Finished The Challenge: Season 4 - Keeper of Night takes it all!

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GM DracLord said:
Especially you James, You're the kind of guys that can live alone and survive. .. I really have lost my touch to right an essay. That what you get when you take courses that don't require you taking english classes
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I'm the kind of guy that can live alone and be educated, yes. But other than that I have no common sense, cannot cook, have no money and barely any charisma.

I cant beg, cook, maybe I can get a job--

WTF, why am I talking about this.

Anyway, team, here's my first paragraph:

Many awesome, breathtaking and mighty Pokémon have lived throughout the generations of the Pokémon universe. These Pokèmon include the strong Groudon, mover of the tectonic plates, Rattata, the overlord of youngsters everywhere, and Arceus The Great, the Pokèmon Universe god. Unfortunately, none of these pokemon come even close to the sheer power, awesomeness and breathtaking beauty of Dedenne, the master of all things cute, Clawitzer, the lobster with a pinch of swagger, Spewpa, the shadow bug, living with predators ten times the size, and Furfrou the first dog to have more bite than bark. All of these Pokèmon have the unstoppable, powerful and awesome attributes and skills.
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I'm going to get Turtwig to critique it later, but for now, if you have any advice, please give.

EDIT: I know there are typos
 
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I just finished the Pancham paragraph. Let me know what you think in the QT. I'm going to go to bed, but tomorrow, I will edit anything I need to in the Pancham one, and if no one minds I will start on the Aurorus one.
 
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Done three paragraphs so far, and I'm at 688 words. Wow, this is easy. TIME TO SPELL CHECK
 
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Machamp The Champion said:
WanderingWolf said:
TIME TO SPELL CHECK
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At least we're ahead of you on that. You have to sleep sometime.
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its 7pm for me. I have about 4 more hours left.

EDIT: Actually, if you can go until 3am, so can I.
 
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Tired and a little bit gone right now. Wouldn't want to go all dolo on the essay. I will try to be of better help tomorrow.
 
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Wow my paragraph is barely under 350.. Looks like I need to increase my capacity.. What else can I emphasize on that mountain goat
 
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GM DracLord said:
Wow my paragraph is barely under 350.. Looks like I need to increase my capacity.. What else can I emphasize on that mountain goat
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Its not supposed to be much longer than about 250 words :p

I said 3 paragraphs = 650 words, not 1.

Also, decision:

I am going to take the advantage, and remove my team from having to write about Dedenne.

Now, roll in your tears, Prince Dedenne (I'm sorry, I just sucked at writing about him)
 
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What?! Dedenne is awesome, why would you not want to write about it?!

Team Kyushu: If someone wants to write the intro and conclusion, I'll be willing take a second pokemon. Can I be inkey and floette? If no one wants to write the intro/convolution I'd be alright with writing it though. Who wants to do what pokemon?
 
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RaichuGirl said:
What?! Dedenne is awesome, why would you not want to write about it?!

Team Kyushu: If someone wants to write the intro and conclusion, I'll be willing take a second pokemon. Can I be inkey and floette? If no one wants to write the intro/convolution I'd be alright with writing it though. Who wants to do what pokemon?
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Professor isn't on yet, would you like me to edit it and give you the disadvantage, because I actually wanted to do that.

Dedenne is the hardest to write about, and so far, I'm at 800 words and half way through the 4th paragraph. I'm about to head to bed. When I wake up, I expect a post from safariblade and Poseidon.

If there are any typos, or spelling mistakes guys, please edit the google doc. link is in the QT.
 
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Fletchling, have a conversation with me, since you're viewing the thread.
 
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Lord Fletchling said:
I'm fine with that
as long as it's Fletchling
otherwise
HAHAHAHAHA
NO
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So, you want the competition to literally be Fletchling?

CONVERSATION, I GRANT YOU THE FINEST BIRD SEED!
 
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lawl
I wouldn't actually mind writing about an extra Pokémon. In fact, it might net us more points.
 
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Lord Fletchling said:
lawl
I wouldn't actually mind writing about an extra Pokémon. In fact, it might net us more points.
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Or, you'd have a higher chance of losing points, as there's more to think about. Too late, I've already written an entire first draft, and proofread and I'm hopefully going to get Turtwig to critique it later, and make a second and third draft.

Also, word count for 1st draft, 5 paragraphs and 993 words.

Here's my draft:

lol, no
 
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Lord Fletchling said:
You are sooo gonna have to still write 6 Paragraphs >:3
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What? Read the thread, I only have to write 5, because I got rid of Dedenne.

Post #929, see:

I am going to take the advantage, and remove my team from having to write about Dedenne.

Now, roll in your tears, Prince Dedenne (I'm sorry, I just sucked at writing about him)
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Looks like I need to reduce my 500 paragraph to less.. Looks like all my writing about the marvelous hooves of gogoat will goes down the drain.. It took half of my paragraph
 
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...fine.
I'll just make you write a 2000 word essay about him instead >:3
 
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GM DracLord said:
Looks like I need to reduce my 500 paragraph to less.. Looks like all my writing about the marvelous hooves of gogoat will goes down the drain.. It took half of my paragraph
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I spent about 200 words talking about how delicious Clawitzer was... Only to click undo on my IPad and lose it all. I lost motivation to talk about how good tasting ClawitZer was after that...
 
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