The Fan Creation Tournament! IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT IN MY LAST POST!
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RE: The Fan Creation Tournament! IMPORTANT ANOUNSEMENT IN MY LAST POST!
Great! thanks cant wait!
Great! thanks cant wait!
RE: The Fan Creation Tournament! IMPORTANT ANOUNSEMENT IN MY LAST POST!
Not to be mean, but I think theres some more score editing in the future Achmetha.....I had a long talk with Max last night about how specific you were being in regards to Fanfic layout/grammar errors that were never mentioned in the rules or grading system.....but Im gonna wait for him to give the final ruling. I just think that the scoring was blown a tad out of preportion, thats all.
-Black Rayquaza
Not to be mean, but I think theres some more score editing in the future Achmetha.....I had a long talk with Max last night about how specific you were being in regards to Fanfic layout/grammar errors that were never mentioned in the rules or grading system.....but Im gonna wait for him to give the final ruling. I just think that the scoring was blown a tad out of preportion, thats all.
-Black Rayquaza
RE: The Fan Creation Tournament! IMPORTANT ANOUNSEMENT IN MY LAST POST!
Thats not my point.....your criteria is different than what Max gave as the requirements for the touney...so if you and Max grade differently it wont be consistant as you will be grading differently than any other judge. The scoring system was set to be generic, so that everybody grades on the same stuff. I'll wait for Max to tell you....seeing that you probably wont take my word for it.
-Black Rayquaza
Achmetha said:
Thats not my point.....your criteria is different than what Max gave as the requirements for the touney...so if you and Max grade differently it wont be consistant as you will be grading differently than any other judge. The scoring system was set to be generic, so that everybody grades on the same stuff. I'll wait for Max to tell you....seeing that you probably wont take my word for it.
-Black Rayquaza
RE: The Fan Creation Tournament! IMPORTANT ANOUNSEMENT IN MY LAST POST!
Well, here it is, my entry! I want to note that even tough Chapter 25 is already up, please only read till chapter 24 for this fic contest, thank you!
here is the link to the thread, and I added an ''Library'' in the first post which serves as an index of the chapters, so simply click the link on a chapter to get to the requested chapter!
My Fanfic thread
So, now for the fanart!
I'll be splitting the fanart in two sections, the first will be fanart considering my fanfic, the second part will be the remaining art!
*Note: due to the fact I don't want to spoil anything about my story to certain readers by some pics, a few pics were sent via PM to the Judges.*
Related to my fanfic:
Picture of Kenny, Thomas, Bob, Brian, and Thomas(pencil)
brian's Dragonite while using Outrage(pencil)
Shannon's Salamence while using ''Apocalypse''
Shannon's Salamence while using ''Apocalypse''(pencil)
Brian(is the main character, and this is only his head)
All ''Team Omega'' team members(pencil)
Jason(the invader of the Team Galaxy base, as well of one of ''Team Omega's'' Leaders maybe...?(pencil)
Freya(pencil, and my apologies for it not being of such good quality, but my scanner won't give anything better...! )
***to all fans: SMALL SPOILER WARNING!!!!*** Shannon, Thomas, and Dennis(pencil)
Shady Figure standing on a rock (pencil, Brian saw him in a certain event)
All other fanfic related artwork has been PM'ed to the judges if they showed too much information for spoilers!
Now, the un-related fanart:
Team Tyranitards (pencil, My Pokémon Mystery Dungeon team captured and coloured on paper!)
A ''team Rocket Ribbon'' I once made... I doubt it'll ever be used for anything tough...!
Badge I once designed for Black Rayquaza (1 out of 4)
Badge I once designed for Black Rayquaza (2 out of 4)
Badge I once designed for Black Rayquaza (3 out of 4)
Badge I onced designed for Black Rayquaza (4 out of 4)
Lucario, while in the stance of an Aura Sphere (still needs feet and maybe the Aura Sphere attack. I made this for Black Rayquaza one day)
Avatar I made for Black Rayquaza (without the background)
Avatar I once made for Black Rayquaza
''Skeleton'' for Brian's head(yes, I know it has SOMETHING to do with the fanfic, but I didn't think it was of that big importance to put it up with the rest.)
