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"So, what was that about him being 'Too Strong'?" Said Kurai, after freezing Kyouto in a frozen prison.
"Well," Said Mokutan. "I must admit it was-"
"Rather Impressive." Finished Hinote, who had scramble to his feet.
"Hinote! You're okay?" Said Mokutan in shock.
"Yeah, I just got the wind knocked outta me there." Said Hinote, brushing off his arms. "As I was saying, that was rather impressive, but you still broke a Rescue Team rule, interfering with our mission. We need to take you to see Rayquaza to decide your punishment."
"Hinote," Said Mokutan. "Is this really a matter that needs to be taken to Rayquaza? Couldn't we just decide their punishment?"
"Prehaps," Said Hinote, who then turned his face to the frozen Kyouto. "But I think Rayquaza would like to know who these Dark Six are. Now you two, come with us."
"Wait! Don't we get a say?" Said Jin.
"You will have your say when we see Rayquaza." Said Hinote. With that, he took out his Gold Rescue badge and held it out, surrounding them all in a bright light.
"King Rayquaza." Said Hinote as he, Mokutan, Jin, Kurai, entered Rayquaza's throne room, Hinote also carrying in the Frozen Kyouto. The room had cloud like walls and floors, with a large throne made of clouds in which Rayquaza was sitting in.
"Yes, what is it, Hinote?"
"These two Rscue Team members unknwoingly followed and interfered with our mission. I suggest a punishment is in order."
"Is that all?" Said the Rayquaza. "It seems something as unimportant as that should be of my business."
"Also," Said Mokutan. "The Honchkrow called himself a member of 'The Dark Six'. We don't know what it is, but based on the power this Honchkrow had, they sounded dangerous. We were able to freeze him and bring him here for interrogation.
"I see." Said the Rayquaza. "Unfreeze him then."
"Very well." Said Hinote, and with that stuck out his hand and fired a fireball towards the Frozen Kyouto, making direct contact, soon thawing him.
"Man, I thought I was never gonna get outta there!" He groaned.
"You Honchkrow," Said Rayquaza. "You have been brought to my chamber to tell us what the Dark Six are what there goals are. Try to escape, and you will be persuited by my best Rescue Team members. Now tell me, what are the Dark Six?"
"I may not be the best person to tell ya that." Said Kyouto with a crooked smile on his face. "Why don't you tell 'em, Hinote?
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"So, what was that about him being 'Too Strong'?" Said Kurai, after freezing Kyouto in a frozen prison.
"Well," Said Mokutan. "I must admit it was-"
"Rather Impressive." Finished Hinote, who had scramble to his feet.
"Hinote! You're okay?" Said Mokutan in shock.
"Yeah, I just got the wind knocked outta me there." Said Hinote, brushing off his arms. "As I was saying, that was rather impressive, but you still broke a Rescue Team rule, interfering with our mission. We need to take you to see Rayquaza to decide your punishment."
"Hinote," Said Mokutan. "Is this really a matter that needs to be taken to Rayquaza? Couldn't we just decide their punishment?"
"Prehaps," Said Hinote, who then turned his face to the frozen Kyouto. "But I think Rayquaza would like to know who these Dark Six are. Now you two, come with us."
"Wait! Don't we get a say?" Said Jin.
"You will have your say when we see Rayquaza." Said Hinote. With that, he took out his Gold Rescue badge and held it out, surrounding them all in a bright light.
"King Rayquaza." Said Hinote as he, Mokutan, Jin, Kurai, entered Rayquaza's throne room, Hinote also carrying in the Frozen Kyouto. The room had cloud like walls and floors, with a large throne made of clouds in which Rayquaza was sitting in.
"Yes, what is it, Hinote?"
"These two Rscue Team members unknwoingly followed and interfered with our mission. I suggest a punishment is in order."
"Is that all?" Said the Rayquaza. "It seems something as unimportant as that should be of my business."
"Also," Said Mokutan. "The Honchkrow called himself a member of 'The Dark Six'. We don't know what it is, but based on the power this Honchkrow had, they sounded dangerous. We were able to freeze him and bring him here for interrogation.
"I see." Said the Rayquaza. "Unfreeze him then."
"Very well." Said Hinote, and with that stuck out his hand and fired a fireball towards the Frozen Kyouto, making direct contact, soon thawing him.
"Man, I thought I was never gonna get outta there!" He groaned.
"You Honchkrow," Said Rayquaza. "You have been brought to my chamber to tell us what the Dark Six are what there goals are. Try to escape, and you will be persuited by my best Rescue Team members. Now tell me, what are the Dark Six?"
"I may not be the best person to tell ya that." Said Kyouto with a crooked smile on his face. "Why don't you tell 'em, Hinote?
RE: Legend of Lucario
Whoa, didn't expect that last line.
Whoa, didn't expect that last line.
RE: Legend of Lucario
And here's the next chapter! Enjoy!
"H-hinote! What does that mean?" Said Mokutan in disbeleif.
"What does it sound like?" Said Hinote in a voice even colder than his regular one. "I am also a member of Dark Six!"
"H-how?" Said Mokutan said Mokutan in a state of shock. "How could you betray us like this!?"
"How?" Said Hinote. "The answer is I was never on your side to begin with. I infiltrated this place to find something. And today I found it." He then dashed so fast it was like he was teleporting right next to Kurai and wrapped his hand around her. "You are to come withh us."
"W-what? What are you doing!" Said Jin in rage.
"You all wanted to know what the Dark Six are? Then I suppose I should tell you. Our goal is awaken Darkrai with as much evil power as we can."
"Evil...Power?" Said Jin, fearful of what that was, beginning to sweat.
