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RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Isa looks at the ROUGE boys face and notices him immediatly. She grabs Poke's arm and pulls him over.
"WHat are you doing?!" She whispers in his ear.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

*Poke slaps Isa*
Whispering:"Play along for a minute."
Normal Voice:"Servant, please wait outside."
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

jirachinick said:
*Poke slaps Isa*

OoC: Geesh, all I do is take a Jirachi Banner and you slap me?!
I do not like getting slapped.
:(
JK, of course.


"Yes Master."
She walks out with the group. When safely out of view, she says
"Okay,whats your plan now?"
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"Dad, I'll be right back. I need to speak to my servant about proper behavior."
Archie: "A servant? It seems as if I raised you well. Go on."
Poke: *Leaves room*
"Isa.... Archie is my Dad. So I have free access throughout, since you're my servant I may be able to give you access as well."
*Hands Isa a card*
"This can get you around throughout the day. I want you to go check on my Pokemon. They are guarding my room and my sister's room. Then I want you to investigate. My plan is just to scare ROGUE off. We can use this place, since I know where everything is. Got it?"
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"But your room is gaurded by pokemon. How will they know I came by your orders?"
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

*Hands item to Isa*
"Give this to Minun. He'll know, and tell the others. Don't be surprised if he puts it on either, now, I gotta go."
*Goes back into main control room*
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"Gotcha."
Ralts, give me a path to where you are?
She takes the mental trail that her pokemon gives her.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"Hey Dad, I'm back."
Archie: "So, how did you get that servant anyway?"
Poke: "I'm rich. Through the ways you taught me."
Archie: "That's great. Now, you probably need to leave soon, so I need a favor."
*Grabs picture*
"This is a picture of two people who have been causing trouble for me. Their names are Joey and Isa. Isa used to work for us, after we built her, but she but got away, and I need her back. If you see Joey, kill him"
Poke: "Of course Dad. See you soon."
*Leaves room.*
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

*Jessie blushes* Jessie: "Umm... yeah, James went with Cassidy. We are here to lure you into our trap."
Butch: "At least I can work with her!" *Gets pokeball, but...*
Xatu: *Uses Telepathy to show the pokeball is a net* "TUTUTUTUTTUTU! XATUUUUUU!*
And so, Jessie and Butch were sent FAR FAR AWAY.
Me: "Okay then... Ready to go guys?"
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

OoC: Umm... Skyshield.... you realize you are in the gym plot, yes?
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

*Goes to my room and J's room*
"I'm back guys, now we wait."
*Packs up stuff from my room*
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Joeypals!! said:
OoC: Umm... Skyshield.... you realize you are in the gym plot, yes?
OOC: Oh I thought everyone was on the same track.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Rudy looks around, and suddenly realized he'd been split up from the rest of the ROUGE fighters.

"Great. Oh well, I guess it would be better this way."

Rudy tosses out two Poke balls, "Buizel! Quilava!"

A Buizel and a Quilava come out of the balls, "Ok guys, I don't know how to maneuver through this airship, but I think it would be a good idea if we found some schematics. But first, we have to draw attention."

Rudy looks up, and sees a pipe. "Quilava! Use Ember on that iron pipe to melt it!"

Quilava shoots fire up onto the pipe. "Now, we just wait for someone to notice."
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"All right, I am going to the stream. Follow me if you want." Man, I wish Isa were here right now...
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"Just incase the plan doesn't work, I want to keep a couple things."
*Grabs a picture, a Jirachi Plush, and a Dream Catcher*
"Isa, hurry up, I need you here so we can start our plan."
*Looks around*
"I wish Joey were here."
OoC: Joey, can I keep the Minun, or does he have to die or leave like the Gyrados?
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

OoC: I will allow it this time as you only have four pokemon. Name it's level. It has to be from 20-31. Please make it reasonable.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

OoC: Minun will be Level 26
IC: *Looks at Sis's room*
"It's been so long."
*Steps inside Sis's room*
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

OoC: Never mind. I read Isa instead for some reason. You have 5, so no.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"Come on, Culex! Now that the guards are down, let's try and take over the control room." Samuel starts to walk down a hallway, and spots a door. Samuel opens a door, and there is a closet inside. "One second, Culex." He takes their knocked out ROGUE captive inside the colset, then comes back out wearing a ROGUE uniform. "Culex, pretend your my captive."
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Rudy waited in silence as a man came into the corridor.

"Great, this pipe must have suddenly combusted. Let me just check my schematics." said the ROUGE grunt.



"Buizel, quick, use Aqua Jet on him!"

The Buizel engulfed itself in water, and charged at the ROUGE grunt.
He hit his head at the wall, and fell unconcious.

"Thank you." said Rudy as he took the schematics of the airship.

"Buizel, Grovyle, get rid of the evidence."

Rudy looked down at the schematics, "Well, let's see, the control room seems to be far in the front, and I seem to be on the top of this thing. There's got to be a weak point."

Rudy studies the plans further, and notices something interesting.

"Of course! This airship is staying afloat by fire, and they're using fire Pokemon to get it. If I'm right, the Boiling Room should be down at the base. Ready Buizel? Aqua Jet!"

Rudy and the Buizel speed off to the base.
 
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