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RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Isa silently watched and followed Melrose as she walked into the stadium where Joey was battling. Isa noticed her continue walking through the crowd staring at the stage. Isa tried to catch up, but couldn't. Melrose jumped onto the stage, in the midst of the battle.
"I apologize for this interruption, but I have something to introduce you to."
She pulls out a round object with a knob on top. She pulls the knob out and drops it on the ground. It explodes, causing a chain reaction.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

*However, in the midst of everything, something miraculous occured. Xatu stopped the explosion, shink it, then used Psychic to drag Melrose into the 4 screens that Harley, Wigglytuff, and Cacturne were surrounded in. The battle resumed.*
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

OoC: -.-
Melrose sends out Ryhorn and commands him to use dig.
Where is she going now?!
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"Not so fast! Prinplup, Surf!" *Prinplup sweeps right through Rhyhorn, inenabling it to dig*
OoC: Can someone judge the last moves made please?
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Do you want me to judge? Or would that be wrong because I
Am in the battle...?
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

OoC: You can judge from MC Sarah's perspective.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

MC Sarah: "Oh my Arceus! A ROUGE member possibly?! Someone! Call the authorities!"

Melrose just snickers until she turns to see Isa. Her mouth immediately dropped, and she walked off the stage, and out of the building.

I...
I have to talk to her...
To stop her...
She looks apologetically at Joey, then walks out the door.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"Umm... can someone give percentages so that the battle may resume and will my Xatu stopping a criminal help me?"
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

MC Sarah: She consults the judges for a few minutes, then says
"Well, according to rule #689, Joey automatically wins for bravery and impressive protection actions!"
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Harley: "That's it! I'm leaving to dress like Max!" *Storms out*
Me: "...Wow. And thanks! Now, let's see how Tyler is doing." *Leaves to go to the Water Room*
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Me: (Hmmm... ahh I got an idea!) Quick Monferno use Ember on the frozen water!
*Monferno uses Ember melting the ice*
Kid: Well that's... bold. Quick Buizel dive in and Pichu use Thundershock!
*Buizel dives in as Pichu unleashes a Thundershock on the water*
Me: Gotcha! Now Weavile quick refreeze the water with Ice Punch!
*The water refreezes causing Buizel to get zapped with Pichu's Thundershock*
Kid: Hey that's no fair!
Me: It's called strategy. Now Monferno and Weavile use Fury Swipes and Mach Punch on Pichu!
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Isa slowly approached Melrose, who was leaning against the wall while pulling out a cigarette.
"So now you're on thier side, I guess." Melrose states, breaking the silence.
"I would have told you when I left, but I was afraid I would be caught if I didn't leave immediately."
"Isa, ROUGE has lost, I will admit. Do you know why?"
"...No."
"Because you left, Isa. You were the key to success. Whoever had you, also had the extremely high chances to win."
"Are you still going to fight?"
"...That's classified information, old friend."
Melrose walks away, and Isa doesn't bother in following her.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

MC Sarah: "A beautiful play by Tyler as Buizel is now caught in the Water floor, something it would normally exceed in! Kid, you have 30% remaining while Tyler has a nice 90%!
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Isa solomely walks back into the room, but manages a weak smile in hopes of encouraging Joey.
"Good luck..."
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Kid: Alright Buizel try to break out of the ice with Sonic Boom!
Me: Weavile quick use Icy Wind on the entire area! Then Monferno quickly attack Pichu with Flame Wheel!
Kid: Pichu try to dodge it!
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

MC Sarah: "Buizel is frozen in the ice! Autowin to Tyler! Congrats to him! He is moving to the final four!"
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Me: That worked out great. Let's hope Joey is our final opponet.
Weavile: Weavile.
Me: Good idea you two deserve some rest.
*Starts to walk out of the building*
Me: (Man I need some fresh air.)
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

MC Sarah: The semi-finals will start very soon!
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

*Outside*
Me: Man what a day. I can't beleve that I'm in the semi-finals.
?: You and me both.
Me: Huh? Oh Vivian.
Vivian: It's been a while hasn't it? Glad to see you still remember me.
Me: I'm just glad your here. By the way thanks for that Razor Claw.
Vivian: No problem. Hey how about we get in a little practice before your next match?
Me: Sounds good to me.
Vivian: Great. Arcanine let's go!
Me: Pikachu your up!
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

She goes to congratulate Joey, and gives him a weak high-five.
"That was a great battle you did up there."
 
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