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Chapter 31! Another good battle, enjoy!
"This place is giving me the creeps." Said Mokutan as he observed his surroundings. "It's dark and I always have this eerie feeling somethings watching me. I hope we can just rescue Kurai and get outta here." It was at this point he turned a corner and entered a room unlike all the others he had seen so far. This room seemed to resemble that of a castle's and there seemed to be large corriders and hallways on what seemed to be several floors. However, the exit to the door seemed to be straight across from Mokutan.
"This room's different then the others." Said Mokutan. "Could it be- the domain of a Dark Six member?"
"That's right." Said an eerie, raspy male voice that made shivers run down Mokutan's neck. From the other door, a Hypno walked through the other door. "I am Dark Six member number three, Furiko."
"Tch," Muttered Mokutan under his breath. "Looks like I'm gonna have to fight one after all."
"I'll compliment you for making it this far." Said Furkio rather casually. "But it seems that will end here."
"Not if I can help it!" Said Mokutan, firing a fire blast attack at Furiko. However, instead of dodging it, Furiko did nothing and took the attack head on, incenerating him instantly.
"Was that all you had?" Said Mokutan as he then began to walk towards the door. However, he heard footsteps from behind him and turned around, only to get instantly punched down by a mega punch from Furiko.
"But...how?" Said Mokutan as he felt the pain of his cheek with his hand. "I...just killed you!"
"Beating me will not be that easy." Explained Furiko. "The instant you set foot into this room, I cast Hypnosis on you." Mokutan's eyes widened with this statement. "That Furiko you just defeated was an illusion cast by me." Mokutan than interrupted him by firing a flamethrower, but like last time this one simply took it and incenerated. Mokutan, knowing what was going this time, quickly turned around and was able to block a Mega Punch from Furiko.
"Another illusion?" Questioned Mokutan. "Then how were you able to damage me?"
"The power of my Hypnosis has been perfected over the years." Said Furiko. "It hypnotizes all the senses of the body: Touch, Smell, Sight, Sensing, and Hearing." Said Furiko. "There is no possible way you can find or defeat me." With that, the whole room filled with dozens of Furiko clones.
"Man, If he controls all my senses, how can I defeat him?!" Said Mokutan angrily.
"You won't!" Answered Furiko as the clones fired synonmous Psybeams at Mokutan. Mokutan fired a large Fire Blast, negating the Psybeams in front of him, but the ones from behind still made contact, seriosuly injuring him, causing him to fall to his knees.
"Fool. Don't you see it's impossible to defeat me?" Mocked Furiko.
"He's right." Gasped Mokutan. "Unless-" With that he stored almost all of his power and unleashed a scream as the whole room starting heating up, until looking like they were inside of an oven.
"Did you not hear me?" Said the Furiko clones. "All attacks are-" However, almost all clones simultaneously shattered, until there was only one left, how still groaned in pain. The real Furiko. "What...did you do?!" He said painfully.
"I used Heat Wave, of course." Panted Mokutan. "Since we're in such a condensed space, with only two small exits, it would cause this room to heat up to dangerous proportions, incenerating all of your clones, leaving just you."
Struggling through the heat, Furiko tried to make another clone, but found he couldn't. Oh no, He thought In this pain, it's impossible to use my Hypnosis!"
"You may have perfected your Hypnosis move, but your skills haven't." Said Mokutan to Furiko. "You could've used it to create weapons that would have easily defeated me, or made it seem as if you were one of my friends and lure me into a false sense of security. But instead you just used like some cloning machine." He began to charge up a Blast Burn. "Farewell, Furiko." With that, he fired a huge Blast Burn, and with the added heat of the Heat Wave, this time Furiko really was incinerated.
"Well, looks like a was able to get one." Said a releived Mokutan. "But still, I still haven't completed my mission. I must go on to rescue Kurai." With that, he advanced further into the depths of Darknight Relic.
Chapter 31! Another good battle, enjoy!
"This place is giving me the creeps." Said Mokutan as he observed his surroundings. "It's dark and I always have this eerie feeling somethings watching me. I hope we can just rescue Kurai and get outta here." It was at this point he turned a corner and entered a room unlike all the others he had seen so far. This room seemed to resemble that of a castle's and there seemed to be large corriders and hallways on what seemed to be several floors. However, the exit to the door seemed to be straight across from Mokutan.
"This room's different then the others." Said Mokutan. "Could it be- the domain of a Dark Six member?"
"That's right." Said an eerie, raspy male voice that made shivers run down Mokutan's neck. From the other door, a Hypno walked through the other door. "I am Dark Six member number three, Furiko."
"Tch," Muttered Mokutan under his breath. "Looks like I'm gonna have to fight one after all."
"I'll compliment you for making it this far." Said Furkio rather casually. "But it seems that will end here."
"Not if I can help it!" Said Mokutan, firing a fire blast attack at Furiko. However, instead of dodging it, Furiko did nothing and took the attack head on, incenerating him instantly.
"Was that all you had?" Said Mokutan as he then began to walk towards the door. However, he heard footsteps from behind him and turned around, only to get instantly punched down by a mega punch from Furiko.
"But...how?" Said Mokutan as he felt the pain of his cheek with his hand. "I...just killed you!"
"Beating me will not be that easy." Explained Furiko. "The instant you set foot into this room, I cast Hypnosis on you." Mokutan's eyes widened with this statement. "That Furiko you just defeated was an illusion cast by me." Mokutan than interrupted him by firing a flamethrower, but like last time this one simply took it and incenerated. Mokutan, knowing what was going this time, quickly turned around and was able to block a Mega Punch from Furiko.
