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I think you should add who's talking once in a while because at certain points I had no idea who was talking.

I think you shouldn't have started in the middle of the battle. It didn't really tell me how the battle started, unless it was intended because it's from a 'journal log' or whatever it is suppose to be from, it just doesn't give the readers enough information about what happened during the time frame in between. Such as where the armies and the other mods came from.

In the beginning, when someone died you said
The noob closed his eyes and became perma-baned.
and in this chapter you said that they were killed and not perma-baned. Not trying to be mean, but you have to be more consistent.

Other than that, great job!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!:D
 
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To address the battle thing poeyjupel, in the end of entry 4, it stated they left town. So, I skipped the filler text and just started it there. It is from his journal, so Seth is the one writing these things. And as for telling who is talking, I don't want to do this:

Seth: blah blah
42 chocolate: blah blah

Cause its not a play, and I WILL NOT DO THIS:
"Blah blah" Seth said.

That is unprofessional. And as for the perma-banned/killing thing, they are interchangeable. Getting killed is the same as getting perma'd.
 
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Well, you should do "blah blah," Seth said, occasionally, because it IS professional. If you read a novel, it will occasionally do that.

If it's from his journal, how does he know about the Kekekeke dude?
 
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Whenever it goes Kekeke, it says elsewhere, meaning it isn't in his journal, but take place around the same time AS the time of his journal. And idk, I am just iffy on the whole "blah blah blah" said Seth. So...
 
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It doesn't have to be dull and boring, it could be something like this:

He rode next to me and stopped his army.

"Well Seth, looks like you have gotten yourself a little crew. Your not very smart though, taking on the mods by yourself. You need help," he jeered in hatred.
 
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Yeah I guess. I will take your idea and work it in if I can in the next chapter. Lol.
 
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Awesome chapter. Keep up the good work. Do you have a general time estimate of when you'll be done with the next chapter?
 
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No. I got school and other stuff, but I am working on it. Maybe next Friday at latest?
 
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ATTENTION EVERYONE! Since this last chapter was the 4th, I decided it was time for a little info faq, to address any questions you have! Here ya go!

-Seth1789110 holds his sword similar to Sora does from Kingdom Hearts 2, and he runs in a similar manner, with his sword to one side, still pointing forward.

-Galefail's character has a similar stature to Hagrid or Pipsqueak(from avatar). His hammer extends in a way similar to Chain Blade in Ratchet+Clank 2. It looks like this: http://images.buycostumes.com/mgen/merchandiser/60243.jpg It looks like this without the tape, the handle is also much longer, about 6 feet long.

-Electimortar controls all kinds of magic types, but so far, he only has Electricity and Fire(Electi=Electricity, Mortar=fire). The fire emits from his hand, covering his hand in the fire. Electricity spirals around his other hand.

-Mods defeated: PMJ
-Mods seen: Scampy, Heavenly spoon, and 3 mysterious mods

-The mods dress similar to Organization XIII until they reveal their faces, upon which the cloak disappears, and they get various armor and such

-The main hero team is already decided, so STOP ASKING

-Members on team: Seth1789110, 42 chocolate, Galefail, Electimortar
-Member cameos: CCloud, Dragon Rider of Pokebeach, The Power of Three, Lou Cypher

-The world? Well its like a massive prairie, like the world in FF7, and towns/cities just dot it. We travel across the plains. There is the occasional forests and stuff, like our characters are about to enter.

-The forest they are in is like the Amazon forest

-Appearances: 42 chocolate has a blue bandanna, with brown hair that hangs down on his face, covering his left eye. He usually wears a tank top of sorts now that he has acquired his current weapon(its a fricken ARROW mini gun, its like Vietnam commando...)
-Electimortar has sleek black hair, and a cloak. Something is hidden about his character.
-Galefail's appearance was previously described
-For me, I have hair that is semi spiky in the front, and the hair falls in the back. I have stream lined armor.
Loucypher: http://images.elfwood.com/art/n/e/nelsonco/ice_dragon.jpg
Scambacon: http://cdimg1.crunchyroll.com/i/spire3/11202007/4/d/a/b/4dab54a8bb5810_full.jpg

-Memes used: So I heard you liek Mudkipz, Imma charge ma laserz

This is the faq so far. Questions? Well, I will post it into the first post, and edit it periodically. And if you feel something should be added or have a question that I may have missed(this is a basic one so far so...) please tell meh!
 
