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Daren said:
Interesting Story, my only advice would be to use more pronouns. Like instead of saying: Team Heart did this and then Team Heart did that. Say. Team Heart did this and then they did this. also,don't repeat yourself too much like: "In this new galaxy, there is barely any green, and much of this galaxy is barren, and almost desert-like. Most of the plants have died, and there is nothing to like in this barren galaxy" These two sentences basically say the same thing. avoid that. Otherwise, Great Story!:D

BTW: I love Doom's Chocolate and Cyrus' Pink Bubble bath!
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Thank you for your feedback (one of the only people to give it to me)! Okay, I'll avoid that, thanks!

Pink Bubble Bath was awesome. Totally not Cyrus' style, but still, it was LOL. Same with Doom's chocolate. Sorry Doom, but evil people must die!
 
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Great story, love it! Did you delete the "meteor object" though?
 
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Dr4g0n said:
Great story, love it! Did you delete the "meteor object" though?
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Yes, I did. That was the Deoxys plot line. I deleted it, 'cause Adron already has a Mew. One legendary is enough. What do you think about me splitting it into two books?
 
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Good idea. It could be interesting. Besides, I though Xanthius would get the Deoxys. Then Braxin would get A "stronger" legendary, like, ummmm...Regigigas?
 
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Dr4g0n said:
Good idea. It could be interesting. Besides, I though Xanthius would get the Deoxys. Then Braxin would get A "stronger" legendary, like, ummmm...Regigigas?
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That's an interesting thought, except I killed off Xanthius. So, I decided to just get rid of the plot device all together. In the next chapter, I can't decide between ending the story, or making a chapter right before ending the story. Either way, though, I am making a second book, or a second part to go along with it. I already have an ending in mind.
 
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Thank you for your comments, and yes, I have fixed that up in later chapters.
If you can, perhaps you could tell what you think about all of the chapters and the overall storyline itself?
 
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Chapter Eleven: Storming G Fortress!​
Team Heart had traveled a long way now. They had passed the bloody dunes already, and were now in the forest where Zarik had died. Before passing his grave, they payed their respects to him, and a part of each of them still mourned his loss. They camped there for the night, and they set up many tents. They didn't sleep too long, however, for they had to raise up early in the morning for their mission. Once they had some breakfast, they trudged along the path, coming nearer to where their old base was. Eventually, they reached that spot, and they were dismayed to see that their base had been destroyed by the flames. They retrieved all the equipment that they could, and they set off on the familiar path towards G Fortress. It was their only chance. This was the time where they would avenge their many losses to Team Galactic. They would pay for messing with this team, and they would pay full price. They saw the tower loom up in front of them. Although their spirits were strong, the massive tower still sent shivers down their spines. As they advanced nearer to the great tower, the great doors started to open. As the doors opened, thousands of grunts rushed towards Team Heart, glaring hatred in their eyes. The battle would begin soon. Each side called upon their Pokemon, and within the blink of an eye, battle ensued. Their plan was ruined. Somehow, they had been seen. Their hopes of freeing Dialga and Palkia without a fight were trounced. All they could do now, was to fight. The Pokemon of both sides fought honorably, but Team Galactic was winning. They were being slightly overpowered. Man for man, Team Galactic outnumbered Team Heart. Cyrus had made preparations for this, apparently. Adron realized their grave situation, so he pulled the second Poke Ball from his belt. Pidgeot had been fighting extremely well, and it never gave up. But if they wanted any hope of winning, Adron had to use the power of his second Pokemon. He threw the Poke Ball up into the air, and the pink feline was released from it. Adron now had an extremely powerful force at his command. He had to use Mew's power, it was the only way. He commanded Mew to fight off the grunts. Mew charged it's Psychic Energy, and fired it at the grunts. With a explosion of Energy, many grunts, as well as their Pokemon went down. Team Heart had the upper hand. Card for card, their hand was better than Team Galactic's. Every second, a few more grunts went down, and by the time a few minutes had passed, there were barely any grunts left. Team Heart had won. The downfall of Team Galactic was inevitable.

