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RE: Legend of Lucario
Enjoy the next chapter! It's a flashbacker!
"H-h-h-hinote?" Said Charizard, every nerve in his body trembling.
"Hinote?" Said the Blaziken. "Did you eat some stupid sauce for breakfast or something? I'm Ondori, remember?"
Mokutan thought. Ondori, Ondori...then he rememberd.
(Note: The following is a flashback, so you don't get confused.)
A Charmeleon Mokutan is in Magma cave, running from several big, mean looking Pokémon. Mokutan is running with more speed than ever before, as if the stat went up just for this occasion. He takes a turn and winds up in a dead end.
"You had some real guts there, just waltzing into our territory like that." Said one of the Pokémon, a Graveler.
"However, that doesn't mean we're gonna take it easy on you." Said the second, an Arbok.
"Get ready for the beating of a lifetime." Said the last one, a Nidorino.
"Please, it was an honest mistake!" Said the young Mokutan. "I just took a wrong turn, is all!"
"We're not gonna take any of that." Said the Arbok, as they moved in closer. However, two voices from behind them made them stop.
"Y'know, that kid may have stepped in to your territory..."
"But now you're trespassing into ours."
The Pokémon turned to see a Blaziken and a Combusken, standing there.
"Grrr...get them too!" Said the Graveler as he, the Arbok, and Nidorino ran at them. The Graveler lept at the Blaziken, but it simply kicked him and tossed him aside. The Arbok and Nidorino cornered the Combusken, but it slashed it's claws at both, giving them deep, burning cutmarks on their faces.
"Hmph...you win this time." Said the Graveler, as he and his gang just walked away in disgust.
"Sorry about that." Said the Blaziken to Mokutan. "People 'round here are pretty rough."
"Thanks." Said Mokutan. He then felt it would be proper to introduce himself. "I'm Mokutan, by the way."
"My name's Ondori." Said the Blaziken.
"Hinote." Said the Combusken.
(End of flashback)
"You're...Hinote's brother." Said Mokutan.
"So you remembered me!" Said Ondori happily.
"Yeah," Said Mokutan. I wonder if he knows about what's happening outside this cave... he thought.
"Speaking of which, how is Hinote?" Said Ondori.
Guess not. Thought Mokutan.
Enjoy the next chapter! It's a flashbacker!
"H-h-h-hinote?" Said Charizard, every nerve in his body trembling.
"Hinote?" Said the Blaziken. "Did you eat some stupid sauce for breakfast or something? I'm Ondori, remember?"
Mokutan thought. Ondori, Ondori...then he rememberd.
(Note: The following is a flashback, so you don't get confused.)
A Charmeleon Mokutan is in Magma cave, running from several big, mean looking Pokémon. Mokutan is running with more speed than ever before, as if the stat went up just for this occasion. He takes a turn and winds up in a dead end.
"You had some real guts there, just waltzing into our territory like that." Said one of the Pokémon, a Graveler.
"However, that doesn't mean we're gonna take it easy on you." Said the second, an Arbok.
"Get ready for the beating of a lifetime." Said the last one, a Nidorino.
"Please, it was an honest mistake!" Said the young Mokutan. "I just took a wrong turn, is all!"
"We're not gonna take any of that." Said the Arbok, as they moved in closer. However, two voices from behind them made them stop.
"Y'know, that kid may have stepped in to your territory..."
"But now you're trespassing into ours."
The Pokémon turned to see a Blaziken and a Combusken, standing there.
"Grrr...get them too!" Said the Graveler as he, the Arbok, and Nidorino ran at them. The Graveler lept at the Blaziken, but it simply kicked him and tossed him aside. The Arbok and Nidorino cornered the Combusken, but it slashed it's claws at both, giving them deep, burning cutmarks on their faces.
"Hmph...you win this time." Said the Graveler, as he and his gang just walked away in disgust.
"Sorry about that." Said the Blaziken to Mokutan. "People 'round here are pretty rough."
"Thanks." Said Mokutan. He then felt it would be proper to introduce himself. "I'm Mokutan, by the way."
"My name's Ondori." Said the Blaziken.
"Hinote." Said the Combusken.
(End of flashback)
"You're...Hinote's brother." Said Mokutan.
"So you remembered me!" Said Ondori happily.
"Yeah," Said Mokutan. I wonder if he knows about what's happening outside this cave... he thought.
"Speaking of which, how is Hinote?" Said Ondori.
Guess not. Thought Mokutan.
RE: Legend of Lucario
Here's chapter 18!
"W-who's there?" Jin asked again as he heard someone approach from behind and took a fighting stance. However, he was surprised to see it was just a small Growlithe who drew back in intimidation of the sight of Jin's fighting pose.
"You...you aren't going to hurt me, are you?" Whimpered the Growlithe.
Jin realized how scary he looked in his stance and went back to his regular one. "Oh, um, no, I'm not." He said. "Sorry about that."
"That's good." Said the Growlithe. "If that's the case, do you think you could help me?"
"Help you?" Asked Jin. "How?"
"Well, the thing is..." Said the Growlithe, who's voice sunk into a low, sad whisper. "I've been seperated from my mom."
"Oh." Said Jin, who got a sad look on his face.
"I'm sure she should be around here somewhere, but this place is full of rough Pokémon." Said the Growlithe. "But if I had someone big and strong like you, I'm sure we could find her!"
"Well," Said Jin. "I'm kinda lost myself. I don't know right or left, up or down in this place."
"So...you won't help?" Said the Growlithe with a huge look of dissapointment.