"Allow me to explain." Said Hinote. "Each Pokémon has good power and evil power. Each are on a diffrent level. Depending on which side a Pokémon fights on their power may increase. So a Pokémon who fights for evil may not be as powerful if they fought for good. Unfortunately, there is no way to determine this or not. However-" He turned his eyes towards Kurai, who was struggling to escape from his grasp. "A Dark Pokémon always has more Evil Power than good. I posed as a Rescue Team member all these years in hopes of finding a powerful Dark Pokémon, meaning that their Evil Power would be tremendous. And today, I succeeded."
"What are you going to do with Kurai?!" Said Jin, his voice turning from fear to rage.
"I will feed her evil Power to our Ruler, Darkrai. As of now, he has yet to awaken, but the evil power that we have been feeding him has brought him to the brink of awakening. I beleive this one will be final peice to our goals of awakening Darkrai and plunging the world into darkness."
"Well then, I'll guess I'll just have to stop you!" Yelled Jin as he extremspeeded towards Hinote and fired a punch. However, Hinote blocked his fist as if it was a fly and tossed him aside. Mokutan also charged an attack at Hinote, but from the same fist he effortlessly fired a large Fireball, directly hitting Mokutan and sending him backwards.
"ENOUGH!" Boomed Rayquaza as he fired a huge Hyper Beam. However Hinote fired an equally huge Blast Burn, and both collided before dying out.
"Do not get my power mixed up with Kyouto's" Said Hinote. "Out of all six, Kyouto is the sixth-ranked member making him the weakest. I however, am ranked number one, making me the most powerful." With that, he fired a fireball at the wall, causing it to explode. "Come, Kyouto. We have gotten what we came for. Time to awaken our ruler." With that, he and Kurai, still struggling to escape his grasp, jumped out of the castle.
"I'm coming, I'm coming." Said Kyouto as he flew after him.
"No! Kurai!" Yelled Jin as he began to run after them, but was stopped by Rayquaza.
"You will not chase after them." He said firmly. "This matter is strictly for Gold and Diamond ranked members only. You have not yet reached that rank."
"But I'm ready to be a Gold Ranked Member!" Said Jin. "I was able to beat one of those members easily!"
"You may posses incredible strength, but you still have ways to go in terms of experience." Said Rayquaza. "Also, you still broke a rule in interfering with a mission. I have determined you will be placed in a detention cell for three days. As for you Mokutan, come with me. We must alert the other Gold and Diamond members of this crisis." With that, Rayquaza, began flying towards a corridor, in which other elite resuce teams were.
"Y-yes sir." Said Mokutan, as he followed Rayquaza. Meanwhile Jin stood alone, waiting for other members to put him in a detention cell.
"Kurai." He said. "I will resuce you."
And here's the next chapter! Enjoy!
"H-hinote! What does that mean?" Said Mokutan in disbeleif.
"What does it sound like?" Said Hinote in a voice even colder than his regular one. "I am also a member of Dark Six!"
"H-how?" Said Mokutan said Mokutan in a state of shock. "How could you betray us like this!?"
"How?" Said Hinote. "The answer is I was never on your side to begin with. I infiltrated this place to find something. And today I found it." He then dashed so fast it was like he was teleporting right next to Kurai and wrapped his hand around her. "You are to come withh us."
"W-what? What are you doing!" Said Jin in rage.
"You all wanted to know what the Dark Six are? Then I suppose I should tell you. Our goal is awaken Darkrai with as much evil power as we can."
"Evil...Power?" Said Jin, fearful of what that was, beginning to sweat.
"Allow me to explain." Said Hinote. "Each Pokémon has good power and evil power. Each are on a diffrent level. Depending on which side a Pokémon fights on their power may increase. So a Pokémon who fights for evil may not be as powerful if they fought for good. Unfortunately, there is no way to determine this or not. However-" He turned his eyes towards Kurai, who was struggling to escape from his grasp. "A Dark Pokémon always has more Evil Power than good. I posed as a Rescue Team member all these years in hopes of finding a powerful Dark Pokémon, meaning that their Evil Power would be tremendous. And today, I succeeded."
"What are you going to do with Kurai?!" Said Jin, his voice turning from fear to rage.
"I will feed her evil Power to our Ruler, Darkrai. As of now, he has yet to awaken, but the evil power that we have been feeding him has brought him to the brink of awakening. I beleive this one will be final peice to our goals of awakening Darkrai and plunging the world into darkness."
"Well then, I'll guess I'll just have to stop you!" Yelled Jin as he extremspeeded towards Hinote and fired a punch. However, Hinote blocked his fist as if it was a fly and tossed him aside. Mokutan also charged an attack at Hinote, but from the same fist he effortlessly fired a large Fireball, directly hitting Mokutan and sending him backwards.
"ENOUGH!" Boomed Rayquaza as he fired a huge Hyper Beam. However Hinote fired an equally huge Blast Burn, and both collided before dying out.
"Do not get my power mixed up with Kyouto's" Said Hinote. "Out of all six, Kyouto is the sixth-ranked member making him the weakest. I however, am ranked number one, making me the most powerful." With that, he fired a fireball at the wall, causing it to explode. "Come, Kyouto. We have gotten what we came for. Time to awaken our ruler." With that, he and Kurai, still struggling to escape his grasp, jumped out of the castle.
"I'm coming, I'm coming." Said Kyouto as he flew after him.
"No! Kurai!" Yelled Jin as he began to run after them, but was stopped by Rayquaza.
"You will not chase after them." He said firmly. "This matter is strictly for Gold and Diamond ranked members only. You have not yet reached that rank."
"But I'm ready to be a Gold Ranked Member!" Said Jin. "I was able to beat one of those members easily!"