However, Cyrus had plotted for this as well. He had a secret weapon for this occasion. As he watched the battle from up ahead in the tower, he had told his scientists to prepare the weapon. And, by the time Team Galactic had been defeated, the weapon was complete. The weapon didn't look like an average weapon, though. It was a flute, one much like the one Zarik had played to release Mew from it's slumber. The time was now. Cyrus played the flute. The melody was a sad lament, and as he played it, the skies started to shift. He knew it was happening. The great Pokemon that he had heard of in legends was coming to him, and when it arrived, it would be under Cyrus' control! The only way to control this beast was as a last resort only, for it was extremely difficult to control. Cyrus saw from his tower as the skies split in half, and the great thunder rolled in the skies. He had done it. The great bird known as Zapdos was free again!

Adron, Ash, Cyrun, and Team Heart, slightly tired from the great battle, all looked up at the skies. The were different. Of course, the clouds were always dark, but now, they were darker. And suddenly, it started to rain, and much thunder rolled from the clouds. A great bolt of lightning struck the great tower, and apparently with much force, for the glass window of the tower shattered upon it's impact. Team Heart could see Cyrus focusing on the skies, playing an old flute. They tried to make a run for the door, but it was too late. The skies swirled, and a great storm swept Team Heart off their feet. After trying again and again to get to the door for quite some time, they saw a great bird Pokemon in the sky. It was extremely large for a bird, easily the size of three men. It's body was as yellow as the lightning. It was the epitome of the storm itself. Upon it's arrival, it gave a loud screech,
"GWAAAAAAHHHH!". Team Heart stared helplessly as the great bird descended upon the great tower, Cyrus waiting for his chance. But, the storm was going out of control, and Team Heart was swept up into the great storm. None of them opened their eyes, for they were hopelessly doomed. As they churned in the great storm, however, the great lightning started to take down the tower. But Cyrus didn't care. He was too intent on taming the great beast as his own. He took a Poke Ball from his pocket, a bit too quickly. The bird saw him do it, and it called upon a great bolt of lightning. The bolt hit Cyrus, who was electrocuted by the many volts of the lightning. His lifeless body slumped over the edge of the great tower, and he fell off, the tower crumbling with him. The bird had done something, though. The great lightning had rushed through Cyrus' body, and Cyrus was carrying a certain device with him. It was called the G Key, and it was the key to the cell of Dialga and Palkia. When activated, it would free the two legendary Pokemon. Which is exactly what happened. After killing Cyrus, Zapdos disappeared in the clouds, carrying the storm with it. Team Heart was freed from the storm that had swept them away, and they now started to plummet towards the ground. But Mew saved them. Mew used it's power to trap them all in Psychic bubbles, which bounced playfully wen they hit the ground. When they had hit the ground, Mew released them. It was then, that Adron and Team Heart heard the ground rumble. It was as if an earthquake had hit them. But suddenly, it stopped.
"Let's go see the legendary Pokemon!", Braxin exclaimed. They ran towards the crumbled remains of the tower, and found an elevator.
"This must lead to them.", Braxin exclaimed. They took the elevator down. It was quite some time before they reached the bottom. When they did, they saw a room lit by the glow of many crystals. In the center of this great room, lay a great portal. The portal was silver, yet it was also blue. It was a combination of those two colors.
"Where are the legendary Pokemon?", asked Braxin. Adron now understood what the portal was.
"They're in there!", exclaimed Adron. And Team Heart knew it was true, for that was the only place they could have went.
"We've already stopped Team Galactic, why not make the best of this new universe?", Braxin asked.
"We can't,", Adron replied,
"We've come too far now. Don't you want the old galaxy back? Don't you miss it? Well, I do! I can't even remember what it looks like!", Adron explained to Braxin.
"And I'm going in that portal! Who's with me?", Adron shouted. Team Heart paused. And a lengthy pause it was. But, after this pause, they cheered.
"Adron! Adron! Adron!", they chanted. They decided that Adron should be there leader in this new world. And indeed he did. For it was him that made the first step into the portal. After he did this, they all followed him into the portal. Team Heart had saved both Galaxies from the menace of Team Galactic. Yet, it wasn't enough. They had to save the old galaxy. For the sake of the people, as well as the Pokemon, they must survive this final challenge. But none of them had any idea what was in that world, and it is a good thing they didn't know. Because if they did, there would be no way to coax them into entering that dreadful portal.


~End Of Book One~​
 
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Good chapters! Though I haven´t read all.
 
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Well, when you read Chapter Eleven, let me know what you think, because if anything is wrong with it, I'd like to fix it.
 
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Yeah, I'm writing a book two ;)

It's called, the Dimensional Door!
 
