Writing PokéBeach: The Forgotten Story (Completed)

RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 4: Over Space) Ch. 5 will be delayed

My purpose is yet to be known. Maybe I have an alternate form and I have to stop HS (Spoon) from turning into HS (Star). You never know now that Spoon is in it. :O
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 4: Over Space) Ch. 5 will be delayed

Ya...not really. I have also made Ch. 6, but its a complete faliure, so that one is definitely going to be re-made. As for Ch. 5, I should have it up tonight.
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 4: Over Space) Ch. 5 will be delayed

The one you've all been waiting for, Ch. 5!

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Ch. 5: Holy Star

Bela turned around, and saw that it was a man in a white cloak. “Are you god? Because if you’re not, then you will die in just a few seconds.”

The man laughed. “I am not god. But I am not your enemy either. It’s me, Pulse. The one that taught you your aura power? Remember me?” he asked.

“I remember. So, PokeBeach has finally become a dead planet, a mass of darkness where nothing can survive in?” she asked.

“You’re right about the dead planet part. People now call it “Holy Star” after you. The dark hole killed many people, but the ones that survived the impact now live on the planet. But they are dangerous, and I have gone there numerous times to destroy it, but was outnumbered greatly, and fell to their superiority. That is why I brought you here on this day. Together, nobody can defeat us!” Pulse exclaimed.

“There is never an “us” when I’m in the picture” he said. He grabbed him and put his hand on his head, draining his aura power. He drained everything, and then let go. His body drifted off and was pulled by the gravity of the dead planet. It burned up and he was dead.

He flew down to the planet and saw that PokeBeach was no longer what it was. Everything was black, nobody in sight, it was complete and utter destruction. He heard someone behind him and he drew his sword. “Who is back there?” he said.

A woman appeared in front of him. “You’re the one from my dreams! You’ve been manipulating my mind! Now I’ll get my revenge. Aura Sphere!” Bela blasted an Aura Sphere from his hand, but it went right through the woman, as if she was a ghost.

The woman disappeared and became invisible, but tapped Bela on the shoulder. “I know who you are” she whispered.

Bela’s eyes widened. “How? Nobody knows, not even PMJ! That means, you must be, Amt?!” Bela exclaimed. The ground began to shake and lightning struck the ground around him.

“Bela, I Amt, will finally destroy you and whatever you bring at me! You thought you could lock me out forever? Now, I’m locking you into my own trap! Vortex Winds!” Amt shouted. Amt punched Bela and he fell. High winds started to stir, and eventually, huge tornados began to form. They pulled in Bela and the battle would finally begin now.

Bela became enraged with fury and he flew out of the tornado will all his power. “This is it. I’ll kill you like everyone else. I wanted to save you for last, but I guess I’ll blow you up with this planet, once and for all, Shadow Blast!” Bela blasted the huge beam at Amt, causing her to fly backwards and blast through a boulder.

“I’m, not, giving up!” Amt got up and wiped the dirt off of herself. “This is your last battle, Holy Star! I will defeat you! Aurora Sun!” Amt exclaimed. Amt generated a shining ball of energy in her hand. It began to expand, creating a large fireball.

“Grr, it can’t end like this!” Bela screamed. Amt threw the fireball and it was aiming towards Bela. “I, can’t move. What’s going on?!” He closed his eyes and it exploded. He flew backwards from the force of the explosion.

Amt stared at the explosion. “Why did it explode before it hit Bela? It doesn’t matter, he’s dead anyways.” She flew off of the dead planet, hoping she’d never see Bela again.

Bela awoke, but was extremely dizzy. He could barely get up. The, crystals arose from the ground, closing her in the shiny jail-like cell. There was a small opening, but Bela was too dizzy to move any farther. A man stepped through the opening, and then closed it. “Bela, remember me? B-Ray?” he said.

“B…B-Ray, is it really you? I…I was sure I killed you. But please, spare me now, I’ll do anything” he said, just trying to get up from the explosion.

“Bela, do you know why the fireball exploded early? Someone jumped in front of it, and killed him or herself to save you. Do you know who that person was? Well, I don’t. But we couldn’t find any fragments of his or her body, which means he or she is still alive! And you will help me! If you don’t, I’ll kill you on the spot. Got it?” he exclaimed.