"Another illusion?" Questioned Mokutan. "Then how were you able to damage me?"
"The power of my Hypnosis has been perfected over the years." Said Furiko. "It hypnotizes all the senses of the body: Touch, Smell, Sight, Sensing, and Hearing." Said Furiko. "There is no possible way you can find or defeat me." With that, the whole room filled with dozens of Furiko clones.
"Man, If he controls all my senses, how can I defeat him?!" Said Mokutan angrily.
"You won't!" Answered Furiko as the clones fired synonmous Psybeams at Mokutan. Mokutan fired a large Fire Blast, negating the Psybeams in front of him, but the ones from behind still made contact, seriosuly injuring him, causing him to fall to his knees.
"Fool. Don't you see it's impossible to defeat me?" Mocked Furiko.
"He's right." Gasped Mokutan. "Unless-" With that he stored almost all of his power and unleashed a scream as the whole room starting heating up, until looking like they were inside of an oven.
"Did you not hear me?" Said the Furiko clones. "All attacks are-" However, almost all clones simultaneously shattered, until there was only one left, how still groaned in pain. The real Furiko. "What...did you do?!" He said painfully.
"I used Heat Wave, of course." Panted Mokutan. "Since we're in such a condensed space, with only two small exits, it would cause this room to heat up to dangerous proportions, incenerating all of your clones, leaving just you."
Struggling through the heat, Furiko tried to make another clone, but found he couldn't. Oh no, He thought In this pain, it's impossible to use my Hypnosis!"
"You may have perfected your Hypnosis move, but your skills haven't." Said Mokutan to Furiko. "You could've used it to create weapons that would have easily defeated me, or made it seem as if you were one of my friends and lure me into a false sense of security. But instead you just used like some cloning machine." He began to charge up a Blast Burn. "Farewell, Furiko." With that, he fired a huge Blast Burn, and with the added heat of the Heat Wave, this time Furiko really was incinerated.
"Well, looks like a was able to get one." Said a releived Mokutan. "But still, I still haven't completed my mission. I must go on to rescue Kurai." With that, he advanced further into the depths of Darknight Relic.
RE: Legend of Lucario
I loved that chapter! Soon, they will all be defeated. But then, a new enemy will rise. Because what will you do in the next 19 chapter or so? Defeat Darkrai? That will be in the end. I must find out what will happen, why are you doing this to me?!
I loved that chapter! Soon, they will all be defeated. But then, a new enemy will rise. Because what will you do in the next 19 chapter or so? Defeat Darkrai? That will be in the end. I must find out what will happen, why are you doing this to me?!
RE: Legend of Lucario
According to my most recent calculations there's actually only going to be 6-7 more chapters left. My thought back then are different then when they are back now.
According to my most recent calculations there's actually only going to be 6-7 more chapters left. My thought back then are different then when they are back now.
RE: Legend of Lucario
Yo, it's chapter 32, yall 'foos!"
"Kurai? Are you here?" Asked Jin as he turned another corner, only to see nothing but the path ahead of him. He sighed sadly as he continued to walk on. As he walked, he noticed the path seemed to get foggier with some type of purple mist.
"Odd," Said Jin to himself. "Does it get foggier as it goes on? Or maybe-" With that statement, he realized he might not be alone. "Alright, I know you're there, Dark Six Member!"
"Hmm, So you knew this Shadow Mist was being caused by me?" Said a deep male voice. Jin then saw the air in front of him solidify, until a Dusknoir had appeared. "Indeed, I am Dark Six member number two, Kihaku."
"Number Two, huh?" Said Jin. "If that's the case, looks like I don't have to hold back!" With that, his right arm flared up into it's magma state as he charged a punch at Kihaku. However, Kihaku was able to barely evade the attack.
"You seem to be quite the challenger, Lucario." Said Kihaku as he clasped his hands together, as if in prayer. "In that case, I too will use the full extent of my power." With that, a bright light emitted from his hands, causing Jin to sheild his eyes from the brightness. When he removed his hands from his eyes, he saw the are had gotten even foggier than before, and Kihaku was nowhere in sight.
"What? Where did he go?" Said a baffled Jin. He then heard something approaching him quickly from his left. He turned around and fired a ball of magma, only to see it hit a Ghastly, causing it to groan in pain before vanishing.
"A Ghastly?" Said Jin, still confused. Then heard something coming from his right, and turned and fired again, but like last time it was only a Ghastly and Haunter. Jin then heard something from behind him, and turned around and was horrified at what he saw. As he stood horrorstruck, a giant army of Ghastly, Haunter, Gengar, and all other Ghost Pokémon stood looking back at him. In front of them, Kihaku emerged.
"You have lost, Lucario." He said. "As a Dusknoir, I can move from the World of Spirits to the real world as frequently as I like. I have used this power to transport you the world of spirits." The army of Ghost Pokémon then began to part, as if hey were a doorway opening. "And all those who enter the spirit realm who are not spirits are to be destroyed." After he spoke those words, Jin heard monstrous footsteps coming from the parted Ghost Pokémon army. He then heard a massive roar, as a Giratina appeared.
"Giratina." Said Kihaku. "Destroy him." With that, Giratina began charging up a massive looking Shadow Ball. Jin fired a huge fireball from his magma arm as Giratina released the Shadow Ball. The two collided, trying to overpower each other.