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The Savior of the Destroyed Galaxy! Part Two: The Dimensional Door!​


Chapter One: Cause and Effect​
It was a particularly hot day at the island of Aveel. The sun blazed over the heads of the villagers there, and most found comfort under a shady tree. The island always had blazing temperatures. That was the way of life here. Most were used to it, but today, even those who were used to it felt like it was a desert. The conditions here were terrible. The villagers of Aveel lived in small huts, made from felled trees. The only source of water that they was a long walk away, and to get to it, you had to go through the forest. It was scary in there. Many Pokemon rampaged in there, and a villager could never be too careful when heading into the forest for a drink. Because of this, Aveel villagers were raised to be warriors, even at a young age. They were always armed and ready for battle. They had to be: Pokemon could attack at any second of the day. For that matter, the villagers never slept long, either, for the Pokemon here were quite the hunters. Not all the Pokemon here were bad. Some were even tamed by the villagers, and used as workers, or even household pets. But, the rest were carnivorous, and they never turned down meat, for it was too hard to find now. That was the life of the Aveel villagers. To make matters worse, there was an active volcano on the island, and whenever it erupted, the villagers had to make a scramble towards the ocean, where they could find shelter. To keep themselves safe, the villagers of Aveel always had someone on watch duty. Today, the watch guard was taken by a boy named Taraketh Kalius. He was always chosen for the watch duty. He was of a skinny frame, and he had black hair, a common sign of the Aveel villagers. His true skin tone had been eaten away by the sun, like everyone living here. He stroked the furry head of his pet, a tame Poochyena that he had named Wildest, and asked it,
"Why is it always me, Wildest? How come must I always watch the volcano?". The Pokemon looked at Taraketh, and gave him an understanding look, which cheered up the boy a little bit. Taraketh looked upon the great volcano, and wondered when it might go off again. After all, the volcano hadn't gone off in months! But whenever he tried arguing this point with the village elder, who was called simply Tesh, the elder told him that it was extremely important that no one ever got hurt on this island. When Tesh was asked why Taraketh was always chosen, he simply said that the other boys each had their own chores, and that Taraketh wasn't any more special than any other boy. But, as Taraketh stared at the volcano, he wondered why he should keep a constant watch over a volcano that didn't even ever go off. And now that Taraketh though about it, he was rather hungry. Maybe if he sneaked towards the beach, and got himself a yummy coconut.
"Come on, Poochyena,", whispered Taraketh,
"Let's get ourselves some food!". And with that, he sneaked out of the village towards the beach.

It had been five minutes that Taraketh had been away, when one of the men noticed that no one was watching the volcano. He run for the elder's hut, very swift on his feet. When he reached the elder's hut, he gave a knock on the door, and waited. Despite the situation, it was demanded that respect be given for the elder. The elder opened the door, and greeted the man. When he saw the grim expression of his face, he asked him what was the matter. The man started,
"Tesh! The boy that watches the volcano, he...", but he couldn't finish his sentence, because at that same moment, a rending screech filled the air. Everyone covered their ears, because they were afraid they might go deaf if they listened to that terrible noise. When the noise had subsided, they saw two giant Pokemon fly off. But whatever had caused that horrendous screech, had also caused some great damage. There were cracks in the ground, and to the villagers horror, the cracks started moving. Within seconds, the ground split in half, and the villagers on either side started to panic. They watched in horror as the cracks led towards the volcano, destroying all in their path. They all knew what was about to happen. They tried to escape, but found that there was no escape, unless they wished to jump down those great cracks, leading perhaps even to the core of the Earth. The cracks hit the volcano. Utter silence. The villagers waited. They waited for the inevitable sound of their destruction. Suddenly, a great roar filled the air, and the volcano rumbled with pure rage.

