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RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 6: The Return)
This a strange story
But it's still awesome! I look forward to more!
This a strange story
But it's still awesome! I look forward to more!
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 6: The Return)
Alright, Ch. 7, the second to last chapter is finally here. I'd love comments. I think this is the longest chapter out of all of them, but whatever. Have fun! BTW, this is more EPIC than the last chapter :0
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Ch. 7: Disconnection
PMJ stood in awe. “She’s gone? What happened, who did it?” PMJ asked.
“It was B-Ray. Nobody ever liked him, we all knew he was up to trouble the first time we saw him at the Beach” KG said. He walked over to WPM. “Let’s get out of here. We need to re-create the Beach. But let’s not make it at the most obvious place, the center of the universe.”
WPM ordered everyone to follow him, and they did, off the planet. “Alright, we are headed to Sector Z5, far from the earlier PB. Let’s go” WPM said. They dashed off the frozen planet.
Meanwhile, Bela and Spoon were far from the others. “So, are you ready to disconnect?” Bela asked. He was in a room, computers everywhere and different machines and buttons. There was one glowing red button in the center of the room. Spoon nodded. Bela clicked the button and the universe stopped moving. Only Bela, Spoon, and WPM could move. “It worked, you’re a genius, Spoon!”
“Don’t thank me, thank B-Ray, who risked his life to destroy this world. It was his plan all along, disconnection! That was genius. Disconnect the whole world, universe, and everything would be destroyed!” Spoon said.
WPM looked around, and saw that his fellow moderators were not moving. “What’s going on?” WPM wondered. He looked back, and he saw that the Moderators were stuck in time, but he wasn’t. “This is obvious. I’m god.” He flew through time and space and drew his blade, which had a red navigator on it. All he had to do was press one button, and he could find anything, anywhere, at anytime.
WPM was flying through space when he saw a planet that he never created, or knew about. He slowly approached it, and was pulled in by its strong gravitational pull.
He was brought down to the planet. It was completely green. Grass everywhere, trees, but no sign of water. “Welcome, GOD!” A large machine came out of nowhere. He had 2 holes in his head, for eyes, and the rest of his body was metallic. He was equivalent to a 20 story building.
“Dextros?” WPM said in awe. Dextros was a machine WPM had created to help him run the forums when they were at an early stage. “It’s me, Jon, remember?” WPM asked.
The machine’s eyes began to glow red and it slammed the ground with both of its huge hands. It made an earthquake and WPM was flung backwards. “Jon, you won’t leave this planet alive!” The machine shouted. He started sprinting towards Jon. Each step that he took created a large crater in the ground. The earth cracked and everything began to collapse. “Final Strike Punisher!” Dextros took out his huge metal blade. He threw it at WPM and the sword punctured through his heart. “Didn’t see that coming, did you?” Dextros said. His eyes started to glow red and he took the sword out of WPM’s body. WPM fell to the floor, his eyes rolled back, and he was bleeding from his chest. “Now, to annihilate you from existence. Final Strike Explosion!” Dextros’ whole body began to glow red. His body exploded into a mass explosion of aura. The aura hit WPM and his body melted. The explosion made the whole planet become as if it was an active volcano. The ground cracked open and lava spurted out. The whole planet was about to explode. The planet exploded and time started again.
WPM opened his eyes. He saw two people standing in front of him, but he could not make the figures out. WPM grunted as he barely stood up. “Err…who are you?” WPM asked.
The man walked over to him. “What? How do you not recognize this face!” the man shouted. He grabbed WPM by his neck and threw him at the wall. WPM’s head banged into the metal, but he got up faster than any person in his situation would have. “Come on, Jon, it’s me, Tom!” the man said again.
Jon stepped up. “I haven’t been called Jon in a while. But I guess this is a start” said WPM, rubbing the back of his head to ease the pain. He trotted up to Spoon and stuck his hand out for a handshake. Spoon returned the handshake. “Hey, Bela, how have you been during the time-stop. What were you guys up to?” WPM joked.
Bela stepped forward and punched WPM in the face. “The next time you try to interfere with our plans again, we will blow your face right off!” Bela shouted.
WPM chuckled like a drunk maniac. “I didn’t do anything. The next time you punch me, you’ll feel severe pains all around your body. Got it?” WPM replied.
Bela chuckled right back. “You think you’re funny? You think you’re tougher than me?! I did what I did because I didn’t want to sit around pampering your every need! Now you’ll feel the power from my fist!” Bela lunged the punch at WPM, but WPM just grabbed Bela’s hand and put it in a wrist lock.
“Oh yeah, you’re so powerful! Now you’ll feel my true strength deep within!” WPM shouted. Aura began to shroud around him. The aura shrouding around WPM joined together and created a blade. “Now, you’ll feel my strength. I really have no idea why you did not kill me when you had the chance, but that is your problem. This blade contains all the power I have!” WPM shouted.
“If any” Spoon replied. WPM’s filled with rage and lunged at Spoon. Spoon just stood and was struck by the attack. The attack had no impact on him, though. “You really think we would keep you alive if you would really stand a threat to us? Exactly, now you’ll just have to suffer some extreme pain!” Spoon exclaimed. He drew his blade and slashed WPM. “Look at you. You’re a pitiful scumbag. Now, I’ll have to really kill you so you won’t mess with us anymore! Extremespeed Aurora Flash!” A huge flash of light blinded everyone. Everything was silent. Then, the blinding light disappeared and a man was standing in front of Spoon.
“Oh Tom, how unlikely of us to stop you. You knew this was going to happen. Why didn’t you completely kill us when you stopped time, huh?” KG said.