"You may posses incredible strength, but you still have ways to go in terms of experience." Said Rayquaza. "Also, you still broke a rule in interfering with a mission. I have determined you will be placed in a detention cell for three days. As for you Mokutan, come with me. We must alert the other Gold and Diamond members of this crisis." With that, Rayquaza, began flying towards a corridor, in which other elite resuce teams were.
"Y-yes sir." Said Mokutan, as he followed Rayquaza. Meanwhile Jin stood alone, waiting for other members to put him in a detention cell.
"Kurai." He said. "I will resuce you."
RE: Legend of Lucario
Snow Day today! That means THREE chapters in THREE days! Incredible!
"Say Hinote," Said Kyouto, as he, Hinote, and the struggling to escape Kurai were running through, forsty forest, headed towards their hideout.
"What is it, Kyouto?" He said in his ususal cold voice.
"Why did we have to do that in front of all those people? Why couldn't we just've taken her when she was on some mission?"
"Had we done that, it's possible we would have unknown witnesses by other Rescue Team Members. We would've been found out without our knowledge, which would eventually lead to our downfall. The only way for that not to happen was to go public about."
"Oh, I see." Responded Kyouto.
Meanwhile, Jin was sitting inside the detention center, which looked like an ordinary prison cell. He was cursing to himself silently. Why couldn't I beat him? He thought to himself, the image in his mind kept popping up of him charging with all his might, and how Hinote had effortlessly tossed him aside, and how he had taken off with Kurai. However, his thoughts were interrupted by the door opening. It was Mokutan.
"You're free to go." He said. "It's been three days."
"Oh." Said Jin in a noncaring voice. He didn't really care about the situation he was in. He was about to leave when Mokutan spoke.
"Do you want to save her?" He said.
Jin looked at him and muttered "Yes."
"You might not be ready to do that now." Mokutan said back. "However-"
"What? However what?" Said Jin, his attention completely turned to what Mokutan was saying.
"The place where I grew it up, it was called Magma Cavern." Said Mokutan. "It is ruled by a Pokémon named Groudon. It was said he owned an item so powerful it would make the owner almsot unbeatable. I'm sure he is still the ruler there. Maybe, if you go to see him and tell him of this dilemna, he will help you."
Jin thought about what Mokutan had just said. A chance to save Kurai-how could he say no?
"Ill go to Magma Cavern, then." He said, determined.
"Of course, there is no garuntee he will help. And the journey through Magma Cavern won't be easy, either."
"Yeah, that's probably the case." Said Jin. "But I must do what I can to rescue Kurai."
"Then I'm going with you." Said Mokutan. "I know that place well, and the journey will be easier with the two of us."
"Alright then, let's go!" Said Jin, as he took our his rescue badge, and it began to teleport them to Magma Cavern.
Snow Day today! That means THREE chapters in THREE days! Incredible!
"Say Hinote," Said Kyouto, as he, Hinote, and the struggling to escape Kurai were running through, forsty forest, headed towards their hideout.
"What is it, Kyouto?" He said in his ususal cold voice.
"Why did we have to do that in front of all those people? Why couldn't we just've taken her when she was on some mission?"
"Had we done that, it's possible we would have unknown witnesses by other Rescue Team Members. We would've been found out without our knowledge, which would eventually lead to our downfall. The only way for that not to happen was to go public about."
"Oh, I see." Responded Kyouto.
Meanwhile, Jin was sitting inside the detention center, which looked like an ordinary prison cell. He was cursing to himself silently. Why couldn't I beat him? He thought to himself, the image in his mind kept popping up of him charging with all his might, and how Hinote had effortlessly tossed him aside, and how he had taken off with Kurai. However, his thoughts were interrupted by the door opening. It was Mokutan.
"You're free to go." He said. "It's been three days."
"Oh." Said Jin in a noncaring voice. He didn't really care about the situation he was in. He was about to leave when Mokutan spoke.
"Do you want to save her?" He said.
Jin looked at him and muttered "Yes."
"You might not be ready to do that now." Mokutan said back. "However-"
"What? However what?" Said Jin, his attention completely turned to what Mokutan was saying.
"The place where I grew it up, it was called Magma Cavern." Said Mokutan. "It is ruled by a Pokémon named Groudon. It was said he owned an item so powerful it would make the owner almsot unbeatable. I'm sure he is still the ruler there. Maybe, if you go to see him and tell him of this dilemna, he will help you."
Jin thought about what Mokutan had just said. A chance to save Kurai-how could he say no?
"Ill go to Magma Cavern, then." He said, determined.
"Of course, there is no garuntee he will help. And the journey through Magma Cavern won't be easy, either."
"Yeah, that's probably the case." Said Jin. "But I must do what I can to rescue Kurai."
"Then I'm going with you." Said Mokutan. "I know that place well, and the journey will be easier with the two of us."
"Alright then, let's go!" Said Jin, as he took our his rescue badge, and it began to teleport them to Magma Cavern.
RE: Legend of Lucario
Well, School and Bleach have gotten in the way of me posting for awhile, but here's the next chapter! Enjoy!
Jin and Mokutan stood outside of Magma Cavern, which seemed to be a deep cave that went farther underground the further you went into it. Jin could feel the heat flowing from the cave onto him and could see lava leaking from the walls.
"Mokutan," He said. "Is it okay for us to do this?"
"No, but it doesn't really matter." Said Mokutan. "Right now, we aren't members of a Rescue Team right now."
"Really?" Said Jin with surprise. "Why not?"
"You need at least two people in order to make a Rescue Team. We have lost both of our Teammates. Therefore, we aren't members any more. We are free to do as we please."