Taraketh had reached the beach. He had found what he was looking for: A coconut. He cracked open the coconut, and he enjoyed the tasty milk inside it. He gave a little bit to his Pokemon, Wildest.
"Do you like that, Wildest?", asked Taraketh. The Poochyena gave a delightful growl.
"I thought you would,", said Taraketh,
"I think it's the best thing we have on this island.". The Pokemon seemed to agree, although verbally, it couldn't say a word. Then, Taraketh heard a deep rumble. He lost his footing for a moment, and he stumbled on the ground. He saw two mighty cracks coming his way, rending the Earth with their mighty power. The ground split wherever they went, and Taraketh quickly got up and ran. He ran towards the water, but the cracks still followed. He gave a scream. Wildest gave a fearful growl. The cracks cam nearer to them, and nearer. They started to swim away. But they found there was no need. The cracks stopped right before they hit the water.
"That was close!", exclaimed Taraketh. He swam back to the beach. What he saw next gave him the chills. He saw molten lava eject from the volcano! He saw it, and feared it. Although he recognized the danger of the great volcano, he could not help but feel a sense of awe and beauty at it's eruption. He wondered why the villagers weren't already there. He suddenly felt a sense of dread, and a choice was presented to him:
Should stay where he was, and remain safe, or should he find out what had happened to the villagers? He decided he must wait. And wait he did. But no one ever came. Wildest looked at him, and it's look was sad. It seemed to realize what must of happened. Taraketh started to shed tears.
"No!", he screamed, "They can't be dead! They can't be!". But as he screamed these words, he started to fear what he was now fearing the most. Had it been because of him? Could he have stopped this from happening? It was his fault. The elder was right: He had a duty. And he had shunned his duty, and with that, his own race as well. He was a disgrace to the Aveel villagers. The eruption wasn't over, but if there was some chance that anyone was alive, he would have to save them, even at the cost of his own life. He ran towards the location of the village, being careful not to fall in the void of the place where the cracks were. When he reached the village, he saw it in blazes. But there was still some people living. They had found all of their food, and everything they could use to make a barrier towards the rest of the lava. The villagers stood behind this barrier, trying to survive the flowing lava. Their barrier was starting to burn down. They couldn't escape from the village, because the cracks had made the only exit impassable. No one could get in or out. Taraketh screamed. He could do nothing! Taraketh's parents saw him, and they screamed,
"Tareketh! Leave! Go find safety at the beach!". Taraketh ignored them, though. He had to save them. He had to make it up to them. The wide gap that the cracks had made, the exact gap that kept the villagers in, and Taraketh out, were symbolic. It was as if it was the line between life and death. Taraketh saw that nearby, there was a palm tree. He started climbing it. When he was at the top, he noticed that the tree was started to fall to the ground. It was a weak palm tree. Taraketh started bashing the tree with his fists, trying to make it fall faster. Time was of the essence. The barrier was about to burn away! Poochyena stared up at it's master, hoping he could make it alive out of this. The tree fell, and in doing so, it made a bridge. Although the tree was weak, the gaps supported it, making it a perfect bridge. The villagers, now understanding what had to be done, quickly crossed the bridge in single file. And just in time, too. The barrier they had made melted away, and the villagers scrambled down the island, heading for the beach. He had done it, Taraketh had saved them all. But he had also made them destroy all their supplies, because of the barrier. When given enough time, they could gather important items. But since no one was capable of warning them now, they had lost everything. When they reached the beach, they all gave Taraketh a stern look, even his parents. Although their lives he had saved, they now had nothing left. They village elder looked at him with disgust, and he said to Taraketh,
"You are a disgrace! I hereby banish you from our company! You have saved our lives, yet made them so much harder. Since you find it fine to flounder your duties, perhaps you will be better off where you have none!", and with that, Taraketh ran off, tears in his eyes, Poochyena following close behind.

Adron felt odd. When he had come out of the portal, it had felt like he had slept. Coming out of the portal was like waking up, yet remaining in a dream. As the rest of Team Heart came out of the portal, he looked around. They had been transported to some tropical location, as evident by the beach that they were now at, and the tropical trees that stood behind them. The portal was gone now, as if it was a one-way ticket to this place. Dialga and Palkia had to be found, for the sake of the old galaxy. When they had arrived, it was nightfall. So, the first step was to set up camp. They pulled out inflatable tents from their backpacks, and set them up. They didn't have to search for fire-wood, because there was a lot of wood right at that exact spot. Once everything had been set up, they went in their tents to sleep for the night. Many questions were on their minds. Where were they? Why did Dialga and Palkia escape to this island? Would they succeed, or was this just a hopeless cause? But, none of these questions could be answered yet. They all knew one thing: The next day, they would probably discover the answers to these questions. But what they didn't know, was that they were going to discover a bit more than they had bargained for!
 
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Awesome! Loved it! Can't wait for the two quests to meet up...Poor Taraketh. He saves their lives and gets banished. That's just a little bit harsh... :p

By the way... why did you name him Taraketh? It seems like an odd name and must be a struggle to write every second or third sentence!
 
