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Chapter 4!! A Shocking Suprise!!
Chapter 4!! A Shocking Suprise!!
Writing Ash's Adventure
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Ash's Adventure Chapter 4 A Shocking Suprise!
Ash and his Pikachu were walking along 202 when they saw an injured Chimchar followed by some menacing looking Furret: One with really cool Shades and the others Shiny with Matching Pink Shades. Ash and Pikachu immediatly jumped into battle position.
"Let's see what moves you know. I know you know Volt Tackle but the recoil will KO you. Umm-"
The head Furret used Tackle on the Chimchar while the others surrounded Chimchar. Ash immediatly sprang up an Idea.
" Pikachu! Link Thundershock! Lets Go!"
Pikachu used Headbutt on The Furret like a Domino Line and one grabbed his tail ant then He used Thunderbolt creating a Ring of thunder. Meanwhile,at home Ash and Dawn looked out the window and when they saw the Thunder, they both said,"Ash." . When Ash finished off the Furret he picked up the Chimchar and ran home quicky for his mom to heal Chimchar.(I will finish this later) Ash returned to route 202 only to be attacked by a Piplup while returning Chimchar. Pikachu automatically used Thundershock and Piplup had one HP left and then Ash threw two Pokeballs by accident one at the two starters Piplup was almost caught while Chimchar deflected the Ball wanting a battle so he can be caught fairly. Ash,Piplup, and Chimchar were about to battle when... they were attacked by a raging Riolu. Riolu jumped out of the sky throwing Aura Spheres everywhere and every one hitting Piplup, Pikachu, and Chimchar. When Riolu landed, he charged and aimed a Aura Sphere at Pikachu and landed a direct hit that made Pikachu fly through 20 trees.Then Piplup and Chimchar jumped Riolu from the sides and Riolu used Force Palm and used the Aura to stick them to his paws/hands and then released it in the air and they went flying.
"Guys!" I yelled .
"Piip!! Chimm!!" Chimchar came out of the sky spiraling while using Flame Wheel,while Piplup used Bide.
Out of nowhere Chimchar headed for Piplup and it caused a direct hit. Chimchar bounced off Piplup and flew to the area where Pikachu was. When Piplup landed he grabbed hold of Riolu and released bide causing a critical hit. i threw a pokeball at Riolu and I accidentally threw ttwo and they hit both pokemon. Both Pokemon where instantly were caught. I saw A fire electricity ball come out from The trees followed by a bunch off Starly and Bidoof. A I instantly took out Piplup and Riolu while I headed for route 203. Riolu tried to aim a aura sphere at me while Piplup attacked it with Peck knocking it out accidentally..
"Piplup,you klutz," I said to Piplup.
Piplup puffed out its chest while looking embarressed.Piplup was really a Jolly pokemon. Piplup and I ventured deep into route 203 and sooner we found Pikachu all bruised up using Charge while Chimchar was using Ember while he was being pecked at by Starly and being tackeled by Bidoofs . I ran over to Pikachu and fed it a Oran Berry Piplup went alongside Chimchar and talked to hi m for a little bit then threw a water gun at the sky. Chimchar nodded then went under a tree and Piplup went up inside a a tree and used Flame Wheel inside the tree causing it to tip over while Piplup climbed up to the canopy of a tree silently. The Starly and Bidoof are about to fight Chimchar and Chimchar used Flame wheel on itself to boost its fire type moves. Riolu finally woke up and was in a rage while chasing Chimchar through the woods and finally caught up to him. Riolu used force palm and sent Chimchar flying through Jubilife City’s TV Department’s windows into the Pokemon School. Riolu chased Chimchar through the walls and caught up to Chimchar while charging an Aura Sphere… Riolu was about to hit Chimchar when…
“PIKA-Chu!”
Meanwhile,5 minutes ago… Pikachu and I ran up to the wild Pokemon and Pikachu used Link Thunder on the Starly while Piplup used Water Gun to fill the hole the tree made that the Bidoof where standing in and the Starly where flying over. When the Starly fell into the water electrocuted and paralyzed electrocuted the Bidoof causing an explosion that dried up the water. Piplup, Pikachu ran into Jubilife after Chimchar and Riolu.
Chapter 4:A Shocking Suprise!!!
[align=center]Ash and his Pikachu were walking along 202 when they saw an injured Chimchar followed by some menacing looking Furret: One with really cool Shades and the others Shiny with Matching Pink Shades. Ash and Pikachu immediatly jumped into battle position.
