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RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Porygon-X, you may come back with what I sent. I need the profile!

*Croc jumps as high as he can towards Crobat but misses*
"Croc will never reach Crobat by jumping from the ground."
*Looks at the water*
"Oh yeah! Croc jump in the water and use Surf!"
*Croc jumps into the water and makes a huge wave while Crobat uses Air Slash to try and cut the wave*
"Go Croc!"
*The wave is about to hit Crobat as Crobat gives up on Air Slash*
"Croc Ice Punch!"
*The wave hits with an giant splash. Then the water freezes with Crobat frozen while Croc stands next to Crobat*
 
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OoC: Culex, I believe I stationed Magma somewhere. Let me check.
 
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Jake: Phew we made it inside.
Mars: I told you it would work.
Me: Yeah that's great. I'm gonna call Joey and...
Jake: Wait let's not be hasty. What if he's in Sootopolis right now.
Mars: Yeah and what if he's in an area with alot of grunts.
Me: Your right. We're gonna have to continue with your plan Mars.
Mars: Good. Now start searching for any information. The best place to look would be Maxie's office. If he has one that is.
Jake: Okay I'll go search for it. I let you guys know through these headsets.
*Jake hands Tyler and Mars one headset each*
Me: Alright. I'll try to find Groudon. If Groudon's here then Maxie should be here as well.
Mars: Good idea. I'll stand guard for Jake while he's searching for information.
Me: Alright then. Let's move out!
 
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OoC: You're good Culex.
In: ?: "All right people, follow my insanely rad Empoleon and 8 badges!"
"Halt! ROUGE threat Joey here. You must be Barry, otherwise known as an Ash rival, n00b, and ROUGE assossiate."
Barry: "Crud, you figured me out."
ROUGE agent: *Whispering* "Don't worry, we are Mars grunts."
*Responds with "Thanks!" in whisper* "Barry, watch this."
Barry: "Watch what? My insanely rad Empoleon?"
"No, my insanely awesome Empoleon." *Empoleon uses Surf on Barry followed by Ice Beam* "Let's go you guys."
 
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Jake: How far now?
Mars: It should be right around the corner.
Jake: That's good. Now let's just hope Tyler's doing well on his search.

*Further into the base*
Me: Groudon's gotta be here some where. The question is if I do find Groudon will Maxie be there as well.
?: What are you taliking about?
Me: That's weird. For a second I thought someone was talking to me.
?: I am.
Me: Hey my Pokeball is shaking. Maybe Azelf is talking to me through telepathy.
Azelf: Took you long enough to figure that out.
Me: How about I let you out of your Pokeball?
Azelf: That sounds good to me.
*Tyler opens the Pokeball containing Azelf*
Me: Better?
Azelf: Much better. Hey your that kid form Veilstone.
Me: Yeah that's me.
Azelf: I'm so glad to see you! I finally found my perfect match!
Me: What are you talking about?
Azelf: I'm talking about you taking me. I wanted you and I to be partners.
Me: Okay explaining time. What's up?
 
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"So, Jupiter: Where is she?"
Mars Follower: "She's DEEP into the Cave of Origin, the end in fact. She is held here by Archie's grunts."
"OK, let's go."
?: "Wait up!"
"Who's that?"
?: "It's us! Whitney, Sabrina, Misty, and Maylene!"
"Oh, good to see you!"
?: "Hihi! Jirachi here! :D"
Leaders: "Aww! It's so cute!"
 
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Azelf: I'll explain as we go. Try heading into that cavern.
Me: Alright. I trust you won't lead me into any traps.
Azelf: We're partners now. I can't betray you even if I wanted to.
Me: That makes me feel... a little unsure about you.
*Tyler and Azelf head tword the cavern. Meanwhile...*
Jake: Good we're here.
Mars: Alright. I'll stay here incase any Magma grunts get any funny ideas.
Jake: Then it should be smooth sailing from here.
?: Or is it?
Jake and Mars: Courtney!
Courtney: Yep it's me. Is there any reason you thought Maxie was stupid enough to fall for your plan?
Jake: Well my friend Tyler is gonna find Maxie and stop your plan once and for all.
Courtney: Tch. Yeah right by now he probably found his way into our trap.
Mars: Oh no I forgot about the lava pools!
?: Wow Courtney I didn't think you'd find both of our traitors.
Jake: Tabitha!
Tabitha: Jake how nice of you to drop by and you as well Mars.
Mars: What do you want?
Tabitha: A battle. You and Jake vs Me and Courtney.
Courtney: Not that you'll stand a chance against the both of us.
Jake: We'll see about that. Entei go!
Mars: Purugly your up!
Tabitha: Golbat get them!
Courtney: Mightyena finish them!
Jake: Entei use Flare Blitz on Golbat!
Mars: Purugly use Fake Out on Mightyena!
Courtney: Guess you'll have to attack Tabitha.
Tabitha: Don't worry Purugly won't last very long. Golbat use Confuse Ray on Purugly!
 