"C'mon, destroy that Shadow Ball!" Said Jin. But soon the huge Shadow Ball, blew up the fireball and headed towards Jin, making contact and doing immense damage. Jin was blown backwards and fell down to the ground. It was taking all of his energy to stand. He had no time to complain about it though, as Kihaku appeared in front of him and fired a Shadow Punch at Jin, who barely rolled out of the way to avoid it.
"Why do you even bother dodging?" Said Kihaku mockingly as he prepared another Shadow Punch. "You are a lone Pokémon up against an entire army of Ghost Pokémon. Don't you realize it's impossible to win?" With that, he fired the Shadow Punch.
"No!" Said Jin feircely as he blocked the attack with his magma arm, Kihaku staring at him in surprise. "I will defeat you!"
"Did you not hear me?" Said Kihaku. "There's no way you can defeat an entire army of Pokémon."
"Who says I need to defeat them?!" Yelled Jin. "You're the one who sent me here! If I defeat you, then I'll be back at Darknight Relic!"
"We'll see about that." Said Kihaku. "Of all the Pokémon I've sent here, nonr of them sruvived. If you defeat me, it's a good chance you'll still be stuck here."
"Then let's find out!" Yelled Jin as he fired another fireball, which Kihaku again barely dodged. Then Jin, with his other arm fired a huge Dragon Pulse at Kihaku, catching him by surprise and he couldn't dodge it completely, having it hit Kihaku and giving him some damage.
"You!" Exclaimed Kihaku as he fired a large purple beam. Jin didn't know what it was, but safely assumed it was one of those 'Shadow Attacks'. With this realization he held out both of his hands, and fired a flamthrower from one, and Dragon Pulse from the other. The shadow beam made contact with the two beams from Jin. However, unlike with Giratina, Jin's beams broke Kihaku's, leaving him wide open to attack.
"It's over, Kihaku!" Said Jin. Kihaku could only stare in fear as the two beams hit him, incinerating him completely. With that, the fog began to lessen, and before Jin knew it the Ghost Pokémon had vanished.
"Looks like he was just saying I'd never escape to frighten me." Said Jin, as he then turned and began to walk foward again. "Hang on, Kurai, I will save you!"
Yo, it's chapter 32, yall 'foos!"
"Kurai? Are you here?" Asked Jin as he turned another corner, only to see nothing but the path ahead of him. He sighed sadly as he continued to walk on. As he walked, he noticed the path seemed to get foggier with some type of purple mist.
"Odd," Said Jin to himself. "Does it get foggier as it goes on? Or maybe-" With that statement, he realized he might not be alone. "Alright, I know you're there, Dark Six Member!"
"Hmm, So you knew this Shadow Mist was being caused by me?" Said a deep male voice. Jin then saw the air in front of him solidify, until a Dusknoir had appeared. "Indeed, I am Dark Six member number two, Kihaku."
"Number Two, huh?" Said Jin. "If that's the case, looks like I don't have to hold back!" With that, his right arm flared up into it's magma state as he charged a punch at Kihaku. However, Kihaku was able to barely evade the attack.
"You seem to be quite the challenger, Lucario." Said Kihaku as he clasped his hands together, as if in prayer. "In that case, I too will use the full extent of my power." With that, a bright light emitted from his hands, causing Jin to sheild his eyes from the brightness. When he removed his hands from his eyes, he saw the are had gotten even foggier than before, and Kihaku was nowhere in sight.
"What? Where did he go?" Said a baffled Jin. He then heard something approaching him quickly from his left. He turned around and fired a ball of magma, only to see it hit a Ghastly, causing it to groan in pain before vanishing.
"A Ghastly?" Said Jin, still confused. Then heard something coming from his right, and turned and fired again, but like last time it was only a Ghastly and Haunter. Jin then heard something from behind him, and turned around and was horrified at what he saw. As he stood horrorstruck, a giant army of Ghastly, Haunter, Gengar, and all other Ghost Pokémon stood looking back at him. In front of them, Kihaku emerged.
"You have lost, Lucario." He said. "As a Dusknoir, I can move from the World of Spirits to the real world as frequently as I like. I have used this power to transport you the world of spirits." The army of Ghost Pokémon then began to part, as if hey were a doorway opening. "And all those who enter the spirit realm who are not spirits are to be destroyed." After he spoke those words, Jin heard monstrous footsteps coming from the parted Ghost Pokémon army. He then heard a massive roar, as a Giratina appeared.
"Giratina." Said Kihaku. "Destroy him." With that, Giratina began charging up a massive looking Shadow Ball. Jin fired a huge fireball from his magma arm as Giratina released the Shadow Ball. The two collided, trying to overpower each other.
"C'mon, destroy that Shadow Ball!" Said Jin. But soon the huge Shadow Ball, blew up the fireball and headed towards Jin, making contact and doing immense damage. Jin was blown backwards and fell down to the ground. It was taking all of his energy to stand. He had no time to complain about it though, as Kihaku appeared in front of him and fired a Shadow Punch at Jin, who barely rolled out of the way to avoid it.
"Why do you even bother dodging?" Said Kihaku mockingly as he prepared another Shadow Punch. "You are a lone Pokémon up against an entire army of Ghost Pokémon. Don't you realize it's impossible to win?" With that, he fired the Shadow Punch.
"No!" Said Jin feircely as he blocked the attack with his magma arm, Kihaku staring at him in surprise. "I will defeat you!"
"Did you not hear me?" Said Kihaku. "There's no way you can defeat an entire army of Pokémon."