“So, you protected your friend’s life? He is a worthless piece of crap! Why do you think I didn’t kill him in the first place? I did that so I could drain his power! All he is, all he’s got, and everything he would have been. His strength has mixed with mine. Bela, I suggest you leave, because I might blow this whole place up with just snapping my fingers. Go on, Bela, we’ll meet each other later. I’ll find you” Spoon said. Bela walked out the door and flew out. “So, I guess it is just you and me boys! Let’s have some fun!” Spoon said with an evil grin on his face.
PMJ, KG, Bacon, Noobnerd, and WPM all huddled together. “Look, Tom, you’re outnumbered, just back down now, or things will get ugly quickly. So, next time you plot a plan, try thinking it over. And also sending Bela away? What a stupid decision, seriously, you were never that stupid!” PMJ replied.
Spoon looked away. “You don’t realize the potential I have with Jon’s power! I have the power to create and destroy anything I see. Don’t you see what my plan is? I’m going to create the Beach again! With me and Bela as leaders, but I’ll give you guys a little power for helping me along with this plan. Without you killing Black Rayquaza, we would never be here. So, thank you. Now, if you’d just back down and let me rule this world, nobody will have to get hurt! Understood?” Spoon told them all.
“That’s not how we run! Come on guys, we have to mix our attacks together to finally get rid of him. Are you ready guys?” WPM asked. They all nodded. WPM put his hands together and aura began to shroud everybody. “This is it! Put everything you’ve got into this! This is our final chance! Aura Unlimited!” WPM generated a ball of aura in his hand. “Alright, take this!” WPM threw the aura attack. KG blasted a fireball at Spoon. PMJ generated a dark energy ball in his hand and he blasted that at Spoon. Bacon and Noobnerd put both of their hands together and created a massive electric energy ball and blasted it at Spoon, too. Spoon stood and did nothing. The attacks hit him, full force, and the collision between Spoon and the attacks caused the room that they were in to shatter and the explosion impacted the Moderators, too. Their attack had a backfire, but hopefully, they did what they had to, and destroy Spoon.
After the smoke disappeared, Spoon appeared unhurt. “You fools! Your worthless efforts will do nothing to me! I am now, GOD!” Spoon shouted. A storm arose from nowhere, and lightning struck Noobnerd, making him fall to the ground. KG ran over to him and felt his pulse, but there was nothing. Noobnerd was dead.
“You son of a, I’ll destroy you now! EX-Blasters!” Bacon pulled out two guns and started to shoot Spoon. But there was an invisible wall protecting him from what he was about to get hit by.
“I already told you Bacon, you can’t defeat me! Ultra Fire Blaze!” Spoon blasted a huge fire ball from his hand that struck Bacon. KG went over to check Bacon’s pulse, and like Noobnerd, there was nothing.
“So, I see how you want to play! Killing two people extremely close to me, yes, I admit it; will end in nothing but trouble for you!” PMJ exclaimed.
WPM pushed PMJ backwards. “You don’t know what you’re dealing with! If you couldn’t beat me, how would you expect to beat me, plus someone’s else’s powers combined? Huh? Use your brain, and battle smart. Bacon and Noobnerd will forever be remembered, but they died because they decided to battle with power, not brains. If you trust me now, then back off, same with you KG. If you trust me, then stop battling him. Just give me all the power that you have left! That is the only way I can defeat him! Hurry and decide!” WPM shouted.
He rushed at Spoon at full force and tried to punch him, but Spoon was too fast. Spoon moved out of the way and punched WPM in the stomach, making him fly backwards onto the ground. “Alright, here it is, coming at you, Jon!” PMJ said as he put out his hand and released all his power. Then, he went unconscious. KG also stuck his hand out and released all of his energy and gave it to WPM. He fell unconscious, too.
WPM’s power rose more than double of what he had before his power was ever drained. “Looks like you are the one who has the problem now. All the lives that you, Black Rayquaza, Jade, and Bela took. You don’t deserve to live after that. You and everybody like you!!!” WPM walked over to Spoon. “You need to get your attitude straight, Tom.”
Spoon stood and did nothing. Then, he spoke out: “Make me”.
WPM kicked Spoon and he flew backwards. “Maybe I will”. WPM ran to Spoon and kicked him again. Spoon’s eyes became green and Spoon grabbed WPM’s leg and threw him into the air.
“I’ll show you!” Spoon shouted. WPM’s body landed on the floor, and WPM was aching with pain. “You make a fool of me, and I kill you! Good luck with life in heaven, because you won’t live to see the world be destroyed under my control! Now, take this! Shining Underpalm!” Spoon ran towards WPM. Spoon grabbed WPM’s body and threw it up into the air. “HAAA!” Spoon jumped into the air and punched WPM’s body continuously. Spoon landed on the ground, unhurt. But WPM dropped from the sky face-first. “I told you not to mess with me” Spoon replied. Spoon turned around and walked away.
WPM barely got up. “I’m…not…finished…with…you!” WPM dashed to Spoon and punched him in the back. But Spoon felt no pain.
“Look, I really didn’t want to hurt you this bad. I was just on my way to destroy this planet, but I guess you want some more pain. No problem senorita!” Spoon jabbed WPM in the face. WPM wabbled backwards. He was too dizzy to do anything. “What a pity? I was expecting so much from an admin combined with the power of his two strongest moderators. But I guess your only weakness is yourself. What a shame”. Spoon flew away.
“I won’t let you escape this planet!” WPM put his hand out and a barrier formed around the planet. The barrier would only disappear once WPM was defeated. Spoon landed back down.
“I see how you want to play. You want to die with respect! Well, I wanted that, too! But then I got your power, so I didn’t have to die. After all, I am god” Spoon said. He grabbed WPM and slammed him down to the ground. “I’ll burn your face off!” His hand became red and he was about to put it on WPM’s face, but then an energy blast hit Spoon’s hand. “What the?” Spoon wondered.