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Wow, I love it! I was planning on splitting my story Jun's Adventure into different books, following the reigons, or by legnth.
 
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Nice. Your getting better.

Chapter length really helped with that chapter.
 
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Dr4g0n said:
Awesome! Loved it! Can't wait for the two quests to meet up...Poor Taraketh. He saves their lives and gets banished. That's just a little bit harsh... :p

By the way... why did you name him Taraketh? It seems like an odd name and must be a struggle to write every second or third sentence!
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Yeah, I know. But, these guys are in a fight of the fitest! They feel as if he has costed them too much, so he is banised :p

Have you ever seen a character named Taraketh? Exactly. He has much involvment in the story, so he gets a unique name.


ShayminSky said:
Wow, I love it! I was planning on splitting my story Jun's Adventure into different books, following the reigons, or by legnth.
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It is worth a look into. Splitting the book into two parts was the best thing I have ever done!


Shade Daroach said:
Nice. Your getting better.

Chapter length really helped with that chapter.
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Thank you ^_^

Yeah, I have mastered the art of making my chapters long, while not taking away fromthe actual writing.
 
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Great job. I really like the story. Which RR prerealease are you going to. I'm going to Scifi City.
 
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Raquaza96 said:
Which RR prerealease are you going to. I'm going to Scifi City.
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Not sure, probably Scifi City. Totally off-topic, though. Next time, PM me, okay? :D I don't want to be banned :D .

Thank you, I appreciate all of your many compliments. I need them to keep the story going.
 
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Chapter Two: The wretched island of Aveel​
Adron awoke in the morning to the smell of burned grilled cheese sandwiches. He got dressed, and then, he made his way out of the tent. Braxin had made Team Heart grilled cheese sandwiches (albeit, somewhat burned), which Adron soon found were delicious. After eating, the team started to formulate a plan. Now that Adron was in charge of Team Heart, the group was all ears when he had made his plan:
"Well, team, I've decided that we should look for humans. I have a feeling that if they exist here, they would probably be somewhere near the beach," he said, noting the volcano,
"So, that will be our first action. If we want any chance of finding the legendary Pokemon, Dialga and Palkia, we need to find out what we can. If anyone knows anything about these two Pokemon, we'll find it out from the humans.". And so, Team Heart packed their tents up, and they set off along the coast of the island, searching for the humans that they hoped existed in this galaxy.

Team Heart walked along the coast for what seemed like ages. Never once, did they see any life. It was immensely discouraging. Finally, Adron turned around, and said to his team,
"It's of no use. They aren't around here. If they were, we may have found them by now. See that forest over there?", he asked the group. They turned their heads towards the massive forest that seemed to wall out the entire coast. Then, Adron continued,
"We have to try it. It's our only hope. Who's coming with me?". Team Heart looked discouraged (which was all well, as the forest was slightly intimidating), but they all agreed to go. Adron and his faithful group headed into the forest, never once looking back at the beautiful coast that were trading away for this dark forest.