"Who says I need to defeat them?!" Yelled Jin. "You're the one who sent me here! If I defeat you, then I'll be back at Darknight Relic!"
"We'll see about that." Said Kihaku. "Of all the Pokémon I've sent here, nonr of them sruvived. If you defeat me, it's a good chance you'll still be stuck here."
"Then let's find out!" Yelled Jin as he fired another fireball, which Kihaku again barely dodged. Then Jin, with his other arm fired a huge Dragon Pulse at Kihaku, catching him by surprise and he couldn't dodge it completely, having it hit Kihaku and giving him some damage.
"You!" Exclaimed Kihaku as he fired a large purple beam. Jin didn't know what it was, but safely assumed it was one of those 'Shadow Attacks'. With this realization he held out both of his hands, and fired a flamthrower from one, and Dragon Pulse from the other. The shadow beam made contact with the two beams from Jin. However, unlike with Giratina, Jin's beams broke Kihaku's, leaving him wide open to attack.
"It's over, Kihaku!" Said Jin. Kihaku could only stare in fear as the two beams hit him, incinerating him completely. With that, the fog began to lessen, and before Jin knew it the Ghost Pokémon had vanished.
"Looks like he was just saying I'd never escape to frighten me." Said Jin, as he then turned and began to walk foward again. "Hang on, Kurai, I will save you!"
RE: Legend of Lucario
Chapter 33! ZOMG we're almost done!
Jin broke into a run as he started searching for Kurai again.
"If that guy was number two, then number one can't be far away." Realized Jin. "So it looks like I'll just have to beat him too. But this time, I'll be the stronger one." He then kept walking until he suddenly saw something that made him come to a stop. In front of him was a huge black door with an imprint of Darkrai on it.
"What's with this door?" Said Jin to himself. "Well, I don't really have time to worry about it. There's no other way to go, so I'll just have to go through here!" With that, he swung open the doors.
It was darkness. Total darkness. Jin couldn't see anything three inches away from him at all. Then, he heard a noise. A noise that sounded like hands clapping slowly. Then suddenly, a lith shone down in front of Jin, revealing the noise. It was Hinote, slowly applauding him.
"Well done." Said Hinote. Jin's anger began to boil. "You have come all the way to my chambers. That is truly no easy task at all. Too bad I don't have anything to reward you with."
"You!!" Exclaimed Jin with extreme hatred in his voice. "Give me back Kurai!!!!"
"I'd love to, but I can't." Said Hinote. "You see, she's a bit busy as of now." He then snapped his fingers, lighting up the rest of the room, causing Jin's eyes to open wide. On the wall behind was not just an unconcsius Kurai, but an unconcsius Mokutan, Kyanon, Wana, and Yaiba, who Jin had not yet regonized, but assumed he was on his side.
"You see," Explained Hinote. "All of your friends ran into me before they could save Kurai." Said Hinote. "I easily defeated all of them, and put them here."
"You-" Said Jin. "What are going to do to them?!"
"I'm glad you asked." Said Hinote. "Darkrai, why don't you show him?" With that, a dark shroud entered the room from the ceiling, filling Jin with immense fear as it materialized into Darkrai.
"When Darkrai was still dormant, we could only offer him Evil power to him." Said Hinote. "But now that he his awake, by devouring his victims, he can not only get their Evil Power, but also convert their Good Power into Evil Power, and absorb that as well." Darkrai then grabbed the unconcsius Pokémon, holding three in each hand.
"No!" Said Jin who fired an Aura Sphere, but Hintoe fired a Fire Blast at hit, casuing the two to collide and turn to nothing. Darkrai then swallowed all of his friends, his eyes then glowed to show that his power had increased.
"You have lost, Lucario." Moaned Darkrai in a truly evil voice.
"NOO! It can't end like this!" Screamed Jin as he fired a gigantic Dragon Pulse at Darkrai. Darkrai then fired a Dark Pulse right back at it, completely overpowering the Dragon Pulse.
"It is hopeless to resist." Said Darkrai again, as he fired another Dark Pulse and hit Jin full on.
"AAAAHH!" Screamed Jin in massive pain as he was knocked backwards flat on his chest, and was in so much pain he couldn't stand. He then looked up to see Hinote walking towards him.
"Shall I deliver the finishing blow?" He said to Darkrai.
"No" Said Darkrai. "I wish to do it."
"I understand." Said Hinote, as Darkrai's red eyes began to glow. Jin's eyes began to lose focus. He couldn't even see what attack Darkrai was using. Then, everything went black, as he faintly heard the words:
"It's over."
Chapter 33! ZOMG we're almost done!
Jin broke into a run as he started searching for Kurai again.
"If that guy was number two, then number one can't be far away." Realized Jin. "So it looks like I'll just have to beat him too. But this time, I'll be the stronger one." He then kept walking until he suddenly saw something that made him come to a stop. In front of him was a huge black door with an imprint of Darkrai on it.
"What's with this door?" Said Jin to himself. "Well, I don't really have time to worry about it. There's no other way to go, so I'll just have to go through here!" With that, he swung open the doors.
It was darkness. Total darkness. Jin couldn't see anything three inches away from him at all. Then, he heard a noise. A noise that sounded like hands clapping slowly. Then suddenly, a lith shone down in front of Jin, revealing the noise. It was Hinote, slowly applauding him.
"Well done." Said Hinote. Jin's anger began to boil. "You have come all the way to my chambers. That is truly no easy task at all. Too bad I don't have anything to reward you with."
"You!!" Exclaimed Jin with extreme hatred in his voice. "Give me back Kurai!!!!"
