The Beginning of the Beginning of Beginnings.

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Hey, I really enjoyed the Ultimate Battle that MPM made, and I'm making a story as well. So first, I need a few characters. I need two girls, and a boy. PLEASE HAVE A TRAINER CARD. I need to know what kind of dudes you like.
 
yeah ill be a charticter:
name:terry
pokemon:swampert,charizard,dotaisdose,yonewaaru,erureido,elekbible
do we need back up pokes??
 
Dudeman1993 said:
Hey, I really enjoyed the Ultimate Battle that MPM made, and I'm making a story as well. So first, I need a few characters. I need two girls, and a boy. PLEASE HAVE A TRAINER CARD. I need to know what kind of dudes you like.

MPM, master of fanfics, and inspiration to aspiring writers, lol. okay so i'm not asking to be a character, but maybe have a recurring role? you no, every once in a while, u run into me? just in case, the name is Max, and my usual team is Charizard, Furret, Nidoking, Mew (Belonged to my father in the story), Haunter, and Totodile. thanks!
 
Awesome! I need the name each of you need to be called, and instead of two girls, i need one. Sorry gals. I need the kanto starter, bulbasaur, charmander or squirtle. I've got Terry, John, and someone else, and someone else, PLEASE VOLUNTEER!
 
I'll ask you this, are you a boy or a girl? If you're a girl, you're in luck, we need one girl. Sorry if you're a boy, we have three. But for a trainer card, go ask MaxPokemonMaster, he makes the BEST ONES. My trainer card was from him. :0
 
I don't want to put MYSELF inside, but I can make up a character for you.
 
Noobnerd said:
I don't want to put MYSELF inside, but I can make up a character for you.

noobie, ur defeating the purpose. he wants characters based on the person who submits them, makes it a littl emore realistic, TRUST ME!
 
I'll be a character,
Name: Kyle
Starter: Charmander
Future pokemon: Pickachu,Typlosion,Charmeleon, Rioru, Blazekin, and Sceptile.
Specialty: Being a pokemonranger
 
HALLELUJIAH! We got them!! I'm ready to start the story ASAP! Just need to get my rough draft done. I'm doing it in this order..
First Chapter: The Beginning of Beg.... Whatever. You got the point.
Second Chapter: Journey goes ONWARD!
Third Chapter: Can you face the Heat?
Fourth Chapter: Let's ROCK and ROLL!
Fifth Chapter: Brock and Flint v.s. John and Max!
Sixth Chapter: Brock and Flint v.s. Terry and Kyle!

Those are the chapters. If you'll be kind, don't be pessimistic if you think my story sinks. PM me about. Just try to stay on the good side of the story. And please comment. I'm going to do each chapter separately. THESE ARE NOY ALL THE CHAPTERS.
 
You're very welcome King Deoxzard! I'm gonna try to get at least a bit into the Beginning of the Beginning of Beginnings today. Here it is everyone!

Chapter One:

6:30 a.m. Saturday, March 18. Pallet Town. John would be sound asleep, still dreaming of becoming a trainer, but the fact is, that this IS the day he's going to fulfill his dream.
"Man," John mutters, "There's Bulbasaur, Charmander, and Squirtle, but which to choose?" At that moment, he heard footsteps running outside of his window. There, it was none other than his good friend, Max. Max was a typical boy, a boy who wanted to beat the Indigo League of Kanto, and be a Pokemon Master. John didn't want Max to beat him to the lab, so he got his clothes on, and dashed to the door. "Max! Wait up!" John yelled.
"Hey John! Nice to see you up and early. What kind of Pokemon you choosin'?" Max replyed.
"I uh... don't really know for sure," John coughed, trying to catch his breath.
"It's kind of obvious! I'm gettin' the flamethrowing Charmander. Think of flying in the sky when I get a Charizard!" Max said confidently. "You might want to make a decision soon. Oak's almost up."
"Yeah....maybe I'll get a Charmander too..." John said. Before 7:45, our friends make it to the lab.
"Hello Max! Hey John! Ready to choose your Pokemon?" Oak greeted.
"You bet!" The boys said in unison.
"Ok! I have the starters right here... Max, which Pokemon do you like?" Oak said. He popped open each Pokeball in which the Pokemon came out.
"Bulba! Saur! Saur!" the Bulbasaur said.
"Charmander! Char! Char!" the Charmander said.
"Squirtle! Squirt!" the Squirtle said.
"I know what I want!" Max said. "I choose Charmander!" Oak held up Max's new Pokemon and his respective Pokeball.
"Here you go Max! But remember, Charmander is not only your friend, but a likelong partner as well," Oak said. "Now, John, what will you choose?"
"Oh, darn!!" John said. "I don't know what to choose! That's IT! I'll do Eeny-Meeny-Miny-Mo! Eeny Meeny Miny Mo, catch a tiger by the toe, if he hollers, let him go, Eeny Meeny Miny Mo! Charmander it is!" John declared.
"About time...." Max muttered.
"Here you are John!" Oak said. "But with me I have a surprise for you two...." That's I'll do for now!
 
