Writing PokéBeach: The Forgotten Story (Completed)

RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Name will change once I think of a better one)

Thank you for keeping this alive my good brother! Here is what I call: Chapter 3: Virtual Space! PMJ, do not read this chapter, you will not like it D:

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Ch. 3: Virtual Space

Jon and Ben had disappeared, but did they really die?

“I am still holding on to your foot, Ben! Why did you do this? Were you responsible for the first Holy Star incident too?! You just put PokeBeach into the worst situation ever! Do you realize that?” Jon said.

They were floating in space, but time wasn’t moving. They were just floating.

“I was responsible for Bela through all the times! Why do you think I tried to convince you to make Amt a mod, huh? Why do you think we tried to kill you? And I want to destroy PokeBeach. Ever since those pesky members began to join, our jobs became ever more vigorous. We shall destroy all those who made our job harder than it needs. This is where evil rises, and you cannot stop us! Now, you either let me go, or I kill you!”

A crack in space sucked them both out back to the server, but to an unknown part, never even seen by the mods. “Where, where are we?” asked Ben.

“That doesn’t matter, all that matters is that I get rid of you! I created that crack, knowing you would come back with me! I’m not going to stand here while my whole world that I’ve been working on dies!” Jon was already fully armored, and ready to destroy Ben with all his power.

“You’ve been a good friend, but this intoxicating darkness will spread, soon. I won’t let it happen! Remember I taught you about our Final Strike attacks and to only use them in emergencies and how I told you I could block any Final Strike, except for Bela’s?”

Ben shook in fear, for he knew this is where he would die. No person could survive a Final Strike, except of course, Jon and Bela. “I might be able to counter mine with his” Ben thought.

“You’ll see what death feels like. And when you finally plunge to the bottom of heck, you’ll be there forever. Final Strike Poseidon!” Jon’s blue blade began to light up and Jon lunged forward at Ben.

“Two can play at this game! Final Strike Punisher!” Ben’s blade began to flash up and he also lunged at Jon.

The two blades collided and one had to be victorious. A huge explosion occurred just like the battle with Holy Star long ago. Jon’s and Ben’s eyes were blinded by the bright light.

The area began to collapse. Whenever two Final Strikes would hit each other, the area that they were battling in would collapse.

Jon got up after his attack was used. He looked at Ben’s body that lay on the ground with a large jagged cut on his stomach. There were blood stains on his armor, and it was obvious he was dead.

“I’ve gotta get out of here!” Jon disappeared from that area of the server and re-appeared next to Kevin.

Kevin was also a mod, the controller of Fire. He was a respected member since the first time he logged in.

“What the heck happened to you? Are you alright?” Kevin asked.

John was panting hard. “Ben…Ben was behind Holy Star.” Right after Jon said that, he collapsed and fell to the ground.

“Doc, Jon’s here! We need help!” Kevin shouted. Doc quickly arrived at the scene and picked him up. He used his X-Ray vision with his Psychic powers to see what was wrong with him.

“Kevin, Jon is going to die. He has a hole right through his heart! It’ll only be a couple of hours. He’ll wake up soon, and we will look at his will. Once he dies, the whole server shall start to decline unless in his will, he assigned one of us the control of the server. But if he didn’t, everything would become chaos, and we will have to become fugitives. The whole world is at stock here. Do you understand me?”

Kevin nodded. “He also said that Ben was responsible for Holy Star. But I just can’t believe him! Why would Ben do that? John must be confused with something else!” Kevin exclaimed.

“Actually, he is perfectly correct” said Bela. Bela walked in, or as they know him, Amt.

“What do you mean, he’s correct? Ben was behind Holy Star? Was he supplying Bela with all the information and all the power? How would you know, anyways?” Kevin asked.

“Funny you should ask. It is just that, me and Bela are the same person. And you were exactly right. Ben was doing the inside job. It’s true, I was a mod too, but Ben was the only one that could get deep information. Too bad he’s dead now. He was killed by Jon. And as I see it, Jon will be dead in just a couple of hours. We will have to cut that short!”