I'll eagerly await the judging(s)!
Greetz, James
Well, here it is, my entry! I want to note that even tough Chapter 25 is already up, please only read till chapter 24 for this fic contest, thank you!
here is the link to the thread, and I added an ''Library'' in the first post which serves as an index of the chapters, so simply click the link on a chapter to get to the requested chapter!
My Fanfic thread
So, now for the fanart!
I'll be splitting the fanart in two sections, the first will be fanart considering my fanfic, the second part will be the remaining art!
*Note: due to the fact I don't want to spoil anything about my story to certain readers by some pics, a few pics were sent via PM to the Judges.*
Related to my fanfic:
Picture of Kenny, Thomas, Bob, Brian, and Thomas(pencil)
brian's Dragonite while using Outrage(pencil)
Shannon's Salamence while using ''Apocalypse''
Shannon's Salamence while using ''Apocalypse''(pencil)
Brian(is the main character, and this is only his head)
All ''Team Omega'' team members(pencil)
Jason(the invader of the Team Galaxy base, as well of one of ''Team Omega's'' Leaders maybe...?(pencil)
Freya(pencil, and my apologies for it not being of such good quality, but my scanner won't give anything better...! )
***to all fans: SMALL SPOILER WARNING!!!!*** Shannon, Thomas, and Dennis(pencil)
Shady Figure standing on a rock (pencil, Brian saw him in a certain event)
All other fanfic related artwork has been PM'ed to the judges if they showed too much information for spoilers!
Now, the un-related fanart:
Team Tyranitards (pencil, My Pokémon Mystery Dungeon team captured and coloured on paper!)
A ''team Rocket Ribbon'' I once made... I doubt it'll ever be used for anything tough...!
Badge I once designed for Black Rayquaza (1 out of 4)
Badge I once designed for Black Rayquaza (2 out of 4)
Badge I once designed for Black Rayquaza (3 out of 4)
Badge I onced designed for Black Rayquaza (4 out of 4)
Lucario, while in the stance of an Aura Sphere (still needs feet and maybe the Aura Sphere attack. I made this for Black Rayquaza one day)
Avatar I made for Black Rayquaza (without the background)
Avatar I once made for Black Rayquaza
''Skeleton'' for Brian's head(yes, I know it has SOMETHING to do with the fanfic, but I didn't think it was of that big importance to put it up with the rest.)
I'll eagerly await the judging(s)!
Greetz, James
RE: The Fan Creation Tournament! IMPORTANT ANOUNSEMENT IN MY LAST POST!
i forgot about thins and i don't really have to time to go through the things... i can't be a judge anymore ... srry for not telling this to you sooner
Max Shade IV said:
i forgot about thins and i don't really have to time to go through the things... i can't be a judge anymore ... srry for not telling this to you sooner
RE: The Fan Creation Tournament! IMPORTANT ANOUNSEMENT IN MY LAST POST!
It's ok, ssb4ever. Anyways, deadline is two minutes ago. I have three entries: B-Ray, Money King, and James. It's quite a feat you guys completed this in the first place. I will be posting all your scores at once. Also, when Achmetha has posted her scores, I will officially announce the winner, along with second and third place.
-Max Shade IV
It's ok, ssb4ever. Anyways, deadline is two minutes ago. I have three entries: B-Ray, Money King, and James. It's quite a feat you guys completed this in the first place. I will be posting all your scores at once. Also, when Achmetha has posted her scores, I will officially announce the winner, along with second and third place.
-Max Shade IV
RE: The Fan Creation Tournament! IMPORTANT ANOUNSEMENT IN MY LAST POST!
Great really can't wait!
Great really can't wait!
RE: The Fan Creation Tournament! IMPORTANT ANOUNSEMENT IN MY LAST POST!