"Let's see what moves you know. I know you know Volt Tackle but the recoil will KO you. Umm-"
The head Furret used Tackle on the Chimchar while the others surrounded Chimchar. Ash immediatly sprang up an Idea.
" Pikachu! Link Thundershock! Lets Go!"
Pikachu used Headbutt on The Furret like a Domino Line and one grabbed his tail ant then He used Thunderbolt creating a Ring of thunder. Meanwhile,at home Ash and Dawn looked out the window and when they saw the Thunder, they both said,"Ash." . When Ash finished off the Furret he picked up the Chimchar and ran home quicky for his mom to heal Chimchar.(I will finish this later) Ash returned to route 202 only to be attacked by a Piplup while returning Chimchar. Pikachu automatically used Thundershock and Piplup had one HP left and then Ash threw two Pokeballs by accident one at the two starters Piplup was almost caught while Chimchar deflected the Ball wanting a battle so he can be caught fairly. Ash,Piplup, and Chimchar were about to battle when... they were attacked by a raging Riolu. Riolu jumped out of the sky throwing Aura Spheres everywhere and every one hitting Piplup, Pikachu, and Chimchar. When Riolu landed, he charged and aimed a Aura Sphere at Pikachu and landed a direct hit that made Pikachu fly through 20 trees.Then Piplup and Chimchar jumped Riolu from the sides and Riolu used Force Palm and used the Aura to stick them to his paws/hands and then released it in the air and they went flying.
"Guys!" I yelled .
"Piip!! Chimm!!" Chimchar came out of the sky spiraling while using Flame Wheel,while Piplup used Bide.
Out of nowhere Chimchar headed for Piplup and it caused a direct hit. Chimchar bounced off Piplup and flew to the area where Pikachu was. When Piplup landed he grabbed hold of Riolu and released bide causing a critical hit. i threw a pokeball at Riolu and I accidentally threw ttwo and they hit both pokemon. Both Pokemon where instantly were caught. I saw A fire electricity ball come out from The trees followed by a bunch off Starly and Bidoof. A I instantly took out Piplup and Riolu while I headed for route 203. Riolu tried to aim a aura sphere at me while Piplup attacked it with Peck knocking it out accidentally..
"Piplup,you klutz," I said to Piplup.
Piplup puffed out its chest while looking embarressed.Piplup was really a Jolly pokemon. Piplup and I ventured deep into route 203 and sooner we found Pikachu all bruised up using Charge while Chimchar was using Ember while he was being pecked at by Starly and being tackeled by Bidoofs . I ran over to Pikachu and fed it a Oran Berry Piplup went alongside Chimchar and talked to hi m for a little bit then threw a water gun at the sky. Chimchar nodded then went under a tree and Piplup went up inside a a tree and used Flame Wheel inside the tree causing it to tip over while Piplup climbed up to the canopy of a tree silently. The Starly and Bidoof are about to fight Chimchar and Chimchar used Flame wheel on itself to boost its fire type moves. Riolu finally woke up and was in a rage while chasing Chimchar through the woods and finally caught up to him. Riolu used force palm and sent Chimchar flying through Jubilife City’s TV Department’s windows into the Pokemon School. Riolu chased Chimchar through the walls and caught up to Chimchar while charging an Aura Sphere… Riolu was about to hit Chimchar when…
“PIKA-Chu!”
Meanwhile,5 minutes ago… Pikachu and I ran up to the wild Pokemon and Pikachu used Link Thunder on the Starly while Piplup used Water Gun to fill the hole the tree made that the Bidoof where standing in and the Starly where flying over. When the Starly fell into the water electrocuted and paralyzed electrocuted the Bidoof causing an explosion that dried up the water. Piplup, Pikachu ran into Jubilife after Chimchar and Riolu.
Dawn and Ash ran up to see their son battling a wild Chimchar. Dawn wonders why a wild starter would be running around...
Just then, a robotic hand came down and grabbed the Chimchar!
Just then, a robotic hand came down and grabbed the Chimchar!
I will take that but please dont finish it ok?Nice input though.
wow wow wow, slow down. You jump around too fast , and you use dialogue wrong.
also I did not understand chapter one at all ,I read most of it and I got so confused.
also I did not understand chapter one at all ,I read most of it and I got so confused.
Yah, No slowing down.
Ash gets a shiny Pikachu, says hi, and runs to another town.
lol this is no-descriptive
Ash gets a shiny Pikachu, says hi, and runs to another town.
lol this is no-descriptive
PimpRaichuKing said:
Sorry I am trying to Improve this is my first Fanfic I didnt want him to go to Sandgem town yet.
