Finished A New Dawn RPG. The game has just ended! Please leave comments Pokebeach!

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RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

I was going to control ROUGE...but we can work together man.
;)


"Okay, first rule, theres no need to Pokemon Battle them all, you can evade them, save your energy for the real fight, and follow me, please."
She easily navigates through the hallways, having been in this airship before, she stops to see the hallway blocked by four grunts.
"Anyone wanna get these guys covered? Or do you want me to handle it?"
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

*Lands at front door*
"Of course nobody is guarding here, people who sneak in usually don't come in this way."
*Opens backpack. Grabs a plastic card.*
"If this is the building I'm thinking of, this should work."
*Slids card through scanner*
Welcome master Poke.
"Of course it is."
*Walks in*
"After all this time, I'm still welcome."
*Looks around*
"Might as well get started."
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

I'll take these creeps you guys go on ahead unless one of you wants to join me?
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

*Enters a room. Looks around*
"It's still... here..."
*Sheds a tear.*
"I.. have to protect this room. NO! I have to let it go."
*Sees a picture*
"I remember that day... though I was little, that was the first time Dad showed me a pokemon."
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Gym:

*Once landed...* "OK, we need to get to the next gym, which is across the river and way up north."
OoC: You guys can get the badges that I sent whenever.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!



"I'll help you."
She easily jumps over on of the men, and swiftly dodges a punch. She then kicks the man. The other two start to head for (Culex).
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

This should be fun. Pikachu Thundershock!
Pikachu: Piiikachuuuu!!
*Zaps the two men and knocks them out cold*
Me: Awww man that was to easy. Oh well guess we should keep moving.
*Pokegear beeps*
Me: Well Joey and the others must have beat the Gym Leaders back in Petalburg.
*Hands everyone their badges*
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

OoC:Sorry, aggiewyn, I thought I still had control over the captive.
IC: "Bulby, Umbreon, take care of these ROGUE guys!" *Bulbasaur uses Energy Ball, and Umbreon uses toxic*
OoC:Our Pokemon can have TM moves, right?
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

OoC: Correct.
In: "So, how are we going to get across... Do you guys smell cookies?"
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"Croconaw! Use Hydro Pump!"
Croconaw drenches two ROUGE guys.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"Oh my gosh! Jessie and... Butch?"
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

*Rogue members enter the room*
Rogue Member 1: "Hey, what are you doing here, this is for.."
Poke: "Me only."
*Grabs the card from earlier*
"Recongnize this, don't you. Now. Get. Out. Of. My. Room."
Rogue Members 1 and 2: "Yes sir."
*Rogue members walk away*
"I guess it still works. Maybe if I change into my old clothes, nobody will recognize me."
*Changes into old clothes.*
"Wow. I don't look that different in my old clothes."
OoC: Anyone who went to take out rogue, shouldn't be able to recognize me now.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

OoC: Gotcha
;)

The two first guys fall to the ground, leaving only the ones aroung Isa
Isa places her hand on one of thier foreheads and pushes them to the ground, then kicks the other one down.
Have a nice time telling THAT story to your boss!
"Great job, everyone, lets go. Maybe we can find Poke on the way."
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

*Looks through Toy Chest. Finds a Pokeball*
"Is he... still here?"
*Presses button on Pokeball. Minun appears*
"You are!"
*Hugs Minun*
"It's great to see you!*
Minun: Mi, minun!"
*Minun hugs back.*
"Minun, guard the room, I'll be back, I have to go do something, OK."
*Grabs another Pokeball. Presses button. Pichu appears.*
"This is Pichu, he's gonna help you guard my room."
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

She rounds the corner to meet a bigger line of agents.
"Lets not waste our time. Ralts! Teleport us all past them!"
She follows command, but can't take them all.
Master, I'll stay behind, Nuzleaf can help you.
Okay, but promise to be safe!
She continues running, not explaining why she is leaving her pokemon behind.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"Hopefully, my room won't be disturbed long enough for me to come back. But first things first, I have to get to the main control room. If this building is still up and running, that means Dad is still... alive."
*Looks around. Sees a room*
"J's room. I don't even want to think about it."
*Sheds a tear. Brings out 2 Pokeballs. Presses the buttons on them.*
"Come on out. Riolu and Trapinch."
*Riolu and Trapinch appear*
"I want you guys to guard this room. I'll be back soon. I have to do something first, but this room can't be disturbed."
*Runs off*
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Ralts explored the hallways, looking for any rooms of importance. Most of the grunts ignored her, seeing as how she looked like a pokemon without a trainer. She walks up to see this room, apparently a child's. It appeared to have a Minun, a Pichu, a Riolu, and a Trapinch.
What are you four doing without a trainer?
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

The 4 Pokemon:*Even though they know Isa, they follow orders and stand guard, waiting to make a move*
OoC: 2 Pokemon are in one room, the other 2 are in another. Not the same one
IC: *Enters main control room*
"Here it is. Haven't been here in years."
*A man in what seems to be the main control chair turns around*
"D... D... Dad?"
Dad: *Turns around*
"Well well well... it's good to see you Poke."
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

OoC: Okay, sorry.

Isa finally reaches the control room, only to see that a small ROUGE agent is there, nervously in front of the leader.
"Hey, we're hear to take over, hope you don't mind."

What are you doing? I promise I won't come in, but...what are you doing?
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"Dad, what are you doing, dressed back in that old outfit, and more importantly, how are you still.... alive!?"
Dad: "I never died, it just looked like I died in that fire your sister caused, but I never was. How's your sister anyway?"
Poke: "She's dead. Dad, I thought you would stop your evil ways."
Dad: "Why would I, Archie stop. I just took a small break for a while. You're not here to stop us, are you?"
Poke: *Looks at him cautiously*
"Of course not, just came to get some stuff from my room and say hi."
Archie: "Alright then. Oh, and it's a shame your sister died. Do you know how?"
Poke: *Clenches hand*
"I have no idea."
*Starts to leave room*
 
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