Finished The Challenge: Season 4 - Keeper of Night takes it all!

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tis an essay written from a creative writing perspective

(i may have missed that rule but hey i'll defend myself)

and no celever, i will never quit boasting

did you know I once chugged a whole glass of Coke in 8 seconds in Nando's once
 
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Celever said:
Quit boasting...

@Eagle

You literally only have to see the word "you" or "I" in that story, and it would instantly get an exceptionally low mark in any kind of practice essay.
 
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WanderingWolf said:
Celever said:
Quit boasting...

@Eagle

You literally only have to see the word "you" or "I" in that story, and it would instantly get an exceptionally low mark in any kind of practice essay.

"In this essay I shall be arguing that"

LOW MARK
 
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Eagle4 said:
WanderingWolf said:
You literally only have to see the word "you" or "I" in that story, and it would instantly get an exceptionally low mark in any kind of practice essay.

"In this essay I shall be arguing that"

LOW MARK

Seems fair to me!

oh wai-
 
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Eagle4 said:
WanderingWolf said:
You literally only have to see the word "you" or "I" in that story, and it would instantly get an exceptionally low mark in any kind of practice essay.

"In this essay I shall be arguing that"

LOW MARK

That's not what you do in an essay. You talk about an idea, whilst giving facts to push your idea upon the reader, trying to change their opinion. If you were to do that^, you would be debating, or writing a speech.
 
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You can write essays on debates you know...
 
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Eagle4 said:
You can write essays on debates you know...

While true, most of the time for a debate, you would give your opinion, and introduce yourself.

The reader of an essay could care less who you are. Or, that's how its supposed to be.

EDIT: Can we stop arguing about this. Wait--- If team You Shalt Not Pass submitted, that means another team has as well. OH NOEZ
 
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Haunted Water said:
An essay is supposed to be informative, not viewpoint.

http://www.thefreedictionary.com/essay
nope

WanderingWolf said:
Eagle4 said:
You can write essays on debates you know...

While true, most of the time for a debate, you would give your opinion, and introduce yourself.

The reader of an essay could care less who you are. Or, that's how its supposed to be.

Why are we arguing about something so small? And I don't really care if the reader of an essay doesn't care who's writing the essay, it's perfectly acceptable to use "I" in an essay.
 
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Why is there an essay challenge? That's dumb.
 
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safariblade said:
Why is there an essay challenge? That's dumb.

Check the QT, first draft is there. I'm also going to get Turtwig to critique, since no rules say anything against it.
 
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safariblade said:
Why is there an essay challenge? That's dumb.

He's an English Professor what do you expect other than for him to set us some homework?
 
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