RE: Pokemon Top Design - Challenge 1 is up (Crystal Pokemon)
I changed my card a little bit so I hope it hasn't been rated yet.
I changed my card a little bit so I hope it hasn't been rated yet.
Pokemon Top Design - Round 3 is up (Rotom)
- Thread starter Professor Palutena
- Start date
RE: Pokemon Top Design - Challenge 1 is up (Crystal Pokemon)
Wondering if i can join since the deadline for the challange is tomorrow?
heres my card for entry...
Spinda Lv.38 60HP {C}
Basic Pokemon
Art work--- Spinda walking in a soft drawn field, tripping over a lil rock with its right foot. Face looks like this---- :O
spots in its right eye, halve on its right ear
(Poke-Body) Brain Crash
As long as Spinda has more energy cards attached to it than the defending pokemon, Spinda's attacks do 30 more damage. This Body can't be used if Spinda is effected by a Special Condition
{C} Teleshock
Place 1 damage counter on the defending Pokemon.
If you placed a damage counter on an opponent's benched pokemon, discard the top card of his/her deck
(C)(C)(C) Click-Clack-Dizzy-Smack 30+
This attack does 30 damage plus 10 more damage for each damage counter on the defending pokemon. You can't add more than 20 damage in this way. If Brain Crash is in effect, Spinda is now confused
Weakness {F} +10
Resistance {P} -20
Retreat Cost *
CRYSTAL CARD
Cloyster Lv.52 90HP{C}
Stage 1 (evolves from Shellder)
Picture-- Cloyster's slanting its back twords the bottom right of the card its shell it open, shooting beams, its right horn goes out of the frame, proceeding out of the card, below where the HP and type are listed. The Beams are white and crystally
Poke-Body Crystal Type
Whenever you attach a {W},{L},or {F} basic energy card from your hand to Cloyster, Cloyster's type (color) becomes the same as that type of energy until the end of your turn.
Poke Power Crystal Core
If Cloyster has any {F} energy attached to it, attacks received from the defending Pokemon are reduced by 20 and Cloyster can't be affected by any Special Conditions.
{W}{L}{C} Miricle Shot 30
Place 1 damage counters on all of the defending Pokemon. Discard 1 energy attached to the defending Pokemon (excluding Special Energy)
Weakness {L}x2
Resistance
Retreat Cost {C}{C}
Wondering if i can join since the deadline for the challange is tomorrow?
heres my card for entry...
Spinda Lv.38 60HP {C}
Basic Pokemon
Art work--- Spinda walking in a soft drawn field, tripping over a lil rock with its right foot. Face looks like this---- :O
spots in its right eye, halve on its right ear
(Poke-Body) Brain Crash
As long as Spinda has more energy cards attached to it than the defending pokemon, Spinda's attacks do 30 more damage. This Body can't be used if Spinda is effected by a Special Condition
{C} Teleshock
Place 1 damage counter on the defending Pokemon.
If you placed a damage counter on an opponent's benched pokemon, discard the top card of his/her deck
(C)(C)(C) Click-Clack-Dizzy-Smack 30+
This attack does 30 damage plus 10 more damage for each damage counter on the defending pokemon. You can't add more than 20 damage in this way. If Brain Crash is in effect, Spinda is now confused
Weakness {F} +10
Resistance {P} -20
Retreat Cost *
CRYSTAL CARD
Cloyster Lv.52 90HP{C}
Stage 1 (evolves from Shellder)
Picture-- Cloyster's slanting its back twords the bottom right of the card its shell it open, shooting beams, its right horn goes out of the frame, proceeding out of the card, below where the HP and type are listed. The Beams are white and crystally
Poke-Body Crystal Type
Whenever you attach a {W},{L},or {F} basic energy card from your hand to Cloyster, Cloyster's type (color) becomes the same as that type of energy until the end of your turn.
Poke Power Crystal Core
If Cloyster has any {F} energy attached to it, attacks received from the defending Pokemon are reduced by 20 and Cloyster can't be affected by any Special Conditions.
{W}{L}{C} Miricle Shot 30
Place 1 damage counters on all of the defending Pokemon. Discard 1 energy attached to the defending Pokemon (excluding Special Energy)
Weakness {L}x2
Resistance
Retreat Cost {C}{C}
RE: Pokemon Top Design - Challenge 1 is up (Crystal Pokemon)
...When will we know the result
...When will we know the result
RE: Pokemon Top Design - Challenge 1 is up (Crystal Pokemon)
well the 18th is now but don't rush him...he has a life other than this like all of us
well the 18th is now but don't rush him...he has a life other than this like all of us
RE: Pokemon Top Design - Challenge 1 is up (Crystal Pokemon)
Who knows when. After all he abandoned in his teammates over at the gym.