“You really think I’d let you die, Jon?” Amt laughed. Amt ran over to Spoon and punched him in the face, making him unconscious for a few seconds. “Jon, do it now, or we will never be able to defeat him. Use barrier!” Amt commanded.
WPM took a few steps backwards and stuck his arm out. “BARRIER!” A big force field enclosed WPM and Spoon. “Thank you Amt. I would’ve been dead if it wasn’t for you! Well, this is goodbye. Rebuild the forums with the help of PMJ and KG. And bury Bacon and Noobnerd in a place that they’ll be remembered forever. Now as for you, Mr. Tom, we’ll both be destroyed. For the sake of the universe. Take care, Amt!” WPM’s body began to shine. Both WPM and Spoon were in the closed barrier, nothing could escape until WPM was dead. “Extreme Aura Explosion!” WPM exploded, and everything in the small barrier was burned and dead. WPM sacrificed himself to save the world. Bela was still out there, but Amt, KG, and PMJ would stop him one day or another. Endless chases around the universe until they would finally corner him, and then rebuild PokeBeach. The universe was set to peace for a small amount of time.
Alright, Ch. 7, the second to last chapter is finally here. I'd love comments. I think this is the longest chapter out of all of them, but whatever. Have fun! BTW, this is more EPIC than the last chapter :0
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Ch. 7: Disconnection
PMJ stood in awe. “She’s gone? What happened, who did it?” PMJ asked.
“It was B-Ray. Nobody ever liked him, we all knew he was up to trouble the first time we saw him at the Beach” KG said. He walked over to WPM. “Let’s get out of here. We need to re-create the Beach. But let’s not make it at the most obvious place, the center of the universe.”
WPM ordered everyone to follow him, and they did, off the planet. “Alright, we are headed to Sector Z5, far from the earlier PB. Let’s go” WPM said. They dashed off the frozen planet.
Meanwhile, Bela and Spoon were far from the others. “So, are you ready to disconnect?” Bela asked. He was in a room, computers everywhere and different machines and buttons. There was one glowing red button in the center of the room. Spoon nodded. Bela clicked the button and the universe stopped moving. Only Bela, Spoon, and WPM could move. “It worked, you’re a genius, Spoon!”
“Don’t thank me, thank B-Ray, who risked his life to destroy this world. It was his plan all along, disconnection! That was genius. Disconnect the whole world, universe, and everything would be destroyed!” Spoon said.
WPM looked around, and saw that his fellow moderators were not moving. “What’s going on?” WPM wondered. He looked back, and he saw that the Moderators were stuck in time, but he wasn’t. “This is obvious. I’m god.” He flew through time and space and drew his blade, which had a red navigator on it. All he had to do was press one button, and he could find anything, anywhere, at anytime.
WPM was flying through space when he saw a planet that he never created, or knew about. He slowly approached it, and was pulled in by its strong gravitational pull.
He was brought down to the planet. It was completely green. Grass everywhere, trees, but no sign of water. “Welcome, GOD!” A large machine came out of nowhere. He had 2 holes in his head, for eyes, and the rest of his body was metallic. He was equivalent to a 20 story building.
“Dextros?” WPM said in awe. Dextros was a machine WPM had created to help him run the forums when they were at an early stage. “It’s me, Jon, remember?” WPM asked.
The machine’s eyes began to glow red and it slammed the ground with both of its huge hands. It made an earthquake and WPM was flung backwards. “Jon, you won’t leave this planet alive!” The machine shouted. He started sprinting towards Jon. Each step that he took created a large crater in the ground. The earth cracked and everything began to collapse. “Final Strike Punisher!” Dextros took out his huge metal blade. He threw it at WPM and the sword punctured through his heart. “Didn’t see that coming, did you?” Dextros said. His eyes started to glow red and he took the sword out of WPM’s body. WPM fell to the floor, his eyes rolled back, and he was bleeding from his chest. “Now, to annihilate you from existence. Final Strike Explosion!” Dextros’ whole body began to glow red. His body exploded into a mass explosion of aura. The aura hit WPM and his body melted. The explosion made the whole planet become as if it was an active volcano. The ground cracked open and lava spurted out. The whole planet was about to explode. The planet exploded and time started again.
WPM opened his eyes. He saw two people standing in front of him, but he could not make the figures out. WPM grunted as he barely stood up. “Err…who are you?” WPM asked.
The man walked over to him. “What? How do you not recognize this face!” the man shouted. He grabbed WPM by his neck and threw him at the wall. WPM’s head banged into the metal, but he got up faster than any person in his situation would have. “Come on, Jon, it’s me, Tom!” the man said again.
Jon stepped up. “I haven’t been called Jon in a while. But I guess this is a start” said WPM, rubbing the back of his head to ease the pain. He trotted up to Spoon and stuck his hand out for a handshake. Spoon returned the handshake. “Hey, Bela, how have you been during the time-stop. What were you guys up to?” WPM joked.
Bela stepped forward and punched WPM in the face. “The next time you try to interfere with our plans again, we will blow your face right off!” Bela shouted.
WPM chuckled like a drunk maniac. “I didn’t do anything. The next time you punch me, you’ll feel severe pains all around your body. Got it?” WPM replied.
Bela chuckled right back. “You think you’re funny? You think you’re tougher than me?! I did what I did because I didn’t want to sit around pampering your every need! Now you’ll feel the power from my fist!” Bela lunged the punch at WPM, but WPM just grabbed Bela’s hand and put it in a wrist lock.
“Oh yeah, you’re so powerful! Now you’ll feel my true strength deep within!” WPM shouted. Aura began to shroud around him. The aura shrouding around WPM joined together and created a blade. “Now, you’ll feel my strength. I really have no idea why you did not kill me when you had the chance, but that is your problem. This blade contains all the power I have!” WPM shouted.