"Are you kidding?" Said Jin. "I won't let a little thing like a sense of direction sto me from helping you!" He walked towards the Growlithe and patted him on the head. "I'm not one as of now, but I'm still was a rescue team member! I can't just walk away from other people's problems!"
"Really?" Said the Growlithe. "You're the best...um' I'm sorry, I never caught your name."
"It's Jin."
"My name's Koinu." Said the Growlithe.
"Then hope on my back, Koinu." Said Jin. Koinu then did.
"I may not have any sense of direction, but I'm sure if you're a resident here, you must have one, am I right?"
"Yeah, I guess." Said Koinu, who had perched on his shoulder.
"So, you can tell me were to go, and if we run into trouble, I'll take care of it!" Said Jin.
"But I have no idea were my mom is!" Responded Koinu.
"Well, do you know were you saw her last?" Asked Jin.
Koinu thought for a moment. "Yeah, I do!" He said suddenly, while pointing a paw to his left. "It's that way!" And with that, He and Jin took off, in search for Koinu's mother.
Here's chapter 18!
"W-who's there?" Jin asked again as he heard someone approach from behind and took a fighting stance. However, he was surprised to see it was just a small Growlithe who drew back in intimidation of the sight of Jin's fighting pose.
"You...you aren't going to hurt me, are you?" Whimpered the Growlithe.
Jin realized how scary he looked in his stance and went back to his regular one. "Oh, um, no, I'm not." He said. "Sorry about that."
"That's good." Said the Growlithe. "If that's the case, do you think you could help me?"
"Help you?" Asked Jin. "How?"
"Well, the thing is..." Said the Growlithe, who's voice sunk into a low, sad whisper. "I've been seperated from my mom."
"Oh." Said Jin, who got a sad look on his face.
"I'm sure she should be around here somewhere, but this place is full of rough Pokémon." Said the Growlithe. "But if I had someone big and strong like you, I'm sure we could find her!"
"Well," Said Jin. "I'm kinda lost myself. I don't know right or left, up or down in this place."
"So...you won't help?" Said the Growlithe with a huge look of dissapointment.
"Are you kidding?" Said Jin. "I won't let a little thing like a sense of direction sto me from helping you!" He walked towards the Growlithe and patted him on the head. "I'm not one as of now, but I'm still was a rescue team member! I can't just walk away from other people's problems!"
"Really?" Said the Growlithe. "You're the best...um' I'm sorry, I never caught your name."
"It's Jin."
"My name's Koinu." Said the Growlithe.
"Then hope on my back, Koinu." Said Jin. Koinu then did.
"I may not have any sense of direction, but I'm sure if you're a resident here, you must have one, am I right?"
"Yeah, I guess." Said Koinu, who had perched on his shoulder.
"So, you can tell me were to go, and if we run into trouble, I'll take care of it!" Said Jin.
"But I have no idea were my mom is!" Responded Koinu.
"Well, do you know were you saw her last?" Asked Jin.
Koinu thought for a moment. "Yeah, I do!" He said suddenly, while pointing a paw to his left. "It's that way!" And with that, He and Jin took off, in search for Koinu's mother.
RE: Legend of Lucario
Here's chapter 19! Enjoy!
"So, we've been sepearted from everyone, haven't we?" Said Wana has she and Kyanon walked onwards.
"It appears to be that way." Said Kyanon. "So now what do we do?"
"Well, I'm not really up all that trouble of looking for everyone else," Said Wana. "So I think we should just go to Groudon and wait for everyone else there."
"Sounds good to me." Said Kyanon, as they began to walk towards Groudon. However, soon after they heard someone approaching behind.
"W-who's there?" Wana said as they turned around. To their horror they saw Makainu, staring back.
"I thought I smelled some garbage." Said Makainu. "Tch, I was hoping to land near some tough fighters, but I found you weaklings instead."
"Hey, who are you calling weaklings?" Said Wana.
"Yeah, we'll show you!" Said Kyanon as he ran at Makainu and fired a punch. However, Makainu blocked it with his paw as he then grabbed his hand and tossed him aside.
"AAARGH!" Yelled Wana as she came from the opposite direction, but Makainu quickly turned around and threw her backwards too.
"When one of you attacks and fails, the other attacks from the opposite direction, always." Said Makainu. "You're attacks are so predictable!"
"Darn! This guys is way too strong!" Said Kyanon as he got up to his feet.
"There's only one thing to do now." Said Wana.
"What?" Asked Kyanon.
"Run!" Said Wana, as she and Kyanon turned around and ran as hard as they could.
"You won't get away that easily!" Said Makainu as he got back on all fours and ran after them with blazing speed.
Meanwhile, Ondori and Mokutan were sitting on a nearby hill.
"So, how's Hinote?" Said Ondori.
"Oh...um...he's doing fine." Mokutan lied. He could never tell Ondori the truth. Then he saw Kyanon and Wana down below, running away from Makainu.
Kyanon! Wana! I have to save them! Said Mokutan. He turned Ondori. "Hey, Ondori!"
"Huh? What is it Mokutan?" Said Ondori.
"Those Pokémon are in trouble! We have to save them!" Said Mokutan back.
Here's chapter 19! Enjoy!
"So, we've been sepearted from everyone, haven't we?" Said Wana has she and Kyanon walked onwards.
"It appears to be that way." Said Kyanon. "So now what do we do?"
"Well, I'm not really up all that trouble of looking for everyone else," Said Wana. "So I think we should just go to Groudon and wait for everyone else there."
