Oh, you weren't finished before? Oh, well, I'll proofread it later if I find the time.
Hmm... On a side note, you weren't planning on including Chapter Two in the OP of your story thread, were you? I notice that people add future chapters to their OPs once in a while, and it's not really a good idea since there's a character limit for each post (meaning they eventually run out of room). I'd recommend just adding future chapters in their own new posts and then linking those posts to the OP to create a chapter index/table of contents. But that's just foresight I wanted to offer up while I had your ear.