“If any” Spoon replied. WPM’s filled with rage and lunged at Spoon. Spoon just stood and was struck by the attack. The attack had no impact on him, though. “You really think we would keep you alive if you would really stand a threat to us? Exactly, now you’ll just have to suffer some extreme pain!” Spoon exclaimed. He drew his blade and slashed WPM. “Look at you. You’re a pitiful scumbag. Now, I’ll have to really kill you so you won’t mess with us anymore! Extremespeed Aurora Flash!” A huge flash of light blinded everyone. Everything was silent. Then, the blinding light disappeared and a man was standing in front of Spoon.
“Oh Tom, how unlikely of us to stop you. You knew this was going to happen. Why didn’t you completely kill us when you stopped time, huh?” KG said.
“So, you protected your friend’s life? He is a worthless piece of crap! Why do you think I didn’t kill him in the first place? I did that so I could drain his power! All he is, all he’s got, and everything he would have been. His strength has mixed with mine. Bela, I suggest you leave, because I might blow this whole place up with just snapping my fingers. Go on, Bela, we’ll meet each other later. I’ll find you” Spoon said. Bela walked out the door and flew out. “So, I guess it is just you and me boys! Let’s have some fun!” Spoon said with an evil grin on his face.
PMJ, KG, Bacon, Noobnerd, and WPM all huddled together. “Look, Tom, you’re outnumbered, just back down now, or things will get ugly quickly. So, next time you plot a plan, try thinking it over. And also sending Bela away? What a stupid decision, seriously, you were never that stupid!” PMJ replied.
Spoon looked away. “You don’t realize the potential I have with Jon’s power! I have the power to create and destroy anything I see. Don’t you see what my plan is? I’m going to create the Beach again! With me and Bela as leaders, but I’ll give you guys a little power for helping me along with this plan. Without you killing Black Rayquaza, we would never be here. So, thank you. Now, if you’d just back down and let me rule this world, nobody will have to get hurt! Understood?” Spoon told them all.
“That’s not how we run! Come on guys, we have to mix our attacks together to finally get rid of him. Are you ready guys?” WPM asked. They all nodded. WPM put his hands together and aura began to shroud everybody. “This is it! Put everything you’ve got into this! This is our final chance! Aura Unlimited!” WPM generated a ball of aura in his hand. “Alright, take this!” WPM threw the aura attack. KG blasted a fireball at Spoon. PMJ generated a dark energy ball in his hand and he blasted that at Spoon. Bacon and Noobnerd put both of their hands together and created a massive electric energy ball and blasted it at Spoon, too. Spoon stood and did nothing. The attacks hit him, full force, and the collision between Spoon and the attacks caused the room that they were in to shatter and the explosion impacted the Moderators, too. Their attack had a backfire, but hopefully, they did what they had to, and destroy Spoon.
After the smoke disappeared, Spoon appeared unhurt. “You fools! Your worthless efforts will do nothing to me! I am now, GOD!” Spoon shouted. A storm arose from nowhere, and lightning struck Noobnerd, making him fall to the ground. KG ran over to him and felt his pulse, but there was nothing. Noobnerd was dead.
“You son of a, I’ll destroy you now! EX-Blasters!” Bacon pulled out two guns and started to shoot Spoon. But there was an invisible wall protecting him from what he was about to get hit by.
“I already told you Bacon, you can’t defeat me! Ultra Fire Blaze!” Spoon blasted a huge fire ball from his hand that struck Bacon. KG went over to check Bacon’s pulse, and like Noobnerd, there was nothing.
“So, I see how you want to play! Killing two people extremely close to me, yes, I admit it; will end in nothing but trouble for you!” PMJ exclaimed.
WPM pushed PMJ backwards. “You don’t know what you’re dealing with! If you couldn’t beat me, how would you expect to beat me, plus someone’s else’s powers combined? Huh? Use your brain, and battle smart. Bacon and Noobnerd will forever be remembered, but they died because they decided to battle with power, not brains. If you trust me now, then back off, same with you KG. If you trust me, then stop battling him. Just give me all the power that you have left! That is the only way I can defeat him! Hurry and decide!” WPM shouted.
He rushed at Spoon at full force and tried to punch him, but Spoon was too fast. Spoon moved out of the way and punched WPM in the stomach, making him fly backwards onto the ground. “Alright, here it is, coming at you, Jon!” PMJ said as he put out his hand and released all his power. Then, he went unconscious. KG also stuck his hand out and released all of his energy and gave it to WPM. He fell unconscious, too.
WPM’s power rose more than double of what he had before his power was ever drained. “Looks like you are the one who has the problem now. All the lives that you, Black Rayquaza, Jade, and Bela took. You don’t deserve to live after that. You and everybody like you!!!” WPM walked over to Spoon. “You need to get your attitude straight, Tom.”
Spoon stood and did nothing. Then, he spoke out: “Make me”.
WPM kicked Spoon and he flew backwards. “Maybe I will”. WPM ran to Spoon and kicked him again. Spoon’s eyes became green and Spoon grabbed WPM’s leg and threw him into the air.
“I’ll show you!” Spoon shouted. WPM’s body landed on the floor, and WPM was aching with pain. “You make a fool of me, and I kill you! Good luck with life in heaven, because you won’t live to see the world be destroyed under my control! Now, take this! Shining Underpalm!” Spoon ran towards WPM. Spoon grabbed WPM’s body and threw it up into the air. “HAAA!” Spoon jumped into the air and punched WPM’s body continuously. Spoon landed on the ground, unhurt. But WPM dropped from the sky face-first. “I told you not to mess with me” Spoon replied. Spoon turned around and walked away.