"Sounds good to me." Said Kyanon, as they began to walk towards Groudon. However, soon after they heard someone approaching behind.
"W-who's there?" Wana said as they turned around. To their horror they saw Makainu, staring back.
"I thought I smelled some garbage." Said Makainu. "Tch, I was hoping to land near some tough fighters, but I found you weaklings instead."
"Hey, who are you calling weaklings?" Said Wana.
"Yeah, we'll show you!" Said Kyanon as he ran at Makainu and fired a punch. However, Makainu blocked it with his paw as he then grabbed his hand and tossed him aside.
"AAARGH!" Yelled Wana as she came from the opposite direction, but Makainu quickly turned around and threw her backwards too.
"When one of you attacks and fails, the other attacks from the opposite direction, always." Said Makainu. "You're attacks are so predictable!"
"Darn! This guys is way too strong!" Said Kyanon as he got up to his feet.
"There's only one thing to do now." Said Wana.
"What?" Asked Kyanon.
"Run!" Said Wana, as she and Kyanon turned around and ran as hard as they could.
"You won't get away that easily!" Said Makainu as he got back on all fours and ran after them with blazing speed.
Meanwhile, Ondori and Mokutan were sitting on a nearby hill.
"So, how's Hinote?" Said Ondori.
"Oh...um...he's doing fine." Mokutan lied. He could never tell Ondori the truth. Then he saw Kyanon and Wana down below, running away from Makainu.
Kyanon! Wana! I have to save them! Said Mokutan. He turned Ondori. "Hey, Ondori!"
"Huh? What is it Mokutan?" Said Ondori.
"Those Pokémon are in trouble! We have to save them!" Said Mokutan back.
RE: Legend of Lucario
Hey, this story keeps getting better and better!
Keep it up!
Hey, this story keeps getting better and better!
Keep it up!
RE: Legend of Lucario
Nice chapter. I read yesterday but i didnt have time to reply. I liked, it, keep up the good work!
(You always leave the reader where they want to keep reading, but you just stop them, and then they get angry, like me. No, just kidding, but I really like this fanfic. So, please...please...next chapter!)
Nice chapter. I read yesterday but i didnt have time to reply. I liked, it, keep up the good work!
(You always leave the reader where they want to keep reading, but you just stop them, and then they get angry, like me. No, just kidding, but I really like this fanfic. So, please...please...next chapter!)
RE: Legend of Lucario
The twentieth chapter is here! Enjoy!
"Which way?" Asked Jin as Koinu guided him through the cave.
"Your left!" Said Koinu as Jin made a turn. "No, your other left!"
Jin stopped to catch his breath. "Man, even with some help, this is hard. How do you guys exactly navigate here?"
"I dunno." Said Koinu. "It just naturally comes to us."
"Naturally, huh?" Said Jin in a somewhat dissapointed voice. Just then, they were spotted by a group of Magmar.
"Hey, what are those guys doing there?" Said one in anger.
"Yeah, this is our turf!" Said another. With that, the whole group broke into an angry mob and ran towards Jin.
"Well, if it naturally comes," Said Jin in a panic. "Then it better start coming!" He said as he and Koinu began to run away from the mob.
"Jin, what are we gonna do?" Said Koinu, sounding worried.
Jin, who had noticed that the Magmar were gaining, decided that running was useless. He turned around to face the Magmar. "I'll just have to take them down!" With that he fired an Aura Sphere from his hand, knocking one down, but the rest kept on coming.
"That's not gonna stop us, kid!" Said one of the Magmar as he fired a flamethrower to Jin, hitting him and causing some major damage. Koinu, however, luckily was unharmed.
"It really is foolish to fight all these guys." Said Jin under his breath, weakly panting. "My only hope to win would be to find a narrow area, so they'd have to fight me one-on-one seperately." With that desiscion made, he ran away again.
"You can't hide from us!" Said a Magmar as they began pursuing Jin. Jin turned corner after corner, until, to his horror he arrived at a dead end. He stared, wide-eyed as the Magmar approached him.
"Let this be a lesson to you." Said another Magmar, as it neared him. "Don't enter into our territory ever again." With that, he fired another flamethrower at Jin, looking equally as powerful. Jin braced for the attack and a knockout as he was hit with direct contact, filling his body with pain. However, to his shock, he was still standing.
"Huh? How'd you survive that?" Asked the Magmar in frustration.
Jin himself was in shock. How did he survive? That attack looked just as powerful as the last one, and he knew two of those would be an instant KO. So how was he still conscious? Then he realized it: The heat in this area...was slightly weaker than in the area previously before. In fact, come to think of it, since getting deeper into the cave, the pressure the heat had applied had risen slightly. Then it hit him: This was how Pokémon navigated this place! They simply knew that less heat ment they were closer to the entrance, and more ment closer to Groudon. To find out where they lived, the simply studied the heat pressure around them! With this in mind, Jin's confidence suddenly grew, and he felt confident he could win. Quickly, he fired an extremly powerful, Aura Sphere, not only knocking out the Magmar in front of him, but sending him into three more, knocking them out as well. The other Magmar around them gasped in shock at the power of the attack, but then regained their composure and stared their eyes back on Jin.
"That was pretty good." Said one of the Magmar. "But you're still not powerful enough to defeat all of us."
"Oh really?" Smirked Jin. "I think otherwise."
"Hmph, that so? Than why don't you stop yakking and fight?" Said another.
"Oh, I will." Said Jin, the smirk still on his face.
The twentieth chapter is here! Enjoy!
