RE: Neo Redux: A grand return! UPDATE: ELECTRIKE and MANECTRIC (added 10/16)!
By definition, the special condition Paralysis is removed at the end of your opponent's turn.
Suppose Static Mane could successfully paralyze...it would be removed right away. (Sillykyle pointed something like this out to me a few days earlier.) I think you might need to rewrite the effect a bit.
And as usual, the art is fantastic; you do take a while to look for what art to pick but it's well worth the wait.