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RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"Pokemon Ranger Joey and a Deoxys I called are taking care of the SociTea. Actually, I'll join up with him. You guys go to Lilycove with my pokemon. I've got a special player helping me out." *Joey emits a pinkish color as the sky shakes. Palkia comes down. Joey hops on it's back.* "Take care of my resourseful pokemon!" *Joey disappears*
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Wait... what boat? We were tied together inside a room, unless I am missing something.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Okay... guess Joey's a Pokemon Ranger and a Trainer. Alright is everone on?
*Turns back to see Isa and Joey's Empoleon*
Guess so. That should mean Camerupt, Pikachu, Xatu and Maganium can make it to Lilycove with no problem. Alright let's go!
*Draco and Joey's Pokemon take off and head for Lilycove*
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

OoC: Two different people, actually.
In: "Hey Joey, what happened with these guys last time?"
PRJ: "Well, they blew up an island and I stopped them. They seem to have larger defenses."
"So, what do we do?"
PRJ: "I need Palkia to burst onto the scene."
"Alright. Palkia, Spacial Rend into the airship!"
Palkia: "GRROOO!" *Everyone in the sky vanishes*
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Rudy started to panic as giant buildings came hurdling towards Earth. At this rate, Lilycove would be nothing more than a crater in the next two hours. He picked up his PokeGear.

"Isa! Isa! Do you read me!? Proton's got a hold of Lilycove. I don't know why, but they're destroying everything in sight! Get here, NOW! Forget about that dumb contest!!"
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

*Calls Rudy* "Hello? I just won the contest. Isa and Tyler are coming your way. I'm taking care of mass problems here with Pokemon Ranger Joey. The SociTea vaporized Littleroot. I'm inside the airship now. Hold on a second..."
Xatu, get everyone and come here.
Sure. *Joey's pokemon appear in the airship* "I can see mass destruction at where Lilycove would be. Let me get Celebi and Suicune on the case." *Joey emits a light green, then a blue* "See someone?"
???: "Oh, Pokemon Ranger Joey! Remember me, Blue Eyes? I was on my way to get my name changed when that Purple creep kidnapped me along with Red Eyes. They have him captive upstairs. I escaped."
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"Joey! I have no idea who the heck SociTea is, or whatever it is your blabbing about, but while you were off parading your pokemon around, Lilycove's been facing a massive takeover! We need reinforcements NOW! Proton's got Sam and Spirit held hostage! Proton's in charge of the takeover! And all I've got is SONYA!!"

Rudy's face swelled with rage as he tried to make his way to the Museum, he almost spat into his Pokegear.

"How long until Isa and Tyler get here!?"
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"They should arrive soon. I also summoned Celebi and Suicune for you. Got to go, trying to find out where the controls are." *Hangs up*
Blue Eyes: "We better go up. They have 20 Pinchers guarding the doors, half of which are mine."
 
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Rudy threw his PokeGear straight on the floor, enraged.

"Good for nothing."

He then realized he had lost Sonya. He turned around, and ran, fast into the streets. "SONYA!!" He cried. Rudy turned left, and he saw a ROUGE grunt.

"Hey!" shouted the ROUGE grunt. He tossed out a Poke Ball, and out came a Medicham. "Medicham! Force Palm!"

Rudy panicked, and dropped the Poke Ball that had Eevee.

"Eevee!!" it shouted happily.

"Oh, no! Eevee! You're weak to Fighting types!!" Rudy said in vain.

The Medicham ran up to Eevee with Force Palm, but Eevee made a strange movement. It made a deep breath in, and out, came a large shadowy orb of ghostly aura. It hit the Medicham square in the face, and it fell, fainted.

"Holy, cow, Eevee! You know Shadow Ball!" Rudy congratulated. He had little time, though, for the grunt came charging at Rudy. He made a sidestep, grabbed a hold of the grunt's collar, and pinned him to the ground. He then, punched him in the face.

He left the unconcious grunt, and ran side by side with Eevee, looking for Sonya.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

On Floor 1...
Pinchers: "Blue Eyes!"
Steelhead: "We will bring back justice..." *40 Houndoom appear*
PRJ: "Uke-Pichu, heal Joey's pokemon." *A sweet melody plays, healing the pokemon. PRJ then pulls his capture styler out.*
Me: "Empoleon, Surf! Camerupt, stop them with Earth Power." *The Houndoom collapse along with the Steelmen* "Let's keep moving."