"Which way?" Asked Jin as Koinu guided him through the cave.
"Your left!" Said Koinu as Jin made a turn. "No, your other left!"
Jin stopped to catch his breath. "Man, even with some help, this is hard. How do you guys exactly navigate here?"
"I dunno." Said Koinu. "It just naturally comes to us."
"Naturally, huh?" Said Jin in a somewhat dissapointed voice. Just then, they were spotted by a group of Magmar.
"Hey, what are those guys doing there?" Said one in anger.
"Yeah, this is our turf!" Said another. With that, the whole group broke into an angry mob and ran towards Jin.
"Well, if it naturally comes," Said Jin in a panic. "Then it better start coming!" He said as he and Koinu began to run away from the mob.
"Jin, what are we gonna do?" Said Koinu, sounding worried.
Jin, who had noticed that the Magmar were gaining, decided that running was useless. He turned around to face the Magmar. "I'll just have to take them down!" With that he fired an Aura Sphere from his hand, knocking one down, but the rest kept on coming.
"That's not gonna stop us, kid!" Said one of the Magmar as he fired a flamethrower to Jin, hitting him and causing some major damage. Koinu, however, luckily was unharmed.
"It really is foolish to fight all these guys." Said Jin under his breath, weakly panting. "My only hope to win would be to find a narrow area, so they'd have to fight me one-on-one seperately." With that desiscion made, he ran away again.
"You can't hide from us!" Said a Magmar as they began pursuing Jin. Jin turned corner after corner, until, to his horror he arrived at a dead end. He stared, wide-eyed as the Magmar approached him.
"Let this be a lesson to you." Said another Magmar, as it neared him. "Don't enter into our territory ever again." With that, he fired another flamethrower at Jin, looking equally as powerful. Jin braced for the attack and a knockout as he was hit with direct contact, filling his body with pain. However, to his shock, he was still standing.
"Huh? How'd you survive that?" Asked the Magmar in frustration.
Jin himself was in shock. How did he survive? That attack looked just as powerful as the last one, and he knew two of those would be an instant KO. So how was he still conscious? Then he realized it: The heat in this area...was slightly weaker than in the area previously before. In fact, come to think of it, since getting deeper into the cave, the pressure the heat had applied had risen slightly. Then it hit him: This was how Pokémon navigated this place! They simply knew that less heat ment they were closer to the entrance, and more ment closer to Groudon. To find out where they lived, the simply studied the heat pressure around them! With this in mind, Jin's confidence suddenly grew, and he felt confident he could win. Quickly, he fired an extremly powerful, Aura Sphere, not only knocking out the Magmar in front of him, but sending him into three more, knocking them out as well. The other Magmar around them gasped in shock at the power of the attack, but then regained their composure and stared their eyes back on Jin.
"That was pretty good." Said one of the Magmar. "But you're still not powerful enough to defeat all of us."
"Oh really?" Smirked Jin. "I think otherwise."
"Hmph, that so? Than why don't you stop yakking and fight?" Said another.
"Oh, I will." Said Jin, the smirk still on his face.
RE: Legend of Lucario
That chapter was great!
Oh, and, PokeLen is right... you always leave me at the
point where I want to read more, but then you stop.
Oh, well. I'll just wait for more then!
That chapter was great!
Oh, and, PokeLen is right... you always leave me at the
point where I want to read more, but then you stop.
Oh, well. I'll just wait for more then!
RE: Legend of Lucario
Here's chapter 21!
"Sheesh." Said Kyouto as he walked into a room in the hidden hideout where the Dark Six was located. This peritcular room had a cell in it, where Kurai was being imprisoned in. "Just because I'm the lowest ranked member doesn't mean I have to babysit over this kid." Kyouto grumbled to himslef.
"You jerks." Said Kurai from inside the cell. "There's no way you will defeat all of the other resuce teams combined." She persisted.
"Lady, I don't think you get it." Said Kyouto. "The rescue teams think we're goin' to war with them. If that really was our goals, we would've done that a wicked long time ago."
Kurai looked at him in surprise. "You're...not fighting them?"
"No." Said Kyouto. "That would just be a waste of time."
"Then...what are you doing?" Said Kurai.
"You wanna know?" Said Kyouto with a smirk. "I guess I could tell ya. You see, even though Darkrai is awakened, his powers still aren't. We will continue to feed him evil power until his powers do. When that happens-" He said as he narrowed his voice to whisper. "He will engulf the whole world in darkness."
Kurai's eyes opened wide. "The whole word...in darkness?"
"That's right." Said Kyouto. "There will be no need for wars and the like. The whole world will be at Darkrai's command." He then left. "You can sit there and hope all you want. But in the end, nothing will happen."
After Kyouto left, Kurai whispered. "I know that won't happen. There's no way people this evil could do something like that." After that, she heard a noise from behind her. She quickly turned around to see that there was another Pokémon, an Absol, in the cell too. He was in the shadows, so Kurai hadn't noticed him until now.
"So, Kyouto finally left, huh?" It said in a male voice. "Man, I thought he was gonna take forever."
"Who...are you?" Asked Kurai nervously.
"Oh, my bad, I haven't introduced myself properly yet." Said the Absol, walking out of the shadows. "My name is Yaiba."He then sat next to Kurai. "Sorry I was hiding back there. I don't like to converse with the Dark Six that much."
"Why are you in this cell?" Asked Kurai.
"Same reason as you, of course." Said Yaiba, without much of a care. "It's the only reason you go here."
