Writing Pokemon The Movie 13th The War of the Apocalyptic Arceus

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RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

What did you think of it *pins down Lion King*
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

It was great! Tapes lion kings mouth shut jk.
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

It would be better if you just updated the first page... so I don't have to go searching for scenes
=p
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

I will make a Table of Contents and make the front full with scenes...

but have you liked it so far?
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

Yup! This is a good estimate of their future teams! =p
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

btw... do you have a Porygon Z Lv.X for trade?
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

Me? Right now I don't have any good cards :(
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

Oh, well then, I have something to tell you:

Some of these might happen

Arceus destroying
Ash, Dawn and Brock dying
Pikachu dying
The Universe Collapsing
A Shipping come true
Darkrai fighting Arceus
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

Yayayaya...

Manakubanio madaishima Daraikio

Good Good Smile!

Mottto!

Good Good Smile!
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

ARRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

Sorry, no updates until Saturday. I make 5 scenes then.

Ciao Ciao!
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

Yes. I hope you are patient.

Good nite.

*Claps Hands*

Light turns off.
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

Ok....

Check out my fanfic I am about to update.
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

PimpRaichuKing said:
Sorry, no updates until Saturday. I make 5 scenes then.

Ciao Ciao!

Its Saturday!
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

As the jaloux Lion King said, my Scene's should be longer and more detailed, and I can do that. :)

Scene: The Eve of the War

Arceus stood proudly as he gazed to the Castle, the Gardens, so enchanting all, and knowing he was it's master. The crowd was scared, in shock, after sensing a church destruction.

Arceus: All my subjects may arise from the ground. I am here to take back the world that is mine.
Tonio: YOUR WORLD? Sir, Arceus, this world is not even governed by one sole person. Why this land here is in the name of the King of this castle. There are presidents, dictators, and monarchies all over. You aren't the ruler.
Arceus: ROOOOOAAR!
Tonio fell back on the ground, his tuxedo full of pumice and ashes, and dirt, partially burned.
Arceus: THIS IS MY WORLD!
Alice: Stop it! Tonio, are you okay?
King: THIS IS MALARKY! What is going on here?
Arceus: SILENCE!
King: You dare silence me, you abomination!?
Arceus: I AM ARCEUS! THE ORIGIN POKEMON! I MADE THIS WORLD! IT IS MINE!
King: You aren't taking my kingdom, sir, it is my rightful crown. I gained it from the monarchy we live in.
Arceus: No matter, but since you aren't giving it up, I'll have to take it!

Arceus warped out of view into the dark evening sky.

Ash, Dawn, Brock, Tonio, and Alice arose from the ground.

Brock: We should be heading out to the Inn.
Ash: Hey can May stay with us too?
Alice: She's my cousin, of course!
May: Yipee!
Dawn: Hmph!
Tonio:Great, we should go and bathe off this ash.
Ash: What, am I so annoying you don't want me anymore?
Tonio: Sigh, the dust on our clothes.
Ash: I knew that! (Why'd my mom name me after dust?)


It was midnight in the deep forest of Pikressel, and Arceus warped into view. The moonlight shined serenely on the riverbanks nearby, and made visibility better.

Arceus: Arruuuuseeeus!

The legendary Pokemon came to him.

Arceus: Who here is loyal enough to come with me in a brutal takeover?
Regigigas, Groudon, Rayquaza, Deoxys, Lugia, Entei, Raikou, Heatran, Giratina, the 3 Legendary Birds, stayed with him. The others left.

Arceus: Together, we will take this world!
The Pokemon cheered
Arceus: We will destroy entire cities, buildings, and many fatalities will come to the innocent, but we will RULE!
The Pokemon Grunted and Cheered!
Arceus: Let's take this rat hole first!



It was dawn, or near dawn, when a terrible shake smashed through the Inn.

Tonio and Alice awoke.

Tonio: Everyone, are you okay?
Alice: Tonio, there's Pokemon destroying the city!
Tonio: WHAT?!?!

He dashed to the broken window to see a Regigigas stomping about and Earthquaking the city, and a Rayquaza blasting buildings apart with Hyper Beam.
Tonio: This is madness! Get Dawn, Ash, Brock, and May, we need to leave before the Inn is destroyed!
Alice: Okay!

Alice darted to Ash and Dawn's bedroom, and went to each's bed, shaking them, hoping for them to awake.
Alice:ASH, ASH! Wake up!
Ash: What's going on?
Alice: The city's in peril, with a few legends destroying the buildings! We need to leave!
Dawn: No, I don't want any of your saltshakers!
Dawn fell over on the floor, and the bump woke her up.
Dawn: OW!
Alice: Dawn, get your things, we're leaving! No questions!
Dawn: Wh-
Alice: NO QUESTIONS!
Brock was awake from the shake, and was readying with May.

Everyone left the Inn and found a scene to be reckoned with: Dust, pumice, flying all around, Pokemon attacking the city, and fires ablaze in the buildings and trees, people running around, crying and frightened, and anarchy, just plain anarchy.

Palkia flew in from the Castle sky overhead.

Palkia sent Draco Meteors on Rayquaza, Regigigas, and Raikou, and a finisher Spacial Rend that pushed them into a destroyed building.

Palkia: Everyone, come with me! There is no time!

The gang rushed to Palkia, but Brock, May, and Tonio didn't fit. Dialga came in and sent a Hyper Beam on a recuperating Rayquaza.

Dialga: You over there! Come!

The rest came with Dialga.

The 2 flew out of the city as it burned to the ground.
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

you forgot ho-oh in the gathering at the forest
you put lugia in his oppisite should be there to
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

DUDE.

I SAID EVERY LEGEND.

BUT.

The bad ones stayed with Arceus to help conquer the world.

Ho-oh is a pure creature.
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

Awesome! When is the next update?
 
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