"I'd love to, but I can't." Said Hinote. "You see, she's a bit busy as of now." He then snapped his fingers, lighting up the rest of the room, causing Jin's eyes to open wide. On the wall behind was not just an unconcsius Kurai, but an unconcsius Mokutan, Kyanon, Wana, and Yaiba, who Jin had not yet regonized, but assumed he was on his side.
"You see," Explained Hinote. "All of your friends ran into me before they could save Kurai." Said Hinote. "I easily defeated all of them, and put them here."
"You-" Said Jin. "What are going to do to them?!"
"I'm glad you asked." Said Hinote. "Darkrai, why don't you show him?" With that, a dark shroud entered the room from the ceiling, filling Jin with immense fear as it materialized into Darkrai.
"When Darkrai was still dormant, we could only offer him Evil power to him." Said Hinote. "But now that he his awake, by devouring his victims, he can not only get their Evil Power, but also convert their Good Power into Evil Power, and absorb that as well." Darkrai then grabbed the unconcsius Pokémon, holding three in each hand.
"No!" Said Jin who fired an Aura Sphere, but Hintoe fired a Fire Blast at hit, casuing the two to collide and turn to nothing. Darkrai then swallowed all of his friends, his eyes then glowed to show that his power had increased.
"You have lost, Lucario." Moaned Darkrai in a truly evil voice.
"NOO! It can't end like this!" Screamed Jin as he fired a gigantic Dragon Pulse at Darkrai. Darkrai then fired a Dark Pulse right back at it, completely overpowering the Dragon Pulse.
"It is hopeless to resist." Said Darkrai again, as he fired another Dark Pulse and hit Jin full on.
"AAAAHH!" Screamed Jin in massive pain as he was knocked backwards flat on his chest, and was in so much pain he couldn't stand. He then looked up to see Hinote walking towards him.
"Shall I deliver the finishing blow?" He said to Darkrai.
"No" Said Darkrai. "I wish to do it."
"I understand." Said Hinote, as Darkrai's red eyes began to glow. Jin's eyes began to lose focus. He couldn't even see what attack Darkrai was using. Then, everything went black, as he faintly heard the words:
"It's over."
RE: Legend of Lucario
THIRD to last chapter! I've got goosebumps!
Jin's eyes suddenly opened wide. Darkness, that's all he could see, total Darkness. Where am I? He thought to himself. He then heard something approaching from behind him. He turned around and saw Darkrai approaching him. His eyes widened in fear.
"It's over." Said Darkrai again. "You are dead."
An immense emotion of fear and despair came over Jin. "What...did you say?"
"Do not make me need to repeat myself." Said Darkrai in it's cold, evil tone. "I have sent you the the Realm of Nightmares, where I am king. By casting my Dark Void on you, I have sentenced you to an enternal sleep. That is what death is. An eternal sleep."
"Oh," Said Jin, acting a bit more casually. "So I'm not dead. If this is just a dream, then I just have to wake up!"
"It is not that easy." Said Darkrai harshly. "Once casting Dark Void, I take control over your subconsciousness, meaning I control what happens in this dream of yours, and control if you wake up."
"Well then, if that's the case," Smirked Jin. "I just have to defeat you!" With that, he fired a large Dragon Pulse at Darkrai, but was mortified to see it simmer into nothing.
"Did you not hear me?" Said Darkrai. "I am the king of this world. No, king is too light a term. Rather, I am a god."
"A...god?" Said Jin fearfully. Darkrai then suddenly appeared right in front of him almsot instantly after he spoke.
"That is right," Said Darkrai. "A god." He then fired a Dark Pulse at Jin, filling Jin with the most immense pain he'd ever felt in his life. It was like getting shot at with a gun numerous times and feeling the pain of each shot while getting hit by a truck at the same time.
"It's a bite unfortunate," Said Darkrai. "But since this is only a display of your subconsciousness while in a dream state, you cannot die here." He then prepared another Dark Pulse. "But it is alright. The torture of feeling the pain of death for eternity is fat worse than that of Death itself. Now, I will give you true despair-" He said, as his form began to change. His body was becoming taller, as he began to grow legs and skin began turning red. "by becoming the person you despise the most.". By the time he finished speaking, he had changed into the form of Hinote. Jin was still able to give out a small gasp in his pain. He slwoly began to stand back up, but the Hinote-Darkrai hit him with another large Dark Pulse, causing him to feel the pain agian and falling back down. Jin again still tried to get up in the pain and starting walking towards the Hinote-Darkrai.
"Look at you." It said in Hinote's cold voice. "Withstanding the pain of death numerous times and then trying to get back up each time, It's almost humorous." The Hinote-Darkrai then fired another Dark Pulse from it's hand, filling him with pain again, but this time it only caused him to fall to his knees. He again slowly got up and walked towards the Hinote-Darkrai again.
"Why do you struggle so?" It said. "Even if you eventually reach me, what good will it do? I will simply negate the attack."
"No," Said Jin faintly. "You're wrong."
"Hmm?" Said the Hinote-Darkrai. "What do you mean? Have you forgettn I am the God of this realm?"
"If it were to save my friends," Said Jin, his voice rising. "I would go through this pain for all eternity, and if there was a second eternity after that one, I'd do it for that one too!" Hinote-Darkrai's eyes slightly widened with this statement.
"Don't you see?!" Said Jin. "My willpower alone is strong enough to break this realm of yours!" His arm began glowing blue. "If it's do save my friends...I can break through this realm of yours!" He then released a huge dragon pulse, heading towards the Hinote-Darkai.