Bela nodded. He would say anything just to keep himself alive. “Alright, I’ll do it, let’s just get it over with!”

“Wise decision. But first, you must feel how it is to die!” B-Ray threw a grenade right next to her. Bela, too uncoordinated to move, just stood and did nothing. The grenade exploded, making Bela fly backwards and fly through the crystals, and the crystal shards were stuck in her back. B-Ray walked over to him. “Good night, Bela.”

Meanwhile, Amt was traveling in the midst of space, and she reached a planet. She flew through its atmosphere and landed softly, unlike any of her other planet landings. “Mods, you may be stuck in the fragments of time and space, but believe me, I’ll get you out after I defeat B-Ray. He is getting too powerful, and soon, more powerful than me. I will kill him.”
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 4: Over Space) Ch. 5 will be delayed

Nice, Pulse got a mention. PMJ and everyone is still dead. We need to have that good ol' DBZ ending ya know. :[ Umm, If Amt isn't Holy Star, then why is Holy Star a girl?
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 4: Over Space) Ch. 5 will be delayed

Or is he...everything you need and want to know will be revealed in Ch. 6. If you really want to know what'll happen and just can't wait (which I hope you all can) then PM me. But I'll give you all a small preview.

Ch. 6: The Return
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 4: Over Space) Ch. 5 will be delayed

:eek:ooooooo

I would like a preview.
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 4: Over Space) Ch. 5 will be delayed

The big preview...then I'll PM you.
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 4: Over Space) Ch. 5 will be delayed

I anxiously await my glorious return.

/me suggests a thread title update
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 4: Over Space) Ch. 5 will be delayed

I can forward you Chapter 6. I don't think PokeLen would mind as long as its over PMs. You are a major character. :O
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 4: Over Space) Ch. 5 will be delayed

no
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 4: Over Space) Ch. 5 will be delayed

Pimpwalkin' Mateo Johnson said:
I anxiously await my glorious return.

* Pimpwalkin' Mateo Johnson suggests a thread title update

Oops, I'll update that. And yes, PMJ=Major Character!

*coughiamnotsuckingupcough*
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 5: Holy Star :0) Ch. 6 Coming SOON!

You will be blown away by the epicness of this chapter. YOU WILL ALL FALL UNDER MY CONTROL!

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Ch. 6: The Return

The planet stood still. The spaceship flew into the air and blasted through Holy Star’s atmosphere. Just moments after they left, the planet exploded completely, and everything that lived on it, had been destroyed.

“Wake up, Bela. You’re with me, now” a voice said. Bela’s eyes opened, and he saw PMJ. He looked at him with a troubled look. “My name is Spoon. Glad to meet you, Sir.”

“Spoon, I was wondering why I never actually killed you. I guess it’s safe. Where’s B-Ray? The one that captured me?” he asked.

A man appeared. “I’m right here, and together, Amt will never be able to stop us. Only if she had the other Moderators with her, then that would be another story” he chuckled. He walked over to Spoon. “If your plan doesn’t work, then we will lose this war” he whispered in his ear.

Bela stood up and grabbed on Spoon’s arm for some support. He was still hurt from that grenade that B-Ray blasted at him. “We’ve caused enough trouble in this area. And where are we headed to now? Do you even know where she is?” Bela exclaimed.

“Calm down, Bela. We are actually on our way to meet Jade. He will help us defeat Amt, and whatever army she comes with!” Spoon re-assured Bela. He grabbed Bela’s pocket, and reached in. He took out the knife. “Just taking that out, if you start going crazy on us. But I assure you, nothing will happen that we cannot control” he told him.

The spaceship disappeared into the midst of space.

In a different dimension, Amt was holding a crystal, a Cessation Crystal. She inserted it into a space in a crystal clear wall. The Cessation Crystal fit perfectly, and the whole wall began to shine. The voice emanated from somewhere. “Amt, is that you?”

“Yes, it is me. In one minute, a door will open, and you will all come out. Got it?” Amt asked.

“Yes, we’ve got it! Thank you, Amt!” KG said.

“No prob” she replied. The door opened from the crystal wall and KG walked out, along with the other Moderators and Super Moderatos, including WPM, the admin. “Welcome back, KG. Good to see you too PMJ! Alright, we’ve got to kill B-Ray and his crew. But we’ll be heading into some rough territory, are you ready?” Amt asked. Everybody stood in silence. “Are you ready for the war that will change the history of the universe? Whichever side that wins will either bring good or evil. Good luck my fellow teammates.”

