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RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Welcome back Porygon-X!

*The Sudowoodo ends up losing the power on the Wood Hammer, only ending up as a simple light punch. Empoleon then drowned Sudowoodo* "Sorry, Empoleon went too big!"
Bertha: "Got that right. Quagsire, down to you! Earthquake, now!"
"Empoleon, go smaller on the glacier and attack Quagsire!"
 
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Me: Oh great not again! Quick send out your last Pokemon!
Pheobe: Dusknoir go and use Will-O-Wisp!
Me: Great I hate that move! Shelgon use Protect!

Koga: Venomoth go!
Kate: Jolteon use Shadow Ball!
Koga: Venomoth use Toxic!
 
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*The glacier barely misses Joey's side, knocking out the Elite Four opponents*
Bertha: "Well done. Please proceed." *Joey rushes over to Jake, then into the next room*

?: "Me like Onix! Me Bruno!"
?: "Pleasure to meet you. I'm Agatha."
?: "I'm Glacia, the relaxed."
?: "As for me, I'm Flint."

"You and me, Agatha!"
Agatha: "Well, you certainly have spine. I like it. Mismagius, start this off right."
"Looks like this is your round Camerupt!"
 
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OoC: I'm pretty sure Bruno's no Tarzan but since I'm controling him now I'll make it that way. Also isn't Flint third in Sinnoh's Elite Four?

Me: Bruno your mine.
Bruno: Then we shall begin. Onix go and attack!
Me: Raichu your up!

Jake: Let's see. Flint you and me.
Flint: Alright then here we go. Flareon go!
Jake: Quagsire it's show time!

Kate: Guess that leaves me with Glacia.
Glacia: Your right dear. Now Abomasnow go!
Kate: Ninetails your up now!
 
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Agatha: "Mismagius, please enchant the camel."
"Enchant me?!? Well, take this! Spinning Flame!" *Camerupt uses Flamethrower and spins on it's Angel Wing flight*
 
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Me: Alright Raicu use Surf now!
Bruno: Onix strike with Earthquake!

Kate: Ninetails use Sunny Day!
Glacia: Abomasnow use Ingrain!

Jake: Quagsire use Earthquake!
Flint: Flareon use Sunny Day!
 
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*Mismagius almost enchants Camerupt with Mismagius in control, but it only enchanted it, making it very fast, strong, and agile. Mismagius then faints*
Agatha: "Come on Gengar! Shadow Ball!"
"Enchanted is epic! Eruption, fast!"
 
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Bruno: Onix return. Hitmonlee your turn!
Me: Raichu return. Azelf your up!
Bruno: Hitmonlee use Mega Kick!
Me: Azelf use Psychic!

Flint: Flareon return. Houndoom go!
Jake: Quagsire return. Alakazam go!
Flint: Houndoom use Dark Pulse!
Jake: Alakazam go for Focus Blast!

Glacia: Alright Abomasnow use Hail!
Kate: Quick Ninetails use Fire Blast!
 
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*The Gengar faints with a red aura surrounding it. To save the posts, Camerupt went super fast, destroying Agatha with ease with Eruption after Eruption. Agatha tried to deflect with Ghostly tricks and quirks, but it all failed*
Agatha: "..." *The door opened, Joey racing through it*

?: "Looking for Lance? He's not here. I just finished my strategic story. I'm Lucian."
?: "He was such a handsome man around here too... I'm Karen."
?: "The leaves me, Drake. I'm the Dragon ruler below Lance around here."

"I choose to fight... Karen."
Karen: "Think I'm easy, huh? Try my Umbreon!"
"Well then, looks like we are going to have fun now Camerupt!"
 
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Bruno: Alright Hitmontop go!
Me: Azelf use Psychic again!
Bruno: Hitmontop use Quick Attack!

Flint: Your pretty good. Alright Rapidash let's go!
Jake: Alakazam use Hidden Power!
Flint: Rapidash use Mega Horn!

Glacia: Alright Froslass go now!
Kate: Ninetails use Flamethrower!
Glacia: Froslass use Destiny Bond!
 
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Karen: "Dark Pulse Umbreon!"
"Camerupt, deflect that with the Spinning Flame please."
 
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"Pichu, use Volt Tackle!"
*Pichu hits Umbreon with his body*
"I've kinda been secretly following you the whole time, waiting for the right moment... now seems good."
 