"I see." Said Jin. "Well, we should get going then." Mokutan nodded in agreement as they entered the cave. Jin instantly felt the heat being applied to his body, it was like being inside a sauna. Still, he knew he would be able to endure this for as long as it would take.
"So, how far is Groudon?" Asked Jin.
"He's at the bottom floor. Right now, we are at the top floor. That's 26 floors down."
"I see. So it's gonna be a long trip." Said Jin. "We better get going." He began to run towards the depths of the cave.
"Hold on! It's dangerous!" Yelled Mokutan. The instant after he spoke, almost on cue, Jin saw a large fireball heade towards him. He quickly evaded and stopped running. He looked ahead and saw a Magmortar and a Mawile, smoke simmering from the Magmortar's cannon arm.
"Oh darn, I missed." Said the Magmortar in a deep male voice in an almost taunting way.
"Well of course you missed!" Said the Mawile in a female voice. "Your attacks are just so slow! Anyone with half a brain and decent speed can dodge."
"I'll let you know, I've been working on my speed." Said the Magmortar back. He then turned back to Jin. "Which must mean that you're gonna be a toughie."
"What do you want with us?" Asked Jin.
"People here don't really like outsiders like yourself." Said the Mawile. "I can tell that Charizard's from here, but siding with an outsider is just as bad as being one."
"Then we're just gonna have to beat you two then." Said Jin. "C'mon, Mokutan!"
Meanwhile, from outside the cave, two Pokémon conversed amongst themselves.
"They the guys?" Asked one.
"Yes." Said the other. "They both showed signs of acheiving great power, so I'm going to ask you to get rid of them before they do."
"The other one paused for a moment. "Alright, I guess I can do that...Hinote."
Well, School and Bleach have gotten in the way of me posting for awhile, but here's the next chapter! Enjoy!
Jin and Mokutan stood outside of Magma Cavern, which seemed to be a deep cave that went farther underground the further you went into it. Jin could feel the heat flowing from the cave onto him and could see lava leaking from the walls.
"Mokutan," He said. "Is it okay for us to do this?"
"No, but it doesn't really matter." Said Mokutan. "Right now, we aren't members of a Rescue Team right now."
"Really?" Said Jin with surprise. "Why not?"
"You need at least two people in order to make a Rescue Team. We have lost both of our Teammates. Therefore, we aren't members any more. We are free to do as we please."
"I see." Said Jin. "Well, we should get going then." Mokutan nodded in agreement as they entered the cave. Jin instantly felt the heat being applied to his body, it was like being inside a sauna. Still, he knew he would be able to endure this for as long as it would take.
"So, how far is Groudon?" Asked Jin.
"He's at the bottom floor. Right now, we are at the top floor. That's 26 floors down."
"I see. So it's gonna be a long trip." Said Jin. "We better get going." He began to run towards the depths of the cave.
"Hold on! It's dangerous!" Yelled Mokutan. The instant after he spoke, almost on cue, Jin saw a large fireball heade towards him. He quickly evaded and stopped running. He looked ahead and saw a Magmortar and a Mawile, smoke simmering from the Magmortar's cannon arm.
"Oh darn, I missed." Said the Magmortar in a deep male voice in an almost taunting way.
"Well of course you missed!" Said the Mawile in a female voice. "Your attacks are just so slow! Anyone with half a brain and decent speed can dodge."
"I'll let you know, I've been working on my speed." Said the Magmortar back. He then turned back to Jin. "Which must mean that you're gonna be a toughie."
"What do you want with us?" Asked Jin.
"People here don't really like outsiders like yourself." Said the Mawile. "I can tell that Charizard's from here, but siding with an outsider is just as bad as being one."
"Then we're just gonna have to beat you two then." Said Jin. "C'mon, Mokutan!"
Meanwhile, from outside the cave, two Pokémon conversed amongst themselves.
"They the guys?" Asked one.
"Yes." Said the other. "They both showed signs of acheiving great power, so I'm going to ask you to get rid of them before they do."
"The other one paused for a moment. "Alright, I guess I can do that...Hinote."
RE: Legend of Lucario
Hey, this is a nice story
I don't think I found anything wrong there, and it's nice to read a story based on
pokemon mystery dungeon, too.
Great job! Keep up the good work!
Hey, this is a nice story
I don't think I found anything wrong there, and it's nice to read a story based on
pokemon mystery dungeon, too.
Great job! Keep up the good work!
RE: Legend of Lucario
Sorry for no update yesterday, I had to go do some things. But here's the next installment!
"So, you wanna battle us, eh?" Said the Magmortar. "I guess that can be arranged." With that he fired another fireball from his arm causing Jin and Mokutan to dodge it, It collided with a large explosion. Jin landed and tried to catch his breath, but the Mawile had already ran up to him and clamped her jaw onto his arm. Jin held back from crying out in pain and shook the Mawile off his hands. Mokutan then flew towards the Magmortar, but the Magmortar fire a Flamethrower from it's hand and knocked Mokutan backwards.
"Man! These guys are tough!" Said Mokutan.
"Do not take us lightly." Said the Magmortar as he began firing fireballs from his hand and Mokutan, who was barely able to fly away from them. However the Mawile rammed him with a Iron Head, sending him to the ground. Jin ran up to the Mawile preparing a Force Palm attack, thoguh the Magmortar hit him with a Fire Punch before he could.
"How are gonna beat these guys?" Panted Jin.
"Don't worry, I think I have an idea how." Said Mokutan.
"Really? What is it?" Said Jin.
"I've noticed that the whole time we've been fighting, they've been using powerful combo attacks to beat us. Whenever the Magmortar attack fails and is dodged, the Mawile attacks, and vice-versa. However, if those two were to be in seperate battles, we could have a better chance of taking them down. Essentialy, it can't be a 2-on-2 fight, but rather two seperate 1-on-1 fights."