Who knows when. After all he abandoned in his teammates over at the gym.
RE: Pokemon Top Design - Challenge 1 is up (Crystal Pokemon)
I need Martainia, Rotom479 and MiniPika12 to submit their cards.
Overall Impressions: They were very well done. Spelling and proof reading should be double checked though.
Rankings are
1st Place (tie) - XKurami93X and Apophys with 38
3rd Place (Tie) - Daren and MS Eevelution with 37
5th Place - Dr4g0n with 36
6th Place - Kingdra King with 33
7th Place - Vencargo with 31
8th Place - Muddy68 with 28
9th Place - Light Venusaur with 22
As of now, the people up for elimination are
Martainia
Rotom479
MiniPika12
Info for this round
Daren – Infernape
Concept: You can easily tell it is a Crystal Pokemon. The energy types all made sense here. 10/10
Picture: Very well described, and it fits Infernape. However, nothing told me that it was a Crystal Pokemon. 8/10
Attacks: Dynamic combat was worded really strange. 4/5
Top Stats: All 5 are there. 5/5
Bottom Stats: All 3 are present. 5/5
Flavor Text: Very fitting, and imaginative. 5/5
Total: 37/40
MS Eeveelution – Luxray
Concept: It’s a crystal Pokemon. It’s balanced, and its effective. 10/10
Picture: Excellent. It tells me that it’s a Crystal Pokemon, and it fits Luxray. 10/10
Attacks: Wave Burst is brilliant, but Burnt Shock is very underpowered. 7/10
Top Stats: All 5 are present. 5/5
Bottom Stats: Personally, a +30 weakness would’ve been better than x2. 4/5
Flavor Text: Somewhat short, but it tells me about Luxray. 5/5
Total: 37/40
XKurami93X – Roserade
Concept: It’s a crystal Pokemon. 10/10
Picture: Wonderful and marvellous. 10/10
Attacks: Both are somewhat underpowered. 3/5
Top Stats: All 5 are present. 5/5
Bottom Stats: All 3 are there. 5/5
Flavor Text: Yep. In game PokeDex entries never fail. 5/5
Total: 38/40
Muddy68 – Dragonite
Concept: It’s a crystal Pokemon. 10/10
Picture: The picture would work for a Level X card, as I get a pop up vibe from it. 7/10
Attacks: Both have been used before on real cards, so they need different names. 2/5
Top Stats: The HP is low for a Dragonite. 4/5
Bottom Stats: Weakness and Retreat need some boosts, as they are somewhat low. 2/5
Flavor Text: Dragonite is also a strong Pokemon. Why would it hide in a cave? 3/5
Total: 28/40
Dr4g0n – Aggron
Concept: Crystal Pokemon? Yep 10/10
Picture: Very cool picture. 10/10
Attacks: Both need to be reworded. You also forgot energy in Extreme Burn Out. 3/5
Top Stats: Yep. All 5 are there. 5/5
Bottom Stats: I think a {R} weakness would be better. 3/5
Flavor Text: I can give you full points here. 5/5
Total: 36/40
Kingdra King – Dodrio
Concept: Full points here. 10/10
Picture: Cool picture, but could be explained more. 8/10
Attacks: None of them use {M} energy. 3/5
Top Stats: Yep. All fit. 5/5
Bottom Stats: No no no. All of them need fixing. 1/5
Flavor Text: I can give you full points here. 5/5
Total: 33/40
Apophys – Regigigas
Concept: I love the 3 types chosen. 10/10
Picture: I loved the movie, and that scene was really cool. 10/10
Attacks: Awaken is balanced, but Flow Breaker is underpowered. 3/5
Top Stats: Yep. 5/5
Bottom Stats: Yep. 5/5
Flavor Text: Full points here. 5/5
Total: 38/40
Light Venusaur – Arceus
Concept: The types make sense, but aren’t used on the card. 5/10
Picture: It’s Arceus...with a Shaymin on its head. 4/10
Attacks: Only {C} energy!!! No no no. 0/10
Top Stats: All 5 are here. 5/5
Bottom Stats: The retreat seems a little high. 3/5
Flavor Text: Okay here. 5/5
Total: 22/40
Vencargo – Cloyster
Concept: I love the Pokemon chosen. 10/10
Picture: Very vivid, and descriptive. 10/10
Attacks: Miracle Shot needs to be reworded, as it is hard to understand. 6/10
Top Stats: Yep. All 5 are here. 5/5
Bottom Stats: Makes sense. 5/5
Flavor Text: There isn’t any. 0/5
Total: 31/40
I need Martainia, Rotom479 and MiniPika12 to submit their cards.