The crystal wall disappeared and WPM walked up to Amt. “I see, you have done a great job. But I can take it from here” WPM said. Water shrouded his body and a mystical aura covered the whole “gang”.
“We will rise!” They all levitated softly into the air, and then shot through the atmosphere of the planet.

KG flew over next to Amt. “Thank you for saving me, or…us. We would be stuck in the dimensions of heck if it wasn’t for you. But does WPM really know where he is going, and where they are?” KG asked.

Amt looked at him and chuckled. “WPM created the universe. He knows every single galaxy in this world. PokeBeach was just the center of the universe, where he lives. You’re behind and that’s not like you” she replied.

“You’re just blabbering. I’ve heard that myth before, it’s not true! It’s not like you to believe such rumors” he replied back. They were all still flying through space together, and WPM stopped along with the other Moderators. “What’s up, WPM?” KG asked.

He turned his head to the right, then to the left, and back to the center. “They’re here! Fly upwards!” he shouted, and the Moderators did as commanded.

A spaceship appeared which was camouflaging. But this was not B-Ray’s spaceship. This was a new one! The spaceship’s door opened, and a thin, green creature walked out. “Don’t be alarmed. We are not your enemies. We are here to make peace with the world. We are a new civilization! We are called the “Arch-Beings” said their leader, who was holding a golden staff. Engraved on the staff were 4 letters. PBFS were the letters. But what did they mean?

“We do not need your help, or make peace. I am what created good and evil, and without evil, there is no good. And why were you camouflaging, huh? I know who you are and why you came to me. Your non-sense must stop! Great Explosion!” WPM shouted. He drew his sword and slashed it. A large energy wave blasted out hitting the spaceship, and the whole spaceship exploded, causing the “Great Explosion”. “Let’s keep moving.”

KG flew next to WPM. “What’d you mean when you created good and evil?” he asked. WPM didn’t answer, and KG flew backwards back to Amt. “He’s being ignorant, but there is no way he’s god. That’s just impossible!”

A large shrieking sound blasted through space and a flash of light blinded the “gang”. After the light was gone, a shadow appeared in front of them. “Hello, WPM. Remember me, BELA!” He grabbed WPM by the neck and threw him at Senor Noobnerd. “Haha, weak as usual. I see that you were able to bring back everyone, Amt. That’s great! But you won’t defeat us, as hard as you try! Spoon, Jade, B-Ray and I will defeat you all in one strike of our finishing move! Extreme Light Wave!” Bela screamed. Spoon, Jade, B-Ray, and Bela generated an energy ball in their hand. While generating the power, a loud noise paralyzed the Moderators. “Release!” Bela shouted, and they threw the energy balls at the Moderators, creating a huge explosion. “Nice plan, Spoon. I trusted you, and we did it. But it’s not over yet. We must freeze them like you told us to. Let’s go to Fizon Planet, the coldest of them all, and closest!” They all grabbed the Moderators and flew there.

KG opened his eyes, and his inner flame kicked in. He created the fire in his hands and melted the ice he was frozen in. He was in a closed room, and walked out. He saw that Amt, WPM, and Bacon were all frozen in rooms, too, but the other moderators were nowhere to be seen! “Amt! WPM! Bacon!” he quickly ran into their rooms, and melted the ice they were frozen in. “Amt, you’re alright” he said, and then dashed over to hug her.

“Uhh, KG, what are you doing?” she asked.

“Uhh, nothing” he said, letting her go. “I’ll go melt the others, and we’ll find the rest of the moderators!” As KG said, he did. He defrosted Bacon and WPM. “We’ve got to go find the others, and hope to not run into the “bad” guys” KG said. WPM, Bacon, and Amt nodded in agreement.

“But that is the exact opposite of what will happen!” a male voice said. B-Ray, Jade, Spoon, and Bela appeared. The four of them grabbed one of the moderators each and took them outside. “Welcome to our icy realm of death!” B-Ray laughed. Fizon was the coldest planet in the universe, but the “bad” guys all wore a special shirt that blocked off the cold. On the other hand for the “good” guys, it was the exact opposite. Where they were standing was next to the edge of a cliff, but there was a lot of space between the edge of the cliff and the building they were just in.

