Writing Pokemon Libet Region

Is the story good?

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This is the best fic ever

Just for fun, can one of the turney pokes be fire and set of the sprinklers???
the gym leaders should be a little harder
 
Hey you know why do I only have a swablu lol???
If I only have that then can I have a turtwig??
A Piplup?
 
pokemonfreak: if you read some of my posts, I said that everyone has the pokemon, but they just haven't used them yet.
Valk:this is only the second gym leader, they'll get harder.
 
Here's the next chapter:

Chapter 10: Skylor vs. Tom (I changed the Title)
“It’s a beautiful to be holding a tournament here in Flaref town,” roared the announcer.
“This tournament will consist of five rounds. On the first and second round, trainers will be in a two on two double battle. On the third, fourth, and fifth round, trainers will use three pokemon. Anyways, let’s get this thing started.” The crowd went wild.
Each round went like snap for Tom. Spearow and Valk worked wonders in the first two rounds and Kecleon was amazing in the third round.
“Now finish it off Charmeleon! Use flamethrower.”
“Gastly!”
“Gastly is unable to battle, Skylor wins!”
“And that raps up our fourth round. Ladies and gentlemen, we will be taking a break and then or fifth round will go into place.”
“You did awesome Tom. You are so gonna win this.”
“Actually, I don’t know. That Skylor is pretty tough. It’s not going to be a walk in the park.
“We are back as we start our fifth round on the rock battlefield.”
“This battle is between Skylor and Tom. Each trainer may use three pokemon. No substitutions. Let the battle begin!”
“Go Spearow.”
“Go Gastly.”
“Use peck!”
“Dodge it!”
“Kinda hard to attack if ghost doesn’t affect me.”
“Use Hypnosis.”
“Avoid it and attack with aerial ace.”
“Gastly!”
“Gastly, we need to get it asleep.”
“Do it again.” Gastly fell to the ground.
“Gastly is unable to battle.”
“Return. Now go, Larvatar.”
“Quick Spearow use Peck.”
“Grab its beak and throw it.”
“Lar!” It threw Spearow into the air.
“Spearow is unable to battle.”
“That’s some power. We need Speed on our side. Go Valk.”
“Another one? Whatever use tackle.”
“Valk counter it with Peck.” They both collided causing a small explosion.
“Quick use Fury attack Valk.”
“Headbutt.” Another collision.
“Use Wing attack.”
“Bite!” Another collision. This time no one moved. They both fell to the ground.
“Both Valk and Kecleon are unable to battle.”
“Alright Kecleon. Your up.”
“Let’s go Charmeleon.”
“Charmeleon use Ember.”
“Take the hit with a Defense Curl.”
“Now hid.” Kecleon disappeared.
“Charmeleon as soon as it hits you use Flamethrower.”
“Quickly use Psybeam.”
“Right there! Attack.”
“Move around and then use Fury Swipes.”
“Char!!”
“Now lick.”
“Char!!”
Charmeleon use Flamethrower.”
It hit Kecleon but it didn’t flinch.
“I don’t get it. Why isn’t it getting hurt?”
“Because, Color Change. As of now, Kecleon is a Fire type.”
“Amazing. Tom has managed to make Kecleon fire-resistant,” said the announcer.
Charmeleon began to loosen on its flamethrower.
“Perfect, it’s weak. Now attack with Focus Punch.” Charmeleon was hit into the ground.
“Charmeleon is unable to battle, Kecleon and Tom win.”
“Alright. I won!!!!” He walked up to Skylor. “That was a really good battle. Your pokemon are tough.”
“Thanks!”
***At the Pokemon Center***
“Your pokemon are fully healed.”
“Thanks.” “Thanks.”
“So Skylor, are you traveling alone?”
“Yeah why?”
“Do you want to travel with us?” asked Tom.
“Ok. I guess.” Tom introduced everyone to Skylor and what pokemon they had and the they all headed to the gym where Brendan and Sophia, and Luke and April would battle.
“Charrlie, Firrey, we challenge you to a gym battle!”
“Well then let’s get this battle under way.”