"Oh, yeah." Realized Kurai. Then she realized something else too. "Wait, if that's the case, shouldn't this place be filled up, instead of it being us two?"
"Hmm." Said Yaiba, as he looked at her as if she said something completely stupid. "Let me guess, you weren't raised by Dark Pokémon, correct?"
"Uh, yeah." Said Kurai. "How did you know?"
"You see, so was I. So we have no idea of the customs that Dark Pokémon have." Said Yaiba. "You see, it is an unspoken rule outside of other Dark Pokémon that, no matter on what side thye are on, be it good or evil, they must obey the rules of Darkrai. It's partly the reason of why he was sent into a slumber by the other Legendary Pokémon. All other Dark Pokémon who came here willingly donated their Evil Power than swore to secrecy they would tell no one, and left." He then looked outside of the cell bars. "More to the point, I have something to ask of you."
"What?" Said Kurai.
"You see, I've been in this cell for a long time. We'll probably be in here for all of eternity if we don't act." He said. "I've always had a plan to escape, but it doesn't work with one person." He then turned to Kurai. "Will you help me?"
Kurai thought for a moment before saying "Yes."
As always, please leave a comment/criticism.
Here's chapter 21!
"Sheesh." Said Kyouto as he walked into a room in the hidden hideout where the Dark Six was located. This peritcular room had a cell in it, where Kurai was being imprisoned in. "Just because I'm the lowest ranked member doesn't mean I have to babysit over this kid." Kyouto grumbled to himslef.
"You jerks." Said Kurai from inside the cell. "There's no way you will defeat all of the other resuce teams combined." She persisted.
"Lady, I don't think you get it." Said Kyouto. "The rescue teams think we're goin' to war with them. If that really was our goals, we would've done that a wicked long time ago."
Kurai looked at him in surprise. "You're...not fighting them?"
"No." Said Kyouto. "That would just be a waste of time."
"Then...what are you doing?" Said Kurai.
"You wanna know?" Said Kyouto with a smirk. "I guess I could tell ya. You see, even though Darkrai is awakened, his powers still aren't. We will continue to feed him evil power until his powers do. When that happens-" He said as he narrowed his voice to whisper. "He will engulf the whole world in darkness."
Kurai's eyes opened wide. "The whole word...in darkness?"
"That's right." Said Kyouto. "There will be no need for wars and the like. The whole world will be at Darkrai's command." He then left. "You can sit there and hope all you want. But in the end, nothing will happen."
After Kyouto left, Kurai whispered. "I know that won't happen. There's no way people this evil could do something like that." After that, she heard a noise from behind her. She quickly turned around to see that there was another Pokémon, an Absol, in the cell too. He was in the shadows, so Kurai hadn't noticed him until now.
"So, Kyouto finally left, huh?" It said in a male voice. "Man, I thought he was gonna take forever."
"Who...are you?" Asked Kurai nervously.
"Oh, my bad, I haven't introduced myself properly yet." Said the Absol, walking out of the shadows. "My name is Yaiba."He then sat next to Kurai. "Sorry I was hiding back there. I don't like to converse with the Dark Six that much."
"Why are you in this cell?" Asked Kurai.
"Same reason as you, of course." Said Yaiba, without much of a care. "It's the only reason you go here."
"Oh, yeah." Realized Kurai. Then she realized something else too. "Wait, if that's the case, shouldn't this place be filled up, instead of it being us two?"
"Hmm." Said Yaiba, as he looked at her as if she said something completely stupid. "Let me guess, you weren't raised by Dark Pokémon, correct?"
"Uh, yeah." Said Kurai. "How did you know?"
"You see, so was I. So we have no idea of the customs that Dark Pokémon have." Said Yaiba. "You see, it is an unspoken rule outside of other Dark Pokémon that, no matter on what side thye are on, be it good or evil, they must obey the rules of Darkrai. It's partly the reason of why he was sent into a slumber by the other Legendary Pokémon. All other Dark Pokémon who came here willingly donated their Evil Power than swore to secrecy they would tell no one, and left." He then looked outside of the cell bars. "More to the point, I have something to ask of you."
"What?" Said Kurai.
"You see, I've been in this cell for a long time. We'll probably be in here for all of eternity if we don't act." He said. "I've always had a plan to escape, but it doesn't work with one person." He then turned to Kurai. "Will you help me?"
Kurai thought for a moment before saying "Yes."
As always, please leave a comment/criticism.
RE: Legend of Lucario
Pretty good.
I like this fic its really good.
Pretty good.
I like this fic its really good.
RE: Legend of Lucario
Chapter 22 is up!
"Heh, I've got you now!" Said Makainu, as he cornered Kyanon and Wana into a dead end. However, he was interrupted by Mokutan and Ondori leaping down to face him.
"Actually, we're the ones that have you." Said Mokutan as he unleashed a fire blast on Makainu, however, he was shocked to see that his attack did nothing.
"Idiot, don't you know that, as a Houndoom I have the Flash Fire ability?" Sneered Makainu. "Your fire attacks are worthless!" Ondori then used quick attack to rush right behind him.
"Well then, how about a physical attack?" He said as he tried to punch Makainu, but he evaded.
"Oh. I haven't seen you before, now have I? What's your name, Blaziken?" Asked Makainu.
"My name is Ondori." Ondori said. "Brother of the great-"
"Wait! Don't say it!" Said Mokutan.
"Hinote!"
With this, Makainu burst into a wide grin and started to chuckle a little. "That so?"
"What's so funny?" Asked Ondori.