The forest was immensely unnerving to anyone who set foot in it's depths. Unlike the villagers of Aveel, who were used to the startling cries of the savage Pokemon, and the massive trees blocking off the rays of the sun, Adron and Team Heart had no knowledge of this dreadful forest. If they had known of the horrors of this forest, they might not have dared set foot into it. The Aveel were armed, and the Pokemon wouldn't approach them because of the massive weapons the Aveel had to carry with themselves to pass through the forest. However, Adron and Team Heart carried no weapons. They were quite the target. All of a sudden, Adron felt a great burning sting in the side of his neck. He cried out in pain, and the rest of Team Heart screamed in horror. A snake-like Pokemon was clenching down on Adron with it's fangs, and to the terror of Team Heart, Adron fell to the ground. Cyrun acted fast, and threw a Poke Ball into the air. His Xatu cmae out from the Poke Ball, wings stretched wide. Xatu used it's Psychic powers to throw the Pokemon off Adron. Shocked, the snake Pokemon fled from the body of Adron. Cyrun and Ash rushed over to Adron, and they picked him up. What they saw next was a terrible sight:
Adron's neck, in the exact sight where he had been bitten, was now swollen. The swollen tissue throbbed, and it was warm to the touch. Adron looked pale, and he looked very distant, as if he was somewhere else instead of here.
"Adron!", screamed Ash,
"Adron, don't worry, we'll help you, somehow you'll be fine, I know it!". However, deep down, Ash knew that Adron was in mortal danger.
"I'll suck the poison out of him!", Ash exclaimed, but he was stopped by Braxin.
"I wouldn't do that if I were you.", said Braxin. Ash was stunned.
"Well, why not?", he questioned Braxin.
"Because if you do, you'll die. The poison of Ekans is immensely deadly, and in this dimension, it could even be worse. The moment you attempt to suck out the poison, it will lodge itself into your veins. It had acidic properties...", but Braxin was interrupted by Ash,
"That's a sacrifice I'll have to make!", screamed Ash. But before Ash even attempted to do so, a soft voice spoke to Team Heart,
"I can heal him.". Team Heart turned towards the voice, and they saw a boy. He had black hair, tan skin, and he looked very wretched. His skin was marked by the many tears he had shed.
"I can heal him. I have many elixirs that can do so", the boy said. Team Heart picked up Adron, and they carried him, following the boy. He took to them to a small cave. They entered the cave, and they walked for about five minutes.
"We must hurry!", exclaimed the boy, "He does not have much time left, now!". Finally, they made it to a lit room. The boy had some food, which he kept store in a basket. Near the food, a Poochyena rested. But it was to the many shelves in the cave that he went to. He pulled a green substance from the shelve, and turned to Adron, who had been set on ground. The boy gave the liquid to Adron, who drank it. Team Heart waited, and waited, and waited. Finally, the sore on Adron's neck stopped throbbing, and it started to shrink, until almost nothing was left of it. He looked very tired.
"Your friend there probably will be tired. It is not the potion itself that saves them. The potion gives them the strength to fight the poison, and nothing else.".
"How can we ever repair you?", asked Ash.
"You can't,", replied the boy, "It is my duty to help those in need.". Braxin stared at this boy. He then asked,
"What's your name?". The boy looked surprised, perhaps simply at the fact that his name had been asked.
"It is Taraketh.", the boy replied. Braxin took this in, and then asked,
"Where are your parents?". Taraleth was even more surprised than before, but he replied,
"With the villagers". Braxin was not done yet with Taraketh, though, and he asked,
"And why aren't you with them?". Taraketh started to tear up.
"Because I was banished.", Taraketh explained. He the proceeded to tell Braxin about that fateful day. He also explained how he had headed here, because this was his Grandfather's cave. He felt safe here.
"But you saved them, didn't you?", asked Braxin.
"It is no matter,", explained Taraketh,
"I betrayed them". Tears welled up in his eyes.
"Come with us," offered Braxin, "We could use your healing powers on our team. We also need to be directed to your people, as we need to find the legendary Pokemon. By the way, have you seen any?". Taraketh answered,
"No, I haven't. However, I did hear a great roar when the cracks came. That might be what you are looking for. My people may know more about that.". Then, he told them,
"As for coming with you, I would be honored to. I will take you to my people. Consider me your guide". So, Team Heart, along with the new addition to the team, Taraketh, exited the cave, and they followed Taraketh, wondering what they might find there. The Poochyena hopped up, and it followed it's master, Taraketh, towards their destination.
 
