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Noobnerd, SR AND Bacon love it? I am happy. Thanks guys! SR, you will be in the story for later, so expect to see/read about you. Many more good things to come guys! And Bacon/Scampy, those pics are funny.

"I watched him kill them all."
*pic of you smiling*

Lol haha great job.
 
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Lol at scampy's angry expression. Yeah, this story just got over 9000 times better with the reenactments.

dmaster out.
 
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Hahahaha bacon, that post is amazing, great chapter as well. I really enjoyed laughing and reading at the same time. ^_^
WP
 
RE: Ban Wars: Chapter One is up!

Thanks! Everyone, just telling you now, I am fairly busy tonight, tomorrow, and saturday night, so expect Chapter 2 up either: Saturday day(not likely, but it could happen), but most likely Sunday.
 
RE: Ban Wars: Chapter One is up!

Once again everyone, I feel terrible. I was working on it, then we had a power out, so I lost all the work on that chapter. Luckily, not much was lost so you can expect it to be up tomorrow night, or tuesday if I have a lot of homework monday. Once again, sorry for the inconvenience.
 
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~Beginning of Entry Three~

The dawn of morning soon shown through the tent, and I awoke, waking 42 chocolate. We packed up and began heading out again, but felt more of a chill in the air. I paid no mind, but we soon came upon a large hill. We marched to the top, and looked down into the valley below, in shock. It was covered in ice. A lone figure stood in the middle. I stared at him, and took the spear down from my horse. It soon began to shake violently, and I stared at it, trying to control it. The figure looked up, but his hood prevented me from seeing his face. He quickly lifted his hand and pointed it at us, and soon a massive wall of ice formed around the valley, trapping us inside. The spear continued to shake, and I hopped on my horse and ran down to him.

"Hey! What's the big idea?"

He didn't say anything, just stared at me. Soon, a strange blue shield with spikes appeared in his hand, and he threw off his hood.

"You have gone far enough Seth."

I stared at him and looked at 42 chocolate.

"Do you know who this guy is?"

"It-it-its-PMJ..."

"PMJ?!?"

42 chocolate nodded and pulled out his bow. My spear continued to shake, before lifting into the air, glowing. I stared at it as it flashed brilliantly, and transformed into a larger sword, with a brown handle, and half of a gear connecting to the blade, which was about five feet long. I grabbed it as it slowly came down.

"This reminds me of that sword from Final Fantasy Advent Children that Cloud uses! Doesn't it 42 chocolate?"

"Uh..."

"Right. Well whatever."

I got into a battle stance and turned to PMJ.

"We aren't going down without a fight!"

PMJ laughed quietly and grasped his shield, which slid onto his arm, with about 7 inches of it sticking out from beyond his hand. He smiled and lifted it into the air, creating a large ice berg from behind him. He jumped on top of it.

"Prepare to die!"

Battle music started to play as he lifted his finger, sending ice bergs shooting towards us. We barely dodged, and 42 chocolate unleashed a barrage of arrows at PMJ, who blocked them all effortlessly. He lifted his hands again, making large ice pillars appear out of the ground, moving towards us. I ran at them, jumping and using them to get closer to him, and I jumped into the air and tried to bring my sword down, but he swatted me away easily, making me drop my sword into the ice. He continued to send pillar after pillar towards 42 chocolate, who jumped and dodged and tried firing arrows.

I slowly stood and picked up my sword and ran around the back, running up the back side of the berg, until I was on top. I ran at PMJ, who spun and blocked my swing with his shield, and held it there, locking us in an equal push. 42 chocolate took the opportunity to tie a sack of gun powder to an arrow, light a small fuse and fire the arrow at the main ice berg, which exploded when it hit, shaking me and PMJ off.

"PMJ! Why are you attacking us?"

"It is my order to defeat you, you are a problem."

"I am just a normal member!"

"No. You are different. You have potential. So you must be eliminated."

I clutched my sword tighter and gritted my teeth.

"Well if you don't move, I will shove this potential so far up your-"

He laughed and pointed his shield at me, and the ground started to shake. I quickly ran at him, sword in hand, before bringing it down on his shield, and repeatedly striking at it, from different angles, hoping to break through his defense and hit him. Unable to do so, I went for the next best option, breaking his shield. I continued to pound on his shield, trying to get a scratch on it, until finally, I managed to create a slash running down the left side. He was infuriated, and he moved as if in slow motion before launching a massive pillar towards me, catching me in the gut, and sending me flying across the icy plain. I skidded to a stop and tried to stand, but was to weak.

"He-ouch."

I slowly stood again and started running at him, but naturally, I lost my balance and skidded right past him into a tree. He laughed at me, but I quickly spun and ran at him, slashing. He parried my attacks, slashing me with each counter, before I fell onto my knees, covered in gashes.

"Give up Seth?"

I spit on the ground in front of him and 42 chocolate stood farther back. He yelled to PMJ.

"...no..."

I tried to grab my sword and slash, but he dodged and hit me in the back, making me fall over onto all fours, panting. 42 chocolate fired a barrage of arrows to cover me, but PMJ blocked them.

"What makes him so damn good?"

