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RE: The Birth of an Articuno. Chapter Five is in!

Ooo, tension there! I find it nice how, with each part of Articuno that comes into the story, a new attack it learns comes into play. Makes me want to know which is next!

Keep at it! I'm sure you can make a great scene out of that last part :D
 
RE: The Birth of an Articuno. Chapter Five is in!

Yea and after this story I plan to extend it into another whole story
it seems that you are the only one posting here... I hope other people are reading this also.
 
RE: The Birth of an Articuno. Chapter Six is in!

You're doing a good job! I haven't read it all yet though, but it's going good for what I've read so far. i'm only on chapter 5 in my fan-fic for this tournament. Although I also made a prologue and the chapters are pretty long. I'm just warning you, mine is getting very good, and I will only reveal it on New Years, or Christmas, if I feel like it. The only people who have seen it are my team members and the judges.
 
RE: The Birth of an Articuno. Chapter Six is in!

I jus finished writing my newest chapter, it was 6 pages on word so it was long.
This chapter is going to have a few new images with it also, and mine has MUCH MUCH firther to go. I am looking forword to reading yours when you release it. But for me it is time to go to bed and I will proofread this chapter in the morning and post it ASAP
 
RE: The Birth of an Articuno. Chapter Six is in!

Six pages? I wouldn't ba able to concentrate on something that long. -_- Even if I took breaks -_-
 
RE: The Birth of an Articuno. Chapter Six is in!

lol, well, I really like longer things - the more stuff that goes into a story, the better it gets. Let's hope it lives up to the hype it should be given!

And vaso - from the looks of things nobody is really out in front of everyone else here... there's no need to try and claim yours is better than everyone elses.
 
RE: The Birth of an Articuno. Chapter Six is in!

Ok new chapter is up, It ended up being 5 pages. There are also a few new pics in this one and I will be posting Alex's TC in a little, Finishing touches your know?

Ch 7
Saved!

Immediately after everything went black, a ray of light revealed itself. In another red flash I was laying on the ground dizzy. I clutched my hand to find that the pokeball from earlier was still there with Eevee in it. I looked up to see that man from earlier stopped and staring past me. I looked where he was to see Ace and Kale sprinting towards us with Lucario and Blastoise out. Forest was trailing close behind them. Forest seemed to have been injured; he was limping with every step. Lucario has a strange blue glow around him.

“So that is how you found me,” the man inquired. “That Lucario is using the power of aura.”

“Good guess, now feel that power of aura up close! Lucario Aura spear!” Ace yelled.

Lucario focused on his hands and a blue orb formed between them. Then took a step and threw it at the man.

The man took out a pokeball and yelled, “Rampardos use protect!”

A blue barrier came around him and blocked the aura.

I wanted to help the others so bad, but I could not move. My body was in too much pain to even speak. Also I could not send out Eevee, I did not know what type of shape she was in, and Forest was too hurt to fight. They will have to do this alone.

“Who do you think you’re dealing with?”

“Honestly, we really don’t know who you are,” Kale told him.

“You don’t? Well I am Forec and you will come no further! Rampardos use Zen Headbutt!”

Rampardos’ head glowed blue and rammed Lucario hard. Lucario was knocked out from the supper effective blow.

Ace cried out, “Lucario! That was my last pokemon Kale it is up to you now.”

“I have him covered, Blastoise use Hydro Pump!”

The Hydro Pump hit him head on and sent Rampardos flying. Forec returned him before anymore damage would happen to him.

“I still have one pokemon left, go Plusle!” Forec yelled.

“Wait, you actually use a Plusle? Wow…” Ace laughed.

“Do not talk like that! Use Thunder!”

This was no ordinary Thunder that struck Blastoise. It had tremendous power. Blastoise did not even move. He just fell over KOed.

“That is why you should never talk down to Plusle,” Forec said with a sneer. “Now after I finish you off, I will take your pokemon and your little friend there for testing. I wonder if trained pokemon will last longer than the wild ones did.”

“NOOOOOOOOO!” I screamed. I could feel myself lifting into the air, but this time not in a mystic sort of way. I was moving my arms up and down. I looked at my arms and saw,
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I had wings! I did not think this part would happen so soon, and I being in the Pokeball seemed to take place of a nights sleep.

