RE: The Fan Creation Tournament! IMPORTANT ANOUNSEMENT IN MY LAST POST!
TEAM CUSTOM
Fan Fic:
Originality: 8 (I've seen bunches of Pokemon in the real world, but this was good.)
Character Developement: 2 (Not much development with any characters.)
Plot: 9 (Nice plot!)
Descriptivness: 5 (Very descriptive, but I didn't notice any section for grammer and punctuation, so I included that here.)
Net Points: 24/35
Banners/Avatars
Creativness: 9 (I loved the animations, but transitions left a little to be desired.)
Apparent Effort: 10 (Looks like a whole lot of time was spent on these.)
Net Points: 19/20
Trainer Cards
Creativness: 7 (The ideas for the Trainer Pass were good, but the backgrounds were sometimes hiding the text.)
Apparent Effort: 9 (Good effort, the animations must have taken a while.)
Net Points: 16/20
Overall Imprression: 15/20 (I would have liked a bit more backstory, but the plot was nice. Some issues with spelling and such. I would have liked to see you a bit more organized, perhaps a banner in the first post, table of contents with links to chapters, you know, just a little easier to navigate with a little bit of flair.)
FINAL SCORE
74/100
Very nice. I think you should have editted the fan-fic after you made each chapter, grammer and punctuation were the biggest problem. For some reason, you kept spelling "course" wrong. It came out as the "coarse" which means rough.