Next Chapter: Freaky, Freaky Fire
 
Love your fics keep it up and i am realy a newb who just started days ago i started a fic but people hate it because i put it in the wrong place at least 1 or 2 people like it though.
 
my fics are going to be at http://pokebeach.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=19811
if i need improvements pm me with advise can you also send me a fee back of charcters i am running out of charecter ideas even gym leader ideas.
 
Join Team Galactic: http://pokebeach.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=19387&page=1
Just post you were recruited by me
 
Right now. I now it's kinda short, but there is one more battling chapter after this. Enjoy : D

Chapter 11: Freaky, Freaky Fire
"Go Vulpix." "Go Growlithe."
"Go Vulpix." "Go Pikachu."
"This battle is between Gym leaders Charrlie and Firrey, and Sophia and Brendan. There are no substitutions. Let the battle begin!"
"Growlithe use helping hand." "Vulpix use Quick Attack."
"Pikachu use Thundershock on Growlithe." "Vulpix, Use imprison on Vulpix."
Vulpix began to glow, and stopped right in its tracks.
"Oh no! My Vulpix!"
"Growlithe shake of that shock and use flamethrower!"
"Pika!!"
"Quick Pikachu, use quick attack." "Vulpix, you to."
"Growlithe, use flamethrower again!"
"Pika!!!" "Pikachu is unable to battle."
"Vulpix get out of the way."
"Bam!" "Vulpix is unable to battle."
"Go Pidgey!"
"Go Torkoal"
"Pidgey use Gust." "Pikachu use gust to gain speed."
"Dodge it Torkoal." Torkoal jumped in the air a Pikachu ran into the wall."
"Now Growlithe, use Flamethrower at Pikachu."
"Pika," it said as it fell to the ground. "Pikachu is unable to battle."
"Return. Go Minun." "Pidgey, it Growlithe with a wing attack."
"Growlithe, bite onto its wing."
"Pidgey fly up quick and then whirl around and use gust." It was beautiful. Pidgey did just that. She flew around Growlithe and blasted it with a gust. "Growlithe is unable to battle."
"Return. Go Ponyta."
"Minun. Use helping hand!" "Pidgey attack Ponyta with wing attack.?"
"Jump Ponyta." "Use Smokescreen Torkoal." Ponyta jumped just as the smoke filed the stage. Pidgey went right under Ponyta, and Ponyta can straight down on it. Once, the smoke cleared, the battle was on again.
"Pidgey! Use peck at its feet." This made Ponyta jump.
"Quick get out of there." "Minun, use Quick attack on Ponyta."
"Torkoal cover Ponyta." Torkoal got in front of Ponyta and Minun ran straight into Torkoal's hard shell."
"Minun, get on Pidgey's back." "Now Pidgey, go in with a full speed Quick Attack on Torkoal." Pidgey did as commanded.
"Now pull up!" "And Minun get inside Torkoal's shell."
"What! 0_o" Minun got inside Torkoal's shell.
"Now use Thunder."
"Min- unnnnnnnnn!" Torkoal fell to the ground. "Torkoal is unable to battle."
"Ponyta! Watch out!" ?Pony?" It turned around just at the right time to get smashed backwards by Pidgey's wing. "Ponyta is unable to battle. Firrey and Charrlie are out of usable pokemon. The winners are Brendan and Sophia.
"Yes! We won!" they said at the same time.
"Congrates. Here are your badges. The Flame badge." They turned to April and Luke. "I understand you two would like to battle us as well," said Firrey.
"Yes," they both said at the same time.
"We must heal our pokemon and then our battle will begin."
***one hour later***
"This battle is between Firrey and Charrlie, and Luke and April. Each team will use two pokemon. Let the battle? begin!!!"

Next Chapter: The Flame Badge: Once again
 
If you are talk to me, can you pm me, if you are talking to everyone, then get off my Thread
 
Hey, I editted the last chapter so that in the gym battle, it'll only be a two on two battle. I did this so that the singal battle would be more detailed, I hope to get my next chapter up soon
 
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