Team Custom
Fan Fic:
Originality: 10
Character Developement: 5
Plot: 10
Descriptivnes: 10
Net Points: 35/35
Banners/Avatars
Creativness: 13
Apparent Effort: 10
Net Points: 23/20
Trainer Cards
Creativness: 12
Apparent Effort: 10
Net Points: 22/20
Overall (What would you give as an overall score?): 15/20
Somethings I didn't like: Grammer and spelling. Not a requirement under the FanFic, but the OVerall category is where my own opinion on everything can be expressed. I didn't dock him too much since his mistakes were consistant, and even though his story was in the form of journal entries, in which there are bound to be these mistakes, this is a peice of writing, and I'd rather see good writing come first. A couple points docked for an incomplete fic, however I wish B-Ray luck in continuing.
95/100
Team Ocean Blaze
Fan Fic:
Originality: 10
Character Developement: 5
Plot: 10
Descriptivnes: 10
Net Points: 35
Banners/Avatars
Creativness: 10/10
Apparent Effort: 13/10
Net Points: 23/20
Trainer Cards
Creativness: 8/10
Apparent Effort: 10/10
Net Points: 18/20
The trainer cards were done well, but could've used something more. Since the cards did not fill up all spots, you might've removed the extra spots and then centered the pokemon on the card. other than that, nice job
Overall (What would you give as an overall score?): 20
Team Custom
Fan Fic:
Originality: 10
Character Developement: 5
Plot: 10
Descriptivnes: 10
Net Points: 35/35
Banners/Avatars
Creativness: 13
Apparent Effort: 10
Net Points: 23/20
Trainer Cards
Creativness: 12
Apparent Effort: 10
Net Points: 22/20
Overall (What would you give as an overall score?): 15/20
Somethings I didn't like: Grammer and spelling. Not a requirement under the FanFic, but the OVerall category is where my own opinion on everything can be expressed. I didn't dock him too much since his mistakes were consistant, and even though his story was in the form of journal entries, in which there are bound to be these mistakes, this is a peice of writing, and I'd rather see good writing come first. A couple points docked for an incomplete fic, however I wish B-Ray luck in continuing.
95/100
Team Ocean Blaze
Fan Fic:
Originality: 10
Character Developement: 5
Plot: 10
Descriptivnes: 10
Net Points: 35
Banners/Avatars
Creativness: 10/10
Apparent Effort: 13/10
Net Points: 23/20
Trainer Cards
Creativness: 8/10
Apparent Effort: 10/10
Net Points: 18/20
The trainer cards were done well, but could've used something more. Since the cards did not fill up all spots, you might've removed the extra spots and then centered the pokemon on the card. other than that, nice job
Overall (What would you give as an overall score?): 20
RE: The Fan Creation Tournament! IMPORTANT ANOUNSEMENT IN MY LAST POST!
Sorry that I have been very inactive for the past few weeks, so this is all I could gather of ours in these last few minutes if it's still okay to turn things in.
Most of the stuff is on the team website, but it's not very up-to-date, so here is the complete fan-fic (that I have finished atleast)-
Fan-fic Since it's only on two seperate pages, I didn't see the need for a table of contents.
Website As I said, it's not very up to date.
The UB in my sig is also some of our art, but I don't know what it would go under.
Here is also some of my newer work-
example sheet
trainer card maker sheet
trophies
With this little, though I doubt we'd get in the top 3, but oh well. I was also only just getting to the extremely good part in my fan-fic, too.
Sorry that I have been very inactive for the past few weeks, so this is all I could gather of ours in these last few minutes if it's still okay to turn things in.
Most of the stuff is on the team website, but it's not very up-to-date, so here is the complete fan-fic (that I have finished atleast)-
Fan-fic Since it's only on two seperate pages, I didn't see the need for a table of contents.
Website As I said, it's not very up to date.
The UB in my sig is also some of our art, but I don't know what it would go under.
Here is also some of my newer work-
example sheet
trainer card maker sheet
trophies
With this little, though I doubt we'd get in the top 3, but oh well. I was also only just getting to the extremely good part in my fan-fic, too.