Eh, for a first it's pretty good, but SLOW DOWN PLEEZ.
Ok I am trying to add detail and stuff.
I told you to add detail and make the chapters more descripitive. At least I'm not the only one who's saying that
I am look at your first fanfic or the new Dawn rated pg 13 That had no detail.
Because you know people who create their first-fan fic either:
1. Go through the story to fast
2. Have no detail
Since then, I've gotten better with putting detail into my stories...
1. Go through the story to fast
2. Have no detail
Since then, I've gotten better with putting detail into my stories...
I will do my best to add more detail.
I updated Chapter 4
The story so far…
Ash's Adventure
Chapter 1 The Start of a new Beginning.
It is Ash's tenth birthday and it has been 10 days since he has heard from Lugia about anyone. It was a dark day.It was the brightest day of the year on earth,but also the darkest. Ash felt a chill in the air,but that wont stop him from starting his pokemon journey. His mom and dad were out on urgent buisness and had to go to Kanto,Orre,Hoenn,and Johto. Ash did not know why but Lugia might know. Ash went and asked Lugia why. His father left him an egg to start with but it has yet to hatch. Ash was out on his way to talk to Lugia,said bye to Pikachu and Pachirisu,grabbed the egg, and headed out. Ash went and asked Lugia but he said it was the work of Darkrai and he needed to help someone somewhere urgently.
"But who is it?" asked Ash."
Lugia answered,"Even I do not know but I can give you a hint,It will bear your first Pokemon.Now go and save your first Pokemon!"
Ash knew exactly where to find Darkrai,Alamos Town. His father has spoke of it many times.
"But why would Darkrai do such a thing?!" Ash thought to himself as he headed back home. Ash knew the only way to get there was by flying.
Ash ran into his father's room and grabbed a certain pokeball and headded out the door.
"Go Staraptor!"
"Star-r-r-raptor!" cried a Staraptor as it was released from its pokeball.
"Staraptor, I need you to fly me to Alamos Town Stat!"
Staraptor flew Ash to Alamos Town in a minute and then it returned back home...to get a snack then to come back to Alamos.
"Now to find Darkrai!"
Time for chapter 1 part 2!
Ash stepped into Alamos Town to notice one thing: He found a Shiny Ho-oh Pummeled into the ground with everything ablaze. Darkrai was descending from the sky to see Ash. Dialga and Palkia were fighting Groudon and Kyogre(????) As all of the Legendaries were badly injured. I started taking a step toward everyone before running but Darkrai threw a Shadow ball at me. Darkrai and I have known each other for 7 years but why all of a sudden he attacked me for nothing.
"What was that for!"I shouted at Darkrai.
Darkrai said,"Look."as he pointed at my feet.
I looked to find aan egg at my feet.
"An egg?Who's is it?"I asked Darkrai.
"Ho-oh's"Darkrai said.
I looked at the Ho-oh who was trying to move to its egg.I nudged the egg to Ho-oh.
"Th-Th-Thank you." the Ho-oh said as it tried to grasp its egg.
"Your welcome." I said with a smile on my face.
I then looked at the Time and Space Towers. Once long ago Mom and Dad saved this place when they were eleven. My egg cracked in its case and I thought it would hatch. I wondered who is my first pokemon??? I looked at the Legendaries who looked like they were so dead they were alive.
I asked Darkrai," What happenned?"
Darkrai replied," Dialga and Palkia got into it. Rayquaza assigned Groudon and Kyogre to stop this nonseless. Then both teams got into it. Thats when I stepped into it. But Ho-oh stepped in the way of my Shadow Ball and you can see what happened."
"What was Ho-oh doing here?" I asked.
"I was here to show Darkrai my egg and and asked him to watch it for a while." Ho-oh replied.
The Ho-oh's egg cracked and opened. When the egg opened,a ray of light flew out and a baby Shiny Ho oh- came out from the ray along with a normal baby Ho-oh.
"I thought Legendaries only have one baby per egg" I said.
"They do. Only except with Shinies.(soo not true) When I shiny pokemon is born, an exact clone is born." Darkrai said.