Oloha! That was good! And can I write some? If so just tell me some ideas and I can write some it for you so you won't have to do all the work. And I have some ideas like how my character and terry start out.
 
Chapter One:

It was 6:32 a.m. March13, Pallet town. CLANG! CLANG! Kyle woke up to the sound of somebody thoughing rocks at his window.
"Hey, Terry, stop that!" Kyle said while opening the window.
"Sorry Dude, but I just had to wake you up on the day we get our pokemon! Grab your capture styler and lets go!" Terry said.
Kyle always wanted to be a pokemonranger, and today was his day! Kyle had always trained being a pokemonranger with his dad's Plusle and the capture styler he got for his last birthday. Kyle ran down the stairs, got dressed, said by to his mom and dad, hopped on his skateboard and hedded of to Oaks lab.
"What pokemon you gonna get?" Terry asked.
"I don't know yet. I was thinking about Bulbasaur so I could pass throug the first to easily, but I like challenges so I think I'll go with charmander," Kyle said.
"Me to," Terry said.
Suddenly a giant dog like pokemon materialized out of no where! Then it de-materialized back into thin air! Seeing this pokemon is almost imposible! Hunters from all over the world try to catch it.
"Was that an Arsues?" Terry asked.
"I think so. Did you know Arsues is soposed to be the Begining Pokemon?" Kyle said.
"You always got A's on your report card at pokemon school. But theres one thing about that study of Arsues thing that we did, an Arsues only apears when a hero falls, arises, or does a great deed," Terry said.
"We were probably just seeing things," Kyle said.
Kyle and Terry arived at the lab and Terry stepped onsomthing.
"What was that?" Terry said raising his shoe.
Under his shoe his shoe was a Weedle with a big bump on his head. Suddenly the Weedle started glowing! It then evolved into a Kakuna! Then it started glowing again! It evolved into a Beedrill!
"What the?!" Terry said.
"Into the lab!" Kyle said.
"Bee, bee!" the Bedrill said swinging a needle at them.
Luckily the boys dodged it.The Beedrill then used sludgebomb on the lab door to seal it shut!
"Were in trouble now!" Terry said.
"Mabye not!" Kyle said pulling out his capturestyler,"Capture on!!!!"

To be continued...
 
I liked it A LOT!! I know! You can do Kyle's and Terry's side until Chapter 3, where something happens, and please state the title in the beginning...DANG I HATE THAT WORD!
 
I'll try to get a bit more done now...

Chapter 1 continuation

"BEAST!!! POKEDEXS!" John exclaimed.
"Sweetness!" Max screamed, scaring the Spearow on the windowsill outside. "And check it out! We got Pokeballs too!"
"Now we can finally start our journey!" John said. Holding his Charmander.
"Wait John!" yelled a voice behind them. There running toward the three boys were Max's and John's parents.
"Why did you leave without notice?! Your father had a special surprise for you!!" Max's mom said.
"And yours the same!" John's mom said louder. She handed John a Pokeball.
"What is this?" John said.
"Open it!!" John's mother said. "You'll LOVE it!" ZKKT! The Pokeball crackled open and there standing was a Shinig Eevee.
"Holy Porygon Z!!! It's a Shining Eevee!" John yelled scooping it up. "He's soooo cute!"
"You're almost forgetting your's Max!" Max's mother hollered.

TO BE CONTINUED.... In an hour or two.
 
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