Writing Seven Days of Terror

RE: Seven Days of Terror (it's chapter 11 time!!!)

Quite the contrary. While I do like Mr. Mime a whole lot, the Mr. Mime in this story is just plain mean. He pretty much had to die or else the story would have ended with him killing everyone... and that wouldn'ta been much fun to read.

Also, where have you been? Max has been dead for a while now...
 
RE: Seven Days of Terror (it's chapter 11 time!!!)

I know, but I thought you might bring him back in some crazy PMJ way.

Mr. Mime wasn't that bad. You could've at least omitted the chopping head part.

dmaster out.
 
RE: Seven Days of Terror (it's chapter 11 time!!!)

Oh please, at least it wasn't graphic.

Chapter twelve has officially started! \o/
 
RE: Seven Days of Terror (it's chapter 11 time!!!)

Short of a Max Revive or possibly the Song of Healing, nothing was bringing Max back. :p
 
RE: Seven Days of Terror (it's chapter 11 time!!!)

PMJ said:
Quite the contrary. While I do like Mr. Mime a whole lot, the Mr. Mime in this story is just plain mean. He pretty much had to die or else the story would have ended with him killing everyone... and that wouldn'ta been much fun to read.

Also, where have you been? Max has been dead for a while now...

I beg to differ. That would be kind of cool. XD

Good update, yay.
 
RE: Seven Days of Terror (it's chapter 11 time!!!)

Well... yes, it would have been fun, but then the story would have just.... ended. Lame.
 
RE: Seven Days of Terror (it's chapter 11 time!!!)

No, it wouldn't have just ended. When all the mothers realized their kids hadn't come back, they'd use Ash's mom's Mr. Mime to kill Giovanni. Then they would go crazy, and destroy all of Kanto...
 
RE: Seven Days of Terror (it's chapter 11 time!!!)

Woah, I had a major dream that Chapter 12 was up. Too bad it was just a dream. A terrible nightmare. ;[

dmaster out.
 
RE: Seven Days of Terror (it's chapter 11 time!!!)

Hi, everyone! It's time for the probably-not-gonna-be-weekly status report!

Work on chapter twelve is best described as slow and steady. Word count right now is a little over 1,500. There's not too much done, but it's quality stuff, I think. ^-^

I reeeeeeeeally want to get this done, so it's very possible I will combine the bulk of chapter 13 with chapter twelve, creating one final mega-chapter for you guys to read before this story is finally done. The remainder of chapter 13 could be used as an epilogue, or perhaps I'll just throw it in at the end of chapter 12, giving you guys even more to go through, lol.

I want this story done as much as the rest of you. Shirley's getting anxious!
 
RE: Seven Days of Terror (it's chapter 11 time!!!)

gamercal said:
Short of a Max Revive or possibly the Song of Healing, nothing was bringing Max back. :p

haha max revive.

Great chapter PMJ. i knew i had heard shelly's name before.

i can't wait to see how you end this.
 
RE: Seven Days of Terror

omg looool "Max" Revive XD

Nice.
 
RE: Seven Days of Terror

Hello, everyone.

I have to put this on hiatus for a while. I'm having both computer as well as internet problems, and the Platinum walkthrough has to get done first.

I will try to get something done once my computer gets working again, but until further notice, work on it will be even slower than it normally is, lol.

I apologize to any of you anticipating the ending. I know, I know, I want this story done as much as you guys do.
 
RE: Seven Days of Terror (officially on hiatus)

Yyyyyyyyyyyyyep.

Will revive when work continues
 
RE: Seven Days of Terror (officially on hiatus)

Hope you guys aren't looking for an update because it's not likely my computer is ever going to get functional again, and if it is, it's unlikely that it'll be any time soon.

However...

The Platinum guide is nearly finished. I may just cut my losses and start chapter twelve over again once I get that done. I don't know what the word count was when my computer went down the crapper, but I can remember most of what it is I'd written about... I think.

Of course, actually finishing the guide has to come first. As I said, it's just about done. I don't think I have to ask any of you what I should do, but I felt I should let you guys know that starting chapter twelve over is a possibility.

Anyway, I did not foresee my computer dying on me, so this story will obviously not be done by July, so I apologize for that.

In even worse news, a horrible truth has dawned on me:

Shirley is a _bad_ choice for a main character. She's too young. She would be fine if I hadn't planned on making her the main character, but... as of right now it appears that the second fic isn't going to happen.

HOWEVER...

Just because I'm probably abandoning the Mystery Dungeon fic doesn't mean that I'm going to abandon Shirley... or writing a second fic in general. I'm always listening for cool ideas to write about. Shirley will definitely be in it... though probably not as a Buneary, lol.
 
RE: Seven Days of Terror (it's chapter 11 time!!!)

d master342 wrote: "And I just realized Shelly is from Team Aqua. I knew I heard that name somewhere."

Mewcario397 wrote: "Once she said she was from Team Aqua, I just noticed I recognized that name."{D}
 
RE: Seven Days of Terror (_may_ be continuing soon)

WoW what a story, i know you said you wouldn't be doing chapter 12 (at least for a while) but make sure you do, or the evil Irish Gremlins will steal you away whilst you are asleep :p
 
RE: Seven Days of Terror (_may_ be continuing soon)

Fun fact: Chapter length!

Numbers taken from a site I'll not mention, just google for one

Prologue: 2,998
Ch 1: 8,637
Ch 2: 5,554
Ch 3: 9,864
Ch 4: 2,021
Ch 5: 3,375
Ch 6: 4,084
Ch 7: 15,830
Ch 8: 12,840
Ch 9: 12,691
Ch 10: 19,840
Ch 11: 8,174

Total thus far: 105,908

Wow.
 
RE: Seven Days of Terror (_may_ be continuing soon)

Thata about a third of the size of an average book. Normal sized book is say 3-400 pages, 300 words a page. 300x3000= 300,000

This could actually be published as a short novel lol, its definately good enough. Shame its just a fanfic, so its all about pokemon.

Seriously PMJ, I think you should go into writing. If its a hobby you cleraly enjoy, why don't you try writing stuff? I'm actually writing a book at the moment, and althgough its difficult with school and homework and stuff, it's a cool thing to do. You don't hav to worry abotu school or homework, maybe you should give it a try?
 
RE: Seven Days of Terror (not a new chapter, but still)

Yeah, I like writing, but I suck at it.

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At the time of this writing, chapter 12's word count is roughly 278.

That's right. I'm starting over. 27772 is back, baby 8]

I hope to be done by the end of September at the latest.
 
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