Overall Impressions: They were very well done. Spelling and proof reading should be double checked though.
Rankings are
1st Place (tie) - XKurami93X and Apophys with 38
3rd Place (Tie) - Daren and MS Eevelution with 37
5th Place - Dr4g0n with 36
6th Place - Kingdra King with 33
7th Place - Vencargo with 31
8th Place - Muddy68 with 28
9th Place - Light Venusaur with 22
As of now, the people up for elimination are
Martainia
Rotom479
MiniPika12
Info for this round
Daren – Infernape
Concept: You can easily tell it is a Crystal Pokemon. The energy types all made sense here. 10/10
Picture: Very well described, and it fits Infernape. However, nothing told me that it was a Crystal Pokemon. 8/10
Attacks: Dynamic combat was worded really strange. 4/5
Top Stats: All 5 are there. 5/5
Bottom Stats: All 3 are present. 5/5
Flavor Text: Very fitting, and imaginative. 5/5
Total: 37/40
MS Eeveelution – Luxray
Concept: It’s a crystal Pokemon. It’s balanced, and its effective. 10/10
Picture: Excellent. It tells me that it’s a Crystal Pokemon, and it fits Luxray. 10/10
Attacks: Wave Burst is brilliant, but Burnt Shock is very underpowered. 7/10
Top Stats: All 5 are present. 5/5
Bottom Stats: Personally, a +30 weakness would’ve been better than x2. 4/5
Flavor Text: Somewhat short, but it tells me about Luxray. 5/5
Total: 37/40
XKurami93X – Roserade
Concept: It’s a crystal Pokemon. 10/10
Picture: Wonderful and marvellous. 10/10
Attacks: Both are somewhat underpowered. 3/5
Top Stats: All 5 are present. 5/5
Bottom Stats: All 3 are there. 5/5
Flavor Text: Yep. In game PokeDex entries never fail. 5/5
Total: 38/40
Muddy68 – Dragonite
Concept: It’s a crystal Pokemon. 10/10
Picture: The picture would work for a Level X card, as I get a pop up vibe from it. 7/10
Attacks: Both have been used before on real cards, so they need different names. 2/5
Top Stats: The HP is low for a Dragonite. 4/5
Bottom Stats: Weakness and Retreat need some boosts, as they are somewhat low. 2/5
Flavor Text: Dragonite is also a strong Pokemon. Why would it hide in a cave? 3/5
Total: 28/40
Dr4g0n – Aggron
Concept: Crystal Pokemon? Yep 10/10
Picture: Very cool picture. 10/10
Attacks: Both need to be reworded. You also forgot energy in Extreme Burn Out. 3/5
Top Stats: Yep. All 5 are there. 5/5
Bottom Stats: I think a {R} weakness would be better. 3/5
Flavor Text: I can give you full points here. 5/5
Total: 36/40
Kingdra King – Dodrio
Concept: Full points here. 10/10
Picture: Cool picture, but could be explained more. 8/10
Attacks: None of them use {M} energy. 3/5
Top Stats: Yep. All fit. 5/5
Bottom Stats: No no no. All of them need fixing. 1/5
Flavor Text: I can give you full points here. 5/5
Total: 33/40
Apophys – Regigigas
Concept: I love the 3 types chosen. 10/10
Picture: I loved the movie, and that scene was really cool. 10/10
Attacks: Awaken is balanced, but Flow Breaker is underpowered. 3/5
Top Stats: Yep. 5/5
Bottom Stats: Yep. 5/5
Flavor Text: Full points here. 5/5
Total: 38/40
Light Venusaur – Arceus
Concept: The types make sense, but aren’t used on the card. 5/10
Picture: It’s Arceus...with a Shaymin on its head. 4/10
Attacks: Only {C} energy!!! No no no. 0/10
Top Stats: All 5 are here. 5/5
Bottom Stats: The retreat seems a little high. 3/5
Flavor Text: Okay here. 5/5
Total: 22/40
Vencargo – Cloyster
Concept: I love the Pokemon chosen. 10/10
Picture: Very vivid, and descriptive. 10/10
Attacks: Miracle Shot needs to be reworded, as it is hard to understand. 6/10
Top Stats: Yep. All 5 are here. 5/5
Bottom Stats: Makes sense. 5/5
Flavor Text: There isn’t any. 0/5
Total: 31/40
RE: Pokemon Top Design - Martainia, Rotom479 and Minipika12 please submit your card
If it's all and the same Bippa, may I correct the wording in my Aggron? I know it won't change my score, just I'm such a big stickler for grammar and spelling... >.<
Nice job, all of you! I guess my card was middle class, but that's nothing to complain about!