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I really like this Ban Wars.,I really don't know why I really like if there is word Wars I really like the things like this.,

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Thanks! I guess. Lol. Glad you like it. Anyone got anything they wanna add to the faq?
 
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Seth1789110 said:
Thanks! I guess. Lol. Glad you like it. Anyone got anything they wanna add to the faq?

Yes. When will the next chapter be?
 
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Tomorrow or Thursday. Good chance of tomorrow though. Lol.
 
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Shorter chapter guys, but hope you enjoy it!

~Beginning of Entry Six~
"This whole forest, its so thick."

I continued to walk forward. I was by myself, as we decided it was best to split up. After all, I could take care of myself. The forest was rather large, and high. I was walking through a knee high river, and it was dark all around me. I could hear various foot steps. I continued to fight my way against the current until I reached a small clearing, littered with brush. I dropped my lantern and lifted my head at the small ray of sunlight. A small pool of dark water appeared in front of me, and I grabbed my sword. The puddle surrounded me, and in front of me, rose a mod, covered in his robe. Soldiers rose around me as well, but they were made of darkness. I lifted my sword and held it tight.

"Can I-help you?"

The mod did nothing. He did not move, he flicked his fingers, the soldiers disappeared, and a pathway in the forest opened, well lit and everything, leading to the outside. I turned back to look at the mod, who was gone. I shrugged and ran down the path, eager to get out. It continued to twist and wind, and I soon lost track of the entrance. Vines reached out and grabbed my legs, and I managed to avoid most, but I finally tripped. They began to engulf me.

"Err-someone-help-me!"

I continued to struggle, but was eventually completely subdued, and pulled under the ground. I fell through blackness until I landed on a large tree. I looked around, and found myself to be on top of the canopy.

"What the hell is going on here?"

I grabbed my sword and tried to slash the tree, but it did nothing. Instead, it rose into the air higher, and I fell onto a floating platform of rocks. It roared, and hundreds of vines reached into the air above it, hovered, and shot down towards me. I tried to slash them away, but found it to be a wasted effort. I grabbed the small charm Lou Cypher gave me, and I ran towards the edge and jumped. It was about 800 feet down, and I was falling faster. About 100 feet to the ground, he flew below me, and I landed on his back. He turned and fired a burst of blue flame, killing the nearest vines. Vines from the ground started to shoot into the air, and I slashed some away. Lou continued to fly, dodging them all, with great skill, while I slashed some away. More of the trees rose into the air, and the sky was soon covered in vines, reaching for Lou. Unable to block them all, they ensnared both me and him. He roared, releasing fire with every breath, and I tried to slash them away. Some of the vines started to glow red, and they exploded. Multiple other dragons hovered in the air.

"Lou-who are those?"

If he could have smiled, he would have. One of the dragons blew an intense green fire, destroying more vines. About five dragons hovered in the air, not including Lou. One with icy colors spoke.

"Seth1789110, I am Lunar Wing."

I smiled.

"Lunar Wing? Your-your alive! And-you came to save us! How did you know?"

He smiled.

"Whenever one of the guardians of the chosen are in trouble, the others know."

I tilted my head, now curious.

"Guardians-of the chosen?"

More vines shot into the air. They had an evil vibe to them, and flung themselves towards us. Lou took off into the air, with me on his back. The other dragons followed, firing various colored fire attacks. After flying far, three of the dragons dove down, as if searching for something in the forest. Lou eventually cleared the forest, and landed. Lunar Wing and a green colored dragon landed as well, and I turned to Lunar Wing.

"Can you explain it now?"

Lunar Wing shook his head.

"No. The chosen must be here. We will wait for them."

I moaned but nodded, and turned to the green dragon. Just as I was about to speak, the other three dragons landed, with Galefail, Electimortar and 42 chocolate on their backs. They surrounded us.