“You mean, you’re Bela, Amt? I don’t understand, how?” Doc asked. The whole room became filled with Dark Aura, an intoxicating aroma that would make them all disillusioned. Len sped into the room and slashed both Kevin and Doc with his blade, killing them.

“Well done, Len. Let’s hold Jon hostage and make a meeting where everybody can see us killing him. It’ll be a great moment, wouldn’t you say, Len?”

Len nodded in agreement, even though he was being controlled. Bela was holding Jon in one hand, and a note in the other. The members from the server were all in a clump, waiting and afraid to hear what Bela was going to say.

“Hello PokeBeach members. Some of you may know me as Bela. I have become close friends with a lot of you, and the others that I don’t know are still there, and I don’t forget about you. But I never wanted to bring this up in any conversation. The news I will tell you know will change the history of PokeBeach. Jon, or Water Pokemon Master, has been seriously injured in the heart. There seems to be a hole right through it, and we don’t know how to save him. Coincidentally, Kevin, Doc, and Ben were all murdered on the same day. Only me, Anthony, and George are left. This crisis has struck us all so quickly. We don’t know who the killer is, but we will find out. If anyone would like to help, come up now” said Bela, finishing her speech.

George and Anthony got up on stage with their armor fully on. “Bela, don’t move, everybody evacuate! This is not Amt, this is Holy Star! Run!” Anthony said.

Len moved swiftly and slashed Anthony in the stomach, causing him to fall to the ground. “You’re next, George.” Len dashed to George and slashed him in the stomach, killing him in one blow.

The crowd went crazy; people were run over as every escaped for their life. “Bela, do you realize what you’ve done?” said Anthony as he got back up.

“I will kill you” said Len as he zoomed towards Anthony, but before Len could kill him, Anthony countered his slash attack and stuck his sword through Len. “I, I won’t let you kill them all! This is our server! Bela, look at what you’ve done!”

Bela grabbed Anthony and threw him into the wall. “I do whatever I want, and now I will kill you, leaving me, the only one to be able to get the server, is me!”

Anthony was surely killed from the hit into the wall. Many screamed in fear of Bela. ”PokeBeach members, you will all die, now!”

Bela put his hand into a fist and the server became greatly distorted. Then, a huge explosion of the data set a massive eruption in the base of PokeBeach. Bela looked at Len’s body on the ground. He took of his armor and put it back on himself. “It feels good to be Bela again.” Bela disappeared from the server.

The explosion killed 96% of the population of PokeBeach. Only the smart, elite members who knew PokeBeach inside and out could escape from the tragic eruptions. PokeBeach has declined.
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 3: Virtual Space) PMJ, do not read this next chapter D:

You should put a warning to the rest of the mods, they probably don't like being killed either. :p
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Name will change once I think of a better one)

PokeLen said:
Thank you for keeping this alive my good brother! Here is what I call: Chapter 3: Virtual Space! PMJ, do not read this chapter, you will not like it D:

(First of all, I'm a girl >_>) You're welcome !! I'll do my best to keep this story alive: It's beyond beautiful.

Whee ! I love the action part!

Grrr.... I really want to kill that Bela! ---------------->:$
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 3: Virtual Space) PMJ, do not read this next chapter D:

Cool... we're like... dead and stuff

FINAL STRIKE PUNISHERRRRRR I'm so using that as my noob-pwning move from now on.

So what, is this the end of the story? Amt rules the universe?

I thought you were telling me not to read because you killed Amt, not me... lol
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 3: Virtual Space) PMJ, do not read this next chapter D:

This is really interesting. We all died within the first three chapters. I predict that we are all Goku and get to die and come back to life like three times. :p
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 3: Virtual Space) PMJ, do not read this next chapter D:

DUDE KG THAT WOULD BE AWESOME :O
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 3: Virtual Space) PMJ, do not read this next chapter D:

Oh god. We were all beaten up by a girl.