"I take it you guys aren't aware of stuff that happens outside this cave." Said Makainu. "Otherwise, you wouldn't be fighting me right now."
"What do you mean by that?" Demanded Ondori.
"You see, I'm a member of an organization known as 'The Dark Six'." Said Makainu. "We plan to awaken the full power of the legendary Darkrai and consume this world in evil." His grin grew wider. "And Hinote....is our leader!"
With this, Ondori's eyes opened wide in shock. "No..way...you're lying..."
"I ain't lying." Said Makainu. "Ask your buddy over there."
ONdori turned to Mokutan. "Mokutan...is this..."
"Yes it's true." Said Mokutan. "Sorry for not telling you earlier. I'm just not the type of person who can tell people stuff like that."
"Don't worry, there's a plus side." Said Makainu. "If you're his brother, even if you are good, then I suppose I can't kill ya." With that, he turned and started walk away.
"Hey! This isn't over!" Yelled Mokutan.
"It's over if I say it's over." Said Makainu. "Think of it as me sparing your lives. There's no reason to fight someone I can't kill. Besides, that Lucario kid isn't with you either." He finished as he vanished from sight.
"So, Hinote's gone bad, huh?" Said Ondori.
"Yep." Said Mokutan. "Real, real bad."
Chapter 22 is up!
"Heh, I've got you now!" Said Makainu, as he cornered Kyanon and Wana into a dead end. However, he was interrupted by Mokutan and Ondori leaping down to face him.
"Actually, we're the ones that have you." Said Mokutan as he unleashed a fire blast on Makainu, however, he was shocked to see that his attack did nothing.
"Idiot, don't you know that, as a Houndoom I have the Flash Fire ability?" Sneered Makainu. "Your fire attacks are worthless!" Ondori then used quick attack to rush right behind him.
"Well then, how about a physical attack?" He said as he tried to punch Makainu, but he evaded.
"Oh. I haven't seen you before, now have I? What's your name, Blaziken?" Asked Makainu.
"My name is Ondori." Ondori said. "Brother of the great-"
"Wait! Don't say it!" Said Mokutan.
"Hinote!"
With this, Makainu burst into a wide grin and started to chuckle a little. "That so?"
"What's so funny?" Asked Ondori.
"I take it you guys aren't aware of stuff that happens outside this cave." Said Makainu. "Otherwise, you wouldn't be fighting me right now."
"What do you mean by that?" Demanded Ondori.
"You see, I'm a member of an organization known as 'The Dark Six'." Said Makainu. "We plan to awaken the full power of the legendary Darkrai and consume this world in evil." His grin grew wider. "And Hinote....is our leader!"
With this, Ondori's eyes opened wide in shock. "No..way...you're lying..."
"I ain't lying." Said Makainu. "Ask your buddy over there."
ONdori turned to Mokutan. "Mokutan...is this..."
"Yes it's true." Said Mokutan. "Sorry for not telling you earlier. I'm just not the type of person who can tell people stuff like that."
"Don't worry, there's a plus side." Said Makainu. "If you're his brother, even if you are good, then I suppose I can't kill ya." With that, he turned and started walk away.
"Hey! This isn't over!" Yelled Mokutan.
"It's over if I say it's over." Said Makainu. "Think of it as me sparing your lives. There's no reason to fight someone I can't kill. Besides, that Lucario kid isn't with you either." He finished as he vanished from sight.
"So, Hinote's gone bad, huh?" Said Ondori.
"Yep." Said Mokutan. "Real, real bad."
RE: Legend of Lucario
Nice ending, I liked it. So, when will the season finale come? Like, Ch. 50? I feel like I don't know where this story will end up? Where the characters will go. It's all a mystery, and I like it, it just makes me want to keep reading.
Just a hunch, but did you get the idea of Absol from PMD where he comes to your team?
Nice ending, I liked it. So, when will the season finale come? Like, Ch. 50? I feel like I don't know where this story will end up? Where the characters will go. It's all a mystery, and I like it, it just makes me want to keep reading.
Just a hunch, but did you get the idea of Absol from PMD where he comes to your team?
RE: Legend of Lucario
Here's the the next chapter! Oh, and In response to your questions Pokélen, yeah this prolly will be 45-50 chapters long, and no, I did not get the idea from that part in MD.
"Take This!" Yelled a Magmar as it fired a flamethrower at Jin. Jin however, dodged it with a quick attack so fast it looked as if he was using teleport. He then appeared right in front of the Magmar and punched him, knocking him straight out.
"I-impossible!" Said another Magmar. "How did his speed got up so fa-" Yet he could not complete his sentence as Jin quickly knocked him out too.
"Sorry for not fighting at my full speed earlier." Said Jin. "But I feared if I did, I might wind up in some diffrent place then where I wanted to go." He cracked his knuckles. "But now that I've developed a sense of direction of this place, I'll fight at my full power starting now." With that, he fired another Aura Sphere, knocking another four Magmar down. Three Magmar shot a combined Fire Blast at him, but he easily evaded it and moved to the top of the wall of which the dead end lead too. Jin could tell by observing from here there will only 15 or so Magmar left.
"So that's how you truly fight, huh?' Said a Magmar. "Then we will just have to combine our attacks!" With that, all of the Magmar simulateneously fired a fire blast, resulting in a huge ball of fire that looked the size of about a small building. However, Jin showed no signs of fear. In fact, he wasn't even trying to dodge.