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Chapter three: Team Galactic Returns!​
Team Heart followed the boy, named Taraketh. He was leading them to the villagers. Team Heart had to find out what they could from the villagers, because they might know about the two legendary Pokemon of time and space: Dialga and Palkia. The boy led them through entire forests, some dark and spooky, others full of light. Eventually, they came across a cave. Poochyena started to growl at the cave.
"We must journey through this cave,", Taraketh explained,
"It leads to where the villagers are now!". Team Heart ventured through the cave. It was very dark, and they could see almost nothing.
"Keep close to me,", Taraketh told them,
"You wouldn't want to get lost in here.". They did their best to keep close to Taraketh, although every now and then, they had to stop to make sure that everyone was still there. Poochyena growled at every shadow. The cave lasted for a long time, but eventually, they got out of the cave. In front of them, a sight most majestic; A huge temple, that climbed up into the sky.
"This is the temple of the Sky Guardian,", Taraketh explained,
"My people come here in times of trouble to pray to the Sky Guardian.".
Team Heart followed the boy up the staircase that lead to the temple. After climbing the great stair, they came upon a vast gate. It was the only way in. Taraketh knocked on the door. A slight pause was felt. Then, the door opened. The man who opened it was very old. It was Tesh, the eldar. Behind him many villagers were preparing the little food they had. If they weren't doing that, they were making blankets for the cold, cruel nights that Aveel forced upon them.
"What are you doing here?", he asked.
"I thought I made it clear that you were not allowed to return, did I not?".
"You did, sir. But I brought company.". Tesh eyed the many members of Team Heart.
"We are in troubled times, now, because of this very boy, actually. What do you want from us?". Adron walked towards the old man. He told the old man about their circumstances, and asked him about the legendary Pokemon.
"Yes. We saw two large Pokemon fly past the volcano, shortly before it erupted. No one ever passes the volcano. That's bad territory, that is.". Adron thanked the old man. But he wasn't done with him yet. He said to him,
"This boy: He has saved both your lives and mine. Why must he be banished?". The old man stared at Adron. But, he replied,
"He has floundered his responsibilities! That isn't allowed in the tribe of the Aveel!". Adron thought about this, and replied,
"Should he not be given a second chance?". The old man looked at Adron with keen eyes, and he replied,
"On the island of Aveel, there are no second chances! Now, unless you have any other matter of business, I suggest you leave!", and with that, he slammed the door shut.
"Come on, Taraketh. If they won't accept you, we'll take you in. Your a good person, remember that, Taraketh.", Adron told Taraketh this, and then, they left.
"Our destination is that volcano, over there!", explained Adron,
"We got that much out of the villagers.".
"Past the volcano are dangerous lands,", Taraketh told Team Heart,
"Many horrors will await us there.". Suddenly, a voice spoke up. It was dark, and devious. Poochyena growled at the voice.
"And by any chance, is one of those horrors me?", the voice spoke. From behind a rock came an old man. He wore a lab coat, and his hair was purple. His glasses rested firmly on his large nose. On his shoulder, the familiar emblem of Team Galactic shone. Adron was horrified. Team Galactic? What was this old man doing here? Adron gathered his courage. He spoke to the man,
"What is your business here, Galactic member?". The old man spoke, with some mirth,
"I am Commander Charon, most trusted of master Cyrus. I have come here to reclaim the legendary Pokemon, Dialga and Palkia,", as he said this, he pulled a device from his pocket; It had many buttons, and in the middle of the machine, a needle swayed around on a dial. The old man Charon continued,
"And I am also here to crush Team Heart, in one fell swoop!", and as he exclaimed this, many grunts jumped out from behind trees, rocks, bushes, anything that had been able to keep them hidden.
"So,", Charon asked,
"As Team Heart grunts fights Team Galactic grunts, who will fight me?". Adron exclaimed,
"I will, and when I defeat you, you will leave from this galaxy, forever!". Charon grinned.
"Fine by me!", he cried, "Go! Rotom!". As he shouted this, he threw a Poke Ball into the air, as did the grunts of Team Galactic. From Charon's Poke Ball, came a small sprite-like creature. It was round, with two bolts of electricity coming out of it. In fact, it was made entirely of electricity. Adron threw his Poke Ball, and from it came his Pokemon, Pidgeot. It flapped it's great wings in defiance at the Commander Charon. And so, the battle began.

The man had stumbled from the portal. The man had been tracking Team Galactic. Although their boss had been defeated, Team Galactic had gathered to Charon's call. He had taken over as their leader. Now, he must find them at all costs. Being the expert tracker that he was, the man started to follow the small signs in the earth, that indicated footsteps. He knew the trail was right, for he saw a small Team Galactic badge scattered in the dirt. The man picked up the badge, and put it in his pocket.
"This badge. Come in handy it might. So keep it I shall", the man said. His manner of speech was odd, a sign of the obvious mental damage of his job. But what was this man's job? Well, he was a member of the international police. His name? He couldn't remember it. It had been so long since anyone had named by his name. His code name, however, was Looker, which matched the man perfectly. For that was what he did; he looked. He had "taken care of" Mars and Jupiter, the other two Commanders of Team Galactic, who were know kept in a cell. He hadn't found Saturn, though, who might pose a threat if he was still alive. Cyrus, of course had died, that was for sure. As he searched for Team Galactic, Looker was wondering about who might have made Team Galactic scatter like they did, and who could have killed Cyrus without even touching him. But whoever they were, Looker hoped they were on the side of good. After all, it is an extraordinary feat to trump the plans of Team Galactic, as well as take down the main commander of the team. Looker was catching up to the chase, now. Any moment now, he would transpire upon a scene of absolute chaos...
 