"Who-who are you dragons?"

I sat down, and I waited. Lunar Wing stepped forward.

"We are the Guardians of the Chosen. I am Lunar Wing, you have already met Lou Cypher."

The green dragon stepped forward. Lunar Wing continued.

"This is DawnofXatu."

The red dragon stepped forward.

"This is Lenny."

The yellow dragon stepped forward.

"This is TofU."

The final dragon, this one purple stepped forward.

"This is Twilight ShayminLvr."

I stood and bowed. 42 chocolate was very interested. He stepped forward and bowed as well.

"Lunar Wing, can you tell me, what are the Guardians of the Chosen?"

Lunar Wing smiled, and turned to face the other dragons. As if in unison, they all blew a jet of fire, each of a different color. They merged perfectly, forming a picture, of a prophecy. Lunar Wing stepped forward again.

"You see, long ago, Pokefan2000 created a prophecy. He predicted the mods would go mad, and ban all the members, and rule the land by themselves. He did predict however, that a group of six members would rise up to defeat these mods. He also knew of the six great dragon species. He predicted the mods would wipe them all out, so he set out, and brought back six dragon eggs, one of each species, and kept them safe from harm. The mods, as predicted, murdered all the great dragons, except for us."

He stopped, lifted his head and fired a ring of icy blue fire, changing the picture.

"These six members were destined to defeat the mods, but he knew that they would need wisdom. When we came into this world, he trained us, assigning us the roles of guardians, guardians of the chosen warriors."

I stood and walked forward.

"But-there are only four of us. Who are the other two members?"

Lunar Wing shook his head.

"This-cannot be revealed. When you find them, you will know."

I nodded again, and the dragons behind Lunar Wing began glowing.

"What-what is happening?"

I was worried and looked at them with fear in my eyes.

"When you need us-"

Small spheres began glowing in front of us, one of each color. The spheres in front of Tofu and Lenny disappeared however.

"Hey-where did those two orbs go?"

"They went to the other chosen ones."

I smiled.

"So there ARE others! We have to find them!"

The other orbs began glowing in front of us, and each of us took the orb. I grabbed the orb from Lou Cypher, and the dragons began lifting into the air. I waved.

"Thank you for all your help!"

I turned to the others.

"We find Kevin Garrett, and then we search for the others. All right?"

They nodded and I turned and faced the large chain of mountains in front of us.

"He is in there."

I ran for them, with the others following. This last leg of the journey would be the hardest, that I knew. What I didn't expect-is what was to come.

"Come on!"

We ran for what seemed like hours, until we stopped at a large clearing. Heavenly Spoon :F stood there.

"Heavenly Spoon :F! Its the end!"

I grabbed my sword and ran down, but he swung his spoon, smashing me back. I maintained my balance however, and stood, ready for the fight. He was about to strike, when a lance slammed into the ground in front of me. A member jumped in front of me.

"Sorry I am late guys."

I was confused at this man, but Galefail knew exactly who he was.

"PokeChamp, good to have ya."

PokeChamp nodded, and pulled out his lance. He spun it and stared at Heavenly Spoon :F. He jumped back in line with us, and he smiled.

"Oh, great, mods," PokeChamp said exasperatedly, "well fellas, looks like I'm gonna get the banhammer soon. Time to fight like the beast I am! COME GET SOME!".

With that, he charged at Heavenly Spoon :F, and I ran after. Galefail and Electimortar ran after as well, and 42 chocolate began firing walls of arrows at incredible speeds. Heavenly Spoon :F looked worried, as he was outclassed. We continued to apply pressure, appearing where he was trying to jump, and keeping him off his feet for as long as we could, so that he couldn't use his powers over Earth. He was about to swing his spoon down and create an earthquake, but Galefail was ready, and he spun his hammer, catching Heavenly Spoon :F off guard, sending him upward. I jumped after, and 42 chocolate fired another clip, slashing Heavenly Spoon :F. I began delivering blow after blow, doing incredible damage. After countless attacks, he fell to the ground, defeated. I landed next to him, and as I was about to deliver the finishing blow, he lifted his hand, creating a small pillar of rock that sent me flying. He began laughing and lifted into the air, and thousands of rocks began surrounding him, until he was covered in a giant layer of rock. I bit my lip as I stood.