I thought about it for a moment,then another,then another,then I was thinking for 5 minutes.I wondered, "Me? Have a baby Ho-oh? Noooooo. Yes. Noo. YES... Noo. Ok yes." Suddenly, Dialga came up and used Roar of Time on everyone while Palkia used Spacial Rend causing a dimensional rip and time to slow doowwnn.. By then Kyogre and Groudon have awoken and they continue fighting.Groudon uses Fissure causing a massive earthquake and Dialga falls into the fissure along with Palkia. Kyogre uses Sheer Cold to try and KO them but they come out of the Fissure. The Angry Legendaries are all about to attack us when...
"Go, Gliscor! Go, Floatzel!"
"Go,Ambipom! Go,Mamoswine!"
Lets Go!
Gliscor, Floatzel, Ambipom, and Mamoswine spiraled out of the sky and landed in the middle of the four Legendaries. Mamoswine used Earthquake as soon it hit the ground, causing a huge earthquake ; regular power + fall impact + Fissure + slow motion=owwie ;It instantly Ko'ed Dialga, almost Ko'ed Palkia, Barely touched Kyogre, and normal hit Groudon. Dialga flew through the dimensional rip and the time sped up again. Ash Jumped down from the time tower, while Dawn jumped down from the Space Tower. I noticed Mom and Dad and wondered, " What are Mom and Dad doing here?"
He looked up and saw his mom and his dad jump down from the two towers
"Mom, Dad? What are you doing here?" he asked
"We're here to help you, dear!" Dawn said, looking at her son, smiling. He took a quick look at his parents. His mom had long, flowing blue hair that was still pinned by the three yellow hair clips. She still wore a mini-skirt, although it was longer than the one she wore when she was younger. His father has spiky black hair that was tamed by a cap. He still had Pikachu, although it was a bit slower after spending all these years with him. But he knew Pikachu was the strongest Pokemon Ash owned. It could even take down an Arcues if Ash tried
"Gliscor, use Poison Fang! And Floatzel use Hydro Pump!" Ash ordered. Gliscors' fangs shown with a purple light. It swooped it and chomped Kyogre. Kyogre furiously shook, trying to knock Gliscor off. But instead, the trashing caused Gliscor's fangs to dive in deeper, seeping out it's poison. It then pulled out it's fangs and flew back to Ash. But then Kyogre launched a Hydro Pump at Gliscor
"Mamoswine, use Ice Beam to freeze the water!" Dawn ordered, Her Mamoswine launched an Ice Beam that froze the Water. Meanwhile, Floatzel blasted Water at Groudon. Then Kyogre launched a Hydro Pump of it's own
"They're evenly matched!" Ash said, shocked. Just then, Pikachu, undetected, climbed on top of Kyogre
"Ash! Look!" Dawn shouted, pointing to Pikachu
"Pikachu, use Thunder!" Ash ordered. Pikachu launched a Thunder that instantly KO'ed Kyogre. Because Kyogre got Knocked Out, Floatzel's Hydro Pump hit Groudon. It fell to the ground and it too was Knocked Out
"Wow!" Little Ash said, impressed at his parents. Just then, Dawn pulled out a Poke Ball
"Here this is for you" Dawn said, "Consider it a late birthday present". He opened the Poke Ball and a shiny Pikachu appeared
"We caught it for you to start your journey just like your father did!" Dawn replied, latching an arm around Ash's and looked at him
"Thanks!" he said and ran off to the next town
"Go, Pikachu!" Ash said.
An orange-tinted yellow mouse resemblense pokemon came out. "Pi-ka-chuuu!" The happy Pikachu exclaimed.
"What should I call you? Hmmm."
"Pi-Pika-Chu." The Pikachu said.
"I guess your still Pikachu, then."
"Pi-ka-chu."
"Hey, Pikachu, lets go see Mom and Dad before leaving.
Ash and Pikachu headed out to Twinleaf Town to their house and found 2 strangers. Ash ran up to the strangers . One Stranger was wearing a bandana similar to Dad's and white gloves with blue fingertips. The other one was wearing a yellow shirt with Jean Shorts as overalls with a Togekiss by her side. I ran to Dad and asked him, "Dad,who are these ladies?" Before Dad could reply, One stranger said, "Dad?Inner May,"Dang,I should have asked him on that date after the contest"".Dad replied, "Yea,my son Ash. He just started his adventure." I said,"Are these friends of yours Dad?"
Ash said, "Yes. These are the girls I traveled with before I met and fell in love with your mother". She picked up Dawn and she giggled and squealed with joy. Seeing this, the two young ladies left, obiviously mad at Ash...
Chapter 4:A Shocking Suprise!!!