I flew up higher in the air to hear, “Use Thunder again!”

As I saw the bolt fly towards me I moved quickly to the side and it missed narrowly. I turned to Plusle and flew as fast as I could at it. I hit it hard with my left wing as it tried to dodge. It flew backwards into Forec. I reared up into the air again and flapped my wings hard. I could feel a gust of wind coming off of my wings and hit Forec with Plusle hard. They both flew up over the trees and I lost sight of them both.

I slowed the flapping of my wings and landed on both feet,

“Wow, what just happened?” Ace asked.

“It looks like I became more like an Articuno again,” I responded. I looked down at my arms and saw that the feathers were melded in my skin. I relaxed my arms and the feathers slowly lowered themselves onto my skin, they wrapped themselves around my arm and it appeared as nothing has changed, only that my arms were blue.

“This is insane. How many more things could happen?” Kale asked.

That is a good question, what else could happen?

“We can’t stand here anymore we need to get all of our pokemon to the center, and fast, return Forest.”

“How are we going to get all our pokemon there quickly, all of our pokemon are fainted?” Ace asked.

“How deep in the forest are we?”

“We are about 5 miles in, that is how all our pokemon fainted, we had to keep fighting that freak and his little friend. They would pop out of nowhere and attack us then disappear. We got lucky he dropped you,” Kale told me.

“I have an idea! If the pokemon in the forest trust Kale enough not to attack him you two can give me your pokeballs. I will fly to Viridian and go to the pokecenter. I can wait for you guys there,” I said.

“They should trust me, here are my pokemon.”

“That sounds good,” Ace answered. “Here are all mine, be quick please.”

With that I unfurled my wings and started running. I could start to feel lift and my feet came off of the ground. I just barely cleared the first line of trees and I started flapping as hard as I could. You do not know how much I wanted to fly up into the clouds. I knew though that I had to get to the pokecenter as fast as I could.

Viridian City came into sight, I could see the pokecenter. Over the entire city I could see people staring and pointing at me. I started flapping even harder until I made it to the door. I had a very hard time landing. My feet hit the ground and my legs could not keep up. They came up from under me and I went into a spin cycle on the ground. I got up slowly and sprint to the doors.

When I got inside I found the center was filled with people running everywhere. Chanseys and Blissys pushing girdles with the pokemon form the gym on them. I ran to the desk and saw a Nurse running by.

“Stop, please stop, I need your help,” I yelled at her.

“I’m very sorry, but we have priorities right now,” she responded.

“Listen this is very important. I know what all these pokemon got injured by, and I have others also.”

“Oh no, not more. Here put them on this tray we will heal them soon.”

“I’m going to need more than that,” I told her as I took out the twelve pokeballs.

“Ok here is another tray, whose are these?”

“They are my friends; they are on their way here.”

I lifted up my arms to place the pokeballs on the tray and she grabbed my arm. “What is wrong with your arms!?” She asked concerned.

“Listen just please help my pokemon and I promise I will explain everything, including what that explosion was. Help the pokemon first then we can play 20 questions.”

My arms were very tired, I could barley lift them up. I walked to the first open chair I could find and sat down. After about 20 minutes Kale and Ace showed up.

“This place is a zoo!” Ace commented after he found me.

“Think I don’t know that?” I responded. “I also promised to explain what happened to the nurse when their done. I figured that would move us up to the top of the list. I guess I was wrong.”

Ace and Kale both sat down as they told me of the battles they had as they chased me. How all of their pokemon fainted and how they lost them for a while and Lucario was able to find them. The traffic was starting to slow down after a while and almost everyone that was not working left.

I heard a ding over the intercom, “Can Alex and her friends please come to the back room please.”

We all got up and walked to the room. All of our pokemon were there and outside there pokeballs outside Eevee. I could see Eevee’s outline inside a small opaque plastic box, hooked up with wires and other things. The box she was in seemed far too large for Eevee.

The head nurse walked in and said, “Hello, my name is Joy. I know we have all had a very long day, but we need some answers. What happened in that gym? Also what is wrong with her? Why are her arms blue?”

We all started explaining what happened to us over the past 3 days. It took a while but we told them everything until they were satisfied.

“Now that we have answered your questions, I have one for you. What is wrong with Eevee?” I asked concerned.