"Gotcha." Said Jin, who than ran towards the Mawile and fired a punch at her, hitting her and doing some damage. The Magmortar noticed and ran towards Jin, but Mokutan flew in front of him and slammed his tail at him, sending him flying backwards.
"Looks like you guys aren't so tough when you're seperated." Said Mokutan with a grin on his face. The Mawile and same fashion as the Magmortar dashed towards Mokutan, but Jin intervened and delivered a swift kick to the Mawile, sending it towards the Magmortar.
"Well, it looks like we're done here." Said Jin.
"Yeah, let's head back to seeing Groudon." Said Mokutan.
"Wait-" Said the Magmortar, as he and the Mawile slowly stood back up.
"What? You want another go?" Said Jin.
"No, it's just we couldn't overhear you were going to see Groudon." Said the Mawile.
"What's it to you?" Said Mokutan.
"It's just, we were thinking of going to go too." Said the Magmortar.
"We'd always been afraid we'd get beaten, but now, if we go with you, I'm sure we'd make it." Said the Mawile. "Consider it reward for beating us."
Mokutan looked at Jin. "I guess it's okay, after all, with more people it would be easier."
Jin thought about it and said. "Alright, you can come with us. Now let's go see Groudon!"
Sorry for no update yesterday, I had to go do some things. But here's the next installment!
"So, you wanna battle us, eh?" Said the Magmortar. "I guess that can be arranged." With that he fired another fireball from his arm causing Jin and Mokutan to dodge it, It collided with a large explosion. Jin landed and tried to catch his breath, but the Mawile had already ran up to him and clamped her jaw onto his arm. Jin held back from crying out in pain and shook the Mawile off his hands. Mokutan then flew towards the Magmortar, but the Magmortar fire a Flamethrower from it's hand and knocked Mokutan backwards.
"Man! These guys are tough!" Said Mokutan.
"Do not take us lightly." Said the Magmortar as he began firing fireballs from his hand and Mokutan, who was barely able to fly away from them. However the Mawile rammed him with a Iron Head, sending him to the ground. Jin ran up to the Mawile preparing a Force Palm attack, thoguh the Magmortar hit him with a Fire Punch before he could.
"How are gonna beat these guys?" Panted Jin.
"Don't worry, I think I have an idea how." Said Mokutan.
"Really? What is it?" Said Jin.
"I've noticed that the whole time we've been fighting, they've been using powerful combo attacks to beat us. Whenever the Magmortar attack fails and is dodged, the Mawile attacks, and vice-versa. However, if those two were to be in seperate battles, we could have a better chance of taking them down. Essentialy, it can't be a 2-on-2 fight, but rather two seperate 1-on-1 fights."
"Gotcha." Said Jin, who than ran towards the Mawile and fired a punch at her, hitting her and doing some damage. The Magmortar noticed and ran towards Jin, but Mokutan flew in front of him and slammed his tail at him, sending him flying backwards.
"Looks like you guys aren't so tough when you're seperated." Said Mokutan with a grin on his face. The Mawile and same fashion as the Magmortar dashed towards Mokutan, but Jin intervened and delivered a swift kick to the Mawile, sending it towards the Magmortar.
"Well, it looks like we're done here." Said Jin.
"Yeah, let's head back to seeing Groudon." Said Mokutan.
"Wait-" Said the Magmortar, as he and the Mawile slowly stood back up.
"What? You want another go?" Said Jin.
"No, it's just we couldn't overhear you were going to see Groudon." Said the Mawile.
"What's it to you?" Said Mokutan.
"It's just, we were thinking of going to go too." Said the Magmortar.
"We'd always been afraid we'd get beaten, but now, if we go with you, I'm sure we'd make it." Said the Mawile. "Consider it reward for beating us."
Mokutan looked at Jin. "I guess it's okay, after all, with more people it would be easier."
Jin thought about it and said. "Alright, you can come with us. Now let's go see Groudon!"
RE: Legend of Lucario
Wow, no comments in between chapters. C'mon guys, I'm starting to feel lonely.
"We never properly introduced ourselves." Said the Magmortar. "I'm Kyanon, and she's Wana."
"Hey." Said Wana without much care.
"I'm Jin and this is Mokutan." Said Jin. "By the way, why do you guys want to see Groudon?"
Kyanon and Wana looked at themselves before Kyanon said "It's said that those who see Groudon, regardless of number in a group, acheive a very high profile status. The journey is so difficult that most Pokémon don't give a care, but we'd like to obtain such a status."
"Ya, so we better get going!" Said Wana. Everyone nodded in agreement as they headed onward.
Meanwhile, Hinote walked into a large dark room, holding an unconscious Kurai. Four other Pokémon were in the room, hidden in shadows. in the center of the room, there stood a large orb, as some sort of dark shadow floated in it.
"Is that our next sacrifice?" Said a deep voice within the room.
"Yes." Said Hinote. "She may be the finishing touch to our plan."
"Where's Makainu?" Said another voice, this one loud and raspy.
"I sent him to eliminate two people who may stand in the way of our goals." Said Hinote.
"Hmph. You really think anyone actually can beat us?" Said a third voice, this one a snappy, female voice.
"Not yet." Answered Hinote. "But they are currently pursuing the ancient artifact that the Legendary Groudon possesses. After obtaining this, not to mention the experience gained from the journey itself, they may pose a threat to us.
"What about Rayquaza and the other Rescue Teams?" Said the familiar voice of Kyouto.
"They foolishly think that we are going to war with them and making preparations. But they do not know that our plan involves no war. But the people who pose a threat to us will likely to the correct thing and invade this place to retrieve their comrade."