WPM barely got up. “I’m…not…finished…with…you!” WPM dashed to Spoon and punched him in the back. But Spoon felt no pain.
“Look, I really didn’t want to hurt you this bad. I was just on my way to destroy this planet, but I guess you want some more pain. No problem senorita!” Spoon jabbed WPM in the face. WPM wabbled backwards. He was too dizzy to do anything. “What a pity? I was expecting so much from an admin combined with the power of his two strongest moderators. But I guess your only weakness is yourself. What a shame”. Spoon flew away.
“I won’t let you escape this planet!” WPM put his hand out and a barrier formed around the planet. The barrier would only disappear once WPM was defeated. Spoon landed back down.
“I see how you want to play. You want to die with respect! Well, I wanted that, too! But then I got your power, so I didn’t have to die. After all, I am god” Spoon said. He grabbed WPM and slammed him down to the ground. “I’ll burn your face off!” His hand became red and he was about to put it on WPM’s face, but then an energy blast hit Spoon’s hand. “What the?” Spoon wondered.
“You really think I’d let you die, Jon?” Amt laughed. Amt ran over to Spoon and punched him in the face, making him unconscious for a few seconds. “Jon, do it now, or we will never be able to defeat him. Use barrier!” Amt commanded.
WPM took a few steps backwards and stuck his arm out. “BARRIER!” A big force field enclosed WPM and Spoon. “Thank you Amt. I would’ve been dead if it wasn’t for you! Well, this is goodbye. Rebuild the forums with the help of PMJ and KG. And bury Bacon and Noobnerd in a place that they’ll be remembered forever. Now as for you, Mr. Tom, we’ll both be destroyed. For the sake of the universe. Take care, Amt!” WPM’s body began to shine. Both WPM and Spoon were in the closed barrier, nothing could escape until WPM was dead. “Extreme Aura Explosion!” WPM exploded, and everything in the small barrier was burned and dead. WPM sacrificed himself to save the world. Bela was still out there, but Amt, KG, and PMJ would stop him one day or another. Endless chases around the universe until they would finally corner him, and then rebuild PokeBeach. The universe was set to peace for a small amount of time.
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 7: Disconnection)
I did?
PokeLen said:
I did?
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 7: Disconnection)
OMG, OMG, OMG.
You know what, this is the first time I'm commenting on the story, and do you know what i think about it?
IT'S full of ACTION!, which means it's good. Though, knowing that this is the second to the last chapter, makes me a bit sad.
Just make sure you make more stories like this...
OMG, OMG, OMG.
You know what, this is the first time I'm commenting on the story, and do you know what i think about it?
IT'S full of ACTION!, which means it's good. Though, knowing that this is the second to the last chapter, makes me a bit sad.
Just make sure you make more stories like this...
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 7: Disconnection)
I'm glad to have another fan. And don't worry. If you guys like the next chapter (which will be so much more EPIC than all of the chapters combined) then I might make a sequel. But not right after this is over, maybe a month or two if I decide to do it.
I'm glad to have another fan. And don't worry. If you guys like the next chapter (which will be so much more EPIC than all of the chapters combined) then I might make a sequel. But not right after this is over, maybe a month or two if I decide to do it.
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RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 7: Disconnection)
Why am I a machine? ._.
Anyone who liked this should read my fic. And comment on it. For the love of your favorite treat, comment on it. ._.
Why am I a machine? ._.
Anyone who liked this should read my fic. And comment on it. For the love of your favorite treat, comment on it. ._.
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 7: Disconnection)
What are you, advertising in my thread? Are you that desperate? :|
That machine updates itself everytime you learn something new or become more powerful. It is exactly you, just machine version. I'd rather not explain, since everything you don't understand will be explained in the last chapter.
What are you, advertising in my thread? Are you that desperate? :|
That machine updates itself everytime you learn something new or become more powerful. It is exactly you, just machine version. I'd rather not explain, since everything you don't understand will be explained in the last chapter.
RE: PokeBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 7: Disconnection)
how do you come up with this stuff?
how do you come up with this stuff?
RE: PokéBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 7: Disconnection)
A lot of imagination. I just love action and I've been thinking of the Holy Star thing for a while now. WPM says its nothing and so does KG, but I don't believe them =D If I would have believed them, this story would have never been made. It was also from talking to Amt. She partially inspired me to write this.
A lot of imagination. I just love action and I've been thinking of the Holy Star thing for a while now. WPM says its nothing and so does KG, but I don't believe them =D If I would have believed them, this story would have never been made. It was also from talking to Amt. She partially inspired me to write this.
RE: PokéBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 7: Disconnection)
I'm guessing that business comes with writers block am I right?
I'm guessing that business comes with writers block am I right?
RE: PokéBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 7: Disconnection)
Ch. 8: Legends Awakened (Part 1)
This is Amt speaking. We are 27 years behind your time. About a year and a half ago we defeated Spoon, the enemy we’ve been chasing through our long and hard battle. I know you went through the same thing, and I would like to know if PokeBeach has made it through the next 27 years, and if I’m alive, hopefully. Maybe not a moderator anymore, but hey, I just want to know if I’m alive. We are in the year 2009. The new year just passed. Everybody is rejoicing, the world is happy. Now,for the big question...Did we defeat Bela? He was powerful, and some of our people might have died during the battles with him. So, if you could graciously return the favor by sending us another time letter. This is your Admin speaking,
~Amt
“So, how do you feel after sending the letter? You think they’ll send back anytime soon? Who knows, they could be dead for all we know” KG said.
Amt laughed. “You’re probably the only one that would die. You are too weak to survive any pitiful disease that might have spread. You make me laugh” Amt said.