"Duh-idiot-its his shield. It is protected with the power of ice-which is controlled form a crystal in his shield, but that is covered in layers of steel. He uses that to magnify his control over ice. So, you distract him, and make a crack in his shield where the crystal should be. Then, I fire an arrow at the crack, you smash it in, crystal shatters, he loses a lot of power, then you beat down on his shield and I will help by firing arrows, then, we win. Sound like a plan?"

"Yeah-good idea!"

I turned and charged at PMJ, who created a massive wall of ice crystals, turned them and fired them at me. I ran at them, but was smashed backwards by the force of them. 42 chocolate quickly pulled out his bow and lit multiple arrows on fire, shooting them at the crystals, shattering them. He loaded another round of arrows with incredible speed and fired them at PMJ, who blocked them again, but lost balance due to an arrow that went off course, giving 42 chocolate a clear shot at destroying the crystal. He fired, hitting the crystal, sticking the arrow in the center, but not breaking it. I stood, shook myself and grabbed my sword and held it tightly.

"42! Its time!"

I slowly ran at PMJ, trying to add drama to the moment. PMJ fired his attacks in slow motion, and 42 chocolate readied his arrow in slow motion. I started to run faster until I was at full speed, dodging barrages of crystals and ice pillars, before spinning and jumping off a pillar into the air, my sword blazing above my head. I swung it down, pushing the arrow in, breaking the crystal, launching PMJ backwards.

"What-what have you done to my shield?"

I smiled and ran at him, hitting his shield with all the force I could muster, while 42 chocolate fired strings of arrows, before finally hitting PMJ, causing him to fall to the ground.

"You-you wont defeat us! You have no idea what will be unleashed upon you! You cannot defeat the mods!"

PMJ laughed and slowly started to float into the air.

"42 chocolate! Shoot this at him!"

I tossed 42 chocolate my sword and ran towards PMJ, and jumped as 42 fired the arrow, managing to get behind PMJ midair and grabbed the sword as it passed through his body and use the force to spin it, slashing him painfully multiple times, before performing an uber combo on him cause I rok n00bs. He fell onto the ground, slowly disappearing.

"Seth1789110-you have made a grave mistake-soon-you will pay for your wrongdoings-he will get you-"

I turned with a slight look of alarm.

"Who? Who will get me?"

I put my sword to his neck.

"Talk!"

"Pr-"

PMJ disappeared soon after he muttered the first two letters, and I turned to 42 chocolate.

"Any ideas on who he was trying to say?"

"Nope. Sorry. Lets get to town. We need to hurry before more mods or members try to attack us."

"Right."

I went back to the horses and started to ride off, with the thought of the mystery mod PMJ spoke of.

~MEANWHILE~

"Sir-he seems to be a disturbance to our plans. Shall I dispose of the problem?"

No. Let him try to get as far as he can kekekekee.

"I HATE it when you do that."

Silence. Go. Monitor his progress. If you are so worried about him, send one of them after him. They will stop him in his tracks kekekekekee.

"But-what if he gets more friends? Allies? What if he finds the member army? Then he will be a big problem."

SILENCE! Do as I command! Kekekekekee.

"SERIOUSLY! Cut it OUT!"

...kekekeke-

"ALL RIGHT!"

The whiny man left without another word, but as soon as he left the room, he ordered a small garrison of soldiers to find me, and try to defeat me.

"42-this keeps bothering me. Who is that mod?"

"Probably someone who is unimportant. Someone who is liek never on."

"Right...do you liek mudkipz?"

"Imma charge ma laserz."

I laughed at the stupid meme interaction and looked forward, and noticed we came over a hill, and discovered the town was a large city, bustling with people.

"Why-are we here again 42?"

"Cause we need a larger team, more supplies, I am sick of the open fields."

"Right. Well-I guess we will be here a while then huh."

We slowly headed into the city, looking for an inn of sorts, but came across an old tavern instead. Feeling hungry, we both went inside, and sat down, looking around. Few people were inside, but a lone man sat at a bar, head covered in a hoodie. He stared at us from under his hood, and I decided to walk over to the bar next to him.

"Hiya. Names Seth. Seth1789110. And you?"

He didn't say a word, merely staring at me. I felt as though I knew him, but obviously could not know for sure without his name. After a long while he finally spoke.

"You're...Seth1789110?"

"Yeah...what of it?"

"I believe we have talked before. On Pokebeach."

"Ok...and you are..."

"Me? Well...I am a man of many names, but you may call me by my one name."

"Your one name would be..."

"Well-its-E-"

TO BE CONTINUED!!
Edit: No one spoil ANYTHING if you know stuff.
 
RE: Ban Wars: Chapter Two is finally up!

I really like chapter 2, too XP. KIU! I'm trying to think of members who's name starts with E...Hmm...
 
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KIU = Keep It Up ;) I can't wait for more ^_^
 
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Excellent. You got everything about my personality right. Including that I'm afraid of PMJ. :O

/me hides from PMJ
 
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Seth1789110 said:
"Your...Seth1789110?"

"Yeah...what of it?"
What, you asked for one.

And no, you are not obsessed with making FF references.
 
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To your first thing, what? And second, the FF references are throughout the story buddy...lol.
 
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That was the other character speaking to me.
C1: Your...Seth1789110?
C2 AKA Me: Yeah, what of it?

Thats what it was.
 
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It should be "You're", not "Your."
 
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