"No.." It said as the Dragon Pulse came closer. "This...can't be..." With that, it took the attack was completely destroyed, and the entire darkness began to crumble away.
"My, my" Jin heard as he slowly began to awake. "So you broke through my eternal nightmare? Hmph. You truly are troublesome indeed."
THIRD to last chapter! I've got goosebumps!
Jin's eyes suddenly opened wide. Darkness, that's all he could see, total Darkness. Where am I? He thought to himself. He then heard something approaching from behind him. He turned around and saw Darkrai approaching him. His eyes widened in fear.
"It's over." Said Darkrai again. "You are dead."
An immense emotion of fear and despair came over Jin. "What...did you say?"
"Do not make me need to repeat myself." Said Darkrai in it's cold, evil tone. "I have sent you the the Realm of Nightmares, where I am king. By casting my Dark Void on you, I have sentenced you to an enternal sleep. That is what death is. An eternal sleep."
"Oh," Said Jin, acting a bit more casually. "So I'm not dead. If this is just a dream, then I just have to wake up!"
"It is not that easy." Said Darkrai harshly. "Once casting Dark Void, I take control over your subconsciousness, meaning I control what happens in this dream of yours, and control if you wake up."
"Well then, if that's the case," Smirked Jin. "I just have to defeat you!" With that, he fired a large Dragon Pulse at Darkrai, but was mortified to see it simmer into nothing.
"Did you not hear me?" Said Darkrai. "I am the king of this world. No, king is too light a term. Rather, I am a god."
"A...god?" Said Jin fearfully. Darkrai then suddenly appeared right in front of him almsot instantly after he spoke.
"That is right," Said Darkrai. "A god." He then fired a Dark Pulse at Jin, filling Jin with the most immense pain he'd ever felt in his life. It was like getting shot at with a gun numerous times and feeling the pain of each shot while getting hit by a truck at the same time.
"It's a bite unfortunate," Said Darkrai. "But since this is only a display of your subconsciousness while in a dream state, you cannot die here." He then prepared another Dark Pulse. "But it is alright. The torture of feeling the pain of death for eternity is fat worse than that of Death itself. Now, I will give you true despair-" He said, as his form began to change. His body was becoming taller, as he began to grow legs and skin began turning red. "by becoming the person you despise the most.". By the time he finished speaking, he had changed into the form of Hinote. Jin was still able to give out a small gasp in his pain. He slwoly began to stand back up, but the Hinote-Darkrai hit him with another large Dark Pulse, causing him to feel the pain agian and falling back down. Jin again still tried to get up in the pain and starting walking towards the Hinote-Darkrai.
"Look at you." It said in Hinote's cold voice. "Withstanding the pain of death numerous times and then trying to get back up each time, It's almost humorous." The Hinote-Darkrai then fired another Dark Pulse from it's hand, filling him with pain again, but this time it only caused him to fall to his knees. He again slowly got up and walked towards the Hinote-Darkrai again.
"Why do you struggle so?" It said. "Even if you eventually reach me, what good will it do? I will simply negate the attack."
"No," Said Jin faintly. "You're wrong."
"Hmm?" Said the Hinote-Darkrai. "What do you mean? Have you forgettn I am the God of this realm?"
"If it were to save my friends," Said Jin, his voice rising. "I would go through this pain for all eternity, and if there was a second eternity after that one, I'd do it for that one too!" Hinote-Darkrai's eyes slightly widened with this statement.
"Don't you see?!" Said Jin. "My willpower alone is strong enough to break this realm of yours!" His arm began glowing blue. "If it's do save my friends...I can break through this realm of yours!" He then released a huge dragon pulse, heading towards the Hinote-Darkai.
"No.." It said as the Dragon Pulse came closer. "This...can't be..." With that, it took the attack was completely destroyed, and the entire darkness began to crumble away.
"My, my" Jin heard as he slowly began to awake. "So you broke through my eternal nightmare? Hmph. You truly are troublesome indeed."
RE: Legend of Lucario
Chapter 35! Enjoy it's awesomeness.
"Intresting." Said Darkrai. "It was said only Legendary Pokémon could break free of my Dark Void, but it seems you have overcome it." Said Darkrai.
"Then it looks like I have the power of a Legendary!" Said Jin. "Now I know I can defeat you!"
"Hmmm, you seem to right in that statement." Said Hinote in a look of deep thought, wondering what to do.
"And you Hinote!!" Said Jin. "I will destroy you as well, ending this 'Dark Six' once and for all!"
"I see." Said Hinote coldly. "It can't be helped then. Darkrai, shall we do it?"
"What?" Said Jin. "What are you going to do?!"
"Very well. It does seem the only way." Said Darkrai. With that he began to hover over Hinote.
"If you really insist on beating us both," Said Hinote. "Then we shall combine our powers and become as one." Jin stared in fear as darkness from Darkrai's body began falling onto Hinote, until Hinote was completely surrounded by a dark orb. Then, the whole room seemed to shake, as if a tremendous amount of energy was causing and earthquake. The orb began to crack as purple flames emerged from them, soon engulfing the whole orb. Then, from the purple flames emerged what looked like Hinote, except his body was completely colored in different shades of purple, and his eyes were bright red, his pupils also being completely red.
"Now," He said in a voice that was neither distinguishable from Hinote or Darkrai. "You shall die. I, Hinote, have obtained all of Darkrai's Evil Power through him converting himself into evil power. Put together with mine, I have become something that no Pokémon could ever defeat."