A loud siren was turned on by some noobs in the Town Square. A new face appeared in front of the 3 noobs. “Take this, Kaga BAJOOGIE!” A man in a pink cape jumped at the noobs. He began to punch and kick them with endless fury. He took out a huge bag out of his pocket and put the noobs into the bag. “Kaga NOOBIFICATION!” The noobs disappeared, and were perma-banned from PokeBeach. “No need to fear, Kaga is here!” The proud man stood. “Here me out, I am a new Super Moderator here to keep your streets SAFE! My name is KAGA!” Kaga jumped into the air and wrapped himself into his cape, and then disappeared.
After Kaga disappeared, a huge fire bird soared through the sky. The bird landed with his claws and transformed into a human. “Aww, where did Kaga go? I just heard him babbling like a weirdo” the man said. “Oh, you guys might not know me. My name is DukeFireBird, but you may abbreviate my name is DFB. Well, with me here, there is no need for Kevin Garret, so, let’s go burn his house! Wait, no, that was wrong. Err…I’m just going to go home now” DFB declared as he transformed and flew away.
Amt stared at the surveillance camera which caught both of their acts. “What are those idiots up to anyways? This place just gets freakier and freakier” she said. The red button on the Time Letters machine began to flash. “We got the letter, already?” she wondered. Amt ran over to see the letter that she got. “Sir Shade? Sounds familiar, but I can’t put my tongue on it. Anyways, let’s see what we have here:
My name is Sir Shade. PokeBeach in 27 years had a drastic change. In 4 years, you will have a major hack strike, but you guys stopped them just in time. Then a year after, I was crowned Admin after you, KG, and PMJ dropped out. We even had a few new moderators, but all of them died except DukeFireBird and Chairman Kaga. They were lucky, and we strong enough to keep themselves running. As for you, I have no idea where you are. We haven’t heard from you for 5 years. KG and PMJ died when the strong plague came 1 year ago, but we were able to completely destroy it, though over 50% of the PokeBeach members died. Luckily, I survived along with DFB and Kaga. We are the ones running the forums these days. Just us, since we can’t trust anyone at the time of war we are in at the moment. Serebii Forums have declared war on us, but we are on the verge of winning. Just one final battle to attend to and we will finally be the longest standing nation in the universe. We started as the center, and by hell, we will stay the center. This is your Admin speaking,
~Sir Shade
“Sir Shade? Max Shade IV? Sounds so familiar, but he must be pretty old at that time. Still staying around. Wait a sec, you were right! I died from a disease. Dang it, I hate it when you’re right. Make sure to send a letter immediately. I’m gonna go check out the hospital to see if everything is alright, nothing jumping up” KG said.
“But we just got the message from Sir Shade. Nothing ever happened. We can keep our guard up. Don’t worry” Amt said.
“Never hurts to be careful. You can’t just trust them immediately. You never know. Well, I’m on my way. See ya!” KG said as he ran out of the Moderator Headquarters. KG flew to the center of PokeBeach where the hospital was. He entered through the doors. “Kronar, Krucifier, Brandon, Salice, come here!” KG shouted.
Salice appeared, and he was known around the forums as Salice. Krucifier and Kronar came and they were both known as their names around the forums. But Brandon came, though he was known around the forums as UchihaBlood, or TearsofanUchiha. “Yes, sir?” Salice asked. Salice was the chief of the doctors.
“Anything out of the ordinary?” KG asked.
“Nope, nothing” Salice replied. The double doors broke open and they rushed in a patient. They laid him on a bed. Salice rushed over. “What’s wrong with him?” he asked.
“He has a huge cut on his back and his arm is frozen!” the intern replied.
Salice’s eyes widened up. “Jeez, get the bleeding to stop and get him into X-rays” Salice told the doctors.
“Well, that isn’t something you see every day. By the way, we finally got Time Letters to work. We talked to PokeBeach 27 years into the future! It was amazing. Well, I’ll let you return to your work” KG said.
(27 Years into the future)
A man in a black cape walked across a small bridge with an army behind him. He was holding a sword. In front of him stood another army, which was led by Max Shade IV. “Nightshade, I won’t let you ruin this world!” Max shouted.
“I’m you. I doubt you could kill yourself. By killing me, you would be killing yourself. Well, something along those lines. But without further ado, let the battle begin!” Nightshade raised his sword into the air. A dark aura surrounded the sword. Max raised his sword too, and a light aura shrouded his sword.
The two armies began to battle each other and madness fled through the scene.
(Present Time)
This is Amt speaking. I can’t believe so many things have happened in just 27 years. Well, it is quite some time, but I didn’t expect you to answer so fast. It’s like you knew we were going to send you a letter. Anyways, the point of this next letter being sent out is because I want to ask you a favor. Find me. This is your Admin,
~Amt
Amt walked away, and then the red button began to flash. “So…fast?!” Amt wondered. She walked back to the machine and opened the letter.
This is Max Shade IV speaking. The letter you got earlier was a fake. All the events are true, except the war. The war is really between me and my spirit form, Nightshade. We had a battle just this afternoon, and we won. Nightshade retreated, because if we kill him, I die too. Sorry for the mis-understanding. Since the war is over, we’ll search for you. Don’t worry, we’ll find you. This is your real Admin speaking,
~Max Shade IV
Amt read it over, and was amazed by how gullible she was. Then, the machine began to break down. “No, no, no! Not now! Machine, get working!” Amt said as she punched and kicked it to try to get it working, but the opposite happened. The machine exploded and Amt flew backwards. A liquid mist traveled across the headquarters, and out of the building. Amt lay on the ground, unconscious.
KG, alarmed by the sound, flew over to the headquarters. He breathed in the mist, but didn’t realize it. He ran over and grabbed Amt’s body. “Jeez, what the hell happened here?” KG thought. He grabbed her body and brought her to the hospital.