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Ash and his Pikachu were walking along 202 when they saw an injured Chimchar followed by some menacing looking Furret: One with really cool Shades and the others Shiny with Matching Pink Shades. Ash and Pikachu immediatly jumped into battle position.
"Let's see what moves you know. I know you know Volt Tackle but the recoil will KO you. Umm-"
The head Furret used Tackle on the Chimchar while the others surrounded Chimchar. Ash immediatly sprang up an Idea.
" Pikachu! Link Thundershock! Lets Go!"
Pikachu used Headbutt on The Furret like a Domino Line and one grabbed his tail ant then He used Thunderbolt creating a Ring of thunder. Meanwhile,at home Ash and Dawn looked out the window and when they saw the Thunder, they both said,"Ash." . When Ash finished off the Furret he picked up the Chimchar and ran home quicky for his mom to heal Chimchar.(I will finish this later) Ash returned to route 202 only to be attacked by a Piplup while returning Chimchar. Pikachu automatically used Thundershock and Piplup had one HP left and then Ash threw two Pokeballs by accident one at the two starters Piplup was almost caught while Chimchar deflected the Ball wanting a battle so he can be caught fairly. Ash,Piplup, and Chimchar were about to battle when... they were attacked by a raging Riolu. Riolu jumped out of the sky throwing Aura Spheres everywhere and every one hitting Piplup, Pikachu, and Chimchar. When Riolu landed, he charged and aimed a Aura Sphere at Pikachu and landed a direct hit that made Pikachu fly through 20 trees.Then Piplup and Chimchar jumped Riolu from the sides and Riolu used Force Palm and used the Aura to stick them to his paws/hands and then released it in the air and they went flying.
"Guys!" I yelled .
"Piip!! Chimm!!" Chimchar came out of the sky spiraling while using Flame Wheel,while Piplup used Bide.
Out of nowhere Chimchar headed for Piplup and it caused a direct hit. Chimchar bounced off Piplup and flew to the area where Pikachu was. When Piplup landed he grabbed hold of Riolu and released bide causing a critical hit. I threw a pokeball at Riolu and I accidentally threw ttwo and they hit both pokemon. Both Pokemon where instantly were caught. I saw A fire electricity ball come out from The trees followed by a bunch off Starly and Bidoof. A I instantly took out Piplup and Riolu while I headed for route 203. Riolu tried to aim a aura sphere at me while Piplup attacked it with Peck knocking it out accidentally..
"Piplup,you klutz," I said to Piplup.
Piplup puffed out its chest while looking embarressed.Piplup was really a Jolly pokemon. Piplup and I ventured deep into route 203 and sooner we found Pikachu all bruised up using Charge while Chimchar was using Ember while he was being pecked at by Starly and being tackeled by Bidoofs . I ran over to Pikachu and fed it a Oran Berry Piplup went alongside Chimchar and talked to hi m for a little bit then threw a water gun at the sky. Chimchar nodded then went under a tree and Piplup went up inside a a tree and used Flame Wheel inside the tree causing it to tip over while Piplup climbed up to the canopy of a tree silently. The Starly and Bidoof are about to fight Chimchar and Chimchar used Flame wheel on itself to boost its fire type moves. Riolu finally woke up and was in a rage while chasing Chimchar through the woods and finally caught up to him. Riolu used force palm and sent Chimchar flying through Jubilife City’s TV Department’s windows into the Pokemon School. Riolu chased Chimchar through the walls and caught up to Chimchar while charging an Aura Sphere… Riolu was about to hit Chimchar when…
“PIKA-Chu!”
Meanwhile,5 minutes ago… Pikachu and I ran up to the wild Pokemon and Pikachu used Link Thunder on the Starly while Piplup used Water Gun to fill the hole the tree made that the Bidoof where standing in and the Starly where flying over. When the Starly fell into the water electrocuted and paralyzed electrocuted the Bidoof causing an explosion that dried up the water. Piplup, Pikachu ran into Jubilife after Chimchar and Riolu.
Ash's Adventure
Chapter 1 The Start of a new Beginning.
It is Ash's tenth birthday and it has been 10 days since he has heard from Lugia about anyone. It was a dark day.It was the brightest day of the year on earth,but also the darkest. Ash felt a chill in the air,but that wont stop him from starting his pokemon journey. His mom and dad were out on urgent buisness and had to go to Kanto,Orre,Hoenn,and Johto. Ash did not know why but Lugia might know. Ash went and asked Lugia why. His father left him an egg to start with but it has yet to hatch. Ash was out on his way to talk to Lugia,said bye to Pikachu and Pachirisu,grabbed the egg, and headed out. Ash went and asked Lugia but he said it was the work of Darkrai and he needed to help someone somewhere urgently.