If it's all and the same Bippa, may I correct the wording in my Aggron? I know it won't change my score, just I'm such a big stickler for grammar and spelling... >.<
Nice job, all of you! I guess my card was middle class, but that's nothing to complain about!
RE: Pokemon Top Design - Martainia, Rotom479 and Minipika12 please submit your card
*shrug* I guess so.
Mart, Rotom and MiniPika have been PMed. They have 7 hours to send their cards in.
*shrug* I guess so.
Mart, Rotom and MiniPika have been PMed. They have 7 hours to send their cards in.
RE: Pokemon Top Design - Martainia, Rotom479 and Minipika12 please submit your card
All right, time for today's execution xD
All 3 of the players that were up for elimination didn't make a card for this challenge. So, I had to decide based off of the entry card.
MiniPika12 - You're Turtwig card was very very broken.
Martainia - I like Long Range Boomerang, and the card itself seems really fitting.
Rotom479 - It is very underpowered, and nothing amazing about it.
The two contestants up for elimination are
MiniPika12
Rotom479
MiniPika attempted to make an already good card broken. Rotom made a very underpowered card.
Broken cards aren't amazing in todays metagame, and the card would likely not be favored by several of the players.
Underpowered cards are easily canceled out in the metagame, as no one will use them.
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Minipika12 is eliminated from the challenge. Good Luck in the future.
Stay Tuned tomorrow for the challenge.
As the winners of Round 1, XKurami93X and Apophys have won a prize. You have received the "Zero Out Orb". When used, you may pick any opponent and any catergory. They will receive a 0 in that category.
You can only use this item once. Please PM during the challenge you want to use it in, as well as the victim
All right, time for today's execution xD
All 3 of the players that were up for elimination didn't make a card for this challenge. So, I had to decide based off of the entry card.
MiniPika12 - You're Turtwig card was very very broken.
Martainia - I like Long Range Boomerang, and the card itself seems really fitting.
Rotom479 - It is very underpowered, and nothing amazing about it.
The two contestants up for elimination are
MiniPika12
Rotom479
MiniPika attempted to make an already good card broken. Rotom made a very underpowered card.
Broken cards aren't amazing in todays metagame, and the card would likely not be favored by several of the players.
Underpowered cards are easily canceled out in the metagame, as no one will use them.
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Minipika12 is eliminated from the challenge. Good Luck in the future.
Stay Tuned tomorrow for the challenge.
As the winners of Round 1, XKurami93X and Apophys have won a prize. You have received the "Zero Out Orb". When used, you may pick any opponent and any catergory. They will receive a 0 in that category.
You can only use this item once. Please PM during the challenge you want to use it in, as well as the victim
RE: Pokemon Top Design - Martainia, Rotom479 and Minipika12 please submit your card
that kinda cruel
that kinda cruel
RE: Pokemon Top Design - Martainia, Rotom479 and Minipika12 please submit your card
I meant what I wrote
Vencargo said:MS Eeveelution said:
haha fixed
whens the next round start
D: I forgot flavor text? thats the best part
I meant what I wrote
RE: Pokemon Top Design - Martainia, Rotom479 and Minipika12 please submit your card
All right, Time for the next challenge
Challenge 2: Owned Pokemon
In this challenge, you must create a card owned by some character in a Video Game.
Examples of Owned Pokemon
The rubric is the same as last time
Cards are due May 23rd
Good Luck
All right, Time for the next challenge
Challenge 2: Owned Pokemon
In this challenge, you must create a card owned by some character in a Video Game.
Examples of Owned Pokemon
The rubric is the same as last time
Cards are due May 23rd
Good Luck
RE: Pokemon Top Design - Round 2 is up (Owned Pokemon)
Rocket's Weezing Lv.38 80HP {P}
Stage 1
Evolves from Rocket's Koffing
Picture : There is thick purple fog. You can see 1/4 of Weezing (1 of the eye showing, the bigger half part of the body) Its eyes looks kinda mean and agressive. Also from the look from its eyes, you can see that it is strong. You can see the rest of the body as a shadow/outline in the fog.