"Whatever. She'll be worthless once we feed her Evil Power to Darkrai." Said the raspy voice again.
"Yeah, you gonna do that or what?" Said Kyouto impatiently.
"Very well." Said Hinote, as he laid Kurai in front of the orb. "Our ruler, accept this offering of Evil Power, so that you may return to form."
From the dark orb, the shadows inside reached out, as if they were two arms and began wrapping themselves around Kurai. Once fully constricting her, what seemed to be black bolts of lightning flowed from Kurai, through the arms, and into the arm, as she winced slightly in her slumber. Finally, it stopped, as two red eyes appeared in the orb.
"I have awoke." A dry voice said.
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"We never properly introduced ourselves." Said the Magmortar. "I'm Kyanon, and she's Wana."
"Hey." Said Wana without much care.
"I'm Jin and this is Mokutan." Said Jin. "By the way, why do you guys want to see Groudon?"
Kyanon and Wana looked at themselves before Kyanon said "It's said that those who see Groudon, regardless of number in a group, acheive a very high profile status. The journey is so difficult that most Pokémon don't give a care, but we'd like to obtain such a status."
"Ya, so we better get going!" Said Wana. Everyone nodded in agreement as they headed onward.
Meanwhile, Hinote walked into a large dark room, holding an unconscious Kurai. Four other Pokémon were in the room, hidden in shadows. in the center of the room, there stood a large orb, as some sort of dark shadow floated in it.
"Is that our next sacrifice?" Said a deep voice within the room.
"Yes." Said Hinote. "She may be the finishing touch to our plan."
"Where's Makainu?" Said another voice, this one loud and raspy.
"I sent him to eliminate two people who may stand in the way of our goals." Said Hinote.
"Hmph. You really think anyone actually can beat us?" Said a third voice, this one a snappy, female voice.
"Not yet." Answered Hinote. "But they are currently pursuing the ancient artifact that the Legendary Groudon possesses. After obtaining this, not to mention the experience gained from the journey itself, they may pose a threat to us.
"What about Rayquaza and the other Rescue Teams?" Said the familiar voice of Kyouto.
"They foolishly think that we are going to war with them and making preparations. But they do not know that our plan involves no war. But the people who pose a threat to us will likely to the correct thing and invade this place to retrieve their comrade."
"Whatever. She'll be worthless once we feed her Evil Power to Darkrai." Said the raspy voice again.
"Yeah, you gonna do that or what?" Said Kyouto impatiently.
"Very well." Said Hinote, as he laid Kurai in front of the orb. "Our ruler, accept this offering of Evil Power, so that you may return to form."
From the dark orb, the shadows inside reached out, as if they were two arms and began wrapping themselves around Kurai. Once fully constricting her, what seemed to be black bolts of lightning flowed from Kurai, through the arms, and into the arm, as she winced slightly in her slumber. Finally, it stopped, as two red eyes appeared in the orb.
"I have awoke." A dry voice said.
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"So...do we rule the world yet?" Said Kyouto.
"Patience." Said Darkrai. "I have been dormant for such a long time, my powers have not fully returned."
"What do we do now?" Said Hinote.
"Collect more evil power." Said Darkrai. "Even though I have awakened, I must feed on more evil power in order to fully regain power."
"What should we do with the Weavile?" Asked Hinote again.
"You should probably put her in the cell in which you keep all other offerings with. That way she won't attempt to attack us." Said Darkrai.
"Yes, my master." Said Hinote.
In Magma Cavern, Jin, Mokutan, Kyanon, and Wana ran through the cave, fighting off random Pokémon as they headed to see Groudon.
"So, you guys are here to save your friend?" Said Kyanon.
"Yeah, and to assist in saving the world." Said Mokutan.
"Oh, I see." Said Wana.
"How much farther?" Asked Jin.
"I'd say about halfway." Said Kyanon.
"Oh." Said Jin, hoping they'd be closer. He had been tiring out and guessed they were in this cave for at least five hours. Still, his determination to save his teammate made him go on.
Suddenly, a large shaking was heard. Everyone turned and saw a large explosion from a wall being busted down.
"Wha-who's there?" Said Kyanon, pointing one of his arms for a fire attack. When the smoke cleared, a Houndoom was staring at them.
"What, there's more of them now?" Said the Houndoom. "What a pain!"
"Who are you?" Said Mokutan.
"What, Hinote never told you about me?" Said the Houndoom grinning evilly.
Jin's eye's opened in fear. "You're...a dark six member?"
"That's right," Said the Houndoom. "I'm Dark Six member number four, Makainu!"
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"So...do we rule the world yet?" Said Kyouto.
"Patience." Said Darkrai. "I have been dormant for such a long time, my powers have not fully returned."
"What do we do now?" Said Hinote.
"Collect more evil power." Said Darkrai. "Even though I have awakened, I must feed on more evil power in order to fully regain power."
"What should we do with the Weavile?" Asked Hinote again.
"You should probably put her in the cell in which you keep all other offerings with. That way she won't attempt to attack us." Said Darkrai.
"Yes, my master." Said Hinote.
In Magma Cavern, Jin, Mokutan, Kyanon, and Wana ran through the cave, fighting off random Pokémon as they headed to see Groudon.
"So, you guys are here to save your friend?" Said Kyanon.
"Yeah, and to assist in saving the world." Said Mokutan.
"Oh, I see." Said Wana.
"How much farther?" Asked Jin.
"I'd say about halfway." Said Kyanon.
"Oh." Said Jin, hoping they'd be closer. He had been tiring out and guessed they were in this cave for at least five hours. Still, his determination to save his teammate made him go on.
Suddenly, a large shaking was heard. Everyone turned and saw a large explosion from a wall being busted down.
