injured from our battle.”
“Ok. Give them here.”
“Hi April.”
“Hey. What’s up?”
“Before you ask, this is Sophia and this is Watery. We said they could travel with us as long as it’s ok with you.”
“Well why not? The more the better.”
“Do you mind if I tag along?”
“Sure, you can.”
“Yah why not.”
“Cool, my name is Brendan. I guess I’ll have to quit my tournament here though.”
“Actually you don’t, because I’m entering that tournament to.”
“Yah. And we have a gym badge to get.”
“I have an idea,” said Sophia. “Nobody goes until everyone is ready to go, so that way everyone is happy.”
“That’s a great idea Sophia,” answered Luke.
“Let’s all get a good night sleep tonight, and tomorrow, we’ll all train,” said April.
“Nurse Joy, can we get two rooms? One girl’s room and one boy’s room?”
“Sure they’re right next to each other down the hallway.”
Each said their goodnights to each other and they all went to bed. Tomorrow’s going to be a training day as each got ready for the challenge that awaits them.

Next Chapter: The Brother Sister Rivalry

Each character has been put into a catagory depending on hoe they battle

Gym Battlers: Luke, April, Kevin, Sophia, and Cen
Free Battlers: Brandon
Tournament Battlers: Tom, Watery
 
Ok, I'll change brendan to a gym battler so the only people that don't battle is gyms are Tom and Watery. The other option is for him to be a tournament battler. Either way, you would see him in a lot of battles. It's your choice.
I think Skylor will also be just a tournament battler.
 
Can you add this character if you want to :):)

name: Morris Lenderson
age: 56
descrption: an old man who has an interest in pokemon battles, but though he seems old and wise he is actually horrible in battles. Even losing to his 10 year old son. He and his Geodude though makes a perfect partner both with no experience, but both seems to enjoy battling.
Appearance: he wears a pair of brown jeans and a wears a baby blue polo. He is a bit overweight but not too much he is tall and has a great sense of humor. His hair is similar to ashes hair but less of how ashes hair is.
Battle Skills: he usually command his geodude to attack right away with a takedown and some time using selfdestruction and usually ending his battle a failure but he enjoys it.

Tell me how do you think of this character :):):)
 
Bluejay: You can keep charmeleon, but bagon is switching. Think of another pokemon. but pm it to me. I don't want to have two trainers to have a Bagon, hint, hint

Pokemon-striker: I'll put him into the story, but it might not be for a while. Next time, pm me the character

Everyone: I have enough characters for a while. Keep posting or pm me ideas or constructive criticsim about my story, and it might show up. For example, What do you want to see evolve first (spoiler: cyndaquil ^_^) or what pokemon you want the characters to get or what pokemon the gym leaders should have.
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Nice story!!!
I loved how I liked to battle and ya...
Anyways I want my character to catch anything so please.but if not its ok!^-^
 
Here's the next post. Skylor's going to appear in the next one.

Chapter 9: The Brother Sister Rivalry
Thankfully, everyone got up in the morning. They all had whatever the pokemon center was serving for breakfast, and then headed outside. Outside was… Kevin.
“Hey Luke. I felt kind of lonely traveling alone, so I got a little buddy.”
“Cen!!” yelled Sophia.
“You know him?”
“Of course I do. He’s my brother.”
“Your brother? Is he the one that left you in the forest?”
“Yep.”
“Well then I’m gonna show him a piece of my mind. I’ll teach you to leave your sister behind. How about a battle!” yelled Brendan.
“Wait. I’ll do it. How ‘bout it Cen? A two on two battle!”
“You’ve got to be kidding me sis. You vs. me? This will be fast.”
“Go! Feebas.”
“Typical sis. Go Skorupi.”
“Quickly Feebas, use Facade.”
“Dodge it then use Bite.”
“Quick Feebas, use dragonbreath.”
“Rupi!”
“Now use Tackle.”
“Skorupi was sent flying,”
“Use Pin Missile.”
“Get in and use Tackle.”
Both attacks hit dead on and each of then were knocked out.
“Return!” they both said.
“Go Vulpix!” “Go Golbat!”
“Vulpix, use Flamethrower!”
The attack hit Golbat.
“Shack it off and use Wing attack!”
“Imprison and then dodge.”
“Imprison? On what?” asked Luke.
“Confuse Ray.”
Vulpix was fast it dodged Golbat effortlessly.
“Use double team Golbat.”
“All of you use gust!”
Vulpix was swept off it’s feet into the air.
“Now use Aerial Ace.”
“Pix!”
Vulpix was sent spiraling into the ground.
“Looks like I win again sis. Return Golbat.”
“C’mon Cen. I see why you ditched her.” They both walked away.
“It’s ok. You put up a good fight.”
“Feebas isn’t strong enough. I have to train it to evolve into a Milotic if I ever want to win against Cen.”
“Well, we need to train for our gym badge, come with us.”
“Yah, so do I,” said Brendan.
“And I need to train for my tournament.”
“C’mon Sophia. There’s a perfect place to train pokemon in the forest.” April, Luke, and Sophia headed that way.
“Wait for me,” said Brendan.
“Alright. Watery, can you help me train?”
“Sure. There’s a lake down the road chuckful of pokemon. Follow me.”
Both groups went their separate ways, each becoming a bit stronger. They all met up at the pokemon center, each telling what they did.
“Sophia, I know you already won the badge, but I need a partner. Will you battle with me?”
“Sure. They have a Vulpix and a Growlithe. And then a Torkoal and a Ponyta. They are pretty hard.”
“Nothing we can’t handle. After the tournament, we’re getting that gym badge!”
“And I’m gonna win that tournament!”

Next Chapter: Skylor vs. Tom and the battles of the gym

Here's all the characters so far. A question mark unown means that the pokemon is unknown to you guys.
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I know, the gym leaders look stupid, but it's the best sprites I could mind that had two people.
 
He already has a pikachu, but he just hasn't used it yet. In the next one or two chapters Pikachu will become active
 
Quick question for anyone.
Should the characters stop catching pokemon after six pokemon, or should they still catch pokemon afterwards and switch out every now and then.
 
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