Poke-Body : Flammable Gas
If Weezing is damaged by a Pokemon with {R} Energy attached to it. Weezing and the Defending Pokemon are now Burned
and Put 1 Damage Counters to all Pokemon in play (excluding Weezing).
{P}{C} Intense Fog
During your opponent's next turn, If your opponent tries to attack, have your opponent Flip a coin. If tails, that
attack does nothing. During the end of your opponent's next turn, The Defending Pokemon is now Poisoned. Put 2
Damage counters instead of 1 between turns.
{P}{C}{C} Reckless Charge 40+
You may choose to do 40 damage plus 30 more damage. If you do, Weezing does 20 damage to itself.
Flavour Text : It grows by feeding on gases released by garbage. Though very rare, triplets have been found.
Weakness : {P} +20
Resistance :
Retreat Cost : {C}{C}
Rocket's Weezing Lv.38 80HP {P}
Stage 1
Evolves from Rocket's Koffing
Picture : There is thick purple fog. You can see 1/4 of Weezing (1 of the eye showing, the bigger half part of the body) Its eyes looks kinda mean and agressive. Also from the look from its eyes, you can see that it is strong. You can see the rest of the body as a shadow/outline in the fog.
Poke-Body : Flammable Gas
If Weezing is damaged by a Pokemon with {R} Energy attached to it. Weezing and the Defending Pokemon are now Burned
and Put 1 Damage Counters to all Pokemon in play (excluding Weezing).
{P}{C} Intense Fog
During your opponent's next turn, If your opponent tries to attack, have your opponent Flip a coin. If tails, that
attack does nothing. During the end of your opponent's next turn, The Defending Pokemon is now Poisoned. Put 2
Damage counters instead of 1 between turns.
{P}{C}{C} Reckless Charge 40+
You may choose to do 40 damage plus 30 more damage. If you do, Weezing does 20 damage to itself.
Flavour Text : It grows by feeding on gases released by garbage. Though very rare, triplets have been found.
Weakness : {P} +20
Resistance :
Retreat Cost : {C}{C}
RE: Pokemon Top Design - Round 2 is up (Owned Pokemon)
Rocket's Arbok Lv41 HP 90 {P}{D}
Stage 1 Evolves from Ekans
Picture: You can see a figure in the background. Arbok has a Weedle constricted. It is trying to escape, but Arbok is too strong. Arbok is hissing at it.
{Poke-Body} Constrictor Power
When Arbok is attacked by your opponent's active Pokemon, if that attack does less than 40 damage, the attack does nothing to Rocket's Arbok, including damage. If the attack does more than 40 damage, flip a coin. If heads your opponent's active Pokemon cannot retreat until the end of your next turn.
{P}{C} Toxic Gunk 20
Your opponent's active Pokemon is poisoned. Place two damage counters instead of one on that Pokemon in between turns.
{P}{C} Sludge Bomb 40+
If your opponent's active is poisoned and has less than 40 HP left, this attack does 30 damage plus 10 more damage.
Flavor Text
It stalks its prey night and day, waiting for the perfect moment to strike. It has been known to chase prey for days and not give up.
Weakness {P} +20
Resistance
Retreat {C}{C}
Is its weakness supposed to be like an SP Pokemon's weakness?
Rocket's Arbok Lv41 HP 90 {P}{D}
Stage 1 Evolves from Ekans
Picture: You can see a figure in the background. Arbok has a Weedle constricted. It is trying to escape, but Arbok is too strong. Arbok is hissing at it.
{Poke-Body} Constrictor Power
When Arbok is attacked by your opponent's active Pokemon, if that attack does less than 40 damage, the attack does nothing to Rocket's Arbok, including damage. If the attack does more than 40 damage, flip a coin. If heads your opponent's active Pokemon cannot retreat until the end of your next turn.
{P}{C} Toxic Gunk 20
Your opponent's active Pokemon is poisoned. Place two damage counters instead of one on that Pokemon in between turns.
{P}{C} Sludge Bomb 40+
If your opponent's active is poisoned and has less than 40 HP left, this attack does 30 damage plus 10 more damage.
Flavor Text
It stalks its prey night and day, waiting for the perfect moment to strike. It has been known to chase prey for days and not give up.
Weakness {P} +20
Resistance
Retreat {C}{C}
Is its weakness supposed to be like an SP Pokemon's weakness?
RE: Pokemon Top Design - Round 2 is up (Owned Pokemon)
^Nope.
^Nope.