“What makes you think you can beat us!? HUH!!!” Bacon shouted. Jade flew over to Bacon with Extremespeed and punched Bacon off the cliff.

“That’s one down” Jade laughed. Bacon flew back up, not falling so easily. “I guess not, but I’ll end you!” Jade flew at Bacon, and they began to fight. The punches flew and they both drew their blades. They began to fight. Everyone looked at them, waiting to see the outcome of the battle.

Bacon slashed Jade with his blade and Jade dropped to the ground, shaking like a freak. “This is where it ends! HAAAA!!!” Bacon dropped down and threw the blade straight through Jade’s stomach. Bacon walked over to Jade’s body and spit on it. “Self centered bastar-“ Bacon was struck by B-Ray before he could finish his sentence, and then fell to the ground, unconscious.

“That’ll have to do for now! I’ll just finish Amt off, now!” B-Ray said. He drew his blade, and so did Amt. “I will never forgive you for what you did to me! Blade of Extinction!” B-Ray lunged forward at Amt. Amt put her blade out to try to counter B-Ray’s attack, but he was too strong.

“Ahh, KG, help…me!” Amt let go of her blade and B-Ray hit her with his attack. Amt was struck and she flew backwards, off the cliff.

“Amt! NOOO!!!! You will pay!” KG’s eyes flared up in flames. His whole body became engulfed in fire. “You don’t deserve to live after doing that to someone. I’ll show you what it feels like!” He grabbed B-Ray. He threw him up into the air and fired a fireball from his hand, and then another one, and another one, and another one! The explosions set off, and B-Ray’s body fell to the ground, but it was only his bones. “Come on Bela, are you scared?” KG said.

“Scared…that’s the last thing I’d be. But I do know that I am outnumbered, and I can’t win. So, all I will do is leave the planet with Spoon, and you’ll never find us, until we find you!” Bela said.

“Not very smart if you say your plans out loud” KG said as he grabbed Bela. “I’ll do the same thing I did to you like I did to B-Ray! YOU DESERVE IT! Haa!” He threw him up into the air and shot the fireballs, just like he did to B-Ray, but when the explosions stopped, Bela dropped, unhurt.

“You’ll have to try better than that. You missed your chance, and now I will part with you!” Bela said as he disappeared with Spoon.

KG walked over to WPM and he returned to normal. “He…he killed Amt! But, we have to bring her back somehow! She’s still deep in my…Uhh, never mind! Let’s just go help Bacon!” KG said as he ran over to his body to check his Pulse, which was fine. “He’s alright, but now we have to find everyone else!”

“That’ll be no problem” said PMJ, who was with all the other moderators. “Seems like we are all together now! Bacon looks alright, just hurt, but where’s Amt?” PMJ asked.

KG pointed to the cliff and a tear fell from his eye, but he wiped it off before anybody could see it. “She’s departed.”


THE BEST CHAPTERZ Everz dudesz!
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 6: The Return)

PokeLen said:
THE BEST CHAPTERZ Everz dudesz!
I second that. Now I can't wait to see what happens next. It could be anything. :O
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 6: The Return)

Thanks, and I really don't know what to do for Ch. 7 :/ Well, I'm sure I'll think of something.
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 5: Holy Star :0) Ch. 6 Coming SOON!

PokeLen said:
“Amt, you’re alright” he said, and then dashed over to hug her.
That sentence symbolises the epicness of this chapter. Good work PokeLen, I 'm looking forward to the next chapter.
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 6: The Return)

I love how you're not even using our names anymore ^_^

Also, cool, deep inside I guess I'm c-m ._.

Don't really see how I'm a major character, but cool nonetheless :D FINAL STRIKE PUNISHERRRRRRRR

^ better stay my finishing move or else. >:O

I'll watch for the next one
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 6: The Return)

Wait Kevin Garret's name is his first and middle name, ROFL. I thought it was a parody of Kevin Garnet or something, I always think about Kevin Garnet when I see his name, since it is so similar. It kind of annoys me sometimes because I almost called him "Kevin Garnet" by accident one time. But great story.. keep up the good work.
 
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 6: The Return)

Thanks, DogMaster40, that means a lot.

And what do you mean that I am not using your names anymore? Wait...ohh...snapple. Whatever...

DeagleBeagle-Thanks...
 
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