“We believe we figured out what was wrong. If you look at this chart you can see that Eevee’s metabolic processes are very irregular. All of her hormones are jumping everywhere.”

“What do those hormones do?” Kale asked.

“These are the hormones that cause pokemon to evolve. Since Eevee can evolve into so many different pokemon, she has many more hormones than other pokemon. But your Eevee is even more irregular. Watch,” as she turned to her assistant, “can you clear up the box for us please?.

“Certainly.” She hit a button and the box became clear.

We all looked intently as Eevee evolved into a Flaireon! Then she de-evolved into Eevee again. Then into Espeon! Back again. She went through this cycle until she has gone through all the Eeveelutions.

“We are trying to stabilize her now, the evolutions are getting further apart. She will be Eevee for another 30 minutes by our count. But we need you to leave her overnight so we can help her more,” Joy told me.

“Okay we will be staying at Oaks lab tonight, just call there if you need us,” Kale told them.

We then left the building with our pokemon. They both returned all their pokemon outside Charizard and Dragonite. They both took off with me following. We all flew slower than usual as we were all tired. We landed outside Oak’s, went inside, and found our beds. We were so exhausted we did not even stop to say anything to anyone. We fell in our beds and fell asleep immediately.

That night was the best night sleep since we arrived. Maybe my changes were over?

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here is the New TC of Alex
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RE: The Birth of an Articuno. Chapter Six is in!

AWSOME!! really cool!! i also like long chapters so this was awsome!!
 
RE: The Birth of an Articuno. Chapter Six is in!

gamercal said:
lol, well, I really like longer things - the more stuff that goes into a story, the better it gets. Let's hope it lives up to the hype it should be given!

And vaso - from the looks of things nobody is really out in front of everyone else here... there's no need to try and claim yours is better than everyone elses.
I know. I finally caught up in all the chapters in this so far. All the fan-fics that other teams have been making look like really tough competition, also sometimes I just joke around a little. Although, I do hope I win the tournement. I want it to be really close though, and by what the other teams have been doing, atleast the ones that have been turning things in, I won't be dissapointed in the matter of it being close.

Good luck!
 
RE: The Birth of an Articuno. Chapter Seven is in!

Sorry about the little brake Ill have a new chapter up tommarow
We got a new router, tv, tv stand, and shelving so I had to put all that up and school and I have vball tonight
Also I had the next chap typd up and my dad turned off the power to put the tv up, I ws about to hit ctrl s... so close!
I made and fixed some of the sprites for the next couple chapters so Tommarow you shall see
 
RE: The Birth of an Articuno. Chapter Seven is in!

Ok got the New chapter, not alot of action in this one butit leads up to something that is HUGE in the continuation of this fic after this series

Ch 8
Time to go!

Wow I have not slept that well in a long time. I feel like I slept for a week. I am feeling so refreshed. I sit up in my bed and I hit something. I put my hands up and out to the side; I could feel an invisible wall in the way. Then I see Kale and Ace next to my bed banging on the invisible wall. They were also yelling but I could not hear a thing.

I looked down my body and saw all my clothes were gone!
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In place of my clothes my body was covered in feathers, and on my chest I had a tuff of fur! I could see the mirror next to my bed and my hair and face was still normal. I looked down past my legs and I could see the bed was ripped up by sharp peaces of ice. I needed to find a way out of here.

What move does Articuno use that causes a barrier?

“I know it must be reflect!” I shouted.

I could see both Kale and Ace mouthing, “What?”

Then Professor Oak walked in following the commotion and saw me in my bed. He walked up to my bedside, observed me in my invisible prison. He was in deep in thought. Then he snapped his fingers! He mouthed something to Kale and he sent out Ursaring. Ursaring wound back and his arm glowed white. He hit the invisible wall and it cracked open!

“What did you do?” I asked.

“Ursaring used brick break,” Ace told me.

“That makes sence. So I guess I can use reflect now huh?”

“These pieces of ice looks like you used ice shards, “Oak responded. “You need to learn how to control these powers or this will happen again, but worse.”

“What else could happen?” Ace asked.

“I have an idea,” Kale interjected. “Remember what happened to me in the cabin? Your power froze me solid in ice. If that reflect was not there those ice shards could have hit someone and done a lot of damage.”

He’s right.