"No way..."

He laughed again and got into a fighting stance.

"WHATS THE MATTER SETH? CANT FIGHT SOME ROCKS?"

He fired a large barrage of sharp rocks at me, and I barely dodged. I picked up my sword, and I heard epic music starting to play.

"GUYS! THE EPIC MUSIC IS ABOUT TO PLAY! ITS NOW OR NEVER!"

With that, I charged at Heavenly Spoon :F again, with a new found strength from the epic winz that was playing.
~End of Entry Six~
 
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Lol, I just rush in with my lance and make an epic cameo. That was great. :D

Nice chapter, Seth. This is coming along quite nicely, and I will be eagerly awaiting the conclusion (you better not spoil it! :OOOOOOOO).

For curiosity's sake, what was the epic music that was playing? Or is it nameless and is just epic because it is. :p
 
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PokeChamp: The epic music, well, just go onto like projectplaylist and type in Immediate Music or X-Ray Dog, and just listen to any of their epic tracks. Lol.
 
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Wow. I really really liked this chapter. Rainbow dragons power
 
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OH MY GAWD!!
I'm a dragon! Better yet, I'm a purple dragon! (My third favorite color, about the only girl color I like XP). Lol, when I read purple dragon, I was like, "SPYRO!"

Still an awesome story. Can't wait for the next chappie! ^-^
 
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It should be up tonight or tomorrow, and yes. SPYRO. They ruined the Spyro name now with all that cinder crap and all that. Urg. Anyways, the original PS1 games were the BEST.
 
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~Beginning of Entry Seven~

The battle between us and Heavenly Spoon :F raged on for hours. Neither side gained an advantage, but soon we were getting tired. I was launched back by the swing of the giant arm, but stabbed my sword into the ground used it to pivot, doing a 360 and shooting back at him, sword in hand. 42 chocolate continued to fire all the arrows until an arm broke off. Using this to our advantage, we released countless attacks on the weak arm, but more rocks surfaced and formed a new arm, stronger than before.

"Guys! Its hopeless! If we get into the forest we can just outrun him and hide until he leaves! We need to get there anyways, so come on!"

Heavenly Spoon :F laughed. He lifted his arm, and a wall of rock hundreds of feet high shot into the air, blocking the entire forest from all directions, encasing it in a bowl. Darkness covered the rock, and sealed itself, creating an invisible bubble, preventing anything from entering and exiting. The rock slid back into the earth.

"No..."

I ran at the bubble, but Heavenly Spoon :F swung his arm down low, to try to hit me. I ran and jumped, barely avoiding it. I plunged my sword into the bubble, but it only sent a small ripple through it, which then transfered back into my sword, sending me back. Heavenly Spoon :F created a pillar under me which sent me into the air, and swung his arm, smashing me into the ground. I felt incredible pain in my bottom.

"SON OF A BITCH!"

I struggled to move, but could not. The arm was about to come down on me again, but Galefail jumped in the way, and blocked the arm, which put incredible pressure on him.

"Electimortar! Grab Seth! I cant hold this much longer!"

Electimortar quickly flew below Galefail and grabbed me out of the man made crater, and flew a safe distance away. Galefail pushed the arm up and smashed it into hundreds of rocks, and turned and started to run towards us. 42 chocolate continued to fire countless amounts of arrows, covering us. Electimortar continued to fly forward, with the others not far behind. A large hill stood in the way, but he continued to fly.

"Electimortar-where are you going?"

"To my old home."

I was curious to see what it looked like, and once he reached the top of the hill, I gasped.

"That-that is your home?"

A massive white castle stood nestled on a large mountain side, with thousands of houses and buildings towards the lower part, and a magnificent upper palace.

"Yeah. Technically-that castle is mine."

I was astonished.

"THAT-IS YOUR CASTLE?"

He laughed.