"Wha-who's there?" Said Kyanon, pointing one of his arms for a fire attack. When the smoke cleared, a Houndoom was staring at them.
"What, there's more of them now?" Said the Houndoom. "What a pain!"
"Who are you?" Said Mokutan.
"What, Hinote never told you about me?" Said the Houndoom grinning evilly.
Jin's eye's opened in fear. "You're...a dark six member?"
"That's right," Said the Houndoom. "I'm Dark Six member number four, Makainu!"
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Wow, I just read all the chapters that I haven't read and they were amazing! especially that last chapter!
There is only one thing I have to say to you.....This is the best fanfic I have ever read in my entire life. (Well, Im only 12, but still). You are doing an amazing job and if you keep writing, I believe this fanfic will reach to the top! (Want More Chapters! Give Me More!)
Wow, I just read all the chapters that I haven't read and they were amazing! especially that last chapter!
There is only one thing I have to say to you.....This is the best fanfic I have ever read in my entire life. (Well, Im only 12, but still). You are doing an amazing job and if you keep writing, I believe this fanfic will reach to the top! (Want More Chapters! Give Me More!)
RE: Legend of Lucario
Enjoy the fifteenth chapter!
"W-why are youy here?" Said Jin to the newest revealed member, Makainu.
Makainu narrowed his eyes. "Ain't it obvious?" He then dashed up to Jin so close Jin could smell his firey breath.
"I'm here to kill you all." He then rammed his head right at Jin, but Jin moved his head just in time. Jin quickly spun his hand to fire a punch, but to his surprise the Houndoom grabbed it with his own paw, now standing on just his hind legs.
He's standing on his hind legs? Thought Jin in shocked.
"Surprised?" Said Makainu, grinning an evil grin. "I've trained myself to use just two legs instead of four, to increase my combat power and not just focus on speed and fire attacks." Makainu began throwing swift punches at Jin, who was just able to block them with his own hands, before getting forcibly sliding backwards.
"Hey Jin, don't hog up the whole fight to yourself!" Said Wana. "We'll fight this guy now!"
"What? There's more of you now?" Said Makainu. "Aw man, I was hoping to make this quick. Oh well." With that he dashed to Wana and punched her across the face sending her backwards.
"Wana!" Said Kyanon before firing a Fire punch at Makainu, but Makainu mere blocked it before kicking Kyanon in the stomach sending him backwards with Wana. Mokutan then flew at Makainu, but Makinu merely stepped to his side, forcing Mokutan to land.
"Man, what's with this guy's power?" Muttered Mokutan. "Is he really only fourth-ranked?"
"What, did you guys think you wouldn't have much of a challenege if you fought the fourth ranked member?" Said Makainu. "Well, I got some news for you. Judging by the power I've seen rescue teams fight at, I'd say those ranked number five onwards have the skill of a Diamond-Ranked member."
"Diamond Rank?" Said Jin. He then looked towards Mokutan. "Isn't that the highest rank you can get?"
"Yeah," Said Makainu, panting. "That means this is going to be one heck of a fight!"
"Don't forget about us!" Said Kyanon, who along with Wana had scrambled back to their feet.
"So, it's still four-on-one, eh?" Said Makainu "Oh boy, this is gonna be-" But his conversation was interuppted by a large shaking.
"Huh, what's going on?" He said.
"Sheesh, what's taking so long?" Said a deep voice.
"We were trying to be nice by letting you guys pass, but then you just stopped and started yammering on and on!" Said another deep voice.
"Looks like we have no other choice but to defeat you." Said the first deep voice again.
"W-who are you?" Said Jin.
"Oh, our apologies for not properly introducing ourselves first." Said the first deep voice.
"Allow us to show ourselves." Said the second. With that, two Steelixes emerged from the ground and slammed down their tails, causing the ground to shatter, sending Jin, Mokutan, Makainu, Kyanon, and Wana flying in diffrent directions.
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"W-why are youy here?" Said Jin to the newest revealed member, Makainu.
Makainu narrowed his eyes. "Ain't it obvious?" He then dashed up to Jin so close Jin could smell his firey breath.
"I'm here to kill you all." He then rammed his head right at Jin, but Jin moved his head just in time. Jin quickly spun his hand to fire a punch, but to his surprise the Houndoom grabbed it with his own paw, now standing on just his hind legs.
He's standing on his hind legs? Thought Jin in shocked.
"Surprised?" Said Makainu, grinning an evil grin. "I've trained myself to use just two legs instead of four, to increase my combat power and not just focus on speed and fire attacks." Makainu began throwing swift punches at Jin, who was just able to block them with his own hands, before getting forcibly sliding backwards.
"Hey Jin, don't hog up the whole fight to yourself!" Said Wana. "We'll fight this guy now!"
"What? There's more of you now?" Said Makainu. "Aw man, I was hoping to make this quick. Oh well." With that he dashed to Wana and punched her across the face sending her backwards.
"Wana!" Said Kyanon before firing a Fire punch at Makainu, but Makainu mere blocked it before kicking Kyanon in the stomach sending him backwards with Wana. Mokutan then flew at Makainu, but Makinu merely stepped to his side, forcing Mokutan to land.
"Man, what's with this guy's power?" Muttered Mokutan. "Is he really only fourth-ranked?"
"What, did you guys think you wouldn't have much of a challenege if you fought the fourth ranked member?" Said Makainu. "Well, I got some news for you. Judging by the power I've seen rescue teams fight at, I'd say those ranked number five onwards have the skill of a Diamond-Ranked member."
"Diamond Rank?" Said Jin. He then looked towards Mokutan. "Isn't that the highest rank you can get?"
"Yeah," Said Makainu, panting. "That means this is going to be one heck of a fight!"