"But who is it?" asked Ash."
Lugia answered,"Even I do not know but I can give you a hint,It will bear your first Pokemon.Now go and save your first Pokemon!"
Ash knew exactly where to find Darkrai,Alamos Town. His father has spoke of it many times.
"But why would Darkrai do such a thing?!" Ash thought to himself as he headed back home. Ash knew the only way to get there was by flying.
Ash ran into his father's room and grabbed a certain pokeball and headded out the door.
"Go Staraptor!"
"Star-r-r-raptor!" cried a Staraptor as it was released from its pokeball.
"Staraptor, I need you to fly me to Alamos Town Stat!"
Staraptor flew Ash to Alamos Town in a minute and then it returned back home...to get a snack then to come back to Alamos.
"Now to find Darkrai!"
Time for chapter 1 part 2!
Ash stepped into Alamos Town to notice one thing: He found a Shiny Ho-oh Pummeled into the ground with everything ablaze. Darkrai was descending from the sky to see Ash. Dialga and Palkia were fighting Groudon and Kyogre(????) As all of the Legendaries were badly injured. I started taking a step toward everyone before running but Darkrai threw a Shadow ball at me. Darkrai and I have known each other for 7 years but why all of a sudden he attacked me for nothing.
"What was that for!"I shouted at Darkrai.
Darkrai said,"Look."as he pointed at my feet.
I looked to find aan egg at my feet.
"An egg?Who's is it?"I asked Darkrai.
"Ho-oh's"Darkrai said.
I looked at the Ho-oh who was trying to move to its egg.I nudged the egg to Ho-oh.
"Th-Th-Thank you." the Ho-oh said as it tried to grasp its egg.
"Your welcome." I said with a smile on my face.
I then looked at the Time and Space Towers. Once long ago Mom and Dad saved this place when they were eleven. My egg cracked in its case and I thought it would hatch. I wondered who is my first pokemon??? I looked at the Legendaries who looked like they were so dead they were alive.
I asked Darkrai," What happenned?"
Darkrai replied," Dialga and Palkia got into it. Rayquaza assigned Groudon and Kyogre to stop this nonseless. Then both teams got into it. Thats when I stepped into it. But Ho-oh stepped in the way of my Shadow Ball and you can see what happened."
"What was Ho-oh doing here?" I asked.
"I was here to show Darkrai my egg and and asked him to watch it for a while." Ho-oh replied.
The Ho-oh's egg cracked and opened. When the egg opened,a ray of light flew out and a baby Shiny Ho oh- came out from the ray along with a normal baby Ho-oh.
"I thought Legendaries only have one baby per egg" I said.
"They do. Only except with Shinies.(soo not true) When I shiny pokemon is born, an exact clone is born." Darkrai said.
I thought about it for a moment,then another,then another,then I was thinking for 5 minutes.I wondered, "Me? Have a baby Ho-oh? Noooooo. Yes. Noo. YES... Noo. Ok yes." Suddenly, Dialga came up and used Roar of Time on everyone while Palkia used Spacial Rend causing a dimensional rip and time to slow doowwnn.. By then Kyogre and Groudon have awoken and they continue fighting.Groudon uses Fissure causing a massive earthquake and Dialga falls into the fissure along with Palkia. Kyogre uses Sheer Cold to try and KO them but they come out of the Fissure. The Angry Legendaries are all about to attack us when...
"Go, Gliscor! Go, Floatzel!"
"Go,Ambipom! Go,Mamoswine!"
Lets Go!
Gliscor, Floatzel, Ambipom, and Mamoswine spiraled out of the sky and landed in the middle of the four Legendaries. Mamoswine used Earthquake as soon it hit the ground, causing a huge earthquake ; regular power + fall impact + Fissure + slow motion=owwie ;It instantly Ko'ed Dialga, almost Ko'ed Palkia, Barely touched Kyogre, and normal hit Groudon. Dialga flew through the dimensional rip and the time sped up again. Ash Jumped down from the time tower, while Dawn jumped down from the Space Tower. I noticed Mom and Dad and wondered, " What are Mom and Dad doing here?"