On the top floor...
Edward: "Hocus, make Mt. Chimney explode. We have to wait an hour before the cannon recharges."
Hocus: "Sure, but it will take that long for my spell to reach."
 
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*Liliycove City*
Me: Good we're here. Isa see anyone we know?
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Time left: 55 minutes

Blue Eyes: "Alright, we need to pick up the pace. Joey, ever hear of a Z. Z. Flyer?"
Me: "No."
Blue Eyes: "OK, hop on mine. Pokemon Ranger, we will meet you up there." *Flyer zooms away*

PRJ: "Last time I remember, there were 12 floors. This is only floor 2... So, Red Eyes would-" *A orange sphere traps PRJ and Uke-Pichu*
???: "Finally trapped you with my strategy! Now, to trap Rudy and Sonya..."
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"RUDY...RUDY!!!"

Sony yells as loud as she can but with no responce....

"Glaceon we have to get out of here quick and we have to find Rudy.."

Galceon:"Hey I since somebody over here..."

Glaceon starts to growl..

"Who's there...."

Sonya waits for a responce...
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Time left: 45 minutes
Blue Eyes and I: 4th Floor
PRJ: Trapped
???: In Lilycove

Blue Eyes: "Look at that, no puzzle around. Let's-"
???: "Oy, who goes there?"
Me: *Whispering* "Let's go..." *Joey and Blue Eyes go through the door as an alarm sounds, but nothing happens*
Blue Eyes: "Perfect! The control room!" *Turns lazor to minimal accuracy and turns off security system*
Me: "Let's go before someone finds us." *Z. Z. Flyer takes off*
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Rudy heard a familiar voice, and looked up. There, was Draco, Isa, and Tyler. He wasn't sure if they could see him, so he shouted and waved his hands.

"HEY!! IDIOTS!!!! DOWN HERE!!" He proceeded to throw rubble at them. However, a faint shout riled him at the ready. "Magnetons!! Hyper Beam at the Dragonite!!"

Rudy turned around, and saw a man next to 10 Magnetons, each shooting a Hyper Beam at the Dragonite. Rudy ran up to the man commanding the Magnetons, and shouted, "ISA! TYLER! LOOK OUT! COME OUT TYPHLOSION!" He threw out Typhlosion, and commanded it to use Lava Plume on the Magnetons. But by that time, the Magnetons had already shot out their Hyper Beams.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Me: Huh? Woah Draco dodge those blast!
Draco: Dragonite!
*Draco dodges all the blast*
Me: Hey it's Rudy! Alright Weavile help out that Typhlosion with Icy Wind! Freeze those Magnetons!
*Throw Weavile's Pokeball*
Weavile: Wea!
*Weavile unleashes it's Icy Wind freezing the Magneton*
Me: Alright Draco let's land now.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Time left: 20 minutes
Blue Eyes and Joey: 11th Floor
PRJ: ???
???: Attacking with Ditto transforming into Entei in Lilycove

Blue Eyes: "We're here! Red Eyes escaped according to what my Pinchers said. Let's go in."
*Joey and Blue Eyes walk in*
Edward: "Well, look who we have here. Purple Eyes, escort them out, now."
*Purple Eyes grabs Xatu*
Xatu: "XA... TUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTUTU! XATUUUUUUUUU!" *Purple Eyes almost dies from the Psychic blasts along with Edward, Hocus, and Arnie. The four are caught in a 4-screen jail.*
Blue Eyes: "..."
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Me: Phew I'm glad we found someone we know here.
Weavile: Weavile.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Rudy is glad to have seen Isa and Tyler, but the still burning rage inside him causes him to pout

"So, did you guys have fun? Huh? Was it a splendid good time? Phhh, I can't believe you guys. I'm gonna go find the Museum."

He turns away from them, when suddenly, behind him, stands an Entei. Rudy almost swears out loud, and has a momentary freakout.

Rudy quietly takes out his PokeGear, and phones Joey. "So, Joey. When are Suicune and Celebi coming?"
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

15 minutes until eruption and blast
*Picks up Pokegear* "They should be at the dock, fixing it. I've gotten all the members of the SociTea except for Kage. Careful: his Ditto turns into pokemon like Entei."
 
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