“The only way I think I could do that is if we get to the Orange Islands and figure all this out from there,” I thought. “There are the other legendary birds and maybe they went through this same situation.”

“She’s right, we need to get moving soon,” Kale said.

While we discussed how we will get to the islands, between flying and riding a boat, one of Oak’s aids walked in. “We just received a call from the pokemon center. Eevee is okay for you to come pick up. They also have something else for you, they never described what though.”

“Lets get moving then,” I said.

We started to walk up to Viridian with Forest out. We decided not to fly up because we choose to fly to Cinnabar Island. Stop there for a night, and continue on to the Orange Islands. We changed our walk into a light jog in anticipation to get to Eevee and find the surprise. We arrived at Viridian and went straight to the center. We opened the door to find Joy waiting for us.

“I was hoping you would be here soon. Comeback here, Eevee is ready to come with you,” She told us.

We walked behind here to see Eevee running around the room chasing something we could not see. Then I saw a yellow blur flash right past us.

“Can’t catch me!” A voice echoed.

“Slow down no fair, if I was Jolteon!” Eevee yelled back. She stopped as she saw us walk in a leaped into my arms. “Thank you for saving me! You do not want to know what they did to us in there. Also meet my friend Pikachu!”

Then the blur stopped moving and ran to my feet. It was a Pikachu, and it looked like he was perfectly normal.

“Hello Alex, thank you for saving me from that evil place,” Pikachu told me.

“I see you’re meeting him already. This is Pikachu, as far as we can tell there is nothing strange about him and seems unharmed,” Joy told us.

“Depends what you consider strange,” Eevee commented.

“Eevee!” I yelled.

“What?” Everyone asked.

“Oh nothing… Well Pikachu, would you like to come with us?”

“Oh course! This is great! Do you have a pokeball?”

“Yes I do here you go.” I held down the pokeball to him. And he bumped it with his head. “YES, I got Pikachu! Joy do you happen to have Eevee’s pokeball on you?”

“Yes, it is right over here,” She said as she walked to the wall and opened a box. Then she walked over to me with the ball.

I shouted, “Eevee return. We need to get going now we don’t have time to waste. Thank you Joy.”

“It was my pleasure. Have a safe trip.”

With that we left the pokecenter when Ace and Kale sent out Charizard and Dragonite. They both took off as I took a running start and left the ground. I love the feeling of flight, it is nothing like you will ever feel. We rose and rose up into the air. Before we broke the clouds we were over the open sea. We went into the clouds which felt like a thin rain as we passed through. We broke the top and we were in the open blue sky. It was the most beautiful scene I had ever seen.

We had flown for several hours while popping down under the clouds to check we were going the correct direction. It wasn’t necessary though; I could “feel” what direction we were going.

“Honestly I have never flown this high. I heard a rumor the Rayquaza attack at this altitude, so I never risked it,” Ace told us.

“Why would they attack things at this height?” I asked.

“Because Rayquaza believe they own the sky and are the guardians of the ozone,” Kale told me. “That is why I had always wanted one, why I always saved this last pokeball.”

We flew about another 30 minutes with no delay and very smooth flying.

What is that?

A huge dark cloud was coming over the horizon. It extended from the clouds we were flying over to out of sight in the air.

“I don’t think this is a good sign guys,” I said. “I think we should go down under the clouds.”

The cloud was coming ever closer speeding up with every second. The cloud was very close now. About 100 yards away, 50 yards, 10 yards!

All of a sudden I saw a bright flash of light! I felt a great weight hit my chest and I could feel the sensation of falling through the clouds as everything went black.

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I also finished the new TC for Alex here it is!
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RE: The Birth of an Articuno. Chapter Eight is in!

Nice, some form of mid-air clash! Sounds good... I'll keep an eye out for the next chapter :p
 
RE: The Birth of an Articuno. Chapter Eight is in!

Oh MK your char is going to xcome into play in the next couple chapters I wont promise a big role but check ur pms I have a Q for u
 
RE: The Birth of an Articuno. Chapter Eight is in!

Sorry guys Ive been really busy with school adn I was on vacation the past week...
Im going to make the sprites for the next chapter now adn then write it but It may be a few more days. Sorry for the double post I needed to keep this thread alive
 
RE: The Birth of an Articuno. Chapter Eight is in!