He looked up and saw his mom and his dad jump down from the two towers
"Mom, Dad? What are you doing here?" he asked
"We're here to help you, dear!" Dawn said, looking at her son, smiling. He took a quick look at his parents. His mom had long, flowing blue hair that was still pinned by the three yellow hair clips. She still wore a mini-skirt, although it was longer than the one she wore when she was younger. His father has spiky black hair that was tamed by a cap. He still had Pikachu, although it was a bit slower after spending all these years with him. But he knew Pikachu was the strongest Pokemon Ash owned. It could even take down an Arcues if Ash tried
"Gliscor, use Poison Fang! And Floatzel use Hydro Pump!" Ash ordered. Gliscors' fangs shown with a purple light. It swooped it and chomped Kyogre. Kyogre furiously shook, trying to knock Gliscor off. But instead, the trashing caused Gliscor's fangs to dive in deeper, seeping out it's poison. It then pulled out it's fangs and flew back to Ash. But then Kyogre launched a Hydro Pump at Gliscor
"Mamoswine, use Ice Beam to freeze the water!" Dawn ordered, Her Mamoswine launched an Ice Beam that froze the Water. Meanwhile, Floatzel blasted Water at Groudon. Then Kyogre launched a Hydro Pump of it's own
"They're evenly matched!" Ash said, shocked. Just then, Pikachu, undetected, climbed on top of Kyogre
"Ash! Look!" Dawn shouted, pointing to Pikachu
"Pikachu, use Thunder!" Ash ordered. Pikachu launched a Thunder that instantly KO'ed Kyogre. Because Kyogre got Knocked Out, Floatzel's Hydro Pump hit Groudon. It fell to the ground and it too was Knocked Out
"Wow!" Little Ash said, impressed at his parents. Just then, Dawn pulled out a Poke Ball
"Here this is for you" Dawn said, "Consider it a late birthday present". He opened the Poke Ball and a shiny Pikachu appeared
"We caught it for you to start your journey just like your father did!" Dawn replied, latching an arm around Ash's and looked at him
"Thanks!" he said and ran off to the next town
"Go, Pikachu!" Ash said.
An orange-tinted yellow mouse resemblense pokemon came out. "Pi-ka-chuuu!" The happy Pikachu exclaimed.
"What should I call you? Hmmm."
"Pi-Pika-Chu." The Pikachu said.
"I guess your still Pikachu, then."
"Pi-ka-chu."
"Hey, Pikachu, lets go see Mom and Dad before leaving.
Ash and Pikachu headed out to Twinleaf Town to their house and found 2 strangers. Ash ran up to the strangers . One Stranger was wearing a bandana similar to Dad's and white gloves with blue fingertips. The other one was wearing a yellow shirt with Jean Shorts as overalls with a Togekiss by her side. I ran to Dad and asked him, "Dad,who are these ladies?" Before Dad could reply, One stranger said, "Dad?Inner May,"Dang,I should have asked him on that date after the contest"".Dad replied, "Yea,my son Ash. He just started his adventure." I said,"Are these friends of yours Dad?"
Ash said, "Yes. These are the girls I traveled with before I met and fell in love with your mother". She picked up Dawn and she giggled and squealed with joy. Seeing this, the two young ladies left, obiviously mad at Ash...
Chapter 4:A Shocking Suprise!!!
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Ash and his Pikachu were walking along 202 when they saw an injured Chimchar followed by some menacing looking Furret: One with really cool Shades and the others Shiny with Matching Pink Shades. Ash and Pikachu immediatly jumped into battle position.
"Let's see what moves you know. I know you know Volt Tackle but the recoil will KO you. Umm-"
The head Furret used Tackle on the Chimchar while the others surrounded Chimchar. Ash immediatly sprang up an Idea.
" Pikachu! Link Thundershock! Lets Go!"
Pikachu used Headbutt on The Furret like a Domino Line and one grabbed his tail ant then He used Thunderbolt creating a Ring of thunder. Meanwhile,at home Ash and Dawn looked out the window and when they saw the Thunder, they both said,"Ash." . When Ash finished off the Furret he picked up the Chimchar and ran home quicky for his mom to heal Chimchar.(I will finish this later) Ash returned to route 202 only to be attacked by a Piplup while returning Chimchar. Pikachu automatically used Thundershock and Piplup had one HP left and then Ash threw two Pokeballs by accident one at the two starters Piplup was almost caught while Chimchar deflected the Ball wanting a battle so he can be caught fairly. Ash,Piplup, and Chimchar were about to battle when... they were attacked by a raging Riolu. Riolu jumped out of the sky throwing Aura Spheres everywhere and every one hitting Piplup, Pikachu, and Chimchar. When Riolu landed, he charged and aimed a Aura Sphere at Pikachu and landed a direct hit that made Pikachu fly through 20 trees.Then Piplup and Chimchar jumped Riolu from the sides and Riolu used Force Palm and used the Aura to stick them to his paws/hands and then released it in the air and they went flying.