"Yes. My family lives here."

I smiled. The others reached the top of the hill soon after us, and had the same reactions as us. Electimortar told us to follow, and we did. My arm was still in severe pain, but I ignored it. We reached the opulent first gate. Electimortar ordered them to open, which they graciously did. Electimortar led us through the city, showing us the main attractions, slowly making his way up to the second gate, which protected the upper palace. We were let in as well, and he showed us the many treasures and displays in the upper palace. Many officials lived there, as well as his family, who occupied the highest citadel.

"Why do you have the biggest castle?"

"Well-my family kind of owns this place. I am heir to the throne."

I nodded, still amazed. A group of girls were walking past, all in gorgeous dresses. The girl in the front stopped and smiled, and ran to Electimortar.

"Electimortar! Your home!"

He smiled and hugged her. He turned. The woman was unbelievable beautiful. She has brown hair, and brilliant blue eyes. I could not look away.

"Guys, this is my sister, Ziggoratt999."

Everyone said hello except for me, as I was to distracted by her looks. She laughed at my expression and I shook my head quickly, hiding my blush. She laughed and walked back to her friends, and they walked away. PokeChamp hit me in the arm.

"Hey Seth, looks like you got a little crush on her, don't ya?"

I punched back.

"Shut up! No I don't-I just-umm-she-"

I put my hands on the back of my head and leaned back slightly.

"She is just really pretty, nothing else."

As if simultaneously programmed, everyone in the group muttered a loud "uh-huh", which I laughed at. Electimortar showed us more, eventually introducing us to the king. He was older, about the age of 55, with a small white beard.

"Welcome to my castle, honorable heroes. We are humbled in your presence."

He shook all of our hands, and ordered some servants to show us to our rooms. A separate servant led each of us to our respective rooms. Mine was in a corridor with two other rooms, one of them across from mine belonging to Ziggoratt999.

Is it coincidence that her room is right across from mine? Or did Electimortar set this up on purpose? Whatever, I can at least talk to her now.

Ziggoratt999 walked out of her room and stopped to talk to me as the servant put my things into my room.

"Hello-Seth is it?"

"Umm-uh-y-yeah."

She laughed again and smiled.

"So your fighting the mods, correct? Its just you five?"

"Yeah-well-sometimes civilians with weapons help-but not often-I mean-we-umm-"

She smiled.

"Why are you so jittery?"

"I-I am just-cold."

She laughed again.

"Uh-huh, thats it."

I blushed heavily and started to inch towards my room.

"You seem very nice and interesting Seth."

"Thanks? I mean-thanks."

She laughed again and turned and walked down the hall. I put my back against the wall and sighed with relief.

Wow...she IS really pretty. I really screwed that one up.

I shrugged and watched her go down the hall until she was out of sight. I turned to enter my room. The servant had unpacked everything. I thanked him, and he bowed.

"Do you need anything else sir?"

"Yeah. Tell me about Ziggoratt999."

The servant smiled and nodded.

"She is the princess of this castle, but very smart, and very well mannered. She is the younger sister of your friend and the heir to the throne Electimortar. She has but a lone pet, a small eagle that she often cares for, finding it as an injured baby. I believe she has taken a liking to you-as you have to her-"

"I don't like her!"

"Right-forgive me sir. Anything else?"

"Where did she go?"

"Probably out on a walk. If you hurry, you may be able to catch her."

I nodded and thought about it.

"Is there like a hospital somewhere near here? Cause my arm is broken-and it kinda hurts-a lot actually."

"Yes. Allow me to show you."

I nodded and followed, walking through an extensive network of corridors until I reached the hospital area. Doctors walked over and examined my arm. They brought me to a table and I watched as they used various monitors and xrays to view my bones.

"Hey wait a minute-how is it that futuristic REAL medical equipment is here, but everything else works as if it were from the middle ages? Hmmm? HMMM?"

One of the doctors turned to me.

"Why is it that you are in a land that is actually a pokemon forum website in real life? Hmmm? HMMM?"

"Point taken. So whats up with my arm?"