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Jirachi: "Tehe!" *The cave lights up, something emanting from the stairs. All the sudden, 200 ROUGE agents appear* "Whoa! Who do you belong to?"
200 grunts: "Saturn and Jupiter, why?"
"Thank god! Mars is on my side!"
200 grunts: "As she is above Jupiter, we will follow you. Listen, 2000 grunts of Archie's and their the second-in-commands. There is no way to stop them as the second-in-commands are working on Tate and Liza."
"WHAT?!? MOVE!" *Joey storms down a floor with the 210 grunts*
 
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Tabitha: Camerupt avenge your partner!
Mars: Jake help me out here.
Jake: Alright Purugly eat this!
*Jake throws a Persim Berry at the confused Purugly who eats it*
Purugly: Meeow!
Mars: Thanks. Now Purugly use Hypnosis on Camerupt!
Tabitha: Alright Courtney it's your turn.
Courtney: Thank you. Mightyena use Bite on Entei!

*Meanwhile*
Me: Man it's hot in here.
Azelf: Yeah I agree. Hey what's that red Pokemon over there?
Me: It's Groudon and it looks like Maxie is over there as well.
Azelf: We better hurry then.
Me: Yeah.
Maxie: Don't bother moving boy. I can see you and that Azelf of yours just fine from here.
Me: Tch...
Maxie: Look at it boy. This sleeping Pokemon is Groudon. The one that shaped this reigon and all the other reigons.
Me: Yeah I know.
Maxie: Tell me something boy. Why do you want to stop us?
Me: That's easy. You and the rest of ROUGE want to take over this reigon and all others.
Maxie: Wrong. We want to rebuild every reigon.
Me: I don't belive you for a second. The last time you tried to use Groudon you almost destroyed Hoenn!
Maxie: As true as that is this time things are different.
Me: Different? You teamed up with a man who wanted to destroy this world and create a new one just so he could be a god!
Maxie: Then I suppose I have no choice. I'll have to kill you right here.
Me: Get ready Azelf.
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Maxie: Mightyena go!
Me: Breloom your up!
Maxie: Mightyena use Shadow Claw!
Me: Breloom stop it with Spore!
 
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*Sees the 2000 grunts* "Hello Archie grunts. Now, I have 210 of your friends. Why did you join?"
Grunts: "We were bribed."
"Want to help me stop the inevitable chaos and death that will come?"
Grunts: "Yes!"
"Good. Go and stop the underlings. After this, you will sabatoge Maxie."
*The 2000 grunts rush down the ladder*
 
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Maxie: A small set back. I'll just wake Mightyena up with this.
*Maxie sparys Mightyena with an Awakening*
Mightyena: Grrrr.
Me: To bad you wasted your time. Breloom knock out Mightyena with Focus Punch!
Breloom: Breeeee...
Maxie: You think that one attack will beat my Mightyena? Your just as clueless as I thought!
Breloom: LOOOOOOM!
*Breloom smacks Mightyena sending hurtling twords the wall*
Me: What was that you were saying about me being clueless?
Maxie: Mightyena return now. Crobat go!

*Meanwhile*
Jake: That wasn't your best move hitting Entei with Bite. Now Entei use Extremespeed on Mightyena!
Mars: Purugly use Slash on Camerupt!
Tabitha: Camerupt can take that hit.
Courtney: Ugh... Mightyena return. Camerupt go!
 
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Matt and Shelly: "GAH!!!" *The two run out, bloody and bruised*
Grunts: "CHASE THEM TO THE COPS!" *All 2,120 grunts chase them*
Whitney: "They do realize they will be arrested, right?"
Sabrina: "Better for us." *The women, Joey, and Joey's pokemon rush down the ladder*
 
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Rudy gets on Draco with Isa, and they fly off for Littleroot.

"This girl is mysterious, and I don't know what. Her past is what baffles me. She seems to have a sinister forthcoming..."

Rudy tried small talk, something he'd always been bad at.

"So, Isa, nice... face. How did it get like that? You know, I mean in the paaaaassst."
 