"Hey, Jin?" Said Koinu. "You might want to mov-hey!" He exlaimed as Jin grabbed him and held him to the flames. "HEY JIN, WHAT ARE YOU DOING!" Yelled Koinu in mass panic as he embraced for the attack. The fireball made contact, making a huge explosion.
"Heh, that oughtta finish 'em off for sure..." Said a Magmar. But to his disbeleif, when the smoke cleared, they were bith still standing, and neither of them seemed to have taken any damage at all. "W-what happened? That should've knocked them out for sure."
Koinu, who still had his eyes closed, opened them slowly, and to his surprise he was unharmed. "Hey, what happened?" He asked.
"It's a good thing I remembered." Said Jin. "After all, with all this fighting, I almost forgot that Growlithe have the Flash Fire ability. And since, being the fire Pokémon you are, have only special attacks that are fire type, you cannot reach me from here." His hand started to glow blue. "But, I wonder if the same applies to you." With that, he unleashed his Dragon Pulse attack, kncoking out all of the Magmar at once. He then landed to the ground.
"Guess not." He said. He then began to walk around again in search of Koinu's mother again.
"Wow, Jin that was amazing!" Said Koinu. "How did you do that?"
"What can I say?" Said Jin. "I'm a pretty good fighter."
"You said you're a Rescue Team Memebr, right? Are they all that strong?" Asked Koinu.
"Yeah, probably." Said Jin. Then he heard something in the distance. It seemed to be a voice, calling out for something. Could be Koinu's mother? Using his new sense of direction, he quickly moved to where the voice was. Sure enough, there was a female Arcanine, calling out Koinu's name.
"Excuse me, ma'am." Said Jin. "I think you're looking for this.
Koinu jumped off of Jin's shoulders and rushed over to his mother. "Mommy!" He exlaimed.
"Koinu! Oh, I was so worried!" Said the mother as she and Koinu embraced. She then looked at Jin. "Thank you so much for bringing him to me. These lower levels are quite dangerous, so I got so worried..."
"It was okay, Mommy! Jin is really strong!" Said Koinu.
"Yeah, it was no problem." Said Jin. He then turned towards Groudon's lair as he began to walk towards it.
"Are you sure you want to go that way?" Said Koinu's mother. "It gets even more dangerous from there on."
"Don't worry." Said Jin. "For the first time, I know where I'm going."
Here's the the next chapter! Oh, and In response to your questions Pokélen, yeah this prolly will be 45-50 chapters long, and no, I did not get the idea from that part in MD.
"Take This!" Yelled a Magmar as it fired a flamethrower at Jin. Jin however, dodged it with a quick attack so fast it looked as if he was using teleport. He then appeared right in front of the Magmar and punched him, knocking him straight out.
"I-impossible!" Said another Magmar. "How did his speed got up so fa-" Yet he could not complete his sentence as Jin quickly knocked him out too.
"Sorry for not fighting at my full speed earlier." Said Jin. "But I feared if I did, I might wind up in some diffrent place then where I wanted to go." He cracked his knuckles. "But now that I've developed a sense of direction of this place, I'll fight at my full power starting now." With that, he fired another Aura Sphere, knocking another four Magmar down. Three Magmar shot a combined Fire Blast at him, but he easily evaded it and moved to the top of the wall of which the dead end lead too. Jin could tell by observing from here there will only 15 or so Magmar left.
"So that's how you truly fight, huh?' Said a Magmar. "Then we will just have to combine our attacks!" With that, all of the Magmar simulateneously fired a fire blast, resulting in a huge ball of fire that looked the size of about a small building. However, Jin showed no signs of fear. In fact, he wasn't even trying to dodge.
"Hey, Jin?" Said Koinu. "You might want to mov-hey!" He exlaimed as Jin grabbed him and held him to the flames. "HEY JIN, WHAT ARE YOU DOING!" Yelled Koinu in mass panic as he embraced for the attack. The fireball made contact, making a huge explosion.
"Heh, that oughtta finish 'em off for sure..." Said a Magmar. But to his disbeleif, when the smoke cleared, they were bith still standing, and neither of them seemed to have taken any damage at all. "W-what happened? That should've knocked them out for sure."
Koinu, who still had his eyes closed, opened them slowly, and to his surprise he was unharmed. "Hey, what happened?" He asked.
"It's a good thing I remembered." Said Jin. "After all, with all this fighting, I almost forgot that Growlithe have the Flash Fire ability. And since, being the fire Pokémon you are, have only special attacks that are fire type, you cannot reach me from here." His hand started to glow blue. "But, I wonder if the same applies to you." With that, he unleashed his Dragon Pulse attack, kncoking out all of the Magmar at once. He then landed to the ground.
"Guess not." He said. He then began to walk around again in search of Koinu's mother again.
"Wow, Jin that was amazing!" Said Koinu. "How did you do that?"
"What can I say?" Said Jin. "I'm a pretty good fighter."
"You said you're a Rescue Team Memebr, right? Are they all that strong?" Asked Koinu.
"Yeah, probably." Said Jin. Then he heard something in the distance. It seemed to be a voice, calling out for something. Could be Koinu's mother? Using his new sense of direction, he quickly moved to where the voice was. Sure enough, there was a female Arcanine, calling out Koinu's name.
"Excuse me, ma'am." Said Jin. "I think you're looking for this.
Koinu jumped off of Jin's shoulders and rushed over to his mother. "Mommy!" He exlaimed.
"Koinu! Oh, I was so worried!" Said the mother as she and Koinu embraced. She then looked at Jin. "Thank you so much for bringing him to me. These lower levels are quite dangerous, so I got so worried..."