But on the plus side, I lasted longer than all you other mods! ^.^
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 3: Virtual Space) PMJ, do not read this next chapter D:

Chapter 4: All the mods eventually get killed over and over gain for the next 50 years. The End.
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 3: Virtual Space) PMJ, do not read this next

Oh, Bacon, thank you for not letting this die. I've been working on Ch. 4, so here it is! And B_M, you almost got it right! No, I'm just kidding. Ch. 4 is my favorite out of all of them so far. It is so intense!


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Ch. 4: Over Space
Bela drifted off into another server unknown to him, and many others like him. “Hmm, this place looks, odd…but so familiar” he said.

“Bela, you’ve caused enough, I’ll destroy you here!” a male voice spoke out. Lightning crashed down next to Bela.

Bela began to laugh. “Hahahaha, take this, B-Ray!” Bela blasted an aura sphere out of his hand.

The collision between the attack and B-Ray was enormous, making B-Ray cross onto another server. “The fool deserved to die like that.”

Bela didn’t realize it, but the server he entered was known as “Serebii” where the most mysterious fighters live.

“Who dare enter my realm?” a voice emanated from somewhere. Bela heard a high pitched noise in her ear, and irritating sound! “Now, I shall destroy you!”

Bela became dizzy and he found himself enclosed in a small room. Then, it expanded, but walls were closing him from the outside. The noise was still being heard.

The walls broke down and a huge, metallic, armored human appeared. He grabbed him and threw him into the wall, which know re-appeared after disappearing.

Then, the noise stopped. “You mongrel! Final Decider!” Bela took out his blade which was engraved with darkness. “Now, Night Slash!” The blade slashed the huge warrior, causing his metal to catch on fire, and eventually hitting a main power circuit, and exploded. The force of the explosion blasted his into another server.

“Ughh, where am I now?” Bela wondered. He looked around, and realized he had gone back in time, and was in PokeBeach. He got up and saw Jon on the beach. “Hmm, my perfect opportunity to kill Jon again” he thought to himself. But then he realized nobody else was here. “Jon, where is everybody?” he shouted.

Jon turned around with a clueless look on his face. “How did you get here? The server hasn’t even opened, please leave or I’ll have to escort you out of here” he said as he drew his blade.

“Please, show me the way out!” he shouted. He drew his own blade and dashed over to Jon and grabbed him by the collar. “Night Assailant!” he whispered in his ear. He threw him into the air and threw his blade at him, causing it to rip threw him stomach. “Aura Pulse!” He blasted a huge aura sphere at him, making him fly into another server, and to probably rot there forever.

He turned around, just as he was about to destroy the server so PokeBeach would never have even been alive, a sword landed next to her foot, stuck in the sand.

He turned around and saw Jon with his hand on his chest where the sword used to be. “I don’t give up that easily!” Jon lunged forward and grabbed Bela and blasted a Hydro Pump attack out of his hand, sending Bela flying into a rock.

“I don’t remember him being this strong” Bela muttered. John walked over to Bela and picked him up and attached a small beeping device onto her head. He then threw him into the air and threw his other sword at him. He missed him, but instead, it got the beeping device off his head and into the air.

“Oh crud!” Jon shouted. He quickly pressed a button on his remote and the beeping device exploded. The explosion was huge and caught Bela in it. If he had exploded right next to the bomb, he’d be dead within milliseconds.

Bela, unconscious from the explosion, fell to the soft sand and sunk deep, deep inside. A couple of hours have passed and he awoke.

He jumped out of the sand and looked around. He looked at himself, and his whole body was wounded, cut and bruises and a lot of blood. “Jon, he can’t be this strong. That can’t be Jon. Unless, I’m in the future…Did I destroy PokeBeach? Did Jon survive and rebuild it? I have to know before, before I die!” Bela said. He flew into 4 Star, an area only known to the ones that know the password. He entered the password that Jon never changed. He saw an open area, nothing but the same field that he was granted Mod upon.