"Don't forget about us!" Said Kyanon, who along with Wana had scrambled back to their feet.
"So, it's still four-on-one, eh?" Said Makainu "Oh boy, this is gonna be-" But his conversation was interuppted by a large shaking.
"Huh, what's going on?" He said.
"Sheesh, what's taking so long?" Said a deep voice.
"We were trying to be nice by letting you guys pass, but then you just stopped and started yammering on and on!" Said another deep voice.
"Looks like we have no other choice but to defeat you." Said the first deep voice again.
"W-who are you?" Said Jin.
"Oh, our apologies for not properly introducing ourselves first." Said the first deep voice.
"Allow us to show ourselves." Said the second. With that, two Steelixes emerged from the ground and slammed down their tails, causing the ground to shatter, sending Jin, Mokutan, Makainu, Kyanon, and Wana flying in diffrent directions.
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Jin felt the colossal impact of the Steelix tail hit him as he was flung through the air.
"So," He said faintly. "I guess this is what a baseball feels like when it's hit by a bat..." After saying that the area began to grow fuzzy, then everything went black.
Jin slowly awoke as he found himself in in the hallway... only there was no one. Where were they? He thought.
"Mokutan?" He cried out. "Kyanon? Wana?" Then it dawned on him: When those Steelix arose, they must've also knocked around them too, causing them to seperate.
"Oh, looks like I'll just have to find them again." Said Jin, as he got back up to his feet. However, a look of horror cam on his face when he again realized something. This path...looked exactly the same as they one he had been on before. Now that he thought about it, every path, to him anyway, had looked identical. He had been following Mokutan, Kyanon, and Wana the whole time, they were the ones with the sense of direction. Without them, he didn't know left or right, up or down.
"Oh man, which way do I go?" Said Jin in a panic. However, that panic soon ended, as he heard footsteps behind him.
"W-who's there?" Said Jin in fear.
Somehwhere else, Kyanon and Wana, who had been knocked to the same area, began to wake up.
"Woah, what happened?" Said Kyanon.
"Isn't it obvious?" Said Wana. "Those stupid Steelix caused us to get seperated!"
"What?" Said Kyanon. "That really stinks."
"Well looks like you're gonna have to deal with it until we find the others!" Snapped Wana back.
"Alright, alright, let's go.
Meanwhile Mokutan, had also begun to come to.
"W-where am I?" Said Mokutan in somewhat of a daze. He then realized what had happened. "Those Steelix... they must have seperated us!"
He then surrounded his surroundings. "Hmm... based on the amount of heat and lava here, it's a good bet that I'm closer to Groudon then before." He then added " If it was just me, Kyanon and Wana, we could just all go to where Groudon is seperatly, because we all know where it is. However, Jin's here too, and he likely has no idea where he is. I'd best try to find him."
With that Mokutan began searching. He began running and looking for Jin, and calling out his name. At one point, he came to a corner, and he could hear someone moving about.
"Jin, that you?" He said as he turned the corner. However, to his horror, it was a Blaziken.
"Y-you're..." Said Mokutan.
"It's been awhile, Mokutan." It said.
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Jin felt the colossal impact of the Steelix tail hit him as he was flung through the air.
"So," He said faintly. "I guess this is what a baseball feels like when it's hit by a bat..." After saying that the area began to grow fuzzy, then everything went black.
Jin slowly awoke as he found himself in in the hallway... only there was no one. Where were they? He thought.
"Mokutan?" He cried out. "Kyanon? Wana?" Then it dawned on him: When those Steelix arose, they must've also knocked around them too, causing them to seperate.
"Oh, looks like I'll just have to find them again." Said Jin, as he got back up to his feet. However, a look of horror cam on his face when he again realized something. This path...looked exactly the same as they one he had been on before. Now that he thought about it, every path, to him anyway, had looked identical. He had been following Mokutan, Kyanon, and Wana the whole time, they were the ones with the sense of direction. Without them, he didn't know left or right, up or down.
"Oh man, which way do I go?" Said Jin in a panic. However, that panic soon ended, as he heard footsteps behind him.
"W-who's there?" Said Jin in fear.
Somehwhere else, Kyanon and Wana, who had been knocked to the same area, began to wake up.
"Woah, what happened?" Said Kyanon.
"Isn't it obvious?" Said Wana. "Those stupid Steelix caused us to get seperated!"
"What?" Said Kyanon. "That really stinks."
"Well looks like you're gonna have to deal with it until we find the others!" Snapped Wana back.
"Alright, alright, let's go.
Meanwhile Mokutan, had also begun to come to.
"W-where am I?" Said Mokutan in somewhat of a daze. He then realized what had happened. "Those Steelix... they must have seperated us!"
He then surrounded his surroundings. "Hmm... based on the amount of heat and lava here, it's a good bet that I'm closer to Groudon then before." He then added " If it was just me, Kyanon and Wana, we could just all go to where Groudon is seperatly, because we all know where it is. However, Jin's here too, and he likely has no idea where he is. I'd best try to find him."
With that Mokutan began searching. He began running and looking for Jin, and calling out his name. At one point, he came to a corner, and he could hear someone moving about.
"Jin, that you?" He said as he turned the corner. However, to his horror, it was a Blaziken.
"Y-you're..." Said Mokutan.
"It's been awhile, Mokutan." It said.
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Well yeah...long fanfics usually will have some boring chapters. This chapter was boring, but is instrumental in order to set up the next few chapters. Those types of chapters unfortuneately however, are very boring.
Well yeah...long fanfics usually will have some boring chapters. This chapter was boring, but is instrumental in order to set up the next few chapters. Those types of chapters unfortuneately however, are very boring.