"It was okay, Mommy! Jin is really strong!" Said Koinu.
"Yeah, it was no problem." Said Jin. He then turned towards Groudon's lair as he began to walk towards it.
"Are you sure you want to go that way?" Said Koinu's mother. "It gets even more dangerous from there on."
"Don't worry." Said Jin. "For the first time, I know where I'm going."
RE: Legend of Lucario
I agree with PokeLen. It was your best chapter yet!!!
I really like how this story is going, and I'm more than sure it will turn out great!
I agree with PokeLen. It was your best chapter yet!!!
I really like how this story is going, and I'm more than sure it will turn out great!
RE: Legend of Lucario
Chapter 24 is HERE!
Kyouto looked at Yaiba, who was staring back at him. "Well, what're you looking at?" He asked rudely.
"You, of course." Said Yaiba. "You're the most active thing in this room. It's only natural that I look at it to pass the time."
"What about that Weavile?" Said Kurai. "I think she's pretty active too."
"The ugliest thing in the room is also naturally the one to look at as well." Responded Yaiba calmly.
With this Kyouto flared in anger. "You are aware...that I have full authority to kill you if needed?!"
"For over such a small matter?" Said Yaiba, raising an eyebrow. "No wonder you're only sixth. You don't think things out before you do them."
"SHUT UP!" Yelled Kyuoto, one of his wings glowing black. "I'VA HAD ENOUGH OF YOUR MOUTH!" With that he fired a Dark Slash with his wings, leaving a large cloud of dust and rubble.
"That ought to of done the tri..." Said Kyouto, but then Yaiba rushed up to his face.
"Like I said," Said Yaiba. "You don't think before you act." With that, he slashed the large scythe-like object on his head down on Kyouto, severly injuring him. The dust completely cleared revealing that Kyouto had destroyed the cell which contained.
"I knew If I aggrevated you enough, you'd destroy the cell in anger." Said Yaiba. "But in order to make that succesfully work, I had to be as calm as possible, because if I was nervous I might screw up and get caught in the attack." He then knocked the surprised Kyouto to the side.
"But now," Yaiba continued. "I was able to stay completely calm, knowing that even if I were to be caught in the crossfire, there would be soemone else to defeat you." He then turned his head. "Isn't that right, Kurai?"
Kurai walked from the destroyed cell. "Yep," She said. "And therefore, I think I should finish this dude off."
"Suit yourself." Said Yaiba, stepping aside.
"Alright then." Said Kurai. "I'll make this as point-blank as possible."
Kyuoto then looked desperate, but soon a grin appeared on his face as he broke into a laugh.
"YOU FOOLS!" He laughed in a crazy, sick, twisted laugh. "I AM BUT MERE GARBAGE COMAPRED TO THE OTHER MEMBERS! KILL ME IF YOU WANT! IT WON'T MAKE ANY DIFFRENCE IN THE END!" He then laughed even harder.
"Shut up." Said Kurai, as she fired a huge Ice Beam from her hand, trapping Kyouto in a large solid prison.
"Well, that's that." Said Yaiba. "C'mon, Kurai, let's get outta here."
Chapter 24 is HERE!
Kyouto looked at Yaiba, who was staring back at him. "Well, what're you looking at?" He asked rudely.
"You, of course." Said Yaiba. "You're the most active thing in this room. It's only natural that I look at it to pass the time."
"What about that Weavile?" Said Kurai. "I think she's pretty active too."
"The ugliest thing in the room is also naturally the one to look at as well." Responded Yaiba calmly.
With this Kyouto flared in anger. "You are aware...that I have full authority to kill you if needed?!"
"For over such a small matter?" Said Yaiba, raising an eyebrow. "No wonder you're only sixth. You don't think things out before you do them."
"SHUT UP!" Yelled Kyuoto, one of his wings glowing black. "I'VA HAD ENOUGH OF YOUR MOUTH!" With that he fired a Dark Slash with his wings, leaving a large cloud of dust and rubble.
"That ought to of done the tri..." Said Kyouto, but then Yaiba rushed up to his face.
"Like I said," Said Yaiba. "You don't think before you act." With that, he slashed the large scythe-like object on his head down on Kyouto, severly injuring him. The dust completely cleared revealing that Kyouto had destroyed the cell which contained.
"I knew If I aggrevated you enough, you'd destroy the cell in anger." Said Yaiba. "But in order to make that succesfully work, I had to be as calm as possible, because if I was nervous I might screw up and get caught in the attack." He then knocked the surprised Kyouto to the side.
"But now," Yaiba continued. "I was able to stay completely calm, knowing that even if I were to be caught in the crossfire, there would be soemone else to defeat you." He then turned his head. "Isn't that right, Kurai?"
Kurai walked from the destroyed cell. "Yep," She said. "And therefore, I think I should finish this dude off."
"Suit yourself." Said Yaiba, stepping aside.
"Alright then." Said Kurai. "I'll make this as point-blank as possible."
Kyuoto then looked desperate, but soon a grin appeared on his face as he broke into a laugh.
"YOU FOOLS!" He laughed in a crazy, sick, twisted laugh. "I AM BUT MERE GARBAGE COMAPRED TO THE OTHER MEMBERS! KILL ME IF YOU WANT! IT WON'T MAKE ANY DIFFRENCE IN THE END!" He then laughed even harder.
"Shut up." Said Kurai, as she fired a huge Ice Beam from her hand, trapping Kyouto in a large solid prison.
"Well, that's that." Said Yaiba. "C'mon, Kurai, let's get outta here."