He stepped onto the platform, and the platform began to shine. The ground lifted and carried him into the sky. “Well, this sure is a nice addition to PokeBeach, I just can’t imagine it to be so disfigured like this. I don’t even think I could do it?!” Bela exclaimed.

The platform stopped in mid-air. A door appeared in front of him. He opened it, and stepped through. The place was a wasteland, covered with dead bodies every step you took. He looked down and saw nothing but her reflection. “So, I die in the future? Is that how it was supposed to go? Hmm, I will definitely change this!” He looked down again, but in a different spot. “Haha, Len, he must’ve died from the eruptions. But, I must find B-Ray. If he is alive, he is the only chance of destroying me, and that means that I could be on the verge of death” he said to himself.

Then, the bodies disappeared. “Holagrams?” Bela wondered. Then, small doors opened and many people stepped through them, people in armor, faces covered.

“Bela, stand right where you are! This is where it will end for you!” a voice emanated from somewhere.

Bela began to chuckle. “Is this a joke? Aura Explosion!” Bela shouted. He gathered energy into his two hands and then erupted into a huge mass of darkness.

“Energy Implode!” a voice said. Bela’s attack imploded, striking himself.

“Jon, so you still remember me? Say, how did you survive?” Bela asked. He walked over to a random person and took off its helmet. “Hello, Len” he said as he grabbed him and ran to the door, but it was locked.

“The only way out of here is to kill us all, and if you kill us all, you kill Len. Make your choice, surrender now!” Jon said.

“I’m not choosing Len over my life! Forget about it!” He drew his blade and stabbed Len in the stomach, probably killing him. He threw him onto the ground.

“I guess my explosion attacks won’t work, since you’ll just use implosion” Bela said.

“Actually, you can only use implosion ever hour, so go ahead at your free will!” Jon told her.

“Aura Explosion” he shouted out. All her energy blasted outwards. Then, everybody in the room became silent.

“Aura Implosion!” shouted a voice from the crowd. The person took of his mask, and it appeared to be B-Ray.

“Haha, try this! Implosion Counter!” Bela shouted. Bela stopped B-Ray’s implosion, and his attack was set off. The explosion destroyed the walls that enclosed the hologram room. The whole Sky Server shattered, causing everyone to either die or fall off the tower.

B-Ray was struck and was sent flying off the tower. He got all his armor off and used Aura Fly. His aura power let him fly. He, and like every other member at his skill level, have learned the ways of the aura, and can maneuver with it easily.

Thousands of members flew off the edge and landed on the platform that led them all up there. The impact and collision between them and the ground from such a high altitude would be fatal.

Jon landed safely, only being hurt a little from her attack. He drank a potion that healed his stab wound. “Bela, that evil filled creature. He thought he could escape PokeBeach?” Jon muttered to himself.

B-Ray landed right next to him, hurt slightly more. “He’s gone crazy. At this rate, we’re all dead within seconds when he lands” he said.

“Not unless I fly up there and confront him myself. I’ll do 1 vs. 1. See you later!” Jon said as he blasted upwards.

“I can’t let Jon fight by himself. I’ve gotta go too! It’s the only way we can win this thing!” B-Ray said. He used his Aura Fly power and flew into the air, following Jon.

Jon landed on the floating tower in the air. “Bela, don’t make me send you into Over Space again. It doesn’t have to end this way. We can all become friends, just like we were” Jon said.

“We were never friends. And with the power still granted in me, you have finally become, exterminated.” Bela took out his sword and dashed towards Jon.

The whole tower began to collapse, and Jon’s body fell endlessly. “Jon, I knew he couldn’t do it alone!” said B-Ray as he chased Jon’s collapsed body.

He finally grabbed him and saw that he had no pulse. “You evil doer! I will kill you! Let Jon rest in peace!” B-Ray screamed. He flew up to him and punched him.

“You think you can stop me by yourself?” Bela said. B-Ray fired another punch, but this time, he grabbed his hand and broke it.