RE: The Fan Creation Tournament! IMPORTANT ANOUNSEMENT IN MY LAST POST!
We have avvys/banners, they're on the team website, but it doesn't show the Lugia banner anymore. Charizard88 also made some cards, but they won't show up either, so I didn't put them on. They were on some spoilers that marinepika made.
We have avvys/banners, they're on the team website, but it doesn't show the Lugia banner anymore. Charizard88 also made some cards, but they won't show up either, so I didn't put them on. They were on some spoilers that marinepika made.
RE: The Fan Creation Tournament! IMPORTANT ANOUNSEMENT IN MY LAST POST!
vasoguard (pardon the spelling if it's wrong) the deadline was thursday night, EST. I extended the deadline to 4:02 p.m. EST. sorry but i can't accept it.
And to the three entrants who got in their stuff on time, please be patient with me...last night after dinner I got really sick and passed out. When I woke up it was five in the morning and I was in bed with no idea how i got there. I've got something going on in a few hours that i have to get ready for, so i'll try to get the scoring done when i get home this afternoon/evening. I'm extremely sorry for this inconveiniece.
vasoguard (pardon the spelling if it's wrong) the deadline was thursday night, EST. I extended the deadline to 4:02 p.m. EST. sorry but i can't accept it.
And to the three entrants who got in their stuff on time, please be patient with me...last night after dinner I got really sick and passed out. When I woke up it was five in the morning and I was in bed with no idea how i got there. I've got something going on in a few hours that i have to get ready for, so i'll try to get the scoring done when i get home this afternoon/evening. I'm extremely sorry for this inconveiniece.
RE: The Fan Creation Tournament! IMPORTANT ANOUNSEMENT IN MY LAST POST!
No don't worry Max if your sick just rest! Get it in whenever you can! Thanks!
No don't worry Max if your sick just rest! Get it in whenever you can! Thanks!
RE: The Fan Creation Tournament! IMPORTANT ANOUNSEMENT IN MY LAST POST!
First of all, I'm a he and also, I know how you feel Max, I have the flu and I've been vomiting alot. I'll try to finish my scores soon, I'm reading Moneyking's fic now.
First of all, I'm a he and also, I know how you feel Max, I have the flu and I've been vomiting alot. I'll try to finish my scores soon, I'm reading Moneyking's fic now.
RE: The Fan Creation Tournament! IMPORTANT ANOUNSEMENT IN MY LAST POST!
Thanks Achmetha, really can't wait for your scores!
Thanks Achmetha, really can't wait for your scores!
RE: The Fan Creation Tournament! IMPORTANT ANOUNSEMENT IN MY LAST POST!
TEAM CUSTOM
Fan Fic:
Originality: 8 (I've seen bunches of Pokemon in the real world, but this was good.)
Character Developement: 2 (Not much development with any characters.)
Plot: 9 (Nice plot!)
Descriptivness: 5 (Very descriptive, but I didn't notice any section for grammer and punctuation, so I included that here.)
Net Points: 24/35
Banners/Avatars
Creativness: 9 (I loved the animations, but transitions left a little to be desired.)
Apparent Effort: 10 (Looks like a whole lot of time was spent on these.)
Net Points: 19/20
Trainer Cards
Creativness: 7 (The ideas for the Trainer Pass were good, but the backgrounds were sometimes hiding the text.)
Apparent Effort: 9 (Good effort, the animations must have taken a while.)
Net Points: 16/20
Overall Imprression: 15/20 (I would have liked a bit more backstory, but the plot was nice. Some issues with spelling and such. I would have liked to see you a bit more organized, perhaps a banner in the first post, table of contents with links to chapters, you know, just a little easier to navigate with a little bit of flair.)
FINAL SCORE
74/100
Team Ocean Blaze
Fan-fic
Originality: 7 (Fairly original story.)
Character Developement: 2 (Everything seems to go perfectly for Matt. I'd like to see him lose once in a while.)
Plot: 7 (The plot is okay, but it is fairly straight forward.)