"We'll see about that!" Said Jin as his arm went into it's magma form and punched the ground, sending a wave of magma at Hinote, who fired a Fire Blast made out of the purple flames Jin had seen earlier and hit the magma, engulfing it completely and hurdled towards Jin, who then extremespeeded out of the way. He then landed behind Hinote and fired a Mega Punch with his regular arm, but Hinote blocked it with his own before firing a huge Blast Burn at Jin, hitting him square on and causing him to fall backwards.
"It's over." Said Hinote. "In this form, I am invincible." However to his surprise Jin fired a Aura Sphere at him, catching him by surprise and damaging his arm a bit.
"Well the, what was that about being 'invincible'?" Smirked Jin as he extremespeeded right up to Hinote and fired another Mega Punch, but Hinote dodged.
"Being damaged by the likes of you..." Said Hinote angrily, blocking the multiple mega punches being fired by Jin. Jin again fired another Mega Punch, which again Hinote blocked, but then Jin fired his Magma arm at Hinote.
"TAKE THIS!!!!" Said Jin as he landed a punch with the Magma Arm, hitting Hinote and giving him major damage, causing him ot fall backwards.
"How?!" Yelled Hinote. "How can a regular Lucario like you be so powerful?!"
"Do you not see?!" Said Jin, his voice full of power. "I am not a regular Lucario! I AM A HUMAN!" He then prepared another punch with his magma arm, putting all of his power in it. He could feel some new power awakening within him, but right now he was full of emotion and intesnity to notice it. "THAT IS WHY I WILL DEFEAT YOU! IT IS WHY HUMANS ARE SUPERIOR TO POKEMON!" He then fired the magma punch.
"IT'S BECAUSE HUMANS DESIRE TO WIN-"
"IS GREATER!!!" The magma and fire headed towards Hinote, who could only watch in fear.
"Imp...ossible.." He said weakly as the flames hit him full on and continued throughout the whole wall of the room, revealing a ray of outside light.
"I..did it." Said Jin faintly. He then collapsed to the ground, as everything went white.
Chapter 35! Enjoy it's awesomeness.
"Intresting." Said Darkrai. "It was said only Legendary Pokémon could break free of my Dark Void, but it seems you have overcome it." Said Darkrai.
"Then it looks like I have the power of a Legendary!" Said Jin. "Now I know I can defeat you!"
"Hmmm, you seem to right in that statement." Said Hinote in a look of deep thought, wondering what to do.
"And you Hinote!!" Said Jin. "I will destroy you as well, ending this 'Dark Six' once and for all!"
"I see." Said Hinote coldly. "It can't be helped then. Darkrai, shall we do it?"
"What?" Said Jin. "What are you going to do?!"
"Very well. It does seem the only way." Said Darkrai. With that he began to hover over Hinote.
"If you really insist on beating us both," Said Hinote. "Then we shall combine our powers and become as one." Jin stared in fear as darkness from Darkrai's body began falling onto Hinote, until Hinote was completely surrounded by a dark orb. Then, the whole room seemed to shake, as if a tremendous amount of energy was causing and earthquake. The orb began to crack as purple flames emerged from them, soon engulfing the whole orb. Then, from the purple flames emerged what looked like Hinote, except his body was completely colored in different shades of purple, and his eyes were bright red, his pupils also being completely red.
"Now," He said in a voice that was neither distinguishable from Hinote or Darkrai. "You shall die. I, Hinote, have obtained all of Darkrai's Evil Power through him converting himself into evil power. Put together with mine, I have become something that no Pokémon could ever defeat."
"We'll see about that!" Said Jin as his arm went into it's magma form and punched the ground, sending a wave of magma at Hinote, who fired a Fire Blast made out of the purple flames Jin had seen earlier and hit the magma, engulfing it completely and hurdled towards Jin, who then extremespeeded out of the way. He then landed behind Hinote and fired a Mega Punch with his regular arm, but Hinote blocked it with his own before firing a huge Blast Burn at Jin, hitting him square on and causing him to fall backwards.
"It's over." Said Hinote. "In this form, I am invincible." However to his surprise Jin fired a Aura Sphere at him, catching him by surprise and damaging his arm a bit.
"Well the, what was that about being 'invincible'?" Smirked Jin as he extremespeeded right up to Hinote and fired another Mega Punch, but Hinote dodged.
"Being damaged by the likes of you..." Said Hinote angrily, blocking the multiple mega punches being fired by Jin. Jin again fired another Mega Punch, which again Hinote blocked, but then Jin fired his Magma arm at Hinote.
"TAKE THIS!!!!" Said Jin as he landed a punch with the Magma Arm, hitting Hinote and giving him major damage, causing him ot fall backwards.
"How?!" Yelled Hinote. "How can a regular Lucario like you be so powerful?!"
"Do you not see?!" Said Jin, his voice full of power. "I am not a regular Lucario! I AM A HUMAN!" He then prepared another punch with his magma arm, putting all of his power in it. He could feel some new power awakening within him, but right now he was full of emotion and intesnity to notice it. "THAT IS WHY I WILL DEFEAT YOU! IT IS WHY HUMANS ARE SUPERIOR TO POKEMON!" He then fired the magma punch.
"IT'S BECAUSE HUMANS DESIRE TO WIN-"
"IS GREATER!!!" The magma and fire headed towards Hinote, who could only watch in fear.
"Imp...ossible.." He said weakly as the flames hit him full on and continued throughout the whole wall of the room, revealing a ray of outside light.