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Me: Breloom return for now. Azelf you ready?
Azelf: I was created ready.
Me: Then I'm sending you out next. Azelf go!
Maxie: Your first time using your newset Pokemon. Alright then. Crobat use Air Cutter!
Me: Azelf use Confusion!
Azelf: With pleasure.

Jake: Two Pokemon down and three to go. Entei use Howl!
Mars: Purugly use Hypnosis on the other Camerupt!
Tabitha: Great now both our Pokemon are asleep!
Courtney: Don't remind me.
 
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Tate, Liza, Saturn, and Jupiter: "Help! Archie has gotten the beasts mad at each other already, even Rayquaza! They tied us to an explosive."
Jirachi: "Hi! I can actually talk in human speech! Allow me!" *Jiachi uses Psychic to correct the situation*
Tate: "Thanks-"
Liza: "For saving us!"
Maylene: "Let's go!" *Everyone runs out of the Cave of Origin*
 
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Maxie: Your starting to get on my last nerve boy. Camerupt go now!
Me: Azelf you can take a break now.
Azelf: Alright.
Me: Raichu your up!
Maxie: An Electric type? You're crazy. My Camerupt will send that thing packing with one move.
Me: Guess you don't know how special my Raichu is then. Raichu use Surf!
Maxie: What?! That's impossible Raichu can't learn that move!
Me: Well guess what my Raichu does know this move and that's how this battle will end.
*Raichu swamps Camerupt with the giant wave*
Azelf: That was amazing! Your Raichu is a special Pokemon for sure!

Jake: Alright Enteil use Crush Claw on Courtney's Camerupt!
Mars: Purugly use Slash on Courtney's Camerupt as well!
Courtney: Tabitha do something! There aiming there attacks at me!
Tabitha: Sorry Courtney, but my Camerupt is still asleep. I can't help you now.
 
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*Runs outside to see lots of destruction made by the three pokemon* "Xatu, try to use Psychic to stun them for a bit! Jirachi, as I do have friendly control of you, I wish Arceus was here!"
Jirachi: "Wonderful thinking!" *Jirachi shoots into the sky*
 
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Jake: Alright that takes care of Courtney.
Mars: Yeah now for Tabitha.
Tabitha: Courtney. Go warn Maxie about this now.
Courtney: Alright.
Jake: Entei use Extremespeed now!
Mars: Purugly use Slash!
Tabitha: Looks like this is pretty much over for Camerupt.

Maxie: Boy you think this is over? Think again.
*Maxie holds up a red orb*
Me: What's that?
Maxie: With this Red Orb I will be able to control the sleeping Groudon and use it's power to rule everything!
Me: Your nuts you know that.
Maxie: Not nuts. Just power hungry.
*The Red Orb activates without warning*
Me: Uh Joey I think we have a problem.
 
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*Sees the battle with the three pokemon next to him but tries to ignore it*
Cool Trainer:"Crobat return. Go Milktank!"
"Croc return! Go on Flaff! You can do it!"
*Flaff comes out with sparks and a smile on it's face*
Cool Trainer: '"Milktank use rollout!"
*Milktank rolls towards Flaff with incredible speed*
"Flaffy jump up and use Iron Tail!"
*Flaff jumps up to dodge the rollout while Milktank uses it again. Flaff correctly uses Iron tail and hit Milktank on it's back*
Cool Trainer: Milktank use Body Slam!"
*Milktank yet again heads towards Flaff with Body Slam at incredible speed*
"Flaff dodge and use Dynamic Punch quickly!"
*Flaff dodges and sprints to Milktank and uses Dynamic Punch*
"Milktank use Giga Impact!"
*Milktank uses Giga Impact to block Dynamic Punch*
"FLAFF! NOOOO!"
*The dust starts to disappear. Flaff and Milktank are still up. Milktank isn't moving*
"Yes! Milktank can't move! Flaff! THUNDER NOW!"
Flaff:"FLAFFY!!"
*Since the legendary pokemon cause it to rain and make it sunny, Flaff's Thunder stills hits and makes a huge explosion*
"Come on Flaff you can do it!"
*The dust disappears and Milktank is down*
"That was Awesome Flaff!"
 
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"Wait, hold up. Did you just say there's a Groundon there? Oh dear! I already have a Groundon, Kyogre, AND Rayquaza to put up with. What-"
?: "The number one ruler is here! Prepare for Justice!"
Jirachi: "Hi Tyler! I just got Arceus, tehe!"
 
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