(A couple weeks passed)
Amt was feeling all better and ready to keep her stay as Admin, but the first thing she ordered was a meeting. The final meeting they would have for a long time in their own time at PokeBeach.
“KG, DFB, PMJ, and Kaga. The day of the explosion I got a message from Max Shade IV from the future, and he told me his troubles. What we will do is go into the future to his time and do whatever we can to help him, no matter what the consequences are. Even if time changes drastically, we will know that PokeBeach will hopefully be safe. If you are not up for this, which one of you may not, will stay here and run the forums. If not, the hospital crew will be the ones running it all. Are you in?” Amt asked.
“I’m definitely in. I am not missing out on this crazy adventure. Let’s hope this won’t be our last adventure. By doing this, we will dis-obey time. That means the future will change, and there will be drastic changes. But I’m up for this, whatever you want to call this operation” KG said. The others nodded and they were up for it.
“Alright, then it’s settle. Operation Time Travel shall begin!” Amt said. Amt called up the hospital crew and told them that they were the head of PokeBeach for the time being during their trip. Amt picked up a device and pressed a button. A big wormhole appeared in front of them. “You guys go first!” Amt commanded. KG jumped in and there was a big flash of light. PMJ jumped in right after. DFB jumped, too. Then Kaga and Amt, who jumped in together right before the wormhole disappeared. They all were flung out of the wormhole and appeared in Max Shade’s headquarters. “What luck!” Amt said.
“Welcome, visitors.”
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So, how did you guys like it? Just the first part out of 3. Give suggestions/criticism. Thanks.
Ch. 8: Legends Awakened (Part 1)
This is Amt speaking. We are 27 years behind your time. About a year and a half ago we defeated Spoon, the enemy we’ve been chasing through our long and hard battle. I know you went through the same thing, and I would like to know if PokeBeach has made it through the next 27 years, and if I’m alive, hopefully. Maybe not a moderator anymore, but hey, I just want to know if I’m alive. We are in the year 2009. The new year just passed. Everybody is rejoicing, the world is happy. Now,for the big question...Did we defeat Bela? He was powerful, and some of our people might have died during the battles with him. So, if you could graciously return the favor by sending us another time letter. This is your Admin speaking,
~Amt
“So, how do you feel after sending the letter? You think they’ll send back anytime soon? Who knows, they could be dead for all we know” KG said.
Amt laughed. “You’re probably the only one that would die. You are too weak to survive any pitiful disease that might have spread. You make me laugh” Amt said.
A loud siren was turned on by some noobs in the Town Square. A new face appeared in front of the 3 noobs. “Take this, Kaga BAJOOGIE!” A man in a pink cape jumped at the noobs. He began to punch and kick them with endless fury. He took out a huge bag out of his pocket and put the noobs into the bag. “Kaga NOOBIFICATION!” The noobs disappeared, and were perma-banned from PokeBeach. “No need to fear, Kaga is here!” The proud man stood. “Here me out, I am a new Super Moderator here to keep your streets SAFE! My name is KAGA!” Kaga jumped into the air and wrapped himself into his cape, and then disappeared.
After Kaga disappeared, a huge fire bird soared through the sky. The bird landed with his claws and transformed into a human. “Aww, where did Kaga go? I just heard him babbling like a weirdo” the man said. “Oh, you guys might not know me. My name is DukeFireBird, but you may abbreviate my name is DFB. Well, with me here, there is no need for Kevin Garret, so, let’s go burn his house! Wait, no, that was wrong. Err…I’m just going to go home now” DFB declared as he transformed and flew away.
Amt stared at the surveillance camera which caught both of their acts. “What are those idiots up to anyways? This place just gets freakier and freakier” she said. The red button on the Time Letters machine began to flash. “We got the letter, already?” she wondered. Amt ran over to see the letter that she got. “Sir Shade? Sounds familiar, but I can’t put my tongue on it. Anyways, let’s see what we have here:
My name is Sir Shade. PokeBeach in 27 years had a drastic change. In 4 years, you will have a major hack strike, but you guys stopped them just in time. Then a year after, I was crowned Admin after you, KG, and PMJ dropped out. We even had a few new moderators, but all of them died except DukeFireBird and Chairman Kaga. They were lucky, and we strong enough to keep themselves running. As for you, I have no idea where you are. We haven’t heard from you for 5 years. KG and PMJ died when the strong plague came 1 year ago, but we were able to completely destroy it, though over 50% of the PokeBeach members died. Luckily, I survived along with DFB and Kaga. We are the ones running the forums these days. Just us, since we can’t trust anyone at the time of war we are in at the moment. Serebii Forums have declared war on us, but we are on the verge of winning. Just one final battle to attend to and we will finally be the longest standing nation in the universe. We started as the center, and by hell, we will stay the center. This is your Admin speaking,
~Sir Shade
“Sir Shade? Max Shade IV? Sounds so familiar, but he must be pretty old at that time. Still staying around. Wait a sec, you were right! I died from a disease. Dang it, I hate it when you’re right. Make sure to send a letter immediately. I’m gonna go check out the hospital to see if everything is alright, nothing jumping up” KG said.
“But we just got the message from Sir Shade. Nothing ever happened. We can keep our guard up. Don’t worry” Amt said.
“Never hurts to be careful. You can’t just trust them immediately. You never know. Well, I’m on my way. See ya!” KG said as he ran out of the Moderator Headquarters. KG flew to the center of PokeBeach where the hospital was. He entered through the doors. “Kronar, Krucifier, Brandon, Salice, come here!” KG shouted.