"Guys!" I yelled .
"Piip!! Chimm!!" Chimchar came out of the sky spiraling while using Flame Wheel,while Piplup used Bide.
Out of nowhere Chimchar headed for Piplup and it caused a direct hit. Chimchar bounced off Piplup and flew to the area where Pikachu was. When Piplup landed he grabbed hold of Riolu and released bide causing a critical hit. I threw a pokeball at Riolu and I accidentally threw ttwo and they hit both pokemon. Both Pokemon where instantly were caught. I saw A fire electricity ball come out from The trees followed by a bunch off Starly and Bidoof. A I instantly took out Piplup and Riolu while I headed for route 203. Riolu tried to aim a aura sphere at me while Piplup attacked it with Peck knocking it out accidentally..
"Piplup,you klutz," I said to Piplup.
Piplup puffed out its chest while looking embarressed.Piplup was really a Jolly pokemon. Piplup and I ventured deep into route 203 and sooner we found Pikachu all bruised up using Charge while Chimchar was using Ember while he was being pecked at by Starly and being tackeled by Bidoofs . I ran over to Pikachu and fed it a Oran Berry Piplup went alongside Chimchar and talked to hi m for a little bit then threw a water gun at the sky. Chimchar nodded then went under a tree and Piplup went up inside a a tree and used Flame Wheel inside the tree causing it to tip over while Piplup climbed up to the canopy of a tree silently. The Starly and Bidoof are about to fight Chimchar and Chimchar used Flame wheel on itself to boost its fire type moves. Riolu finally woke up and was in a rage while chasing Chimchar through the woods and finally caught up to him. Riolu used force palm and sent Chimchar flying through Jubilife City’s TV Department’s windows into the Pokemon School. Riolu chased Chimchar through the walls and caught up to Chimchar while charging an Aura Sphere… Riolu was about to hit Chimchar when…
“PIKA-Chu!”
Meanwhile,5 minutes ago… Pikachu and I ran up to the wild Pokemon and Pikachu used Link Thunder on the Starly while Piplup used Water Gun to fill the hole the tree made that the Bidoof where standing in and the Starly where flying over. When the Starly fell into the water electrocuted and paralyzed electrocuted the Bidoof causing an explosion that dried up the water. Piplup, Pikachu ran into Jubilife after Chimchar and Riolu.
I'll give you Chapter 5 here
As Ash ran up to Chimchar, Riolu was firing an Aura Sphere
"Stop!" he yelled. The Riolu turned around and Chimchar snuck up and used Scratch. The Riolu was sent flying backwards into the street
"Go Poke Ball!" he yelled, throwing a Poke Ball at the Riolu. The Poke Ball sucked the Riolu it and rocked a couple of times and stopped. He picked up the Poke Ball and Piplup, Chimchar and Pikachu and headed to the Pokemon Center
As he exited he met a boy with dark brown hair
"What a pathetic team you've got there" the boy said
"Excuse me? Do you know how I am?" he replied
"No, but I don't care!' the boy replied. This made Ash very angry
"I don't have time for this!" Ash replied, storming away
Could this dark brown-haired boy be a new rival?
As Ash ran up to Chimchar, Riolu was firing an Aura Sphere
"Stop!" he yelled. The Riolu turned around and Chimchar snuck up and used Scratch. The Riolu was sent flying backwards into the street
"Go Poke Ball!" he yelled, throwing a Poke Ball at the Riolu. The Poke Ball sucked the Riolu it and rocked a couple of times and stopped. He picked up the Poke Ball and Piplup, Chimchar and Pikachu and headed to the Pokemon Center
As he exited he met a boy with dark brown hair
"What a pathetic team you've got there" the boy said
"Excuse me? Do you know how I am?" he replied
"No, but I don't care!' the boy replied. This made Ash very angry
"I don't have time for this!" Ash replied, storming away
Could this dark brown-haired boy be a new rival?
Is that all?
Well, it's Saturday...it's hard to write incredibly long chapters on weekends. I do better on weekdays...
I got Chapter 6 (Ash will have at least 4 Pokemon before first gym.