Descriptivness: 7 (Very descriptive, but like B-Ray, you could have done a little work with grammer. I noticed you had a fairly good editor, but you never actually went back and editted the things.)
Net Points: 23/35
Banners/Avatars
Creativness: 8 (Nice banners, I like how one of them relates to the fan-fic.)
Apparent Effort: 9 (Looks like a good deal of time and effort was spent on these.)
Net Points: 17/20
Trainer Cards
Creativness: 10 (The three main characters, good. Editting the trainers took a little work it looks like.)
Apparent Effort: 9 (Nice effort, you chose good backgrounds for them, and the trainers are nice.)
Net Points: 19/20
Overall Imprression: 15/20 (You spent a lot of time on this fan-fic and I think you deserve a good score. There were various issues with grammer/punctuation/etc., but it was very good over all. I hope to see you continue this.)
FINAL SCORE: 74/100
TEAM CUSTOM
Fan Fic:
Originality: 8 (I've seen bunches of Pokemon in the real world, but this was good.)
Character Developement: 2 (Not much development with any characters.)
Plot: 9 (Nice plot!)
Descriptivness: 5 (Very descriptive, but I didn't notice any section for grammer and punctuation, so I included that here.)
Net Points: 24/35
Banners/Avatars
Creativness: 9 (I loved the animations, but transitions left a little to be desired.)
Apparent Effort: 10 (Looks like a whole lot of time was spent on these.)
Net Points: 19/20
Trainer Cards
Creativness: 7 (The ideas for the Trainer Pass were good, but the backgrounds were sometimes hiding the text.)
Apparent Effort: 9 (Good effort, the animations must have taken a while.)
Net Points: 16/20
Overall Imprression: 15/20 (I would have liked a bit more backstory, but the plot was nice. Some issues with spelling and such. I would have liked to see you a bit more organized, perhaps a banner in the first post, table of contents with links to chapters, you know, just a little easier to navigate with a little bit of flair.)
FINAL SCORE
74/100
Team Ocean Blaze
Fan-fic
Originality: 7 (Fairly original story.)
Character Developement: 2 (Everything seems to go perfectly for Matt. I'd like to see him lose once in a while.)
Plot: 7 (The plot is okay, but it is fairly straight forward.)
Descriptivness: 7 (Very descriptive, but like B-Ray, you could have done a little work with grammer. I noticed you had a fairly good editor, but you never actually went back and editted the things.)
Net Points: 23/35
Banners/Avatars
Creativness: 8 (Nice banners, I like how one of them relates to the fan-fic.)
Apparent Effort: 9 (Looks like a good deal of time and effort was spent on these.)
Net Points: 17/20
Trainer Cards
Creativness: 10 (The three main characters, good. Editting the trainers took a little work it looks like.)
Apparent Effort: 9 (Nice effort, you chose good backgrounds for them, and the trainers are nice.)
Net Points: 19/20
Overall Imprression: 15/20 (You spent a lot of time on this fan-fic and I think you deserve a good score. There were various issues with grammer/punctuation/etc., but it was very good over all. I hope to see you continue this.)
FINAL SCORE: 74/100
RE: The Fan Creation Tournament! IMPORTANT ANOUNSEMENT IN MY LAST POST!
WOW thanks achmetha! Glad you overall like it! So we tied with team custom! Can't wait for Maxs score! Thanks Achmetha and Good luck everyone!
WOW thanks achmetha! Glad you overall like it! So we tied with team custom! Can't wait for Maxs score! Thanks Achmetha and Good luck everyone!
RE: The Fan Creation Tournament! IMPORTANT ANOUNSEMENT IN MY LAST POST!
NOOOO I submitted most of my work on here but never in the form like the others and Ive been at my friends house the last 3 days where none of my stuff is... So I can't enter it...
Danget... Im still going to keep writing my fic because it wasnt just for the contest...
NOOOO I submitted most of my work on here but never in the form like the others and Ive been at my friends house the last 3 days where none of my stuff is... So I can't enter it...
Danget... Im still going to keep writing my fic because it wasnt just for the contest...