Writing Seven Days of Horror
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Has anyone noticed these chapters make less and less sense as they go on :O
I'll have the time to write what I've been planning yesterday tomorrow, too busy right now.
Patience, young padawan.
Patience, young padawan.
PMJ
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I think we're doing pretty good, and this story really is making perfect sense if you think about it. At least we have some sort of continuation going on, and every chapter isn't like "chapter one: Ash catches a butterfree" "chapter two: poison ivy and you" "chapter three: 16½"
Plot wasn't what I was talking about >.<
This story needs moar stomach rubbing, nose rubbing, and most of all moar babies. DX
This story needs moar stomach rubbing, nose rubbing, and most of all moar babies. DX
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Plot is what makes a story make sense, though!
If there is too much stomach rubbing (or anything else cool) it will get old and boring and it will turn from cool joke to person in the blink of an eye.
If there is too much stomach rubbing (or anything else cool) it will get old and boring and it will turn from cool joke to person in the blink of an eye.
Right, but I was talking more along the lines of how extraordinary and repetitive the story is sometimes.
And c-m needs to tell us what babies are coming with Ash. Spongebob the waiter is one of them, right? :O
And c-m needs to tell us what babies are coming with Ash. Spongebob the waiter is one of them, right? :O
According to "Ash goes on a date" (which is totally canon), Spongebob died in a horrible forest fire accident. The babies are Ash's quadruplets.
I'll see what I can do, though.
LESS THAN 24 TILL NEXT CHAPTER. (I hope)
I'll see what I can do, though.
LESS THAN 24 TILL NEXT CHAPTER. (I hope)
I actually never noticed that until now. XD REVIVE SPONGEBOB!
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And when wll Dawn and the babies get a mention?
bacon edit:
Sorry about that.bacon said:
The not-so-fantastic 4 were all here at last, ready to start their most epic adventure yet!
Todd (you know, the guy from Pokémon Snap) asked how they were going to get to the specified location. Just when Ash was about to ask who Todd was again, a plane conveniently landed in front of the gang, crushing only a few playing children*.
The balloon took off, heading for the Baby Steal Headquarters, located on Baby Steal Island, in the Baby Steal ocean, on the planet Earth.
The submarine landed, and the gang set foot on the mysterious island. A polar bear walked by.
"Allow me to take you to your residence", questioned one of the PBS henchmen, wearing a hockey mask as disguise.
"This is the hotel", questioned the henchman, pointing at the concentration camp he was pointing at. "I'll take you to your rooms".
Ash and the gang went to the restaurant for some foods.
The restaurant was a pretty big Reuleaux triangle-shaped building. On the Isosceles Trapezium-shaped door was a sign with the words "Life is like a monkey on roller-skates" (which is quite an interesting observation).
They opened the door and were seated at a tricuspoid-shaped table.
"What will you you fine people be having for lunch?", questioned the waiter
"A bidoof burger, please.", answered the waiter.
"And the others?", questioned the waiter.
"Bidoof burger."
"Bidoof burger."
"Brains"
"OUT!"
The zombie sighed and left the restaurant.
"Why did you scare away a perfectly good consumer?", questioned the waiter.
"That costumer used to be my dead genderless son", answered the waiter.
"I'm sorry, I didn't know", concluded the waiter.
"apologies accepted", replied the waiter, "allow me to bring you your food now".
"Le Okay."
The waiter left while the waiter continued to discuss the philosophy behind the door sign with Ash. Ash's braincells, however, were too busy controlling his bodily functions, all 2 of them.
"Hey, wait a second", questioned Agatha, "I didn't order yet!". The waiter however was long gone. May he rest in piece.
Meanwhile, in the darkest, most haunted corners of the island, in the Baby Steal Headquarters (the big pink building with the teddybear-shaped windows), Sir Phantom was plotting his evil plan.
