That's cool about mono-red, I liked what it had to offer but I didn't know it would hit the top tables (or even come close to winning) so quickly. Good to know his list, there are a couple of things I didn't think of adding, like Stormblood Beserker, for example.
Concerning your list, budget is always going to be a consideration. Obviously, there a few obvious changes to be made, but until you manage to trade your way up (or gradually invest in) the inevitably needed cards, there's only so much I can change.
First change:
-1 Etched Champion
+1 Mikeaus, the Lunarch (sp?)
I don't know how much he costs these days (he is a mythic from a brand-spanking-new set, after all) so this may not work out for you. However the benefits are worth the investment IMO. I'm not a big fan of Etched Champion, TBH: at best, you are paying three mana (in a deck with only twenty lands) for a 2/2 with protection from every color. It gets in for two consistently, but in such a fast, artifact-filled format, there are more than enough answers for it. That's if you even get the three artifacts out, and with all this artifact removal, there may be games where you are stuck with a 2/2 nothing for three mana. In any case, 2/2 protection from all colors is underwhelming in my opinion. The game could be over before it even gets to make a difference. The only time it helps IMO is in long, draw-out games. If you get into one of these, you're playing the deck wrong.
The upside is you get another Lunarch. If you haven't gotten a chance to play the deck, my group's been testing him out for a while. In anything white with plenty of creatures, he can make a little army get big real fast. He's great to have around.
I believe I have mentioned already your low land count. In this deck I do think you can get away with 20 lands. But if you ever find in testing that you get mana screwed often, do this:
-1 Etched Champion
+1 Inkmoth Nexus or Plains (budget)
Also, is there a reason for low Glint Hawks? I was pretty sure they are a staple in the deck, no?
-1 Etched Champion
+1 Glint Hawk
For sure. If you can't make any other change, make this one. Glint Hawk is still awesome (especially once you get that second Mox).
Edit: Bottom-line, I'd remove the Etched Champion.
Concerning your list, budget is always going to be a consideration. Obviously, there a few obvious changes to be made, but until you manage to trade your way up (or gradually invest in) the inevitably needed cards, there's only so much I can change.
First change:
-1 Etched Champion
+1 Mikeaus, the Lunarch (sp?)
I don't know how much he costs these days (he is a mythic from a brand-spanking-new set, after all) so this may not work out for you. However the benefits are worth the investment IMO. I'm not a big fan of Etched Champion, TBH: at best, you are paying three mana (in a deck with only twenty lands) for a 2/2 with protection from every color. It gets in for two consistently, but in such a fast, artifact-filled format, there are more than enough answers for it. That's if you even get the three artifacts out, and with all this artifact removal, there may be games where you are stuck with a 2/2 nothing for three mana. In any case, 2/2 protection from all colors is underwhelming in my opinion. The game could be over before it even gets to make a difference. The only time it helps IMO is in long, draw-out games. If you get into one of these, you're playing the deck wrong.
The upside is you get another Lunarch. If you haven't gotten a chance to play the deck, my group's been testing him out for a while. In anything white with plenty of creatures, he can make a little army get big real fast. He's great to have around.
I believe I have mentioned already your low land count. In this deck I do think you can get away with 20 lands. But if you ever find in testing that you get mana screwed often, do this:
-1 Etched Champion
+1 Inkmoth Nexus or Plains (budget)
Also, is there a reason for low Glint Hawks? I was pretty sure they are a staple in the deck, no?
-1 Etched Champion
+1 Glint Hawk
For sure. If you can't make any other change, make this one. Glint Hawk is still awesome (especially once you get that second Mox).
Edit: Bottom-line, I'd remove the Etched Champion.