Sorry for the delay guys, alot of stuff I've had to do, including 2 partys my mom had. But I finished it! MK63 I miscounted. Your in the next chapter. I'm goign to make new trainer cards that are updated tommarow, darn school comming back...

Ch 9
More Members!

What just hit us?

“Ugggg, I don’t know,” I opened my eyes to see a curious blue face in front of me. “Why hello…”

Sitting there on the beach was a large, blue, almost turtle like pokemon.

A Lapras!

“Did you save me Lapras?” I asked.

“Yes I did. You came falling through the clouds underneath a strange storm cloud. I chased after where you hit the water and dove to save you. You are very lucky to be alive.” Lapras told me.

“Thank you Lapras, did you see what happened to the people I was with.”

“You understood me? I thought the wings were just a costume, and then again I should have suspected something when your hair changed and it began to hail.”

I leaned over to look at what I believed was white sand but turned out to be small ice balls. My hair fell down in front of my face as I looked. My once brown hair was turned to a beautiful light shade of blue!
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“To answer your question I did not see what happened to you friends, I was concerned with helping you,” Lapras continued.

Look up there!

I looked up into the sky to see a strange platform floating in the air, it had 4 legs coming off of it. Metagross!

We need to get their attention!

I stood up to try to use Ice Shards and get their attention, but they didn’t go nearly far enough. So I sent out Forest, Eevee, and Pikachu. “Everyone we need to get Ace and Kales attention! They’re up there!”

Pikachu tried to use a thunderbolt but it traveled less distance than my ice shards. Bulbasaur tried Razor Leaf and it covered even less air. Lapras even tried with a blast from Hydro Pump but it fell short. I looked to Eevee and she looked back saying, “I only have normal attacks like this.”

“We need to get you to evolve; can you control that yet?”

“I have no idea how to, it just happened at random before,” she told me.

I thought, maybe she evolves how I use attacks. “Eevee visualize a Flareon and just keep concentrating on that.”

She closed her eyes in deep meditation. She sat there for several seconds and then her fir started to turn gold! A tuff of golden hair sprouted on her forehead and her tail became much bushier. Eevee had evolved! She took a deep breath and shot a flame thrower right at Kale and Ace. The fire attack got more than their attention; it almost burnt them to cinders! Right at the last moment Metagross saw the fire and dodged. They both saw us on the beach celebrating for getting their attention and they flew right down to us. Before they landed Eevee had successfully transformed into Vaporeon, Jolteon, Espeon, and Leafeon. She changed back to Eevee and felt very dizzy so I returned her and everyone else to their balls.

“Why did you shoot all that fire at us?” Ace asked.

“We needed to get your attention some how. So what attacked us up their?”

“It was a baby Raquaza; separated from his mother. It panicked when it saw us so it attacked. We had to fight back. But the best part is…”

Before Kale could finish his story a sharp pain stuck me in my temples and everything flashed away.

What is this!

I could see I was riding Dragonite, but I could not move my own body. Up ahead of me I could see myself gliding through the air and a dark ominous cloud looming ahead of us.

We must be seeing what happened in the past, what happened to us! From Kale’s mind!

The cloud got closer and closer. Then I heard myself say, “I don’t think this is a good sign guys. I think we should go down under the clouds.”

That’s when I saw the blast his me. I fell through the clouds towards the earth. Kale and Ace tried to chase and catch me but another blast came from the cloud to stop them and a Raquaza flew out! Kale said it was a baby, but it was still at least 17 feet long.

“We have to save Alex!” Ace yelled.

“We’ll never get her, Raquaza would never let us!” Kale responded.

Raquaza whipped his tail and cause a huge tornado to attack them. They both tried to dodge but Ace and Charizard got hit hard. Charizard was out cold as they plummeted towards the clouds. Ace had the presence of mind to send out Metagross.

“Metagross use psychic on Charizard!” He yelled and Metagross appeared in a flash of light and caught both of them. “Metagross can’t fight while holding me! You have to fight alone!”

Turning towards Kale Raquaza opened his mouth wide. He charged at Dragonite who barley dodged the attack as Kale commanded, “Use Dragon Rage!”

The attack easily hit the large target and sent him flailing. But Raquaza recovered quickly and launched a Dragon Pulse in all directions! Dragonite could not dodge it. He was knocked out by the bit and started falling towards the earth. Metagross was quick and caught both of them.

