Rocket Power's Reggie said:
[Stage 1
] Duosion
HP 70 [
P]
[Ability] Selfless Sacrafice
Once during your turn (
before your attack) If Solosis or Reuniclus is in your hand, you may discard it. If you do, your Active Pokémon's attacks do 60 more damage.
[
P][
C] Mind Drive 30
x
Does 30 damage times the amount of [
P] energy attached to this Pokémon.
Weakness: [D] x2
Resistance:
Retreat:
C
Wow, a Dousion! Right when I thought that everyone would be making non-evolving Stage 1s like, well, Roselia and such... XD Let's get to it:
Creativity/Originality: 19/20pts
The card itself is really creative, that's an Ability I don't recall seeing recently, or something similar to that, at least. And the attack hasn't been used in those exact terms, but giving the chance to hit XX times Energy attached in so many cards it's just, although somewhat powerful, boring... But it's just one point there, good work on there.
Wording: 12/15pts
Here and Balance is where this cards plummels down, sadly. First of all, you missed the
"evolves from" clause, so some points for that. And also, but not point deductive since it's just a small error, is that you wrote Sacr
afice instead of Sacr
ifice, so it's just a heads up for you to be more cautious on that. But the real deal,which I dock another point for, is the Ability. I, as a BW/XY card(they are both almost identical, TBH), think it would be:
Ability said:
[Ability] Selfless Sacrifice
Once during your turn (before your attack), if you have a Solosis or Duosion in your hand, you may reveal it. If you do, your Active Pokémon's attacks do 60 more damage. Then, discard the Pokémon you revealed.
That would make it more accurate for BW terms (Reference:
Audino BCR).
Believability/Playability: 10/15pts
I don't know if you meant this, but that Duosion, as it's written, it's EXTREMELY Over Powered. Why? You missed the
"to the Defending Pokémon/your opponent's Active Pokémon" and the
"You may not use an Ability with the same name during your turn" clauses. Without them, Minun DRX/LTR, with one energy, will be effectively doing a whopping 130 Damage to each of your opponent's Pokémon(don't say Mime...) if you set up 2 Duosion and discard the other 2 Solosis/Duosion you may have in your deck... MINUN!!! Imagine that with Froslass PLB, Weezing PLS, KYUREM NVI, FOR PITY'S SAKE!!! It's EXTREMELY broken, sadly, Reggie, so... The not that big amount of points you lose are merely because it's not THAT easy to pull off effectively, but it's doable, and by doing that 2 times in a row, you literally sweep your opponent's entire field without any draw back.
I really liked that new concept, Reggie, but please, PLEASE take a better look next time about those little big details. Best of luck next month, don't you dare to quit(again) for this, alright?!
Total Score:
41/50pts