RE: Pokemon: The Savior of the Destroyed Galaxy! Part Two: The Dimensional Door is up!

Chapter Four: Charon vs. Adron​
As Looker advanced, he started to hear quite a racket. He crept towards the boundary of the forest. What he saw was awe-inspiring; A massive battle had taken place between the two teams, Team Heart and Team Galactic. Although Team Heart lacked the numbers of Team Galactic, they were still winning. In the center of the battle, Looker saw Charon battling a boy. The battle was going bad for the boy, his Pidgeot starting to weaken from the constant attack of Charon's Rotom. Looker sat back, and watched the entire battle, wondering about his next course of action.

Charon was quite the Pokemon Trainer. His Rotom kept attacking Pidgeot, who to Adron's dismay was starting to weaken. Furthermore, Rotom felt nothing against the usual bite of a Hyper Beam. It was also faster than Pidgeot, making Fly futile. This meant Adron had to rely on Aerial Ace, which did barely nothing to Rotom. But Adron refused to give up, yet. He had to win, for the sake of Team Heart. Adron kept to just using Aerial Ace, barely even doing damage to the Rotom. Then, Charon unleashed his secret weapon: He pulled a small disk from his pocket. He inserted the disk into a small compartment on his wrist-watch, and a humming sound came from the watch. All of a sudden, a refrigerator appeared out of nowhere. The Rotom rushed towards the appliance, and within seconds, the fridge was no longer to be seen. Instead, the Rotom grew larger, and oddly enough, it looked refrigerator-like.
"Rotom,", cried Charon,
"Use Blizzard!". The weather changed, and a huge blizzard had formed. It headed straight towards Pidgeot, and the great bird was thrown about in the great torrent of snow. This was too much for Pidgeot, who fainted. The blizzard twirled around, and ended the battles of several others. Team Galactic was in the win, for now. Charon noted a grunt running towards him.
"What is it?", asked Charon, apparently disappointed that he could not finish the battle yet.
"Sir, quick, look straight up!", the grunt exclaimed.
"Where?!?", Charon questioned, looking straight up towards the sky. The grunt suddenly delivered a great uppercut to the commander, who fell down on his back, knocked out by the severe blow. Some of the grunts saw this, and they were surprised. Then, the grunt took off his space uniform, as well as his blue wig. What they all saw before them now, was a a shady-looking man in front of them. His entire appearance was somewhat odd: His hair was black and greasy, yet, his facial features handsome, and he wore a brown coat, giving him a mysterious air.
"The Team Galactic is now advised to run,", the shady man said,
"For you will lose this battle, now. If you don't, you will surely be at the mercy of this team. You know as well as I do that the international police are allowed to carry powerful weapons.". This was enough for the grunts, too startled by the stunning combination of events. They took to their heals, and fled far away from Team Heart. Adron nursed Pidgeot's wounds, and comforted it.
"It's okay, Pidgeot, you'll get 'em next time.". Pidgeot snuggled up to it's master in embrace. Taraketh could do nothing more than watch the battle, and to try and keep Poochyena from trying to fight. He now came out of his hiding place, a rock, and walked towards Team Heart, Poochyena in tow. Adron walked over to the shady man that had rescued Team Heart, and he asked him,
"Thank you for saving us. May I know the name of our rescuer?". The shady man paused, as he always did when confronted with this question, Finally, he answered,
"My real name is not known to anyone, not even I... however, you may call me Looker. Everyone else does. I am am member of the international police. It is my sworn duty to track down evil.", as he said all of this, he picked up a machine that had been dropped in the confusion. It was small, and it had a swaying needle in the center of the dial.
"This is a marker. It is used to keep a constant track on something, no matter where it is. It appears as if the target is moving. Running fast is what you have to do. Dialga and Palkia must be tracked with this!". Adron took the device from Looker, and studied it. It had many buttons. What they all did, was anyone's guess. However, the needle was pointing north, and a number was generated on the side of the machine.
"They're 400 miles away now!", exclaimed Adron.
"We have to go,", continued Adron,
"It's our only chance.". They thanked Looker again, and left due north. As the villagers had said, the needle was directing them towards the volcano, even further than that, actually. What Team Heart didn't know, was that the other side of the island of Aveel was even worse than this one. Their fate would be chosen there. Adron's adventure was far from over; In fact, it had only just began.
 
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