“Dragonite return; Blastoise it is all up to you good buddy!” He yelled as he sent out Blastoise on top of Metagross who strained under the weight. “I’m sorry Metagross I will try to make this faster, Blastoise use Hydro Pump!” But Blastoise did not fire at Raquaza he jumped off Metagross and fired straight down. This propelled him skywards and above Raquaza.

“Use Ice Beam!” Blastoise stopped firing his Hydro Pump and took a deep breath to fire an Ice beam at Raquaza. Raquaza was taken completely off guard by this daredevil technique and was frozen solid!

Now it was Raquaza’s turn to fall to earth, but Kale was kinder than to let him fall. He wound up and yelled, “This is what I saved this ball for!” He threw with all his strength and hit the Dragon before it made it to the clouds. The ball continued to fall and Metagross used Psychic on it to save the pokemon. Kale returned Blastoise and Metagross got the ball up to them before it was done shaking.

PING! Kale was jumping up and down, “I finally caught a Raquaza! I did it! I did it! Come on out!” Kale tossed the ball up in the air. In the flash of light Raquaza was revealed and was still frozen solid! He began to fall again as Kale returned him, “My bad.” He said with a blushed face.

Everything began to spin and I arrived back on the beach with Kale and Ace huddled over me.

“Are you okay?” Ace asked urgently.

“I think I just saw your entire battle,” I told them wearily. My head was still spinning. “So Kale you caught Raquaza?”

He began smiling, “Yes I did, but he is still frozen solid but I don’t know how long he can stay like that.”

“We need to get to Cinnabar Island so we can heal all our pokemon,” I tried to stand up but I felt a sharp pain in my chest. “I can’t fly right now. They way they were hit I’m guessing Charizard and Dragonite can’t either. How are we going to get there?”

“Maybe we can ask you friend over there,” Ace said as he indicated Lapras who was listening intently.

“Of course I can help you,” she responded with a smile.

“I’m hoping that’s a yes?” Kale asked me.

I nodded, “Thank you Lapras can we go now?”

“When ever you are ready.”

With that we all climbed onto Lapras’ back and set sail. This was a slower course of transport but a lot more pleasing. We could see the small pokemon under the water playing. The others lied down to take a nap but I could not risk it. If I slept I could change again then more than just my body could change after that. So as the others slept I stared out in the direction we were headed. I let everyone out of their pokeballs with Lapras’ permission and I was getting to know them better.

After about an hour Cinnabar Island appeared on the horizon. I had let everyone out of their pokeballs with Lapras’ permission and I was getting to know them better. We woke up Kale and Ace when we landed ashore.

Lapras stopped me before I jumped off and asked, “I never felt so brave before in my life until I met you, and seeing how your friend there caught Raquaza you must be very strong. I was hoping I could come with you to become stronger.”

“Of course you can! Here let me get my pokeball.” I grabbed my other pokeball. I holy have one more after this. “He Lapras, jump inside.” She almost literally did jump inside and the ball did not even shake. The moment she went inside it dinged and she was mine.

We rushed to the pokecenter where we had all our pokemon healed with no commotion. Well other than the strange looks but we’re all used to it. After that we all went to the small motel in town between the local gym and a strange old building. We paid the owner and the others went to bed quickly. I went to the bathroom to look at my face one last time. I knew this was the only true part of me left and it was the only part of me left to change tonight. I sighed and went off to bed. I knew I had a big day tomorrow but I never thought it would be how it ended up.
 
RE: The Birth of an Articuno. Chapter Eight is in!

Wow nice chapter! Lapras!! Cant wait for the next chapter, with me:p
 
RE: The Birth of an Articuno. Chapter Nine is in!

I made the updated TCs and I'm going to start putting them at the beginning and ends of each chapter so you guys can keep track!
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Im about to write the next chapter also after I make another sprite

EDIT: Also just noticed, forgot to make Eevee's evolution shiney lol
 
RE: The Birth of an Articuno. Chapter Nine is in!

I like it, so far. Although the baby Rayquaza is a bit eh, if you know what I mean. It's a little cheezy...
Kind of like the baby Lugia in the show, but it is better than them catching Rayquaza atleast.

I can't wait to her about the other legendary birds!
 
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