"I shall place a cube-shaped empty cardboard construction with one of the sides open upon a wooden branch which I shall have removed from a tree. Underneath this construction shall be place a single piece of cheese. When the 4 guests try to obtain said piece of cheese and leave their babies unprotected, the trap shall activate and THE WORLD WILL BE MINE!!!"
"What's up with this guy?", questioned the wall.
"Shut up, before he starts talking to us again!", said the desk.
"Meow", said the cat.
…
And it was good.
*Moral of this story: Staying inside and playing video games is a lot safer!
What's going to happen next? How did the food taste? Why are the walls talking? What exactly is the black cloud monster? Where is Misty? And who the he!! is Todd again? TUNE IN NEXT TIME FOR ALL THE ANSWERS AND MORE!
Meh, not too pleased with this, but everyone was rushing me and I don't perform well under pressure and school's taking up so much time and I HATE YOU ALL :'(
Todd (you know, the guy from Pokémon Snap) asked how they were going to get to the specified location. Just when Ash was about to ask who Todd was again, a plane conveniently landed in front of the gang, crushing only a few playing children*.
The balloon took off, heading for the Baby Steal Headquarters, located on Baby Steal Island, in the Baby Steal ocean, on the planet Earth.
The submarine landed, and the gang set foot on the mysterious island. A polar bear walked by.
"Allow me to take you to your residence", questioned one of the PBS henchmen, wearing a hockey mask as disguise.
"This is the hotel", questioned the henchman, pointing at the concentration camp he was pointing at. "I'll take you to your rooms".
Ash and the gang went to the restaurant for some foods.
The restaurant was a pretty big Reuleaux triangle-shaped building. On the Isosceles Trapezium-shaped door was a sign with the words "Life is like a monkey on roller-skates" (which is quite an interesting observation).
They opened the door and were seated at a tricuspoid-shaped table.
"What will you you fine people be having for lunch?", questioned the waiter
"A bidoof burger, please.", answered the waiter.
"And the others?", questioned the waiter.
"Bidoof burger."
"Bidoof burger."
"Brains"
"OUT!"
The zombie sighed and left the restaurant.
"Why did you scare away a perfectly good consumer?", questioned the waiter.
"That costumer used to be my dead genderless son", answered the waiter.
"I'm sorry, I didn't know", concluded the waiter.
"apologies accepted", replied the waiter, "allow me to bring you your food now".
"Le Okay."
The waiter left while the waiter continued to discuss the philosophy behind the door sign with Ash. Ash's braincells, however, were too busy controlling his bodily functions, all 2 of them.
"Hey, wait a second", questioned Agatha, "I didn't order yet!". The waiter however was long gone. May he rest in piece.
Meanwhile, in the darkest, most haunted corners of the island, in the Baby Steal Headquarters (the big pink building with the teddybear-shaped windows), Sir Phantom was plotting his evil plan.
"I shall place a cube-shaped empty cardboard construction with one of the sides open upon a wooden branch which I shall have removed from a tree. Underneath this construction shall be place a single piece of cheese. When the 4 guests try to obtain said piece of cheese and leave their babies unprotected, the trap shall activate and THE WORLD WILL BE MINE!!!"
"What's up with this guy?", questioned the wall.
"Shut up, before he starts talking to us again!", said the desk.
"Meow", said the cat.
…
And it was good.
*Moral of this story: Staying inside and playing video games is a lot safer!
What's going to happen next? How did the food taste? Why are the walls talking? What exactly is the black cloud monster? Where is Misty? And who the he!! is Todd again? TUNE IN NEXT TIME FOR ALL THE ANSWERS AND MORE!
Meh, not too pleased with this, but everyone was rushing me and I don't perform well under pressure and school's taking up so much time and I HATE YOU ALL :'(
This is a great chapter. This is almost as epic (if not better) than 27772.
bacon edit: yo, me again
EDIT: lol hi thar
bacon edit: yo, me again
EDIT: lol hi thar
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