“Ahh! I, I can’t win. You defeated all of the members at once. What makes me think I can beat you by myself? This, is over” he said.

“I’m glad you see it my way. Now, to send you to Over Space” he said. He blasted an Aura Sphere, causing B-Ray to glide through different dimensions. “Now that I’ve rid of him, I shall destroy this place and drive it into Over Space causing a Black Hole server. Nothing can live in it, but nothing can live without knowing it exists. Now, Over Space Explosion!” Bela shouted. Bela generated a Dark Energy Ball in his hand and threw it down onto the ground. “Adios PokeBeach” Bela said as she disappeared.

The energy ball hit the ground and turned into a black hole, sucking up everything around it in a split-second. Jon’s body got sucked in, and he disappeared forever.

Bela was blasted into another time, in the farther future of PokeBeach. “Is, this what it has become? A dark mass of energy? I guess my job is over” he said.

“Not quite yet.”
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 3: Virtual Space) PMJ, do not read this next chapter D:

I'm too lazy and busy to read this, but why am I left out and KG isn't when he wasn't even around when HolyStar was here and I was?
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 3: Virtual Space) PMJ, do not read this next chapter D:

Because I didn't have your real name. Or even a made-up name that sounds real. If you give me your name, I can bring you in the later chapters? Does that sound ok?
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 4: Over Space) You will not like this either, PMJ :p

Why won't I like it either? D: I'm dead. :[
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 3: Virtual Space) PMJ, do not read this next chapter D:

Heavenly Spoon :F said:
I'm too lazy and busy to read this, but why am I left out and KG isn't when he wasn't even around when HolyStar was here and I was?
Wow... You need a timeline. -_-

All the mods are dead anyway. I thought we would be the galliant forces, you know, the allied powers. :[
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 4: Over Space) You will not like this either,

You aren't dead. You're "dead" :p Don't worry, guys. You'll all like Ch. 6! coughyouallcomebackcough.

After the "disappearance" of Amt, this actually made my story a lot more interesting. This'll turn out good. And KG was here, if I was here, then KG was here. He joined 4 days before me, so he was here. If you give me your name, a real name, not YOUR real name, but a real sounding name, then I'll add you in Ch. 6!

EDIT: And PMJ, you're not dead at all. In Ch. 5 things will be uncovered, and the same thing happened to you, like Amt/HS. So, don't feel bad.

EDIT 2: I just took a plane ride from the states to Israel, and I had the next chapter saved on that computer, so it might be a while until the next chapter. I've gotta teach my sister to copy and paste the right chapter, then E-Mail it to me. But she's stubborn, so you'll get the next chapter probably in a few days.
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 4: Over Space) Ch. 5 will be delayed

Is PMJ a rotten apple or does he save everyone with his Pimp Strike of Fiery? :O
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 4: Over Space) Ch. 5 will be delayed

Not exactly. But I don't want to give anybody a spoiler they don't want. So you can PM me if you want to know the spoiler :-]
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 4: Over Space) Ch. 5 will be delayed

Wow... PMJ was behind the holy star plot, bela is amt, doc is dead, and KG is asking inteliigent questions?


This story is epic.
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 4: Over Space) Ch. 5 will be delayed

My mom is so busy right now and she can't E-Mail me the next chapter anytime soon. Maybe in a week or so. She still has work. She has a break next week so she'll E-Mail me Ch. 5.

Or, Option #2! I'll re-do Ch. 5, it'll be ready faster, and I somewhat remember it. So...whatever you guys want.
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 4: Over Space) Ch. 5 will be delayed

FINAL STRIKE PUNISHERRRRR

Just wait. I had to re-write chapter four of my story because the CD I had saved it on was stolen from me. I liked how it was going... James and Shelly fought :p

Do I like the rewritten version better? Eh... I guess. But I would say wait. You don't want to risk not remembering an important part, and who wants to have done all that work for nothing?
 
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