"Well-it is just a fracture. If we-"

He took out a large needle filled with a green liquid.

"Inject this-into here-"

I bit my lip from the pain.

"The fracture will heal overnight."

"That fast?"

He nodded.

"That is the magic of being in a fake world based off of something real but not related at all."

I shrugged and hopped off the table, and I proceeded to go back to my room, but decided to walk outside, standing on the balcony looking down into the city below. I looked up at the sky, and I thought about Ziggoratt999, when I heard foot steps behind me.

"Hello Seth."

I turned to find her standing there behind me. She walked up next to me.

"What are you doing up here, all by yourself?"

I looked away from her.

"I don't know-just-thinking I guess."

She looked at my bandaged arm.

"What happened?"

I looked at my arm then at her, and down at the city.

"We were fighting Heavenly Spoon :F, and he kinda smashed me into the ground at a few hundred miles an hour."

She put a hand to her mouth, slightly shocked.

"I am so sorry-"

I laughed.

"Its not your fault."

She nodded and turned to look at the city below.

"Its a pretty city, isn't it?"

I nodded and smiled.

"Yeah."

She smiled. She was silent for a moment, but then thought about something.

"Come with me, there is something I want to show you."

I nodded and followed her as she walked along the pathways lined with marble stone. We soon were off the castle entirely, and on the mountain. We entered the forest and I grabbed my sword and held it with one hand, looking around.

"You wont be needing that Seth."

"O I know-but-just to be safe. Don't want anything to happen to yo-"

I blushed and smiled and looked at the ground. She led me to a small clearing, where a tiny stone fountain stood. A small tablet was in front of the fountain.

"What does that say?"

She shrugged.

"I don't know. Not a soul has been able to decipher it."

~Elsewhere~

Fools...go after them, destroy them.

"Yes master."

The hooded man disappeared with a simple flick of his fingers. He reappeared on top of the mountain overlooking the castle. He flicked his fingers again, and multiple cards hovered around him. One with a flame lifted into the air, and the forest quickly set on fire, blocking Seth and Ziggoratt999 from escaping.

He laughed and another card appeared, this one making the forest disappear. A third card appeared, this one with chains on it.

"Seth! What is happening!?"

I looked around, and saw the mod.

"Its his doing! Can you run?"

She tried, but the chains quickly ensnared her.

"Ziggoratt999!"

~Elsewhere~

Mapleboy had just connected to the forums online. What he saw was a video of what was happening in the world Seth was in.

"Seth is in trouble!"

Mapleboy frantically searched the forums for any information, and found the mod Seth was staring at. Mapleboy knew Seth was going to fight, so he quickly typed a message to Seth.

Seth. This is Mapleboy86. I am here to help. That mod is going to challenge you to a battle-you are going to need this.

A deck of cards appeared and floated into my hand. The burned forest quickly changed, and large pillars appeared under me and the mod. Another pillar came in front of us, and we could use it to hold our decks.

So its a pokemon battle then? Sounds totally fair!

I quickly shuffled the deck and let him cut, and I did the same. Galefail, Electimortar, 42 chocolate and PokeChamp quickly ran next to the pillar, but soon disappeared. I turned to the mod.

"Who are you and what have you done with them?"

The mod lifted his hood.

"Hello-Seth."

I froze.

"Zyflair! But why?"

"It is my job to eliminate you. Your friends have been turned into pokemon and are in your deck. The rules are simple. Defeat me in this card battle and I will restore your friends and release Ziggoratt999. Another thing. Whenever you lose a prize, part of her energy is drained from her. Lose all six prizes and she dies, as well as you. Ready? Let us begin then."

A large spinner appeared, and it spun around quickly.

"Call it Seth, heads or tails."

"Uh..."

I could not think. I quickly blurted out something.

"TAILS!"

The spinner landed on tails. I bit my lip. No trainers. I looked at my hand.

PERFECT. Roseanne's Research, Bebe's Search, Baltoy, Call energy, Unown G, Rare Candy, and a water energy. I could sacrifice Unown G. I think I will do that.