Salice appeared, and he was known around the forums as Salice. Krucifier and Kronar came and they were both known as their names around the forums. But Brandon came, though he was known around the forums as UchihaBlood, or TearsofanUchiha. “Yes, sir?” Salice asked. Salice was the chief of the doctors.
“Anything out of the ordinary?” KG asked.
“Nope, nothing” Salice replied. The double doors broke open and they rushed in a patient. They laid him on a bed. Salice rushed over. “What’s wrong with him?” he asked.
“He has a huge cut on his back and his arm is frozen!” the intern replied.
Salice’s eyes widened up. “Jeez, get the bleeding to stop and get him into X-rays” Salice told the doctors.
“Well, that isn’t something you see every day. By the way, we finally got Time Letters to work. We talked to PokeBeach 27 years into the future! It was amazing. Well, I’ll let you return to your work” KG said.
(27 Years into the future)
A man in a black cape walked across a small bridge with an army behind him. He was holding a sword. In front of him stood another army, which was led by Max Shade IV. “Nightshade, I won’t let you ruin this world!” Max shouted.
“I’m you. I doubt you could kill yourself. By killing me, you would be killing yourself. Well, something along those lines. But without further ado, let the battle begin!” Nightshade raised his sword into the air. A dark aura surrounded the sword. Max raised his sword too, and a light aura shrouded his sword.
The two armies began to battle each other and madness fled through the scene.
(Present Time)
This is Amt speaking. I can’t believe so many things have happened in just 27 years. Well, it is quite some time, but I didn’t expect you to answer so fast. It’s like you knew we were going to send you a letter. Anyways, the point of this next letter being sent out is because I want to ask you a favor. Find me. This is your Admin,
~Amt
Amt walked away, and then the red button began to flash. “So…fast?!” Amt wondered. She walked back to the machine and opened the letter.
This is Max Shade IV speaking. The letter you got earlier was a fake. All the events are true, except the war. The war is really between me and my spirit form, Nightshade. We had a battle just this afternoon, and we won. Nightshade retreated, because if we kill him, I die too. Sorry for the mis-understanding. Since the war is over, we’ll search for you. Don’t worry, we’ll find you. This is your real Admin speaking,
~Max Shade IV
Amt read it over, and was amazed by how gullible she was. Then, the machine began to break down. “No, no, no! Not now! Machine, get working!” Amt said as she punched and kicked it to try to get it working, but the opposite happened. The machine exploded and Amt flew backwards. A liquid mist traveled across the headquarters, and out of the building. Amt lay on the ground, unconscious.
KG, alarmed by the sound, flew over to the headquarters. He breathed in the mist, but didn’t realize it. He ran over and grabbed Amt’s body. “Jeez, what the hell happened here?” KG thought. He grabbed her body and brought her to the hospital.
(A couple weeks passed)
Amt was feeling all better and ready to keep her stay as Admin, but the first thing she ordered was a meeting. The final meeting they would have for a long time in their own time at PokeBeach.
“KG, DFB, PMJ, and Kaga. The day of the explosion I got a message from Max Shade IV from the future, and he told me his troubles. What we will do is go into the future to his time and do whatever we can to help him, no matter what the consequences are. Even if time changes drastically, we will know that PokeBeach will hopefully be safe. If you are not up for this, which one of you may not, will stay here and run the forums. If not, the hospital crew will be the ones running it all. Are you in?” Amt asked.
“I’m definitely in. I am not missing out on this crazy adventure. Let’s hope this won’t be our last adventure. By doing this, we will dis-obey time. That means the future will change, and there will be drastic changes. But I’m up for this, whatever you want to call this operation” KG said. The others nodded and they were up for it.
“Alright, then it’s settle. Operation Time Travel shall begin!” Amt said. Amt called up the hospital crew and told them that they were the head of PokeBeach for the time being during their trip. Amt picked up a device and pressed a button. A big wormhole appeared in front of them. “You guys go first!” Amt commanded. KG jumped in and there was a big flash of light. PMJ jumped in right after. DFB jumped, too. Then Kaga and Amt, who jumped in together right before the wormhole disappeared. They all were flung out of the wormhole and appeared in Max Shade’s headquarters. “What luck!” Amt said.
“Welcome, visitors.”
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So, how did you guys like it? Just the first part out of 3. Give suggestions/criticism. Thanks.
RE: PokéBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 7: Disconnection)
Sorry, but I don't accept forms. You are invited into the story secretly without even knowing it and most people in my story have done something to help/change the PokeBeach forum we are in today. And honestly, you're taking this fic as a joke. This story isn't a laughing matter, it is an action packed story with twists. There are some jokes here and there, but your full name made me extremely angry. I doubt you even read any of the chapters. You also need to understand the characters and what this story is about. Good day!
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Sorry, but I don't accept forms. You are invited into the story secretly without even knowing it and most people in my story have done something to help/change the PokeBeach forum we are in today. And honestly, you're taking this fic as a joke. This story isn't a laughing matter, it is an action packed story with twists. There are some jokes here and there, but your full name made me extremely angry. I doubt you even read any of the chapters. You also need to understand the characters and what this story is about. Good day!
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RE: PokéBeach: The Forgotten Story (Ch. 8: Legends Awakened-Part 1)
So I'm dead. Again. ..?
And now Max Shade IV rules the universe? What's he done to help the forums? :x
I kid, I kid (sort of). It's your story and I know you got your reasons.
I'm starting to get confused with all the time travel and blarg you're dead but now you're not and... x_x
Waiting for part two :]
So I'm dead. Again. ..?
And now Max Shade IV rules the universe? What's he done to help the forums? :x
I kid, I kid (sort of). It's your story and I know you got your reasons.
I'm starting to get confused with all the time travel and blarg you're dead but now you're not and... x_x
Waiting for part two :]