RE: Matt's Pokemon Story (Chapter 9! Find out who dies!)
Wow this is amazing its the first fic I've read from start to finish i really didn't expect may to be blinded and i noticed that "key sentence" so i kinda guessed but that means may is blinded and Misty's dead so thats both female protagonists dead so i can assume next it will be a boy perhaps Tracy to follow your pattern or Jessie commits suicide OR James tells Jessie that he never did what Giovanni said and discovers Shelly is evil and Jessie/James kills her. So I have forced you to kill Max or Brock! or everyone will have been spoiled by this post! Marvel at my evil plan to control the best fanfic ever! (100/100).
EDIT:
May is near dead and kinda useless maybe a plot device?
Wow this is amazing its the first fic I've read from start to finish i really didn't expect may to be blinded and i noticed that "key sentence" so i kinda guessed but that means may is blinded and Misty's dead so thats both female protagonists dead so i can assume next it will be a boy perhaps Tracy to follow your pattern or Jessie commits suicide OR James tells Jessie that he never did what Giovanni said and discovers Shelly is evil and Jessie/James kills her. So I have forced you to kill Max or Brock! or everyone will have been spoiled by this post! Marvel at my evil plan to control the best fanfic ever! (100/100).
EDIT:
May is near dead and kinda useless maybe a plot device?