I laid down Unown G active, and Baltoy to bench. I drew. A fire energy. I attach the call energy, and used its power, searching my deck for two Bagon. He drew, and he had started with a Regice. I moaned.

"Gyrados..."

He laid down Sableye, used SSU, and flipped heads, pulling Regice back into his hand. He laid it down, and used its power to discard 2 Magikarp and bring up Baltoy. He impersonated for a Roseanne's research, searching for the other two Magikarp. I drew.

"Watch this!"

I quickly evolved one of the Bagon and slapped down the water energy. Stormfront Salamance was almost ready and charged. The game progressed this way, but on his next turn, he sent up Gyrados. It knocked out my Magikarp and Ziggoratt999 screamed in pain as energy was drained from her. I watched in horror. I drew the next card, Salamance X. I leveled up my active Salamance, and a bright flash was seen.

"Seth! What are you doing? What happened?"

"42 chocolate! Relax! Your a pokemon now-and-this is a giant TCG match! Just-relax! I am in control of all of you guys!"

This match up-its-its one I cant win-

The battle continued, and soon, the prize count down 5-1. Electimortar, Galefail and 42 chocolate had all been knocked out. PokeChamp was left, with 10 HP left. Zyflair needed one more prize, and I needed to take five. My pokemon were all injured badly, and I needed to make a play here. I drew. SSU. I had a new fully charged Salamance on the bench, and if I flipped heads on this, I could bring up the fresh one, level up and take two prizes. I activated SSU, and the spinner spun. After a long wait, it landed on heads. I sighed, scooping, and doing to play I had thought in my head. Zyflair laughed.

Turns had gone by, and both of our decks were very low on cards. Zyflair had one card left in his deck. I had to take two more prizes, and he needed just one. I had Salamance X in my hand, and I was planning on leveling up and knocking out the next turn, and winning. Unfortunately, I would not get that luxury.

"Well Seth, I am sorry. You have 100 HP left. I need to do 100. I have one more Plus Power, and this is it my friend. It was nice-knowing you."

I bit my lip and looked down. The match up itself was near un-winnable for me, and it would cost my friends life, and mine. He took his time, letting it sink in. He finally drew the card, and I stared at Ziggoratt999. Zyflair however, did nothing. He was motionless, a look of fear on his face.

"Well finish it Zyflair! You beat me!"

"No...No! It-it cant be in my prizes! No! NO!"

I stared, hope quickly flowing back into my body.

"Is it-my move? Are you leaving me with 10? Good."

I drew my last card. A Night Maintenance. I used it to shuffle three random cards in, just for kicks. I leveled up, attached the Expert belt and did 140 damage. Taking two prizes. The pillars crumbled and Electimortar, Galefail, 42 chocolate and PokeChamp all reappeared. The chains around Ziggoratt999 disappeared, and she began falling. I ran and I caught her.

"Are you ok? Are you hurt?"

She laughed.

"No Seth-I am fine. You saved me-"

I blushed.

"Well-I mean yeah but-"

She hugged me tightly, and I blushed and slowly set her down. I turned to the others.

"Guys-it has begun again. We wont be safe here for long-"

They agreed. I turned back to Zyflair, who was on the ground, hand on his chest. He was slowly disappearing.

"Its over Zyflair!"

"But Seth-would you really-kill me? Think-of all the time we spent-on POKESTORY WHICH YOU SHOULD ALL JOIN-"

I bit my lip and walked over to him.

"You betrayed us members, and killed hundreds of us. Looks like that malice of yours is coming full circle."

I swung my sword, killing him. Ziggoratt999 walked up to me.

"You know-since you just saved the princess and stopped a mod from taking over the castle-so your probably going to get a party or something."

I shrugged.

"That sounds nice actually-but I have no idea what I am supposed to do for it-"

She smiled and took my hand.

"I will show you."

She led me past the others back to the castle. I turned, and they were giving me thumbs up and winking. I laughed to myself and turned back to Ziggoratt999.

How to get into a girls heart? Defeat a mod that used magical powers to chain her and drain her life force whenever you lose a prize card in a game of pokemon TCG. Works every time...
~End of Entry Seven~
 
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