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*Karen shoves Poke' away as Umbreon faints*
Karen: "Look what you made happen. Come on Murkrow with a Dark Pulse!"
"Camerupt, Rock Slide please."
 
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*Shoves Karen back*
"Pichu, Thundershock!"
*Pichu hits Karen with thundershock*
"I meant Camerupt, but... guess that works..."
 
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*Karen then gets paralyzed and taken to the hospital. Joey then shoves Poke'* "What was that for?!? You damaged a girl!!!"
 
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"I didn't think Pichu would attack HER!!!"
*Looks at Pichu*
"It's OK buddy."
*Pets Pichu*
"Pichu didn't mean to, misunderstanding"
*Smiles innocently*
"Um.. so I guess you just have the champion?"
 
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The Dark Shadow as Will suddenly enters their presence.

"Wha? Who are you?" said Rudy.

"Hmm... I'm Will. I don't even know how I got here. But... yay!!" said Will.

The Dark Shadow peered over Will, and suddenly, a bit of dark ooze began to be shot at Will. The Dark Shadow and Will joined together, and Rudy made a few steps back. Why was this happening? He had already beat the darkness inside of him.

"Who are you, and why are you doing this!" Shouted Rudy.

"It's simple. No matter how much you feel like denying it, there is still a part inside you that longs for Isa's blood. She was a member of ROUGE, and you know that deep down, you want nothing more than to see her limp on the ground. I'm merely satisfying the insatiable." The Dark Shadow inched closer to Rudy.

Rudy stepped back further, and this only made the Dark Will chuckle. "Don't you remember what I told you on the day I merged with your body? I'll always come back. You may think you've escaped me, but as long as Isa lives, I'll always come back. The only way you can get rid of me is to submit. So, just do it. SUBMIT!"

Rudy stopped inching backwards, and drew out his Kirlia. "You're just a shadow. You follow me around, but you have no control over me. You can't control my thoughts, feelings, and actions. I'm me, and you, are a monster, created out of my malevolent past. Except now I know how to quell it. I have my own heart, and those around me help make it stronger. My mother's homecoming is enough for me to tear you down!"

The Dark Will cast a dark aura around him, and the Pokemon he had changed. Instead of the Psychic Types that Will was known for having, he sent out a Feraligatr.

"Feraligatr! Crunch!" cried Dark Will. The Feraligatr ran up to Kirlia, but Rudy shouted, "Teleport behind the Feraligatr, and use Magical Leaf!"

The Feraligatr was hit by the Leaves that never missed, and Dark Will clenched his teeth. "Feraligatr! Don't let it get away again! Water Gun!" The Feraligatr shot a large blast of water, that immediately hit Kirlia with a large and forceful destructive power. The Kirlia was knocked against Rudy, and the diamond that his mother gave him fell out.

Kirlia immediately met the diamonds gaze. It was puzzled by it. It briskly walked over to it, and picked it up. It's shining resillience hypnotized it, until suddenly, its glow was passed on to the Kirlia. Kirlia began to glow, and its form changed. No longer was it a Kirlia, but, as it turns out, the diamond was a Dawn Stone. It was now, a Gallade.

Rudy stared at the Gallade, as if its power seemed to purge from every direction. "Gallade! You're so powerful! I know that you and me will be unstoppable. Especially against this tyrant. Go! Use Leaf Blade!"

The Gallade's arm quickly changed to a large, erect and sharp leaf, and, with no effort, sliced away at the Feraligatr. It fell, fainted.
 
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"Yeah, but everyone is so far behind... So..." *Joey runs through the Champion doors*
?: "You again? I thought I saw the last of you in Sootopolis!"
?: "Who is this? Oh yes, way back, I saw a boy like you leaving Sootopolis."
?: "Wallace told me about you. Miraculous."
?: "Well, I've never seen you before. I'm Cynthia."

"May I please battle you Blue?"
Blue: "Sure! Come on Pidgeot!"
"That excuse of a bird? Pikachu, let's go!"
 
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*Whispers to Pichu*
"Use Volt Tackle"
*Pichu hits Blue*
 
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*Joey watches as the Pichu rampages around the room, hospitalizing the champions* "... I didn't think someone could do this. Poke', looks like we are a tag team. Your Pichu may have cheated me up to the top, but it was worth it. Besides, I was going to destroy Blue anyway. Looks like we get to wreck the three behind us when they get here."
 
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