"I..did it." Said Jin faintly. He then collapsed to the ground, as everything went white.
RE: Legend of Lucario
So, this was like the end. I am suspecting the next chapter is the last. I liked the chapter, but he defeated Darkrai/Hinote too quickly. I thought you could have put more battling into it. As good as the chapter was, it could have been better for a final battle.
So, this was like the end. I am suspecting the next chapter is the last. I liked the chapter, but he defeated Darkrai/Hinote too quickly. I thought you could have put more battling into it. As good as the chapter was, it could have been better for a final battle.
RE: Legend of Lucario
ZOMG this fanfic is COMPLETE!
Jin woke up, and found himself in a room that was entirely white. "W-where am I?" He said to himself. Then he heard a booming, devine voice speak out.
"Well done, Jin." It said. Then, a huge flash of light appeared in front of Jin, and Jin stared in awe as Arceus emerged.
"A-a-a-arceus?!" Said Jin in disbeleif.
"Yes. It is I." Said Arceus again.
"Why am I here?!" Demanded Jin.
"You are here because you have fulfilled your destiny."
"Destiny?" Questioned Jin.
"Yes." Said Arceus "Darkrai would've soon overtaken me as the god of Pokémon had I not acted. So, I chose a human to go back to the time when only Pokémon lived and defeat Darkrai before he even began plotting against me."
"So that's how I became a Pokémon." Said Jin. Then he remembered something told to him when he was young. A story about how Arceus created humans because Darkrai and other evil Pokémon began destroying the planet. "Wait a minute. If Darkrai is destroyed, does that mean humans will never be created?"
"Do not worry." Said Arceus. "Though Darkrai is no more, evil will always exist. Eventually I will have to create humans, and nothing of their history will be changed."
"Oh, that's good then." Said Jin. "Wait, what about Kurai and my friends? Are they okay?"
"Don't worry. You will see them soon." Said Arceus. With that, he began to vanish, as Jin started feeling dizzy. Then, as Arceus vanished from sight, Jin collapsed.
"Jin? Hey Jin, wake up!"
Jin slowly came to. Was that a dream? He thought. His vision was coming to. He saw Kurai pushing him.
"Jin! You did it!"
"Kurai!" Said Jin. "You're okay!"
"Yeah!" Said Kurai. "When you defeated Darkrai and Hinote, it must of caused me and the others to be released! Now c'mon! We have to tell Rayquaza about this!"
Back at Rayquaza's palace, celebrating and happiness where abundant after Jin had told Rayquaza the news.
"Well Jin, I must say, you and your friends are true heroes." Said Rayquaza. "I only skip ranks on very rare occasions, but as of now, I hereby promote Jin and his rescue team to Diamond Rank!"
Jin, Kurai, Mokutan, and the others smiled in happiness as the accepted their new, diamond badge.
"This world still has problems in it." Said Rayquaza. "But I can seek comfort knowing I have you."
"Yep." Said Jin. "It's our duty to protect this world!" He then added silently to himself. "At least until the humans come."
ZOMG this fanfic is COMPLETE!
Jin woke up, and found himself in a room that was entirely white. "W-where am I?" He said to himself. Then he heard a booming, devine voice speak out.
"Well done, Jin." It said. Then, a huge flash of light appeared in front of Jin, and Jin stared in awe as Arceus emerged.
"A-a-a-arceus?!" Said Jin in disbeleif.
"Yes. It is I." Said Arceus again.
"Why am I here?!" Demanded Jin.
"You are here because you have fulfilled your destiny."
"Destiny?" Questioned Jin.
"Yes." Said Arceus "Darkrai would've soon overtaken me as the god of Pokémon had I not acted. So, I chose a human to go back to the time when only Pokémon lived and defeat Darkrai before he even began plotting against me."
"So that's how I became a Pokémon." Said Jin. Then he remembered something told to him when he was young. A story about how Arceus created humans because Darkrai and other evil Pokémon began destroying the planet. "Wait a minute. If Darkrai is destroyed, does that mean humans will never be created?"
"Do not worry." Said Arceus. "Though Darkrai is no more, evil will always exist. Eventually I will have to create humans, and nothing of their history will be changed."
"Oh, that's good then." Said Jin. "Wait, what about Kurai and my friends? Are they okay?"
"Don't worry. You will see them soon." Said Arceus. With that, he began to vanish, as Jin started feeling dizzy. Then, as Arceus vanished from sight, Jin collapsed.
"Jin? Hey Jin, wake up!"
Jin slowly came to. Was that a dream? He thought. His vision was coming to. He saw Kurai pushing him.
"Jin! You did it!"
"Kurai!" Said Jin. "You're okay!"
"Yeah!" Said Kurai. "When you defeated Darkrai and Hinote, it must of caused me and the others to be released! Now c'mon! We have to tell Rayquaza about this!"
Back at Rayquaza's palace, celebrating and happiness where abundant after Jin had told Rayquaza the news.
"Well Jin, I must say, you and your friends are true heroes." Said Rayquaza. "I only skip ranks on very rare occasions, but as of now, I hereby promote Jin and his rescue team to Diamond Rank!"
Jin, Kurai, Mokutan, and the others smiled in happiness as the accepted their new, diamond badge.
"This world still has problems in it." Said Rayquaza. "But I can seek comfort knowing I have you."
"Yep." Said Jin. "It's our duty to protect this world!" He then added silently to himself. "At least until the humans come."
You mean Furiko? He's a Hypno.